>>154185
>>154191
I think it'd be best not to have Peter in this scene – not just because it's OOC, but also because the "wedding dress sex" is supposed to be this very secret, very dirty memory only two people know and share. Using HERBIE would be a funny touch, however
>>154194
>Considering I don't have much need of editors and multiple drafts with this (you guys are pretty easygoing about that, no offense meant) I can probably manage six short stories in my free time. Writing about fuckin' is actually a great deal simpler than structuring a fully-fledged adventure narrative with various plot twists and foreshadowing. All you gotta do is write about how lewd and messy it is, really.
That would be great, but just please not overstrain yourself
>>154197
>and I'm rather sure so is Doodlebug.
I think I am haha
Though my doodles are rather irregular, I draw when I have enough free time
>>154201
>I feel as though we should have her use her powers a bit more
I agree with this, though her powers seem a bit limited in certain situations. I mean, they offer a lot of fun scenes when it comes to hiding / not being caught. But when they're alone, there aren't many ways to use them
>I guess the most logical way is for her to let T'Challa see how far his cock is going inside her body and when he cums.
I thought the internal cumshot will be left for the "wedding dress sex"? Regardless, yeah, that's a good way to use those powers – also when she's deepthroating him.
There also may be a playful reenactment of their first meeting, with Sue suddenly getting invisible (but completely naked), making BP rely on his senses to track her (he senses the scent of her juices, due to her being very horny atm), and then some rough sex when he "captures" his "prey".
Also, maybe some time after her first internal cumshot, there could be a scene with vaginal sex. Sue is holding BP with all her arms and legs, and he's pounding her into oblivion. Then BP feels he's about to cum, and decides to pull out. He's obviously stronger than Sue, so he begins to break her grip, but suddenly realizes he can't move away! Turns out, Sue's using not just legs and arms, but also her forcefields to hold him, because she desperately wants him to cum inside her. So, he "surrenders to his fate", haha
>Also, a scene in which looks herself in the mirror while she is getting pounded, a moment of full realization that she is a married woman with kids and a superhero, and yet there she is being ravaged by another man.
That's hot!
Although, I think she should think about this contrast (wife and mother vs T'Challa's lewd lover) periodically

(cont.)

>>154225
>Wonder Woman

Interesting! Although sometimes I think DC has less black characters than Marvel. I'm not totally obsessed with the idea of black-man-on-white-woman, I just love contrast, which can include white-man-on-black-woman and all those other wonderful skin colors people have.

But if you guys can think of a pairing that appeals to my sensibilities (and I am open to all gender possibilities here, before anyone makes any assumptions) and maybe shower me with a few choice compliments, I'm not going to rule out the possibility of writing some DC porn.

It's gonna have to be a good concept, though.

>>154225
I loved her in the recent animated movie JL:War, such a powerful and fun take on the character.

But yeah, maybe leave that for much later if ever.

>>154228
Oh, I can think of a few concepts that will fulfill that criteria, as well as being willing to kiss plenty of ass to get a great written Wonder Woman story that actually takes into consideration her personality, lore, and abilities.
Something which is apparently very rare in fanfiction about her.

I'm sure that for someone with your high level of writing skills it would not be a problem, it would be glorious even

But again, I must emphasize that I don't want to highjack this thread and story, so I will hold my tongue in regards to this possible Wonder Woman story until we are done with this one, assuming that we do.

>>154219
>"How about T'Challa pushing Sue up against the wall in the shower? It should be a cool-looking shower. A shower befitting the king of Wakanda."
Haha, I'm not sure if I'm good at designing showers for kings – but joking aside, this scene looks pretty hot. I hope I can do it justice
>Prowler
Hm, I didn't even know about this character! Though now that I think about it, I think he was in the 90s cartoon, too.
Sadly, I haven't watched Spectacular Spider-Man, though. Does he have a connection to MJ there?
>>154221
We could have both. She would have a quick shower (to wash off sweat, cum etc from her body and face – though she could playfully fantasize about appearing before the press without doing that), but the hair would still look a bit weird, and the dress would be a bit ruffled.
>>154222
Haha, yeah, BP is Black Batman, I think that was the basic concept behind his creation. Batman without all the Silver Age silliness, plus a whole hi-tech African culture as his background – that's why BP's awesome – though Marvel keeps misusing this character so he doesn't get to shine like his DC counterpart.
>Howie's dick
Maybe he's just naturally ridiculously well-endowed, but in our universe MJ is the first woman to ever give him the time of the day, so no one knows about it
>On the other hand, you guys might convince me to start doing DC smut next week, maybe I should keep my options open.
Note to self: Remember to draw some, e.g., Mera x Black Manta someday, to persuade A Certain Liar hehe

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>>154187
Seems like I missed this post.
I think it's too revealing for this particular scene, but it may fit a scene further into the storyline (e.g., when Sue serves as ambassador in Wakanda, and Reed arrives to visit).
>>154223
I would also like to see a pre-"Wakanda wedding" story where Sue goes for a long time to Wakanda, for some sun and hot sex, leaving her family in NY. Just for the kink of a married woman and mother having a holiday together with another man (she would explain it to be tied to her ambassador duties, of course).
Also, I'd vote for "wedding dress sex" being her first internal cumshot.
>>154224
>>154226
Haha, yeah, as me and ACL are two different persons after all, some of my doodles (like the pregnant one) are bound to be non-canon to the story. They aren't strictly illustrations to the story, or vice versa, they're more like inspirations for each other.
>>154225
Speaking about me, Wondy is probably one of the characters I feel completely neutral about. Don't know, maybe I haven't read any really good runs?
>>154228
>Although sometimes I think DC has less black characters than Marvel.
It's true. There are some rad black male characters (Jon Stewart, Mr. "I'm Not T'Challa" Terrific, Steel, Black Manta, New Aqualad, to name a few)... But what's worse, black _female_ characters in DC are almost nonexistent! At the same time, DC had one of the most awesome black female characters, Amanda Waller (before Nu52, at least) – but porn-wise, I think she's not everyone's cup of tea haha

Btw, re: other possible pairings, just remembered a very obscure pairing: Jean Grey x Attuma (picrelated). I like it mostly for the fanart and Jean's costume, but I don't know if it's a good basis for the story.

So, T'Challa will keep cuming on her face, tits, ass, etc, right until the "wedding dress" sex?

If that's the case I can see the moment when Sue finally asks him to cum inside her vag as pretty important actually, perhaps she saw that as the very last barrier she though she had, maybe even going back to the fact that she is a mother and felt that it was the last sacred place for her husband to cum, or something with a similar symbolism behind it.

So yeah, she prolonging it that much and then finally giving in and asking him to finish inside her actually sounds hot that way.

One of the made up interracial pairing /co/ used to love back in the day that involved Wonder Woman was with Jaime Raiyes the Blue Beetle.

It not only had the aspect of different ethnicities but also the age difference, I remember plenty of pics getting done about that one.

I think I might have some actually.

>>154231
>Hm, I didn't even know about this character! Though now that I think about it, I think he was in the 90s cartoon, too.
Sadly, I haven't watched Spectacular Spider-Man, though. Does he have a connection to MJ there?

Not as such. The series was taking things slow, Howie was a background character with the running joke was you never got to hear him speak, although he got a voice for the final episode. He was just a high school kid with no alter-ago at that point, and then the show got cancelled so oops guess we'll never find out.

>Maybe he's just naturally ridiculously well-endowed, but in our universe MJ is the first woman to ever give him the time of the day, so no one knows about it

That actually fits in with his more... wallflower-esque appearance in SSM, you know. Every episode when he was about to open his mouth, someone would interrupt him. So in Earth-152984 it could be a similar sort of deal... he's confident and forceful in his Prowler persona, but has a bit of a problem asserting himself outside his costume. Sort of like Spider-Man in that way, actually... and the parallels make me think that's sort of what MJ would find thrilling. Plus the huge cock.

>Note to self: Remember to draw some, e.g., Mera x Black Manta someday, to persuade A Certain Liar hehe

Interesting pairing there. Seems a lot more aggressive and dom/sub, which isn't necessarily a bad thing.

>>154237
>There are some rad black male characters (Jon Stewart, Mr. "I'm Not T'Challa" Terrific, Steel, Black Manta, New Aqualad, to name a few)...

Oh man, I'd forgotten about almost half of those guys. I'm actually remembering back to the old JSA (before the dumb reboot) when you had Mr. Terrific and a whole host of... reasonable candidates for a Terrific Fucking. Power Girl springs to mind right away, for obvious reasons.

I think mainly I used to read mostly the teen superheroes stuff, though - Superboy, Impulse, Young Justice - back when I was still a DC fan. Stuff about adult heroes like Batman and Superman I got through the cartoons, rather than the comic books. JSA was the exception, I was a big fan of Alan Scott and the other "old guard".

>I would also like to see a pre-"Wakanda wedding" story where Sue goes for a long time to Wakanda, for some sun and hot sex, leaving her family in NY. Just for the kink of a married woman and mother having a holiday together with another man (she would explain it to be tied to her ambassador duties, of course).

I actually have one of those planned, so don't you worry.

When does she start modifying her costume in the actual story?
I mean, I know you guys have made plenty of different designs for when she starts taking fashion tips from Black Panther for her new Fantastic Four uniform, but is that going to play a role in the actual story, or is it going to be like the other illustrations you made that don't actually match up?
I liked the idea, pretty sexy stuff, although not entirely sure how it would work storywise.
Perhaps its not entirely practical to dedicate a portion of the story to describing her different costumes, but a nice little reference could work just fine, make the world feel more detailed at least.
I must say though, the wedding dress should get plenty of screetime, maybe less so but equally important is the costume she makes when she fully embraces the darkside, so maybe give it some love as well.

>>154251
>When does she start modifying her costume in the actual story?

Probably next issue, at a guess.

>or is it going to be like the other illustrations you made that don't actually match up?

I'm not sure what this means.

The uniform will change a little, but since I am not working in a visual medium here, I'm not going to dwell on it too much. After all, my descriptions will be interpreted in different ways by different readers. (Literal descriptions are for amateurs.)

I'll probably take some inspiration from the designs posted in this thread, though, if that's what you mean.

>I would also like to see a pre-"Wakanda wedding" story where Sue goes for a long time to Wakanda, for some sun and hot sex, leaving her family in NY. Just for the kink of a married woman and mother having a holiday together with another man (she would explain it to be tied to her ambassador duties, of course).
It can even act as a test that Sue gives Reed and herself, in that she keeps extending her stay at Wakanda in the hopes that her husband would finally act, meanwhile she is getting fucked every single day by T'Challa, causing her devotion to change for him more and more.

Is T'Challa a foot guy?

Sorry, I'm just trying to think of something they could fool around with, without really going into /cod/ territory or going too rough just yet.

I mean, I'm not really into it myself all that much myself, but as something of a foreplay, I could maybe see it being used in a fun and sexy way by Sue and T'Challa.

Then again, we could just have Sue sit one his face...

You guys do know that you are no longer bumping, right?

>>154312

Yeah, but what's the rush?

>>154243
>He was just a high school kid with no alter-ago at that point, and then the show got cancelled so oops guess we'll never find out.
That's sad. However, he may have it in our world. Especially if he's based on a combination of his comic+cartoon versions
>That actually fits in with his more... wallflower-esque appearance in SSM, you know. Every episode when he was about to open his mouth, someone would interrupt him.
Would have made a fun series of gags, I guess
>he's confident and forceful in his Prowler persona, but has a bit of a problem asserting himself outside his costume. Sort of like Spider-Man in that way, actually... and the parallels make me think that's sort of what MJ would find thrilling. Plus the huge cock.
Hm, that sounds very promising, and explains why he and MJ would click together. I bet MJ would get a lot of "pants wearing" moments in this relationship, although when it gets to the sex, his personality would change, and he'd be the leading/assertive one.
>Interesting pairing there. Seems a lot more aggressive and dom/sub, which isn't necessarily a bad thing.
Yes, it would be rougher and kinkier, since BM's a rather evil villain (though a villain with a cause), compared to BP who is a noble hero and king. However, Mera also isn't Sue, she's much more antihero-ish.
On first glance, the pairing shouldn't work, since BM is most well known for, well, killing Aquaman's and Mera's baby. That's true. But we're dealing with elseworlds here!
In the original story, Mera went to her home dimension to get help, while Aquaman and Aqualad fought BM here. Mera managed to defeat unexpected villains in her home dimension, get the needed help, and return – but she was too late. She blamed Aquaman for not stopping BM, accusing him of "weak human genes", and they soon separated.
What if, in our world, this story had a less tragic end? What if Mera was able to arrive back on time? She would save Aquababy, and defeat BM. Most other women would be glad it all ended, and that they saved their kid through combined efforts. But not Mera. She's a very proud and somewhat demanding woman. She wants her husband to be strong, and here he was totally useless as she had to do most of the job herself. She'd be as resentful of Aquaman as she was in the original – but she wouldn't hate BM as much. Yes, he kidnapped and threatened to kill her baby, but that's what supervillains do all the time. She would still hate him, but atm she'd hate Aquaman more. Cue lots of rough spiteful revenge hatesex.
>>154251
>I mean, I know you guys have made plenty of different designs for when she starts taking fashion tips from Black Panther for her new Fantastic Four uniform, but is that going to play a role in the actual story, or is it going to be like the other illustrations you made that don't actually match up?
Hey, again, don't mix me and ACL up! We're two different people haha
>>154291
>It can even act as a test that Sue gives Reed and herself, in that she keeps extending her stay at Wakanda in the hopes that her husband would finally act, meanwhile she is getting fucked every single day by T'Challa, causing her devotion to change for him more and more.
It's an interesting idea, but maybe it's a bit too similar to the "Wakandan wedding" scenario (assuming ACL likes it, of course). Also, with the way Reed is in our universe, Sue would wait for him to old age haha
>>154297
>playing with feet and footjobs
>facesitting
I approve, if not going too overboard with them
>>154312
As I said, it's not much of a problem, since threads here last for ~half a year. What I'm more worried about, is an image limit. Does anyone know if there's one, and what it is?

>>154319
Mmm, I don't think you give yourself enough credit, friend.
You art while not super detailed really captures a specific sexy moment pretty damn well.

So, I know that Susan is the one who wanted the wedding dress fuck, but what about her anal virginity?

Is she the one who wanted to do it or T'Challa?

>>153750
>I think the fourth one could use more work actually, I think I liked the previous design with the two panther heads facing each other a bit better.
>Maybe combine both? Because I think this one has a better back side for sure.
Looks pretty awesome I think

>>154319

SO loved the pic, said "that's perfect, exactly what I had in mind."

Then added "Well I was originally thinking of him, like, pushing her up against the wall and fucking her face to face. But this is also really hot."

That's basically the grade-A seal of approval right there from my SO, take it from someone who knows.

>>154340
Something like this? Sorry, my PC crapped when I was finishing the pic, so it's even more incomplete than usual haha
Glad she liked the previous pic!
>>154320
Thank you, glad you liked it, as well!
Eh, I know too well how many fuckups are there in my pics, and what a long way separates me from the artists I like... and the only way of getting there is to draw moar!

>>154350
Damn, this is pretty damn sexy, dude.

>>154350
>Something like this?

I'll ask later; SO is currently not in the right environment for NWS images. (ie, W)

You are putting me in a tough spot, too, buddy. With this you've made 18 images, and I've written 11,627 words over both issues. By the accepted standard metric of a picture being worth a thousand words, I'm more than six thousand words behind!

>>154356
>I'm more than six thousand words behind!

I got stuck back into http://tinyurl.com/lewdwhatif2 just now, to try and catch up, and it made me think of another possible pairing.

Janet Van Dyne, the Wasp, is with Ant-Man in canon. But all throughout the early Avengers she's seen hitting on dude after dude after dude, calling heroes like Thor and Wonder Man "hunks" and "eye candy". Meanwhile, Pym himself often seems like much the same sort of "no time for your female hysterics, there's science to be done" jerk that Reed comes across as.

I wonder if Earth-152984 has room for a Wasp pairing? My mind immediately goes to Goliath, but that's because I'm predictable. Anyone have any thoughts on the matter? Or does Wasp seem more like the type to bend over for any good-looking fella?

Exploring other possible plots of Earth-152984
The pic takes place during their university years, and Hobie here is something of a mix between the comics and SSM.

>>154355
Thanks!
>>154356
As I said, don't sweat it, there's no ru-- er, I mean, of course, I demand you correct that impudent mistake by writing more hot sexy action! hehehe
>>154357
Janet... I like her playful personality and over-the-top outfits of her classic years.
The problem is, our universe is a "lewd" version of MU. Presumably, it's a universe that urges some of its inhabitants to act on their sexual fantasies or attractions. But if for a woman like Sue, it ends in a serious relationship with a specific man she's attracted to, for characters like Emma or Jan, it'd just end in endless promiscuity. What's stopping Jan from trying to sex up other hunky men around her?
On the other hand, Goliath/Giant-Man works perfectly, in a symbolical way. He took over her husband's superhero personas, and supposedly did a better job at them – a good metaphor what he will do with Jan. Plus, it's a cornucopia of puns about "growing", "size", Bill's "black goliath" and "pimp particles". And of course, Pym particles are a good canon way to describe the size of his cock.
So, I don't know.

>>154350

SO got back from work, saw the new image, is downright flattered you went and drew a second image.

Now I have to work messy shower sex into the story, apparently.

>>154375
Ha, very Archie like

>>154375
>The pic takes place during their university years, and Hobie here is something of a mix between the comics and SSM.

Gwen! I'd totally forgotten about Gwen when putting together a list of Marvel blondes for... reasons. Now if I wanted to be cruel, I'd have Hobie in a relationship with both of them... leaving Peter completely out in the cold, but he'd just get one killed and sell the other to the devil anyway.

I'm sure Hobie would appreciate a nice red-and-blonde sandwich on his dick, too.

>I demand you correct that impudent mistake by writing more hot sexy action! hehehe

I've still got a cold, remember, but I'll do my best.

>What's stopping Jan from trying to sex up other hunky men around her?

Well, it depends. It could be nothing and I could write some Wasp issues where her role is the village bicycle of the Avengers, sleeping around and maybe getting gangbanged every now and again.

Or it could be that Goliath (or whichever hero she gets paired up with) is so strong/commanding/hung that, while she likes looking at and flirting with the other guys, she never takes it further than that. She stays with him because he always gives her just what she needs. Although she might always be trying to tempt him into threeways...

>>154376
Well, it doesn't have to be in this particular issue, perhaps we can added to the one where she loses her anal virginity.

I mean, other than the fact that she gets fucked in the ass, I don't think we have much of a set up or complementary sex stuff.
Hell, do we even know where and when it takes place?

I'm guessing it should take place after she has had Franklin, Sue and T'Challa have continue with their secret affair for some years now, and she is ready to take it to the next level, she is ready to give him something she has not even given to her husband.

Maybe in this issue we can also have the scene where she comes from her sexual session with T'Challa, and doesn't really have much time to clean up before getting home, playing the mother and wife while being covered in sweat and cum underneath her costume. Then again, since there is a shower scene, it might not fit.

We could also have a sexy little moment with just Sue, where she is ready to ask him to take her anal cherry, but before that she is in front of a mirror spreading her asscheeks just to see how lewd it looks.
She can be practicing talking dirty, shaking her ass, and making her asshole gape, you know just trying to feel naughty.

>>154382
>Hell, do we even know where and when it takes place?

Well, I do. I'm gonna write it. I'm taking in all the input from this thread and trying to tell a story that uses those elements while also being a story I am comfortable telling.

So, uh, trust in me that I know what I'm doing, I guess? That's sort of the message I'm giving here.

>>154383
I trust you, so far you really seem to know what you are doing.

I'm looking forward to reading about Sue being naughty in sexy costumes while getting plowed in inventive ways.

>>154376
I suppose you now have to, haha

Also, how about Sue tells T'Challa to
>ruin me like you ruined my dress~
Or leave it for the wedding dress sex, I don't know

>>154377
Yeah, there is some similarity

>>154380
>but before that she is in front of a mirror spreading her asscheeks just to see how lewd it looks.
Especially if interspersed with scenes of her acting like a prim and proper mom and wife

>>154381
>Now if I wanted to be cruel, I'd have Hobie in a relationship with both of them... leaving Peter completely out in the cold, but he'd just get one killed and sell the other to the devil anyway.
Peter x Betty Brant is a superior relationship, anyway
>I'm sure Hobie would appreciate a nice red-and-blonde sandwich on his dick, too.
It's just like in Archie comics, where the only possible good outcome is a threesome haha
>I've still got a cold, remember, but I'll do my best.
Don't sweat it, I'm just kidding
>Wasp
How about this? Goliath may be the catalyst, the guy who makes her cross the line. Before she just flirted etc., but this is the first time she actually gives in to the temptation. The reasons it's Goliath are actually somewhat similar to Sue's: he's nearby at the right moment, he's a lot similar to her husband but more down-to-earth and less a jerk. However, in this case, it may be Jan who makes the first step (due to her more flirty nature). However, when Sue is completely satisfied with just T'Challa all the time, Jan might be satisfied with just having an affair with Goliath for a while – but then starts thinking about other men. Maybe as you said, she starts prodding Bill into threesomes, gangbangs, swinging, you name it.

>>154384

Aw shucks, that makes me feel all warm inside. Either that or I'm getting a fever again.

(I hate having a cold.)

>>154384
Yeah, I second what this guy said.
Get well, A Certain Liar, you're awesome!

>>154385
>Especially if interspersed with scenes of her acting like a prim and proper mom and wife
Totally, I feel that particular concept has tons of potential, it really reinforces the taboo nature of their affair.

I sort of want to see Janet suspecting something is funny going on with Susan(I'm guessing the big shinny collar and the new ever more revealing wardrobe might be a big hint) and trying to get something out of her in short conversations peppered throughout the story.

Strong lesbian undertones when she is checking out her clothing and jewelry, but Susan being quite good at not letting anything slip out.

It can act more like teasing than anything else, saving the actual rough lesbian sexual domination for the Emma issue.

>>154392

I get the feeling that if Janet found out she might persuade Sue to take her along on a "diplomatic envoy" so she could end up sampling the local cuisine. You know, tasting all the local meat on offer, drinking plenty of native cream, being made several Wakandan sandwiches, that sort of thing.

>>154398
Actually, I feel there'd be no problem for Sue in this: while she would spend most of her time in the King's chambers improving diplomatical relations, Jan would get acquainted with other Wakandan natives
They could even take along some other women who love variety and excitement in their lives, like Emma, and maybe MJ
This actually sounds like a good standalone story, something like a superhero crossover between different titles (only in this case they team up to make love, not war)

>>154401
I think it could work, but we are still on the second issue, so it is still very far away.

>>154401
>This actually sounds like a good standalone story, something like a superhero crossover between different titles (only in this case they team up to make love, not war)

Secret Whores?

(I'm a sucker for puns.)

Are we eventually going to have a story where Sue and Reed are both invited to the Wakanda Embassy, only for Sue to end up dancing with T'Challa in a rather suggestive and intimated manner?

Sue can claim that she is only doing her Ambassador duties, Reed watching them and growing increasingly annoyed, Sue meanwhile getting wetter and wetter under that dress.

It would be even better if she is wearing something as revealing as this
>>154187

>>154403
Yeah, well, we're just fantasizing anyway
>>154410
>Secret Whores?
You're terrible haha
Actually, that works – they're whores, and they have to keep it secret.
But if it's a true parallel to Secret Wars, it should have more characters...
>>154411
I think that may be one of the last stories, or maybe even what happens right before the "Wakandan wedding"

>>154412
>But if it's a true parallel to Secret Wars, it should have more characters...

Emma Frost, Captain Marvel (Carol Danvers), Mockingbird (Bobbi Morse), Dazzler (Alison Blaire)... oh, wait, this is my blonde girls of Marvel list, what a completely accidental mix-up.

Susan wearing far more skimpy and sexy underwear should be a thing, even when she is with Reed, she is now a thong and stockings kind of girl

>>154442

Can do! Or will do, as soon as I'm feeling a bit more energetic. I shouldn't have cracked that joke about having a fever again, I might have tempted fate.

>>154442
Mmm, why haven't fishnet stockings been incorporated into Susan's more risque Black Panther inspired outfits.

I feel like there is tons of sexy untapped potential there.

>>154462

Agreed!

Careful application of the right medication (all of it, in my mouth) has got me feeling much better, so if anyone cares to tune into http://tinyurl.com/lewdwhatif2 I'll be writing up some more for the next... however long it'll be until I pass out, I suppose.

Just wish this thread wasn't languishing back here on page 2/3 where nobody can see it right away.

>>154471
Well, lets make a new thread already.

I don't see whats stopping us.

New Thread
>>154475