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Sue Storm thread.
Would be great to see some uncommon pairings (i.e. not Reed, Ben, Doom, Franklin or She-Hulk)
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Surprisingly, there's few decent porn of Sue x Namor
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Even less of Sue x T'Challa, though both of these pairings are somewhat canon
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All this thread does is remind me that there is no good on character stuff of Sue out there.
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I've been inspired to do some lewd writings on the subject of Sue/T'Challa, but I'm unsure what sort of tone to go for. There's a whole range of possibilities between "two consenting adults mutually attracted to each other have a fulfilling relationship" and "lonely housewife makes up for inattentive husband by getting hardcore fucking from muscular superhero".

So I'd like to ask and see what sort of tone would be best appreciated for these lewd writings, and if anyone has any suggestions for content I'd be fine with that too.
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>>153020
Hi, I see you found the thread. So, let's see what stories/angles are possible here.

>"two consenting adults mutually attracted to each other have a fulfilling relationship"
Heh, as you described it sounds pretty bland, but it actually isn't. Because they aren't just generic "consenting adults", they're Sue and T'Challa. And try as you might, you can't get rid of several traits intrinsic to them. The question is, how and why is it happening?
>"lonely housewife makes up for inattentive husband by getting hardcore fucking from muscular superhero"
I guess the "Reed is an inattentive jerk" angle would be present in any Sue-related story in some way, if only for the reason that Reed is a major part of Sue's life. However, this angle may be downplayed or emphasized, depending on the story. As for T'Challa being a "muscular hero"... he sure is, but he has a more complex personality.

The reason why I personally like this pairing, is that it's not just hot sexual fetish-wise, it could actually work as a relationship. The two characters are just compatible. T'Challa is the mysterious and powerful ruler, confident and a bit arrogant, not shy to show his interest in her – exactly the type that seems to fascinates Sue (e.g., Namor). At the same time, he's not as childish, impulsive or violent as Namor (the traits that always led to Sue declining Namor's advances). Plus, he's also an intelligent guy (a scientist, an inventor, and a crafty politician and stratege) – and we know Sue loves these traits in a man, too (e.g., Reed). But compared to Reed, T'Challa (while not exactly having his genius-level intellect: T'Challa is ~8th most intelligent person in the MU – which isn't bad in itself, – Reed is 1st or maybe 2nd) is much more down-to-earth and less distant and self-absorbed.
At the same time, Sue could be the person T'Challa lacks in his life. He's often alone and struggling against many odds, Sue could offer him support and care the way she's shown to be capable of. Sue never lets her ego clash with her man's – instead she knows how to softly manipulate him into doing what she thinks is better. She's also known to defend her loved ones against various threats – that would be very valuable in the intrigue-filled world of Wakandan court politics.
Plus, there's that animalistic mutual attraction between the two, that was shown in MK4 (with Sue admitting for her it's stronger than her attraction to Namor).

As for the stories, there may be several scenarios:
>Continuation of the MK4 story
What if Sue and T'Challa gave in to their feelings, and all that buildup led to the logical conclusion? The end may still be the same, but with Sue and T'Challa more satisfied and happy
>Inattentive husband, Sue turns to T'Challa for some excitement
This may be a lighter story about a lighthearted cheating affair, maybe some fun scenes including a clueless Reed, and not much more
>Reed does something very asshole-ish, Sue leaves him for T'Challa (maybe temporarily)
Reed is often known to do some fucked-up things (e.g., shooting a depowering ray at Franklin, building Clone Thor, supporting the Negative Zone prison, etc), which usually causes Sue to get angry at him and even leave him (at least temporarily). We can imagine a similar event, which may be related to Wakanda in some way, which leads to Sue leaving Reed for T'Challa, temporarily or even permanently.
>Sue is just a huge slut
Finally, it can be a rather OOC story where Sue is a much more morally dubious person, and decides to fuck T'Challa because why not. While OOC for Sue, the story could be sexy and fun.

What kind of story are you more inclined to tell?

P.S.: Reposting the Sue x T'Challa doodles from /i/
>> No. 153038
>>153033
Ah, it wasn't my intent to make it sound boring, believe me I know there's a story in almost everything. I think I was just really fucking worn out after a long day, so maybe some of my irritability was seeping in there. All I wanted to do was present the two "ends" of the story spectrum: actual romantic development, and porn-without-plot.

Trust me, I know what you mean when you say it could work as a relationship, I agree on all those points: T'Challa has a lot in common with what Sue canonically finds attractive in Reed. He's mature, intelligent - basically all what you said.

Scenario-wise I was definitely thinking of setting it in Wakanda - I'm pretty sure I read the MK4 story a while ago but can't remember the specifics, if it's a much more recent issue then I suppose I haven't read it at all and I'm misremembering a different comic. In any case, something about setting it on T'Challa's home ground, rather than the Baxter Building, seems stronger from a narrativistic point of view.

Lighthearted lewd romp might be my strongest suit as a writer, anything too heavy is probably going to detract from the fun of having two superheroes goin' at it. My initial thought was that Reed goes off to look at Wakandan science, leaving Sue by herself after shooting down her ideas for an activity that would appeal to her. That leaves T'Challa free to entertain, flirt, and eventually get hot and heavy with her... and perhaps requiring her to use her powers when Reed comes back a little early.

Slut Sue probably has more options open when it comes to the lewd act itself, because it's not that easy to write rational reasons for sloppy facials and stuff like that. Although I would like to see Sue taking a facial from T'Challa, so that's not entirely off the table.

Besides that, my main intent is to have T'Challa make a joke at some point that he thought it was Reed who did all the stretching, ba-dum-tsh. Only with snappier delivery, obviously.
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>>153038
>I'm pretty sure I read the MK4 story a while ago but can't remember the specifics
It's Marvel Knights 4 #21, "Desperate Housewife". Basically, it's set when the FF first meet with BP. Sue starts feeling that instinctive attraction during their first battle. Then the FF and BP become allies, and BP invites them to spend some time as his guests. Of course, Reed immediately immerses himself in Wakandan science, and ignores Sue (whom he has married, like, several months ago – and since they didn't have a honeymoon after the wedding, this visit could be treated as their honeymoon!). Meanwhile, Sue is wandering at night and hears BP playing the piano, which again makes her a bit aroused. They go for a walk, and BP offers a swim in a lake. Sue didn't have a swimsuit, so they go skinnydipping. They flirt while swimming naked in a distance of a kiss from each other's naked bodies, but then BP has a bout of remorse and stops the whole thing. Later Sue admits to her friends that she thought about cheating with BP a lot, much more than about Namor, but she's married to Reed and thus will always be faithful to him.
As you see, it has much in common with your ideas. There could be two way you could go from there:
>a) A "What If?.." – what if BP and Sue didn't stop and the lake scene led to its logical conclusion?
>b) The FF return to Wakanda years later, and Sue and BP remember their first meeting. Due to Reed being Reed again, Sue decides that a little fun on the side, for old time's sake, wouldn't hurt.

I'm totally okay with the "lighthearted lewd romp" idea... and in fact, you could get a bit of "slut Sue" in there, too. Let's imagine that Sue has a wild sexual side, deep inside her, repressed by all the years living as a prim and proper wife and mother. So the one time she lets herself stray a bit off her moral compass, she unleashes her naughty slutty side with T'Challa. She knows this could be her only chance in years, so she wants T'Challa to have all kinds of lewd sex with her.
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>>153039
Cannot seem to find a torrent or download of that issue, or even that run. How annoying, I would have liked to have read it firsthand. Still, that's a concise summary and I'm leaning towards option A because you phrased it as a What If and I fuckin' love What Ifs.

Having Sue get all kinds of freaky like she's never allowed herself to do so before, because she's thinking of it as a one-off fling, is interesting for two reasons. First off - I get to write about T'Challa giving her an Africa-sized messy facial, awesome. Second, though, it opens up the possibility for a developing storyline. Sequels, if you will. Sue could really get interested in pursuing a longer, more solid relationship with T'Challa if every time they got together they did the lewdest of things.

P.S. you should do more Sue x T'Challa doodles in /i/, the ones you did were fapworthy.
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>>153043
Here, you can read the T'Challa-related part of the issue: http://forums.comicbookresources.com/showthread.php?206920-Black-Panther-Appreciation/page214

I agree with your choice and the points you make. And if there's a sequel, it could be option b). Can't wait to read the story!

>P.S. you should do more Sue x T'Challa doodles in /i/, the ones you did were fapworthy.
Thanks! I'll try to draw more. I usually post only those that don't turn out to be complete shit haha
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Honestly, the only time I have found Sue attractive is when they made this statue of her, the proportions are weird, but yet hot in a way.

I think playing the MILF part of her would be the best way to go about it.
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>>153062
indeed, I've found her quite attractive those times she was weirdly flirting with Peter. Heh, wonder if Spock would have acted upon those flirtations and blew his cover, or would she have accepted, its a thought.
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Really, no mention of her extremely slutty costume from the 90s?

Hell, what about her Malice persona, when she went full on bondage?

It would be interesting to see her trying to fit into that old get up after having had a few kids, it would work with the whole MILF thing for sure, Sue trying to relive her youth perhaps.
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>>153067
oh '90s Sue where she was really rankling under Reeds not paying her attention and started acting out. with the peek window suit and stuff.
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I think I like the "desperate housewife" idea the best, just overall the sexiest.

Reed like always does something extremely dickish and she leaves him, at least for a while, she then goes and visits BP. While in Wakanda she cuts loose and tries to feel young again, maybe while unconsciously trying to get back at Reed she eventually seduces BP, and thus getting completely wrecked in bed, letting/making him do all the things to her that she would usually find too vulgar when with Reed. I mean, I'm talking at least anal here. So yeah, years of sexual represion or maybe just the monotony of married life getting the best of her, shades of Malice resurfacing when her lust reaches it's peak.

What started as a one night stand or an impulse fling develops into much more, eventually causing her to fall for him, really becoming addicted to his vigor. The sex still being incredibly sensual/passionate, I'm thinking even really rough and lewd at times, but true feelings now being a huge part of it, an actual relationship forming. Like someone said, strong animalistic mutual attraction being at the core, while their personalities also being in synch. I mean, there is definite compatibility between them.

What I don't know is where in continuity it should take place, I mean, would she have kids at this point? Hell, it might even make it all the more taboo and hot for her, the fact that she is a mother, and yet is getting the pounding of her life by someone other than her husband...or maybe then ex-husband? I think that could be an interesting juxtaposition, Reed dealing with the kids, while Sue is on the other side of planet opening new doors to her sexuality.

Definitely play around with the "milf" angle, especially since she could have gotten curvier after having kids and thus might feel somewhat self conscious sometimes. Also, I think the older woman thing works for her, she has that really homely vibe while still sexy.
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>>153062
Yeah, Sue's like the only pretty-looking superheroine who is usually _desexualized_ by artists, instead of _sexualizing_ her (like they do with all other heroines). Well, the 90s boob window aside, of course. It's like most of them try to portray her as bland-looking as possible. Dunno why they do that. Maybe it's because her original costume was unsexualized (it was in-universe designed by Sue herself!), or maybe because they want her to look "wholesome" (though why can't a moral and wholesome wife and mother look hot?).
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>>153064
I've heard there was an issue where SpOck interacted with the FF, didn't read it though so I dunno how that played out. SpOck isn't actually very seduce-happy, despite what /co/ thinks. My bet is, he would probably totally ignore her feminine charms (being more interested in Reed's science), which may make her suspicious. And if SpOck were interested in Sue, he'd be too rude and obnoxious in his flirting, alienating and maybe even angering her. After all, he has all the arrogance and immaturity of Namor, combined with all the emotional insensitivity of Reed – the exact traits Sue doesn't like.
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>>153067
Didn't Sue already wear that costume after she had her kids (Franklin, at least)? I agree, it would look hot on a voluptuous MILFtastic body... hm... you may have just given me an idea hehe

Anyway, yeah, it would be fun to include in the story (the continuation, of course, since MK4 itself takes place before the boob window costume or Malice ever existed). Maybe with Reed and others Sue pretends she completely forgot about that costume, and hates it. But for T'Challa, she will wear it (maybe even give him a fantastic boob job through that 4-shaped boob window?). As for Malice, it may resurface after Sue lets herself loose with T'Challa (maybe after several strong orgasms). T'Challa may be terrified at first, but then, their sex becomes even more kinky.

Btw, I'm not the writefriend (I'm the /i/ drawfag actually), so it's just my own ideas here. Writefriend, I'd like to hear your opinion on all this!
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>>153073
>Reed like always does something extremely dickish and she leaves him, at least for a while, she then goes and visits BP. While in Wakanda she cuts loose and tries to feel young again, maybe while unconsciously trying to get back at Reed she eventually seduces BP, and thus getting completely wrecked in bed, letting/making him do all the things to her that she would usually find too vulgar when with Reed. I mean, I'm talking at least anal here. So yeah, years of sexual represion or maybe just the monotony of married life getting the best of her, shades of Malice resurfacing when her lust reaches it's peak.
>What started as a one night stand or an impulse fling develops into much more, eventually causing her to fall for him, really becoming addicted to his vigor. The sex still being incredibly sensual/passionate, I'm thinking even really rough and lewd at times, but true feelings now being a huge part of it, an actual relationship forming. Like someone said, strong animalistic mutual attraction being at the core, while their personalities also being in synch. I mean, there is definite compatibility between them.
Totally agreed with this. If the writefriend agrees, this could work well as the plot for part 2 (part 1 being the "what if" continuation of MK4 #21).

>Hell, it might even make it all the more taboo and hot for her, the fact that she is a mother, and yet is getting the pounding of her life by someone other than her husband...
I personally support this. For me, the taboo-ness of a supposedly prim and proper wife and mother unleashing her inner slut, makes it all the hotter.
As for believability, well, let's say she planned for it to be just a wild night out, maybe to get back on Reed and relieve her stress. It's not her fault a night turned into a weekend, a weekend into a week, a week into a month...

>or maybe then ex-husband?
I think they shouldn't divorce. If we're playing the "lighthearted playful romp" angle, this would allow for both including the cheating fetish, and avoiding a generally dark and serious thing like divorce.

>and thus might feel somewhat self conscious sometimes.
Hm, an interesting idea, I bet T'Challa has some ways to ensure her she's still sexy haha

>she has that really homely vibe while still sexy.
>homely
Dude, she used to be a Hollywood actress (not many people remember this). She married Reed when she was in her twenties, and Franklin is ~5-7 years old. So, she's a 27-35-something former actress who can still pull off a skintight bodysuit. Nothing "homely" about this, bro
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Also, some ideas.

- As with the actress thing, few people remember that Sue is an amateur costume designer. It was Sue who designed the FF uniforms. And judging by their timeless popularity, Sue is actually a talented designer (unlike, say, Cyclops). She's also known to modify the uniforms from time to time. What if, to please T'Challa, she designs a sexy costume for herself, and wears it for him as a surprise? E.g., it might be African-themed

- There was a point in the 90s, where Sue was attacked by a villain who has a power to exaggerate your deepest desire. Picrelated is what happened. Sue basically admitted, in front of her husband and kids no less, that her deepest desire is to be Namor's fuckslut. And she did it while turned into a voluptuous bikini-clad Atlantean vixen. May be good for a Namor-centric lewd story (for a change).
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>>153088
Yeah, I was not thinking ugly, I guess I was just using the definition with the "home" aspect of it. So yeah, more like wholesome or traditional kind of girl, you know the potential wife type.

It might just be that I have almost never read stories of when she was just Invisible Girl, it's been a while since she has been single and not playing the mom role to so degree.
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Writefriend here! I may have to start posting under a name if this gets any more confusing, but it's really good to see so much enthusiasm for the super secret project, such as it is.

Malice I'm personally not a huge fan of, always seemed kind of a cheap gimmick to me, but if there's demand for it I might work it in somehow. I'd rather keep evil split personalities out of it, though.

In keeping with the lighthearted spirit of the thing, and because I kind of like the concept myself, Reed and Sue should still be "together" but not actually together. Reed's just so occupied with SCIENCE and PROGRESS that he's completely oblivious to the fact that Sue's finding happiness with T'Challa. Sort of like a Venture Bros. kind of deal, now that I think about it.

So there may be moments where he walks in on Sue, and she's got a mouthful of Black Panther cum (and has hastily turned T'Challa invisible) and he asks her some questions while she does her best to answer without actually opening her mouth. But Reed's off in a world of his own and doesn't pay any attention to what she's saying (or not saying) and breezes out again after finding some piece of technology he'd left lying about the place.

The idea of it being Sue who's the one asking for anal, deepthroat, facials, and all that depraved, lewd behaviour... makes it all the more fun for me. Makes a big change from the usual "Big Black Cock" generic plotline, although T'Challa is definitely going to be hung like crazy. He's peak human, after all, and has a connection to the Panther God. What deity would allow their mortal representative to go around without a suitably mighty endowment?

If we're going by the whole "What If" scenario, then canonically Sue has not had kids during their first encounter with T'Challa. However if this is more a sort of "ongoing" story than a one-off, I could do "chapters" spaced apart over the course of things, including MILF-tier Sue later in life. The real question would be... would Franklin and Valeria end up being mixed race?

Oh, and speaking of alternate costumes, they ran this teaser back when they were doing the "new Black Panther" story arc.
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>>153091
Ah, I see, that "wholesome" look is actually why imagining her do all those lewd things is twice as hot

>>153092
>So there may be moments where he walks in on Sue, and she's got a mouthful of Black Panther cum (and has hastily turned T'Challa invisible) and he asks her some questions while she does her best to answer without actually opening her mouth. But Reed's off in a world of his own and doesn't pay any attention to what she's saying (or not saying) and breezes out again after finding some piece of technology he'd left lying about the place.
Heh, that's both fun and hot (just imagining Sue trying to talk with her mouth full of cum... unf), and there can be so many lewd uses for Sue's various powers! This concept really seems like a lewd story goldmine
>The idea of it being Sue who's the one asking for anal, deepthroat, facials, and all that depraved, lewd behaviour... makes it all the more fun for me. Makes a big change from the usual "Big Black Cock" generic plotline
It's not that big of a change, if you think about it. In many such stories, women tend to become horny sluts after getting an initial treatment of interracial loving. So, Sue may have been an innocent wife, but her encounter with T'Challa starts the process of unleashing her inner slut.
And btw, if you followed that link I posted and read the MK4 story, you may notice that in that story, Sue is actually the hornier part of this pairing (though of course T'Challa doesn't mind to say the least), and it is T'Challa who has to stop her in the lake scene. So it's actually canon, in a way.
>although T'Challa is definitely going to be hung like crazy. He's peak human, after all, and has a connection to the Panther God. What deity would allow their mortal representative to go around without a suitably mighty endowment?
Hm, that's actually a good in-universe explanation of T'Challa having an oversized porn cock. It's believable (fertility plays a large part in many African cults), and dodges the usual raceplay present in similar scenarios
>However if this is more a sort of "ongoing" story than a one-off, I could do "chapters" spaced apart over the course of things, including MILF-tier Sue later in life.
That would be great! If you want to, of course
>The real question would be... would Franklin and Valeria end up being mixed race?
Dunno... that's too "alternate universe" I think. Reminds me of that AU where Sue is married to Black Namor (yes, it's canon). To me, it's more hot if it sounds like what could be happening in the 616 universe, behind the scenes. Because if we look at all the AUs, Sue has fucked almost the whole Marvel Universe in them (Ben, Doom, Spidey, Namor, Black Namor, Wolverine, Havok, etc), so it's kind of an expected thing, it's not as taboo
>pic
Yeah, I remember that. Of course, as most such teasers, it was a lie that was never meant to be, but it kept me thinking... why did the editors choose Sue (among others)? Is there an editor at Marvel who believes in the possibility of a Sue x T'Challa pairing?..
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>>153092
The kids should definitely still be Reed's, Sue still having a family with him and all that. But at the same time having a secret relationship with T'Challa that could have lasted years, maybe going all the way back to that MK issue. And yes, her relationship with him is much more one of passion and lust, meaning she indeed likes to get a lot freakier, asking him to do to her what she just doesn't do with Reed.

So yeah, Venture Brothers like in that Reed is too invested into his work that he doesn't notice or possibly even care that his wife is fucking another duded on the side, double life and all that.

And while I did mentioned "shades of Malice", I don't want her to go evil or anything like that, but perhaps certain more vulgar aspects of that persona could resurface a bit, while not really changing her personality. It could be something subconscious, or maybe she just thinks about it while getting banged to enhanced the experience, or the whole affair just reminds her of when she was not so well behaved and acts on it, embracing the sexy elements of Malice but not evilness.
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>>153097
Yeah, keep the race factor present, but not just make it about that. They are both interesting characters that are compatible in their own right, the fact that they have different ethnic backgrounds just makes it more interesting and sexy.

Also, I think its possible to make it work pretty close to regular canon without needing to go too much into the whole AU, as long as the relationship is something that she had kept secret and discreet.
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>>153097
>Heh, that's both fun and hot (just imagining Sue trying to talk with her mouth full of cum... unf), and there can be so many lewd uses for Sue's various powers! This concept really seems like a lewd story goldmine

I try my best! Sex should be fun, and physical comedy with a sexy element can be great. Especially if it's one of those unrealistic, so-much-the-cheeks-bulge loads that's just ever-so-slightly leaking out of her lips as she struggles to hold it all in. It's a comic book universe, after all, things always have this element of unrealism to them.

Sue's powers have indeed given me quite a few other ideas, but let's not count T'Challa out either on that score. There's very few comic book substances with a name as sexually suggestive as "vibranium".

>It's not that big of a change, if you think about it. In many such stories, women tend to become horny sluts after getting an initial treatment of interracial loving.

Often when I've seen it done, it's been a case of the women ending up being possessed by this sort of madness (dare I say... jungle fever) where they end up slavishly devoted to anyone with a big black cock. Maybe I'm just reading substandard stories/comics, who knows.

>Hm, that's actually a good in-universe explanation of T'Challa having an oversized porn cock. It's believable (fertility plays a large part in many African cults), and dodges the usual raceplay present in similar scenarios

When the raceplay goes to extremes it honestly just gets kind of dehumanizing as far as I'm concerned. I mean, I like a little taboo, but sometimes it just gets insulting. Not to mention cheesy.

Although I did have a bit of an idea on that score involving T'Challa, Sue, and Emma Frost... but blatantly screwing another woman in front of Sue doesn't seem like it'd fit the theme.

Maybe as a one-off, who knows.

>That would be great! If you want to, of course

Might take me a while, sadly enough writing isn't just a hobby for me, it's a career. In fact there are times when I will want to spend my free time doing anything BUT writing. Usually only around deadline season, though.

You've already done me three pictures, though, so I think it's only fair I pay you back with some top-quality lewd writing.

>>153098
>The kids should definitely still be Reed's, Sue still having a family with him and all that.

Point taken, it'd probably be a bit too obvious for Reed if his kids were brown. I'd kind of consider Johnny, Ben, and maybe even T'Challa to be more doting parental figures than this particular version of Reed, though. In my mind I'm just taking the constant "I only have time for SCIENCE!" nature of his earliest incarnation (and the obvious parodies) and taking it to its logical conclusion.

>"shades of Malice"

Well as long as I don't have to include the terrible costume, that's fine.
>> No. 153104
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>>153101
Agreed on the dehumanizing factor, its a tricky thing, this apply to both T'Challa and Sue though.

I mean, you can take it too far with the race but also with the "slut" aspect, to the point that the characters don't feel like characters anymore, and instead more like a really bad stereotype.

I think its totally possible to have a story about an unfaithful wife living out her most wild sexual fantasies with an African King in the most kinky/lewd/depraved scenarios, while still making them feel like people. Not necessary characters with the most integrity or morals, but still actual characters.
>> No. 153105
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I know that I said that Sue should be keeping her extramarital relationship on the down-low, but since Malice and also the fact that she is a costume designer are being mention, I think it would be interesting and even sexy if she designs a new costume for her that reflects her affair with Black Panther and possibly her past persona.

It would probably need to be pretty subtle for the rest of the team not to notice it however, maybe she also designing new costumes for them that reflect the typical Fantastic Four team dynamic, but at the same time her own costume being different the rest.

Just something I though about, maybe her costume is more revealing than usual, using more blacks, being tighter, with some feline and bondage aesthetics. She could even use the old excuse about female superheroes costumes to her favor, and thus getting away with showing plenty of skin. I mean, it would be nothing new for her, except maybe the Black Panther elements.

I don't know, the concept of Sue playing around with the idea of wanting to get caught could be trilling for her, so subtle hints referencing her lover on her new costume while parading around in front of her husband might really excite her.
>> No. 153106
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>>153101
>Especially if it's one of those unrealistic, so-much-the-cheeks-bulge loads that's just ever-so-slightly leaking out of her lips as she struggles to hold it all in. It's a comic book universe, after all, things always have this element of unrealism to them.
Yeah, sometimes exaggerating things like this makes the scene funnier and hotter, that's true.
>There's very few comic book substances with a name as sexually suggestive as "vibranium".
And of course, T'Challa being a talented inventor, he could find many ways to use it to please Sue
>Often when I've seen it done, it's been a case of the women ending up being possessed by this sort of madness (dare I say... jungle fever) where they end up slavishly devoted to anyone with a big black cock.
In my opinion, it's also part of the whole raceplay thing. In the case of our scenario, Sue could just gradually unleash her own inner horny side. So, she won't magically change her personality, but rather discover and unleash what's already there. So, no "I'm a slave to all big black cocks", no "hahaha I'm a mindless slut now", but rather an intelligent, strong-willed woman having a self-discovery with the help of a magnificent lover.
>Emma Frost
Sorry, but why? It's my personal opinion, of course, but dude, she's one of the least likeable characters in the Marvel Universe. And that's counting Alpha.
>Might take me a while, sadly enough writing isn't just a hobby for me, it's a career. In fact there are times when I will want to spend my free time doing anything BUT writing. Usually only around deadline season, though.
>You've already done me three pictures, though, so I think it's only fair I pay you back with some top-quality lewd writing.
Oh, I completely understand. Do it at your own pace. And please, don't feel indebted to me or anything like that – I draw all these doodles for myself as much as for you or all the anons out there. I don't want you to force your stories, take all the time you need.
>Well as long as I don't have to include the terrible costume, that's fine.
This one, or the black BDSM-like one?

>>153104
>I mean, you can take it too far with the race but also with the "slut" aspect, to the point that the characters don't feel like characters anymore, and instead more like a really bad stereotype.
Well, as I said earlier in this post, the "slut" aspects may be treated as Sue's deep secret desires. She can't act on them in her normal life, so she unleashes this hidden side of herself with T'Challa
>> No. 153107
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>>153105
I definitely like your idea (dunno about the writefriend, though). Definitely like it. The "playing with almost getting caught" thing is so hot.

As for the costume, it could even go without any black/BDSM/cat parts. Maybe have her declare an interest in African culture (which may be actually true – her relationship with T'Challa making her interested in Wakanda's culture and traditions), nobody thinks nothing of it of course, and when she redesigns her costume to include more African-themed elements (which would at the same time work as BP-themed) everybody just thinks it's because of her new interest.

Pic semi-related, it's from a recent /co/ trollthread
>> No. 153108
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>>153106
Yeah, I like that, the deep seeded desires coming out when finding a good lover, and the fact that she will be "slutty" but in her own terms, coming to the realization that she really loves to get kinky with T'Challa.

I guess it would be like the liberation or explosion of all those feelings she denies herself because of what is usually expected of Sue when she is the Invisible Woman and wife, so when she is at Wakanda or with Black Panther she lets that part of her personality come out at full force, being far more sexual than usual as a result.
>> No. 153109
>>153106
>And of course, T'Challa being a talented inventor, he could find many ways to use it to please Sue

"The louder you are, the more it vibrates."

>Sorry, but why? It's my personal opinion, of course, but dude, she's one of the least likeable characters in the Marvel Universe. And that's counting Alpha.

Ah, well, you know how it is: an idea pops into your head and it just won't go away. The basic plotline was that Emma Frost catches a telepathic glimpse from Sue of complete sexual satisfaction, and is inquisitive and abrasive enough to pressure Sue into revealing who exactly it was who gave her such a good time.

Sue takes her to T'Challa, Emma proceeds to start chattering on and on until T'Challa unzips and releases the pride of Wakanda, which stuns her into silence. Cue some sort of "the only way anyone's ever shut up Emma Frost for more than five minutes" joke involving stuffing it down her throat and the rest more-or-less writes itself.

So it was basically based around the premise that she is unlikeable, rather than attempting to say otherwise.

>Oh, I completely understand. Do it at your own pace. And please, don't feel indebted to me or anything like that – I draw all these doodles for myself as much as for you or all the anons out there. I don't want you to force your stories, take all the time you need.

Not so much a debt as... feeling like I need to give a little back to the community, such as it is. Plus I could do with more practice writing filthy things.

Nice new work, by the way, it's giving me scene ideas.

>This one, or the black BDSM-like one?

The BDSM one. The 4-shaped boob window is cheesy and ridiculous, but I have nothing much against it. Especially not for the sake of lewd writings, because like I said, it's giving me ideas. Messy ones.
>> No. 153113
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>>153107
I got to say, that whole "interest in African culture" excuse would work wonderful, it would allow her to be far more blatant in her clothes and even the amount of contact she can be having with T'Challa. Maybe she even convinces Reed that she needs to take "personal classes" from T'Challa about Wakanda, and how she plans to improve the relationship between his nation and theirs.

She could also make the the Panther aesthetics more abstract though, so that is not so obvious at first glance and so that Reed doesn't quite suspects as much.
>> No. 153114
>>153107
Alternatively, on the subject of costumes, Sue could take on a second hero persona. Like with the "new Black Panther" image, except with her face covered so nobody knows it's her running around with Panther. Sort of like a disguise in plain sight.
>> No. 153116
>>153113
Susan Storm, American ambassador to Wakanda. Furthering diplomatic relations every day by engaging in sexual relations every night.
>> No. 153117
>>153116
Ha, I love it.

>>153107
Thats a great costume too, bare back I suppose?

>>153114
Nah, I think the focus should be on Sue keeping the balance between life as a Superhero and mother and being a sexual creature with Black Panther.

>>153109
I don't think I like Emma getting involved, it would start to get complicated, but who knows, you might make it work.
>> No. 153118
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>>153109
>Emma Frost plotline
Hm... I actually like that one, despite it featuring Emma Frost. If it's a self-contained story, it could end in Namor barging in and seeing both women he tried to seduce teaming up on his enemy's Royal Scepter.
>Not so much a debt as... feeling like I need to give a little back to the community, such as it is. Plus I could do with more practice writing filthy things.
>Nice new work, by the way, it's giving me scene ideas.
Ah, I see. I often feel that way, too. Thank you for your kind words! And btw, is there any place I can read some of your lewd writings? Or non-lewd ones, for that matter
>like I said, it's giving me ideas. Messy ones.
Mmm, I already like it

>>153113
Heh, yeah, I think there could be many potential plot uses for the "interest in Wakandan culture" premise

>>153114
Hm, it may work in the context of a single story, I think, but not a permanent fixture
>> No. 153119
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>>153116
I also think this could work in a sinle story, but not as a permanent fixture. Because if such things become permanent fixtures, they're deviate the story into AU territory
>>153117
>Thats a great costume too, bare back I suppose?
Thanks, heh, probably, it was just a silly troll thread, so I whipped it up in like 5 seconds using someone else's drawing as basis. Though if I'd decided to design it seriously, yeah, a bare back with a bit of ass cleavage is definitely a must
>> No. 153120
>>153119
>bare back with a bit of ass cleavage
This I have to see, especially if she got the more typical MILFy body.
>> No. 153121
>>153118
>Ah, I see. I often feel that way, too. Thank you for your kind words! And btw, is there any place I can read some of your lewd writings? Or non-lewd ones, for that matter

I'd really, really, really rather not connect what I'm doing here to what I write for a living. I am a children's author.

I'll try and rustle up a sort of "first part" of the Sue/T'Challa story relatively soon so you can gauge my competence at lewd writings, though.
>> No. 153122
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>>153121
Haha, I see. Would never think of judging you or anything, we all have some skeletons in our closets, bro
>>153120
Hm, maybe I'll try to draw it, dunno
>> No. 153125
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>>153121
Looking forward to whatever you can come up with.

I don't think an epic or anything like that is needed, but some small vignettes would be wonderful, especially if each of them take place in different parts of their lives, assuming that the whole "secret long affair" is something you are interested in.

Perhaps the first one taking place in that MK issue, and others after she had kids and the like, maybe even one where the idea of her new costume comes to be and how it represents the embracing of her "inner slut".

But yeah, whatever you want to do, and of course nothing that might compromise your job.
>> No. 153128
Believe it or not I really, genuinely, honestly enjoy writing all-ages, wholesome fiction about high adventures in lands of whimsy and/or enchantment. I just also happen to have a lewd streak a mile wide and get off on stuff like delectable blonde MILFs getting pounded by foot-long cocks thicker than their wrists.

I'd sooner pull an Ernest Hemmingway than end up like Piers Anthony, though, so there's no way in fuck that anything lewd that I do is going to wind up even being connected to my work.

Not that I'm going to be able to stop you guys from rule-34ing the fuck out of my work if it ever becomes popular, mind.
>> No. 153129
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>>153128
I personally think it's totally reasonable that a writer can do completely different things, and find interest in both. A lot of children's authors or artists have done serious adult, or even lewd work. Though you're right, it's best to prevent these parts of your art from ever connecting.
What I meant to ask the first time is, have you ever posted online any of your lewd "delectable blonde MILFs getting pounded by foot-long cocks thicker than their wrists" stories? I don't question your competence in any way, I'm just curious, since we seem to have some overlap in our smut tastes
>> No. 153152
>>153129
Most of my lewd work's been commissions and none of them have really lined up with my personal tastes. Although I've never had a single complaint about my portrayal of the various subject matters I have been writing about, I've never really done anything "for myself". Until I decided to do this on a whim, anyway.

Not counting ERP, I suppose.
>> No. 153154
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>>153152
Ah, then it's two times more interesting to see, what you come up with now that you're writing what you like!

On the subject of costumes, see picrelated and here:
http://marvel-microheroes.wikia.com/wiki/Invisible_Girl_(Susan_Storm_Richards)
http://marvel-microheroes.wikia.com/wiki/Invisible_Woman_(Susan_Storm-Richards)
Sue has really changed her costume a lot, especially in recent years. In-universe, it was established back in the Kirby years: e.g., once Sue redesigned her costume to a miniskirted one, to make Reed pay more attention to her (it's not on picrelated, but it's there on the microheroes site). Note that, while pretending it's just a random redesign, Sue actually did this with the secret goal of pleasing/attracting her man.
So, I think the costume redesign subplot could be pretty much IC for Sue.

Btw, a page about our African friend: http://marvel-microheroes.wikia.com/wiki/Black_Panther_(T'Challa)
>> No. 153156
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>>153090
>- There was a point in the 90s, where Sue was attacked by a villain who has a power to exaggerate your deepest desire. Picrelated is what happened. Sue basically admitted, in front of her husband and kids no less, that her deepest desire is to be Namor's fuckslut. And she did it while turned into a voluptuous bikini-clad Atlantean vixen. May be good for a Namor-centric lewd story (for a change).
Sue's biography is actually full of kinky shit like that. E.g., the Brides of Set storyline (picrelated), where Sue was among other heroines stolen and mind-controlled by an evil serpent god to give birth to his offspring. I swear, there must've been a lot of closet perverts on Marvel's editorial board
>> No. 153157
>>153156
>I swear, there must've been a lot of closet perverts on Marvel's editorial board

Closet? More like open perverts.
>> No. 153158
Isn't it part of the thing that Franklin uses his reality bending to keep them a happy family nowadays.
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>>153157
I wonder, how do I get on Marvel's editorial board?..

>>153158
I thought Franklin controlled only some events, like Valeria's extremely convoluted birth. If we assume his control of the First Family is bigger than that, it would mean he's behind a lot of kinky things that happened to Sue, as well – and that is just wrong, even by Marvel standards (though they're the people who got Ms.Marvel raped and impregnated by her own son, so who knows...)
>> No. 153163
>>153154
Yeah, I like the costume idea more and more.

It should be pretty sexy yet regal, something fitting of a consort.
>> No. 153164
>>153163

It shouldn't show up until later in the story, as part of a gradual process, but I'm not averse to more art being made of it. Or anything at all relating to this pairing.

Been spending much of Sunday so far sketching out how I want to start the first chapter of this. Basing it off the MK4 comic in question is good, but I'm wondering if I want to kick things off at the skinny dipping section or find some way to move the action to somewhere less open, like T'Challa's or Sue's rooms.
>> No. 153165
>>153164
Foreplay could start there, maybe she just gives a handjob and then they take it to a room?
>> No. 153166
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>>153163
Ha, just ONE costume? That's not the Sue I know! Judging by her comic appearances, she loves creating costumes for various occasions. So, e.g., she could create a) a Wakanda-themed version of the FF uniform (for that kinky "almost-getting-caught" feeling) b) an official "consort to T'Challa" uniform which she wears while "an ambassador" in Wakanda c) one or several sexy costumes that she wears for T'Challa in the bedroom, etc
>> No. 153167
>>153166
I like where you are going with this
>> No. 153168
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>>153164
>It shouldn't show up until later in the story, as part of a gradual process, but I'm not averse to more art being made of it. Or anything at all relating to this pairing.
Heh, I get your hint! I'll try to draw more Sue x BP soon (maybe some sexy costumed Sue, dunno yet)

>but I'm wondering if I want to kick things off at the skinny dipping section or find some way to move the action to somewhere less open, like T'Challa's or Sue's rooms.
I think the tension that is there in the original comic's lake scene should definitely have some resolution. But then again, having them spend the whole story in the water is kind of weird...
How about this? The tension in the lake results in a kiss, then in some heavy petting, then Sue reaches for his cock (she is shocked by the size of it, but as it's under water, she doesn't quite believe her touch without seeing it)... But then they have some second thoughts, and break it up, almost like in the comic, and decide to get dressed and pretend nothing has happened. BP walks Sue to her apartment, and they're about to say good night, but the passion they had just felt in the lake, makes them feel that mutual attraction again... They kiss passionately, and not before long, T'Challa is carrying Sue in his arms into his apartment instead. And there, the story continues...
What do you think?
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>>153168
Basically, the point of divergence is that they didn't stop in the lake in the last moment, but rather had kissed and touched each other. Nothing serious yet, but it had planted some unresolved passion inside them that just had to be resolved
>> No. 153172
>>153168
>What do you think?

It's a good point, I'm not certain that's the exact direction I'll take it but it has given me a few solid ideas on how to move things to "dry land".

Mainly I'd like to have them indoors in T'Challa's palace somewhere because I'd like to do the "Reed walks in on Sue while she has a mouthful of cum" scene in this first chapter.
>> No. 153175
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>>153172
That could happen in many different places. They could do it in Sue's room, and Reed walks in when he decides to check up on his wife (the most OOC moment in the whole story haha). They could do it in BP's apartments, and Reed walks in wanting to discuss some science stuff (and Sue has to bullshit her way out of why she's in BP's room, in the addition to the cum in her mouth). They could just be very impatient and decide to do it in one of the palace's halls, and Reed walks in on them when he decides to take a walk (BP is able to spot his arrival early due to heightened panther senses).
>> No. 153178
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>>153175
...Or it could even be all three, for a comedic running gag!
>> No. 153187
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>>153166
I'm thinking the consort clothes could be incredibly revealing, like maybe she might even be nude with the exception of some fur/feather coat and conveniently place jewelry. Maybe even Princess Leia inspired, but far more kinky.

Something like what Hera wear in the New 52 perhaps, very classical but at the same time she is for all intent and purposes nude.

I guess it all depends on how well she can convince Reed that she is simply adopting Wakanda's diplomatic customs while playing the role of an ambassador, and how much is she willing to degrade herself with her lover in front of her husband, as a major turn-on for her. Maybe she makes a good argument that those clothes represent that as an ambassador or official guest of Wakanda she carries no weapons, you know something like that.

I mean, if she is really playing the game of "almost wanting to get caught" here, she could even make those "clothes" the clothes that she always wears while in BP's house/embassy even if her husband is present. Sue walking around basically naked, in front of T'Challa, his servants, and her own husband.

She can perform specific "rituals", like one where she takes the cloak off and kneels in front on BP, all while Reed is watching. Hell, she can even insist in sitting next to T'Challa during diner to pay her respects, just so she can give him a handjob under the table, again all while sitting in font of her husband.

There is a lot you can do with this concept, as long she can be very VERY convincing with Reed on the whole "cultural exchange" excuse, and she is willing to risk everything to get her thrills.
>> No. 153190
>>153187
You could always just based it on something that Frank Frazetta would have come up with, that goes for Sue's proportions as well.
>> No. 153191
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>>153187
That all sounds very interesting and hot... again, don't know what the writefriend thinks, of course
As for the costume, your description reminded me of picrelated... but more African-themed and with more nudity or transparent parts.
>> No. 153192
>>153191
Man, Sue sure likes to dress slutty from time to time.

But yeah, it could be transparent, a bit revealing, or maybe even going all native all leaving nothing to the imagination.

Point is that she should look classy but also slutty somehow, I guess it would be nothing new to her judging by that pic.
>> No. 153194
Writefriend here. Honestly when it comes to costumes I always feel that less is more. But I mean that in the completely opposite manner to "so much nudity".

Besides the fact that clothed sex turns me on, there's something to be said about wearing just enough to be on display while still having enough that you can be stripped down. Naked is fun, don't get me wrong, but wearing an outfit doesn't automatically make it a nun's habit.

From my perspective I don't want to be taking the easy out of having going around nearly-nude. I really like the ambassador/consort idea, it adds to the whole power-play dynamic of T'Challa being a king and Sue exploring a submissive/yielding side to her sexuality. But if all she has to do to strip before "her king" is to take off a cloak, then I think it's just making that act of willing surrender into something far too easy.

The right outfit would blend the sort of... "super science" look of the Fantastic Four with copious amounts of Wakandan/Panther imagery, to say "what you thought was yours has been subverted and now belongs to me" on T'Challa's behalf.

>>153107
This one I really liked, although perhaps with some high boot/stockings like the nineties boobwindow costume? Maybe also with a boobwindow, gotta have that fine cleavage on display for repeated servings of Black Panther cream.

Although I guess that's mainly what her mouth is for...
>> No. 153195
>>153194
Yeah, maybe is too on the nose, I just though it would be something that would make their relationship a bit more kinky.
>> No. 153196
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>>153194
Just to represent my opinion, I don't think there's necessarily a contradiction between these two things. It's just two different kinks, two different ways of submission, of proving her devotion to her secret lover.
The first way, is to subtly change her official costume, and you described the thought process behind it very spot-on. It could be something akin to >>153107 (argh! it was just a quick mock-up with almost no thought going behind it haha), a combination of the FF uniform (which she devoted to Reed when she designed it) and elements of the BP costume or Wakandan culture (secretly changing the devotion to T'Challa). The thrill of declaring her cheating ways in plain view etc
The second way, is to present herself as obeying the laws of the powerful king, in front of her husband who is just a guest there. The shock of her husband seeing her present herself almost naked to the king, and being unable to do anything about it. The thrill of feeling her husband's conflicted emotions, and the brazenness of this act and of her almost nudity, and her lover's power
Both are hot, both have their own time and place

As for clothed sex, I'm very glad it turns you on, since it turns me on, too. Would be great if you included lots of it in your writing!
>> No. 153197
>>153196
P.S.: I can't draw Reed to save my life haha
>> No. 153198
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>>153194
>high boot/stockings like the nineties boobwindow costume? Maybe also with a boobwindow
Your description made me think of this...

Anyway, how about instead of boob window, she gets a v-neck of sorts that plunges all the way down to the top of pussy mount?

I mean, something like this, but even lower, same goes for the back so that it gives her that ass-cleavage people were talking about.

Hell, the v-neck can have the shape of a stylized panther head instead of a lightning bolt, it could be pretty be stylish.
>> No. 153199
>>153196
Yeah, I loving your description of the whole psychological process behind her "submission" and the thrill of almost getting caught, as well as that pic, pretty hot despite being just a sketch.

I don't think it diminish their relationship, only makes it more exciting frankly.
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>>153196
That pic reminds me of Chel...you have made this a thousand times more sexy now
>> No. 153205
And then covert Atlantis team invaded and took Sue "prisoner". Would Victor ever get in on this action? Part of Sue's emerging kink being with rulers of nations and later planets and systems. Setting up being "captured" by dictators and space tyrants, rescued by other leaders and being really affectionately grateful.
>> No. 153212
Thought you'd like a read
http://gunwildversuseverything.tumblr.com/post/42018772034/ac120-sue-storm-2013jan30-via-request
>> No. 153217
>>153196

Points taken. Although with how oblivious and inattentive Reed can be, I think she'd have to be on her knees blowing the king in front of him for him to start to suspect that maybe these tribal customs are a bit off.

I guess I was slightly biased considering that the "ambassador" costume (mixing BP with FF) gave me an idea for a really good running gag that'd help with the lightheartedness of the piece: the only person who recognizes that Sue is getting it on with T'Challa is perennial FF villain Moleman, and he keeps saying so blatantly even though nobody believes him. However that depends on how much you guys (the audience) want the suspicion angle included.

As for that last thing, are you my long-lost lewd evil twin or something?

>>153198

Livewire/Superman is one of my favourite pairings as well (even though I've given up on DC since the new52 debacle), so you're definitely convincing me that thigh-high boots is a good idea.

>>153200

Oh, that loincloth thing she wears in the film, with the exposed hips all the way up to her waist... now there's a good look. Especially on Sue, who's equally as top-heavy.
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>>153217

Oh, and as an addendum to my post here, there's one other costume that could be used as a source of inspiration when it comes to Sue's ambassador look, pic related.
>> No. 153220
I'm confused, I though the embassador costume was the see through one, and the Black Panther inspired her new regular superhero one.

Anyway, that's all way down the line, first lets see if anything can get started.
>> No. 153223
>>153220

I was personally using the term "ambassador" to refer to her public outfit, and "consort" to refer to her more risqué one. Sorry for any confusion.
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>>153199
>>153200
Thank you!
>>153198
>>153200
>>153218
Points taken, will see what I can cook up
>>153205
Dunno about Namor... I mean, he was so overused as "Sue's secret love" in the 90-00s (and yes, not many people realise it, but the whole "Sue being secretly attracted to Namor" thing was mainly a product of those late decades – before then, their meetings were rare, and they mostly consisted Namor acting like a creepy rapist, and Sue being utterly not interested)... And frankly, there's so much of the Sue x T'Challa relationship to explore
As for Doom... I just can't imagine him in any sexual scenario, sorry. Doom is one of those characters, for me, who embodies the feeling of childhood. He's so child-like – not "childish", mind you, but an epitome of what a child considers "awesome". He's like Judge Dredd. He does not care for your adult drama, and sex, and psychological nuance. All he cares is world domination! and dark magic spells! and robots! and a giant castle! And that's why I like him. Historically, Doom stole Sue several times, but he only did that to get back to that pesky Richards. Unlike Namor, and some other FF villains, I don't remember him making any advances to her. That's because Doom doesn't care about stupid girls and their cooties, he wants to destroy Riiiiiiichards!!! Let's keep him that way.
>>153212
Hehe, I knew there had to be people who liked that silly suit – if only because it was their first /co/-related boner
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>>153217
>with how oblivious and inattentive Reed can be, I think she'd have to be on her knees blowing the king in front of him for him to start to suspect that maybe these tribal customs are a bit off.
Lol that'd be a bit too much, I think
>costumes
As I said earlier, why limit it to only 1-2 costumes? Sue loves to wear sexy clothes (designed either by her or by famous designers), that was a hobby that was established back in the Kirby era. In this story concept, she could have several new costumes created for different occasions:
1. The FF/BP costume, a redesign of her old costume officially created because of her newfound interest in African/Wakandan culture
2. The "ambassador" costume, a classy but sexy outfit worn on official events. Created for T'Challa, but not revealing, just classy/sexy.
3. The "consort" costume, again not revealing, worn on official events. However, this one stylistically sends a clear message of a queen/consort, with many elements reminiscent of BP's royal costume. Btw, could be a fun scenario, having Sue act like a consort to BP with Reed present, having explained that it's just an official position, that since BP doesn't have a wife, someone has to perform certain consort-related official functions, etc. So she could sit near BP, hold his hand etc etc, while Reed thinks it's just a tradition and a nominal title.
4. The "ritual" costume – smth alike the "Chel-like" revealing costume I doodled. The almost nudity explained by ritualistic traditions of Wakanda. Those could actually exist, but in reality they could be related to Sue as the King's sexual conquest. Reed doesn't know the latter part, of course.
5. Some sexy costumes Sue designed specifically to wear for T'Challa. E.g., some sexy underwear set. Or maybe:
6. The "first anal" costume. A costume, specifically designed for the occasion of making T'Challa the first man to take her anal virginity. Featuring a 4-shaped hole for easy access... May be a joke suggestion, or may be not, depending on what you think
7. Etc. E.g., I like her "sexy teacher" outfit, how about Sue wearing it in one of the future scenes? Just a random idea
>I guess I was slightly biased considering that the "ambassador" costume (mixing BP with FF) gave me an idea for a really good running gag that'd help with the lightheartedness of the piece: the only person who recognizes that Sue is getting it on with T'Challa is perennial FF villain Moleman, and he keeps saying so blatantly even though nobody believes him. However that depends on how much you guys (the audience) want the suspicion angle included.
That's an interesting idea, and one that could be done with any of her redesigned costumes (probably, the first one). But... Mole Man? Er... doesn't the presence of his ugly mug kill the mood somewhat?
>As for that last thing, are you my long-lost lewd evil twin or something?
Haha, of course I am! I'm the one with the goatee
>> No. 153228
>>153227
>That's an interesting idea, and one that could be done with any of her redesigned costumes (probably, the first one). But... Mole Man? Er... doesn't the presence of his ugly mug kill the mood somewhat?

Well, it's because he's basically blind, so the joke is that it's so obvious even a blind man could see she's cheating on Reed... except it's ONLY the blind man who sees, everyone else seems kind of oblivious.

But it's probably not worth sacrificing that many opportunities to do "almost getting caught" scenes and so on, just for the sake of a single joke.

I like the idea of multiple costumes, actually, but I'm just the writefriend here. Writing about outfits is significantly easier than drawing them.
>> No. 153229
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Okay, now that's just silly. Nevermind.

>Well, it's because he's basically blind, so the joke is that it's so obvious even a blind man could see she's cheating on Reed... except it's ONLY the blind man who sees, everyone else seems kind of oblivious.
Damn, how did I not get this joke? I think it could work, maybe not a running gag, but as a one-off gag for sure
>Writing about outfits is significantly easier than drawing them.
Hey, you're a professional writer, talking to someone who has an almost pathological inability to make a couple of coherent sentences haha Don't sell your talents short, man
>> No. 153230
>>153229
>Don't sell your talents short

It'd be easier if I had, say, J. K. Rowling levels of success in my life. But thank you for the support! I've slacked off on posting here because, well... 1,285 words of Sue/T'Challa takes time. Especially since, in my hubris, I've apparently decided I need to retell the whole scene from MK4 #21 as set-up.
>> No. 153231
>>153230
Eh most us writers wont' get that kinda crazy, but that isn't the aim. Its that you feel you have a story to tell.
>> No. 153232
>>153231

Mm, but when writing is your career, it's only natural to hope for success.

1.7k words in and they're finally at the lagoon... good thing that I plan on at least 2k words of fuckin' to balance it out.
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Brainstorming (man, it ain't easy to brainstorm anything when all your blood isn't in the brain) a diplomatic costume for official events. Not quite happy with how it turned out yet

>>153230
I'm not a writer, but, well, success is a fickle mistress. I subscribe to the "do what you like, live a full life, earn enough money to be able to do steps 1 and 2, and don't worry" school of thought
>~2000 words of prelude
If you're okay with this, it's actually great! I love some prelude and foreplay in my erotica, much more than when the characters jump into bed right at the start haha Already anticipating your writings!
>> No. 153238
>>153227
>>153229
>>153233
I got say, I'm absolutely loving these costumes idea, even the ones that are supposed to be just be a joke like the "first anal" one, super sexy and create even sexier scenarios. I really dig your too art too, sketchy but really hot.

>>153198
With that costume she can even keep her shoulders bare as well, it's even more riske but she would still technically be coved enough.
>> No. 153239
>>153232
Yea sure but don't let it get in the way of telling the story that you want to tell is all I'm saying.
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>>153229
Its silly, sure, but it would also be something fun for them.

Maybe Susan is nervous about doing anal for the first time, however she still wants to do it really bad, and so she decides design that anal cherry costume to make the whole thing into a far more relaxed and joking manner for her.
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