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16579 No.16579
This is for the Atrocitus n' Larfleeze webcomic idea that is being tossed around in /co/.
I thought I would do the kind thing and post the thread.

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No.16582
Why are we calling this Atrocitus and Larfleeze? It goes so much deeper than that.

No.16584
ORIGINAL POST:

Hey /co/, me and some friends are contemplating on starting a webcomic, and we need to think of material. I know that some wise anons here thought up Murder Burger and there was talks about how awesome a Larfleeze/Atrocitus sitcom would be, and though I could just steal the idea with no worries due to anonimity, /co/ is too nice to take advantage of.
So, if no one minds could we use Murder Burger/related ideas for this webcomic?(if we actually work up the initiative to get it started ect.)

No.16585
there should be an episode with Larfleeze eating Dex-Starr

No.16586
>>16585
Cut that the fuck out. No vore in our awesome.

No.16587
"Man, I fucking want a Lantern sitcom soo bad.
Lantern corps in everyday situations.
Larfleeze and Atrocitus would be the primary focus, with the rest of the lanterns would be supporting characters, good for an occasional laugh."


"Naturally.
It could follow this basic format:
Larfleeze is a greedy prick
Atrocitus get's pissed
Saint Walker gives the typical "Oh you guys"
Atrocitus punches Walker
Guy laughs
It would never get old."


"Just as long as it's funny and their Lantern Uniforms are seen under their real clothes, and they're like in a very small apartment in the middle of the Bronx!"


"Well, aside fom Atrocitus, who has to wear his Murder Burger uniform and Saint Walker who might wear a poncho or some hippy shit, no one else would wear regular clothes. Larfleeze wouldn't have a job, and he'd just mooch of Atrocitus. Pehaps Sinestro would be the manager at a rival food chain. I could see him in a tie..."


"That would work great.
Then an arc where Larfleeze has to GET A JOB DUN DUN DUUNNN to keep all of his stuff for a Crazy Tweest!"


"Sinestro could be have a classy as fuck restaurant and comes around to troll. Meanwhile, Mongul is trying to buy him out of the company.

Dammit /co/, you've got me seriously thinking about this."


"Also the super of their apartment who asks for rent is one of the guardians, who is a real dick. And Hal is the annoying guy who lives above them that's always really really loud."


" Oh and my final contribution to this idea: The leader of the Indigo Tribe is that one annoying lady the always goes through the drive through that no one can ever understand."

No.16588
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16588
>>16586
it's an alf reference, genius.

No.16589
"Sinestro is the guy that owns the fast food joint across the street.

Yellow castle.
It has the strictest menu ever, all meat marinated in orphan fear."


""WHATDYAWANT LADY?"
"click clack click click click"
"MOTHER FUCK DAMMIT GET OUT OF MY FUCKING DRIVETHRU""


"Entire arc on Larfleeze trying multiple times to break into different houses of Blue Lanterns trying to find their rings."


"Episode Ideas?

Sinestro Hires Larlfleeze to steal the recipe for Murder Burgers. Despite the Red Lanterns efforts he succeeds, Sinestro is triumphant.

"Now just give me the recipe Larlfleeze."
"What?"
"The recipe, I paid you to get it."
"No. Its mine now."

Atrocitus [conclusion of 80s cartoon style] AHAHAHAAHAHAAHAH-NOW GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY STORE!"


" The way I figure this is, all of thse ideas need to get a drawfag treatment, and /co/ can collectively write and draw this webcomic."


"Larfleeze: I'm taking the TV to my room ok?
Hal: Well, actually I was planning on watching something toni
Larfleeze: I'm taking it, its mine now.
*canned laughter*"


""Would you care for a sample, sir?"
"I'll take it."
"Take just one, sir"
"ITS MINE, ALL MINE"
"Scene with Larfleeze wrestling with some grocer.""


"-Group is eating dinner-

Saint Walker: This salad is grea-
Atrocitus: SHUT UP AND EAT YOUR STEAK
*canned laughter*
Atrocitus: SHUT THE FUCK UP
*Atrocitus breathes heavily, clutching his knife and fork tight in his fists*
Hal: Larfleeze did you eat the cat?
Larfleeze: No.
*a cats leg hangs from his mouth, he sucks it in like a noodle*
*canned laughter*
Atrocitus: SHUT UP! SHUT THE FUCK UP!
*He vomits blood over the audience*"


"Here's another idea, I hope you like it:

Remember that incident about the lady who burned herself with the coffee and sued McDonalds? An entire episode, maybe a two-parter just around that.

They have to argue in front of the Guardians of Oa. The Litigants have their legal expenses paid for by the Foundation for Safer Restaurants (which has it's entire funds in the form of an endowment from Yellow Castle).

An obvious Stand-In for She-Hulk is Attrocitus's Lawyer, but not enough for copyright to be an issue.

"DOES SOMETHING LIKE THIS ALWAYS FUCKING HAPPEN WHEN SOMEONE TRIES TO SAY YOUR NAME?"
"You should see what it's like getting dressed in the morning."

Attrocitus is naturally, the least sympathetic defendant EVER."

No.16590
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16590
I guess I'll post some of the drawfaggotry that's been done already

No.16591
Murder Burger's having some sort of promotion where the first 50 people to order a hamburger get TWO instead of just one.

So Larfleeze sends his construct corps over to make sure he gets all 50 spots.

But when he gets there, Guy's there ahead of him and he's going to take the first one!

So Larfleeze has to come up with a way to get Guy to move. And Guy doesn't even want the second burger, he's just seeing what he can get out of Larfleeze.

Ends with such a commotion being made that Atrocitus gets so mad he cancels the entire promotion.

No.16592
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16592

No.16593
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No.16594
"Larfleeze needs to get a job...

I found the perfect ending to the episode. Someone gives him an idea to sell some of the watches and jewelry he's stolen.

So he is wearing the "merchant" trench and says
"wanna buy a watch"?
"Yeah sure"
"I got a bunch of em, Ten bucks" *pulls up his sleeve to reveal watches*
"ok" *pulls out ten bucks*
"MINE!"

Then he does it to atrocitus:
"Wanna buy a watch?"
"That's my coat"
"Ten bucks, got a large selection"
"That's my watch."
"So you gonna buy one or what?""


"That would still imply giving up the couch. He should be a garbage man. "I like my job. They pay me money to take things."
The stuff never reaches the dump."


"More Guy Gardner! He should order several pizzas sent to Atrocitus. And Larfleeze shows up and says he'll take care of it--and steals Atrocitus's wallet to pay for it. And just kills the pizza boy anyway. Cue blood vomit.

I still like Rage Burger better than Murder Burger, though. Can't we pull a Metalocalypse and have one be the comic name and one be the actual restaurant name?"


"Combine these two. but make Larfleeze Oliver.

"Please sir, can i have some more."
Atrocitus: No
"I won't ask again" *takes it from Atro*
A: RAAAAGE!!! VOMITS BLOOD
Larfleeze tries to take the vomit. Hands melt. "Hmm I seem to have found a difficulty""


" Larfleeze randomly comes into ownership of a limo. When Atroc tries to find out how he got it, he sees Larfleeze with a construct of a limo driver driving him through the drive thru in Rage Burger."


"There's need be an episode with a health inspector or food critic that goes to Murder Burger and Sinestro's restraurant (Fear Fries?) .

Of course Sinestro instills fear/Parallax in the inspector/critic to give him a good rating and shut down the Murder Burger.
Then Larfleeze comes in to save the day somehow because Murder Burger is his favourite.
Atrocitus is raging the fuck out throughout the episode.

Critic/inspector could be Guy."


"after sinestro fails, Larfleeze shows up at the end of the episode in a fake mustache & sombrero and introduces himself to Atrocitus as señor Healtho inspectoro"


"Some more good construct ideas would be great.
Larfleeze is walking a construct dog.
Atroc walks to Larfleeze and yells "WHOS DOG DID YOU KILL THIS TIME?"
And something else happens."


" Show the kitchen of Sinestro's rival restaurant run by Qwardians who are getting whipped and yelled at by Arkillo."


"Episode idea:
Hal comes to Murder Burger for lunch
Hal: Say, Atro, what's the secret of your meat?
Atrocitus: WE NEVER TELL AT MURDER BURGER! RAAAAARRRRL! Plus... you don't wanna know.

Enter Black Hand.
BH: Delivery Mr. Atrocitus!
He's standing next to what is clearly a casket."


"oh shit, that's perfect.
At the Maccas I work at, food for cop's is free.

So Guy's constantly stopping by, flashing his badge and grabbing free food (even off duty).

Seeing the same cop several times in a night pisses me off, I can imagine how Atrocitus would feel having to hand out free food."


"Oh, and for one episode Mongul takes over Yellow Castle, and is actually competent and gets customers, so Attrocitus and Larlfleeze (who is mad that he can't take people's money because MONGUL has it) figure out a way to get Sinestro back."








It should have a title along the lines of "Atrocitus n' Larfleeze", except on the title card, Larfleeze has X'd it out and written MINE, and then Atrocitus is saying "HEY, FUCK YOBLAAAAAARRRRHHHGGG"






"Now imagine if that Cop was GUY GARDNER."
"And this pisses Larfleeze off because he's never given free food."
"Thus has Larfleeze either dressing like a cop or ducking under the counter as he is using a construct of a cop to try to get food."


"Customer: "Can I get some ketchup"
Atrocitus: *Gives one packet* "HERE."
Customer: "Um, could I have some more?"
Atrocitus: *Vomits acid blood on customer* "AAARGH! HERE'S YOUR FUCKING KETCHUP!""


"Oh! Idea! IDEA!

Murder Burger's having some sort of promotion where the first 50 people to order a hamburger get TWO instead of just one.

So Larfleeze sends his construct corps over to make sure he gets all 50 spots.

But when he gets there, Guy's there ahead of him and he's going to take the first one!

So Larfleeze has to come up with a way to get Guy to move. And Guy doesn't even want the second burger, he's just seeing what he can get out of Larfleeze.

Ends with such a commotion being made that Atrocitus gets so mad he cancels the entire promotion."

No.16595
Of course there'll be some inspired by the Advice lanterns.
"Park my car, take two spots"
"Larfleeze took two spots"
ect.

No.16596
Some of the ideas I forgot to add because of Plus4Chan going down were the ones about Larfleeze's room. It has to be messy and full of other peoples' stuff.

Larfleeze should be in normal clothes at the beginning of some strips, and at the end, be wearing someone else's clothing.


Everything is now caught up.

No.16597
>>10838677
*Cut to a scene Superman's apartment in Metropolis*

Supes: Krypto! I got a few presents for your birthday! Krypto?

*apartment windows light up*

Supes: OH MY GOD!

No.16598
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16598
Some nice drawfaggotry by a poster of the name H.

No.16599
Over in 4Chan /co/, there was a discussion of what Larfleeze (funny how seldom we call him "Agent Orange", isn't it?) ought to sound like. I recorded, fiddled around with and posted my own suggestion here:

http://www.bjorn-comic.com/temp/orange.wmv

People seemed to dig it, and someone asked me...

"I like it. Would you be willing to do Audio plays for Murder Burger?"

I agreed, but he never replied. I don't know if this audio play thing is something that's actually happening or if this is just something that anon was tossing out there, but hey, there it is.

No.16600
>>16599
Really awesome, but just a tad too raspy in my opinion, else, it is complete awesome.

No.16601
>>16600

Well, for me, I wanted to give him a really snarling, desperate-sounding voice, like a predatory animal slavering for food. A growl of hunger always at the back of his throat.

But that's just my approach.

No.16602
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16602
Someone asked for a customer complaining about Dex-star's hair being in their burger. Sorry if the quality isn't the best, don't have a scanner.

No.16603
>>16599
That was me, sorry about the lack of Reply, I was playing the TF2.

I don't know if it can actually be done. We'd have to get other VAs and stuff together, but I think we could at least manage a 5 or 6 minute short.

No.16604
>>16603

Well, I'm currently working on a number of similar projects; I've got a serialized story I'm writing in chapters and doing sort of radio plays of. Getting different VAs for different parts, theme music, background noise, sound effects and all that. I'm actually quite enjoying it. The only difference here would be to have the original art to play alongside the audio, which is a super-easy thing if you use a program like Sony Vegas Pro.

No.16606
>>16604

Actually, now that I think about it! Around two or so years ago, I recorded voice acting for a Sinestro character for Mugen :

http://dave-littler.livejournal.com/tag/green+lantern

Given the absurdly glacial pace that the development of that character, I don't think it's acually much further along now than it was then, but I still have the half-hour or so of Sinestro dialogue I did at the time, and which I still think is pretty decent.

No.16608
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16608
needs more sexy awesome larfleeze

No.16612
>>16606
That works really well. I think I can write up a few minutes of extended Sinestro-Larfleeze interaction in the next week or two.

I've never done something like this before, what's a yardstick rule for pages of script to length of audio? Like, a page every 45 seconds or so?

No.16613
>>16608
There's a different kind of Larfleeze?

No.16615
I got one. I got one.

Larfleeze walks in to MB only to discover Hal and Carol sitting in his spot.

Larfleeze: that spot in MINE

Carol: there are plenty of empty sits today, you can sit anywhere

zoom in on Larfleezes angry look, Larfleeze storms out of the restaurant.

Atrocitus: you'll be sorry.

a few days later, we see carol opening the door to her home

Carol: HAL!

Hal in bed with Larfleeze: I can explain!


also all this takes place in doomzulaverse

No.16616
>>16612
>what's a yardstick rule for pages of script to length of audio? Like, a page every 45 seconds or so?

I think the screenplay ratio of one page per minute translates well to audio as well, all averaging out to that in the end after you cut for sound effects and action and whatnot.

No.16625
"We need to get a nice pitch together and share this with DC. Something like, for an animated TV series called "Murder Burger". which follows Atrocitus an ill-tempered Restaurant Owner living in a very small apartment, who is trying to survive opening his own restaurant chain, accompanied by his greedy dick of a Roommate Larfleeze and their Optimistic yet whiny friend Saint Walker. Many other familiar characters will make appearances like Atrocitus's noisy neighbor Hal Jordan and his strict no-fun landlord Ganthet. Show follows these characters as they try to survive the world, and as Atrocitus tries to keep his restaurant successful against his competition, Sinestro, who is a very sleezy business man always after his formulas.

Hilarity Ensues."

No.16626
panel 1: Atrocitus working grilling some patties

Panel 2: Sinestro over the counter

S: "hey red, I dropped in to check whether this dump is still running."

panel 3: sinestro leaning on the counter with atrocitus on the opposite side his mouth dripping with blood, we see the burgers left unattended.

S: "congratulations, you officially surpassed my expectations"

A: "order or get out"

panel 4: same scene except we now see larfleeze entering from the vent above the grill, Atrocitus's acid blood is taking it's toll on the counter.

S: "now is that any way to treat a customer"

A: "are you going to Order"

S: "I'll take a small Murder burger"

panel 5: Atrocitus turns around to discover all the patties have been stolen.

panel 6: BURNING BLOOD EVERYWHERE

No.16627
Requires Larfleeze and Kilowog eating contest.

Murder Burger ends up out of stock.

No.16628
This is nice. I support nice things.

No.16629
I am proud to have been part of this creation.

No.16630
I remember posting in the original topic--I love this idea. /co/, never change.

What about...Larfleeze tries to order a ridiculous amount of food and is kicked out. He and Atrocitus argue about whether he'll actually eat it all, and Atrocitus rages and kicks him out. He keeps coming back in various terrible disguises and gets kicked out every time, until the Flash comes and orders the exact same thing Larfleeze did. Atrocitus thinks he's Larfleeze after getting a better disguise and tries to kick Flash out until he sees Larfleeze standing outside, wearing those fake plastic glasses with a nose and moustache attached. Larfleeze waves and Atrocitus stares at him. The Flash complains about lousy service and leaves for Sinestro's restaurant. Atrocitus RAGES.

Larfleeze: "At least you still have me!"
Atrocitus: "FFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUU---"

No.16634
>>16630
I love this one/

No.16635
I got a mic and can lend my voice to any projects.

And I think it'd be funny if one whole plot were to focus around this incredibly shy Star Sapphire who was in love with Atroctius as she watches him from afar and tries to win his love by going up to the counter and ordering something. And EVERY TIME she gets distracted/stopped by Larfleeze or some other random lantern interrupting her.

No.16637
>>16635

This'd work well with the 'overly creepy stalker' vibe that seemed to be the preferred personality during that Advice Lantern run on /co/. Really creep it up, and of course, Atrocious is oblivious to this all and she thinks the burning vomit that eats away at her face every time they meet is just their way of saying I love you (and hell, she's probably got a bottle of it in her freezer that she, uh... well, I'm sure you can imagine all sorts of possibilities with that)

No.16638
I thought up an awesome way to combine the Health inspector/Yellow Castle and Sinestro owning a fancy restraunt ideas.
At the start of the series, Sinestro runs some super fucking suave fancy ass restraunt, and so he and Atrocitus have a kind of Squidward/Squilliam relationship going. Then after the whole health inspector fiasco, Alan Scott(The Health Inspector) shuts down Sinestro`s because Parallax is living in the kitchen. Sinestro is discredited, andnow has to open Yellow Castle.

No.16639
>>16599
I like it, it sounds great.
And this is somewhat off topic, but am I the only one who could totally picture Larfleeze talking like Christopher Walken?

No.16640
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16640
This along with
>>16593
Are some examples I suppose of how Larfleeze would just gain clothes.

No.16642
Recommendation: No Doomzula. That's one of the more retarded things /co/ has created.

In fact, this should be confined to the DC Universe.

No.16643
I'm dumping some of the other murder-burger related memes people made.

Star Sapphire:
Get job at Murder Burger, to pay for the chains you'll need

Guy Gardener:
Go to Murder Burger, hold up drive-thru

Saint Walker:
Pass out anti-acids, in Murder Burger

Indigo:
Order Murderburgers, give them out to people in line

Larfleeze:
See Saint Walker passing out anti-acids, take them all
That lady posion those burgers! Give them to me!

Atrocitus:
GODAMN IT GUY, ORDER YOUR FUCKING FOOD ALREADY

No.16644
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16644
Contributing for my pal, Vorked Larfleeze.

No.16645
>>16643
though i disagree, i do think this shoud be confined to the DCverse

No.16646
someone had the idea of a background shot with gentleman ghost eating a meal with all of it falling out underneath him. and larfleeze is underneath him piling it into a bag.

No.16647
>>16644
Panel 3 made me Rofl

No.16650
>>16644
Pure awesome. Just needed some BLOOD SPEW.

No.16651
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16651
For the record, I drew the OP.

No.16652
saint walker is patiently waiting for his order to be called out. larfleeze takes advantage of this by sitting in the booth behind him and speaking through a Styrofoam cup saying, "number 52".

Saint casually walks up to the counter and asks. "Excuse me did you call number 52?"

Atrocitus turns around and in a fit of rage shouts "DID YOU HEAR ME CALL NUMBER 52?!?!" blood vomit flying everywhere as he does.

saint walker gets the message and goes back to his booth, which he had left his coat in, with his wallet and ring in the pocket.

of course by the time he gets back to his booth the coat is gone. a puzzled saint walker stands there scratching is head as larfleeze is casually strolling out of murder burger, coat over his arm and trying on his fancy new blue ring.

No.16653
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16653
>>16651
Then you should be our artist!

No.16654
>>16651
oh wow haha.

thats awesome.

No.16655
>>16651
Awesome! You used my hawaiian shirt idea!

No.16656
>>16650
Thanks, man, I would have actually drawn it, but my scanner's kinda wonky. I hope MS Paint will do.

No.16657
some anon came up with an alternate to the "MINE MINE MINE" oath.

The light of day
The dark of night
These things belong to me by right!
A message to all you lantern swine!
STAY AWAY
EVERYTHING IS MINE!

No.16658
>>16657
Doesn't really flow.

No.16659
I just read some one else's post and if this ever evolves into a flash cartoon, I'd love to do some voices. I've already kind of bragged about it on various streams, but I an pretty good at voices.

No.16660
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16660
I always read Atrocitus in Satan's(from South Park) voice
And if this actually turned into a flash cartoon, I'd shit myself in happiness.

No.16662
>>16660
I see Larfleeze kind of talking like skeletor or cobra commander, I can do those.

No.16666
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16666
i have an idea for a short.

Guy gardner is dicking around in murder burger abusing his cop discount and throwing burgers and shit at people.

Atro gets pissed off and grabs him by the jacket and throws him out in a fit of rage and blood vomit shouting "YOU AND YOUR GREEN LANTERN BUDDYS ARE NOT WELCOME HERE ANYMORE!!!!!!"

So later on in the day, John stewart decides he is a pit peckish and stops by murder burger for a quick bite. He eventually gets his turn to order and Atro responds "Sorry, we don't serve your kind here anymore(as a reference to kicking Guy out earlier)"

Johns face molds to an Atro like state and he immediate starts picking up chairs and trays and starts to throw them at the windows smashing everything in sight. during this time the view keeps switching from John to Atro both rageing in unison.

eventually John gets bored and just leaves in a murmur of "wouldn't get this kind of treatment at the yellow castle..."

finally the Atro looks around at the mess that once was his precious murder burger and one Saint Walker crawls out from under a broken table. "Hey, at least you still have your burgers right?" he says.
"I supposed you are right" Atro replies as he turns around to the grill as Larfleeze is just finishing off the last burger in the store.

"FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU"

No.16682
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16682
>>16589
Sinestro place is like Soup nazi place

No.16732
>>16682
A bit ago, we decided it was going to be a fancy restaurant.

No.16738
>>16732
But it could always end up as a fast food place.
>>16638

No.16739
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16739
>>16732
"Ah, restaurants are a messy Business. Messy, messy, messy. Someday, someday, intelligent Beings will transcend restaurants... choose better places to eat... But for now the customers insist upon receiving their Orders."

No.16745
>>16739
once again
>>16638

No.16823
>>16608
We need a better drawn version of this.

No.16829
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16829
>>16823
Such as this?

No.16836
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16836
>>16829
Almost finished...

No.16838
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16838
>>16836
Done.

No.16863
>>16838
Oh wow.

No.16870
>>16592
Needs to be drawn a better version of this

No.16949
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16949

No.16950
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16950

No.16951
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16951

No.16952
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16952
MINE!

No.16953
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16953

No.16954
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16954

No.16955
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16955
FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU WE NEEDED HIM!

No.16956
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16956
I'm sure he is doing perfectly fine.

No.16957
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16957
Sorry to disappoint Walker...

No.16958
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16958

No.16959
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16959
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

No.16962
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16962
Ill give you 300 hamburgers and a blue lantern ring for his safe return.

No.16963
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16963
Done!

No.16964
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No.17007
OH U

No.17021
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>>16963
I see it now, my entire life I have felt nothing but hunger, horrible hunger possessing me driving me against my friends, my family, the universe.

I regret not the lives this thing made me take during all these years that I own it, nay, it owned me.

for death is a better alternative to the living hell I have been going through.

yet now with the blue light to guide me and the Orange to give me strength I can make this universe a better place for all of us.

come brother walker, we have hope to spread!

No.17022
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>>17021

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>>17021
>>17022
That isn't how it would happen!

No.17038
>>17036
yes it is, and then Atrocitus comes in

A: "well go spread your hope somewhere else, I just washed this floor"

then they both get arrested for possession

No.17142
>>17021
I may have laughed at all of this if I didn't loathe this meme so much.

No.17168
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Crossovers!

No.17169
>>17168
I dawww'd

No.17176
needs a special episode where they go to comicon.

guy meets some hot cosplayers

larfleeze stumbles into a giant furry gathering

atrocitus findes himself in the twilight panel.

No.17206
>>17176

Why is Larfleeze in the furry patch? Is it because he's particularly fuzzy? Or are we making a bad furry bash that goes over my head because I still don't see what's wrong with them?

Atrocitus in a Twilight panel would easily be the best pity genocide.

No.17211
>>17206

because they are the most likely to gangbang him.

No.17217
>>17176

Any Larfleeze idea that doesn't involve him at least getting swag is wrong.

No.17219
>>17217
He steals all the swag, and kidnaps Geoff Johns.

No.17222
>>17219
Which probably wouldn't bother Johns in the least

No.17228
>>17217
how about a failed attempt to get swag.

>A: I have an order here for a Mr Geoff Johns, WHERE IS HE ghoughgprioiejhfjscdlkd

>guard: panel 2814

later

>A: YOU! do you know the way to panel 8942 or was it 363?... OH GOD I'M LOST AGAIN GHFEOWFDSHfdfuieuihfdsbyufge

>twitard: why would you need anyother panel besides twilight

>A: twiwhat?

>Twitad: well it's about this girl Bella who...

SOMEWHERE ELSE IN THE CON

>L: I was sure my burgers went through here.

>Furfag: that's the most amazing fursuit I ever saw

>L: I GAVE AT THE OFFICE, wait what?

>Furfag: what are you supposed to be some sort of boar or rat or a mixture of both?

>L: I AM LARFLEEZE, but you will refer to me as AGENT ORANGE

>Furfag: stop being so uptight, is sounds like you need a yiffing

No.17239
>>17228
You forgot L's primary mission at Comic-Con. Visiting EVERY booth that gives out stuff.

No.17240
Okay, VA guy, I'm sorry, I tried but I couldn't put together any extended Dialog using just Larfleeze and Sinestro. We need Atrocitus or at least Saint Walker to get more then a page going between them. I'll be posting a script soon, but it will make use of all the characters. If we can get volunteers, we might actually have one of the rare "/coc/ thread that actually creates something" threads.

No.17250
>>17239
they have booths that give out stuff?

No.17272
>>17250
They did at NYCC at least. Promotional Comics, thins like that.

No.17320
OK. I have an idea. Lemme play this out for a second...
______________________________-

We see Sinestro and Arkillo standing outside a huge planet with an array around it. Sinestro speaks into the array's speaker system.

Sinestro: Soranik.

Computer: DEFENSE ENGAGED.

Sinestro: Arkillo. Stay here and guard Parallax. We mustn't let him out until we have a proper host.

Arkillo: Yes my lord.

Sinestro flies off. Arkillo stands at the energy shield for a second before a Green Light goes flying past him, somehow breaches through the controls and then proceeds to go onto planet Quard. Arkillo straightens up, holds out his hands and shouts...

Arkillo: SORDAN!... urrr... SORINAK... noo... uhhh...
___________________________

We cut to the planet surface where the green light hits the ground and we see Guy Gardner and Larfleeze standing in the middle of a patch of smoking earth.

Guy: Well here we are! Remulax 5! And all it's beautiful beaches!

Larfleeze: What a way for an intergalactic overlord to travel. With a lantern...

The two look around.

Guy: hmmm... this don't look like Remulax 5... maybe we took a wrong turn at Sun number 5.

Larfleeze's eyes widen as we see him observing a mountain of yellow lantern rings and power batteries.

Guy: And then a left turn at space sector 45677-

Larfleeze: IT'S MINE DO YOU HEAR ME!?

Larfleeze starts to pound Guy into the ground.

Larfleeze: DOWN DOWN DOWN! MINE MINE MINE!

Larfleeze looks at the rings with a wide grin then proceeds to swim through it.

Guy: ... what's with you?

Larfleeze: I'M RICH! I'M WEALTHY! I'M INDEPENDENT! I'M SOCIALLY SECURE!
_____________________________________

We cut to outside the planet as Arkillo is still guessing.

Arkillo: Uhhh... Sorfona? Uhhh... Sardonic?... Uhhh... Soranik?

*The shield lowers and he proceeds to enter*

No.17379
>>17320
I like the concept of Larfleeze and Guy going on a (space) road-trip. Of course, the only reason Larfleeze would've agreed to go is so that he can get souvenirs from everywhere.

No.17380
>>17379
more like, Larfleeze wanted to go get swag from new and exciting places, Guy joined because Larfleeze is a chick magnet.

No.17381
Thought of one that would see Murder Burger having one of those fucking redonkulous lunch rushes, so theres a line going out the door.
Larfleeze comes to the end of the line, outraged that he can't have his burgers NOW!
Then it switches to Atrocitus behind the counter, and every time he turns around to take another order, Larfleeze is further and furthrt along the line, and everyone behind him is has been turned into a construct. He reaches the till, orders his food and takes it without paying. Then as Atrocitus looks up to tell Larfleeze how much the food costs, the restraunt is completely empty and the line is gone.

No.17382
what about this, Bleez has a crush on Larfleeze.

a crush he is COMPLETELY OBLIVIOUS to.

No.17386
>>17382

I already had an idea like a shy, passive and overly nice Star Sapphire loves Atroctius but is too shy to admit her feelings.

Every time she tries to do so she gets interrupted.

No.17389
>>17386
>A: welcome to murder burger home or the murder burger how can I help you

>Star Sapphire: hi I guess you don't know me, which is completely fine because I only see you at work and I guess you're busy and everything but I want to ask you even though I'm not even of you're species but then I guess you are the last of yours and stuff like this isn't new, I mean just look at Kyle and Soranik and superman will you like to go....

>L bursts in front of her dressed in a uniform he stole from Hal: I AM CLEARLY A POLICE OFFICER GIVE ME FREE FOOD.

No.17437
>>17389
Why did I read Larfleeze's line in Christopher Lloyd's voice?

No.17440
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>>17320

>Larfleeze with Daffy Duck's voice.

No.17446
>>17440

I always read Larfleeze with a mashup of Dinobot and Cobra Commander.

No.17522
>>17380
Are you sure he didn't tag along because Larfleeze is a guy magnet?
Everyone's gay for Larfleeze after all.

No.17527
>>17522
subconsciously yes,

No.17606
>>17522

No.17607
>>17522
I think it would be better if he just tagged along without guy knowing, but found out halfway through, so he is just mooching off him the entire trip

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>>16592

No.17894
Oh god, can't breathe...

Please... please make this...

No.17985
Hey VL, I have a hypothetical situation for you.
Lets say somehow a pitch is made for this, and your Bruce Campbell show idea, but they only let you put one on the air. Which one gets it?

No.18059
>>17446
I've ALWAYS heard him in my mind as Gollum for some reason. I can totally see Daffy though.

No.18061
New episode Idea.
Someone tricks Larfleeze into wanting their jobs.
He eventually realizes he's been duped, but then pulls a Tom Sawyer and makes them do it, except now he's talking their money.

No.18062
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18062
Larfleeze needs to constantly mooch off of Klick Klock Nok Indigo girl. She knows she's getting screwed, but she just doesn't have the heart to turn him away.

No.18063
Exerior shot of MURDERBURGER. Rear Profile of Random patron.
Interior shot. Patron walks up to counter. Atrocious is not in yet, Dex-Starr is tending.
Dude; Hey, can I, like, get a Murderburger? With fries?
DS; HISSSSSSSSSS*BLLLEAAUGH*
Dude; No, not a blood shake. Murderburger.
DS;MWREEEEOW*BBLLLLEAUGH*
Dude; Y'Know what, this place sucks.
LATER THAT DAY
Atrocious shows for his shift.
AT; DEX-STARR. HOW WAS BUSINESS?
DS; MREOW HISSSS*BLLLLEEEAUGH*
AT; NOTHING?! AT ALL?! **HHHHUUUURGH**
External shot. Windows splatter with acid blood. Last shot is Larfleeze running a burger stand out of the back of the murderburger, selling CONSTRUCT burgers that Look and taste like real burgers but dissapear after being eaten.

No.18069
>>16652 Next panel shows "meanwhile, in universe 52" Same as the last panel, except everyone's wearing cowboy hats. You can't mention the number 52 without talking about the multiverse dude.

No.18070
>>18062
L: Gimmie!
I: *Gives him burger*
L: Gimmie!
I: *Gives him purse*
L: Gimmie!
I: *Standing in bra and panties as she hads him her clothes*
L: Gimmie!
I: *Rolls Eyes*
Next panel them in bed together
L:Gimmie!
I: >:(

No.18083
>>18063
they should turn people into costructs once eaten.

No.18084
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>>18070

No.18095
>>18063
guy should pay with construct money

No.18099
Just had an idea in a thread Vorked made on /co/.
Murder Burger is a sequel to Blackest Night.
Atrocitus gets out of space jail, and wants to start a legitimate business ect.
Y/N?

No.18100
Also, The MB employees should have an oath.

No.18101
>>18099
then what about all the others? they realized that only if they stay on the same planet they are strongest and can keep the universal damage down to a minimum, so they choose earth because that by some crazy math it is the closest to all the lanterns specifically, Cleaveland Ohio or any such place and just live together?

No.18102
>>18101
This entire thread is on the subject of Atrocitus working at mcdonalds.
Do we really need logic?

No.18106
>>18102
maybe you're right. still I love putting logic into things.

No.18356
bump

No.18359
I'm thinking about making a sort of radio sitcom commercial for this one with my friends, using lines from the first /co/ thread and here.

I haven't heard of any real American radio sitcom commercial, btw. I've only heard Just The five Of Us from Vice City, which was the inspiration for the thought.

No.18393
>>18359
Who listens to the radio anymore?

No.18395
>>18393
Folks without MP3 players like me.

No.18497
>>18393
I do sometimes.
>>18395
What he said.

No.18656
This needs serious bumping

No.18657
This must be continued!

No.18659
This is the most entertainment I've had on plus4chan in a long time. This needs to have some degree of "something that actually got done" or I think I might cry.

No.18660
>>18100
I came up with this, it's meh, but I'm not very creative.

By greasy grills and dirty floors
We must serve all who come through the doors
Let those who hunger search no more
For that's what Murder Burger stands for!

No.18662
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>>17782
Have the redrawn version

No.18663
>>18662
nice

No.18664
There should be a running gag with other characters appearing in the background. I can imagine Sinistar standing in the line at Murder Burger repeating I AM SINISTAR. I HUNGER.

No.18665
>>18662

Maybe it's just me being petty, but I thought it was funnier when Larfleeze accidentally had the money line.

No.18670
>>18662
something is horribly wrong with larfleezes arm in the second panel

No.18680
>>18665
I can't please anyone can I? -baaaw-

No.18691
>>18665
But it doesn't make sense that way.

No.18699
>>18061
I just realized that I wrote "talking their money"
I of course meant taking.

No.18804
We need more artists for this.

No.18884
Jordan, Carol, Walker and Indigo 1 go all to eat together. Indigo goes to order the food while the others grab a table. But when she`s going back, she hears the other people in the line about not having money, being late to work, etc. so she starts giving food away. When she returns to the table, there`s only 2 straws and a pack of ketchup... Which she gives to a guy with one leg in the next table.

No.19106
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19106
I'm going to start posting some of the continuous Advice Lanterns here.

No.19107
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>>19106

No.19108
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>>19107

No.19109
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>>19108

No.19110
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>>19109

No.19111
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>>19110

No.19112
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19112
>>19111

No.19113
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19113
>>19112

No.19114
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>>19113

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>>19114
And this one is a possible follow up, but kind of defeats the earlier two spots conflict.

No.19127
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>>19115

"Defeats,"or "makes better?"

No.19137
>>19115
"Larfleeze's Car has one seat"

No.19151
>>19127
Actually it does make better. Because Larfleeze WOULD take up two parking spots with a unicycle.

No.19159
>>19151
He could park one car, and make a construct car to take the spot next to him just to be a dick.

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19160

No.19161
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19161
>>19160

No.19185
Herumphbump.

No.19186
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19186

No.19187
>>19186
see
>>16588

No.19188
Here are some Murder Burger oaths some people came up with

In angry meals
In giveaway toys
No customer shall have his joys
Let customer service beware our might
GET THE FUCK OUT!

From bloody shakes
to fries uncooked
For better value, no where to look
For those with rage and hunger true
Come on down, we'll say, "fuck you."

With lukewarm fries and burger red
Flipped from a grill so weakly fed
Together with a cup of ice
We’ll combo you all
HERE IS YOUR PRICE!

With grease and grime
We serve this slime
A miserable day
we waste away
HEY FAGGOT YOU FORGOT TO PAY!

By greasy grills and dirty floors
We must serve who come through the doors
Let those who hunger search no more
EAT SHIT AND DIE

No.19190
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19190
posting the latest Larfleeze pages for obvious reasons.

No.19191
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19191
>>19190

No.19505
Did any other comics ever come of this?

No.19541
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19541
Someone linked me to this thread on /co/ so I thought I'd post this for you guys.

No.19543
>>19541
Post Sinestro plz :3

No.19547
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19547
Anyone have an archive of the original thread on /co/?

>>19186
Ya, they have a vegetarian option, it's:
GET THE FUCK OUT!!!

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>>19543
Just came over from /co/ as well.

No.19549
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No.19550
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>>19548
So did I, noticed you guys where missing a bit o art.

No.19552
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No.19553
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19553

No.19559
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19559
I'm surprised I haven't posted this yet.

No.19560
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19560

No.19561
Where's the beef?
Get back in line
No one quits or can resign
Order or we'll break your spine
You might think you'll have it your way
Murder Burger says not today
I'm hatin' it!

No.19562
themesong for the cop bar the GLs visit when Guys not flashing his badge for food, or watching Hal punch people for misdemeanors:


Making your way in the sector they gave
Takes all the will you've got;
Taking a break from GL corps duties
Sure would help a lot.
Wouldn't you like to get away?

Sometimes you want to go
Where all the poozers are the same,
And the oaths are never lame,
You want to be where you can see,
A spectrum that's all the same;
You want to be at Warriors(trademark brand name).

You want to go and say your Oath,
And drink liquor all the same;
You want to be at Warriors(trademark brand name).

Guy: Like it?
Hal: You're gonna get sued.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FD8ljNobUys

No.19563
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No.19564
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No.19565
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No.19566
>>19565
HAHA

No.19567
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19567
I redid one that I made earlier

Also posting with my trip now

No.19569
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No.19571
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My sketch is shitty and unfinished, but it is Murder Burger inspired.

Saint Walker and Larfleeze here would be roommates with Atrocitus.

No.19573
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No.19574
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No.19577
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No.19587
>>19561
I support this Oath

As for the Every Corps has a restaurant and food court ideas, I'm going to motion for that to be ruled out right now.
I think Murderburger, The Yellow Lantern(Later Fear Fries) Warrior Pub, and the Blue Soup Kitchen is enough.
If we try to go for a "Restaurant per corps" gimmick, shit loses the originality it barely had to begin with, and it just feels like it's trying to shove too much in your face.

All we really need is the titular restaurant and the rival restaurant. A bar would be a good edition I think, even as a place where Atrocitus and Larfleeze go when MB closes, as well as an excuse for Guy to be a drunk asshole.

And we can still work in the roommate sitcom aspect.
Not every single comic would need to take place at Murder Burger. There is plenty of potential to show Atrocitus and Larfleeze's apartment and whatnot.

No.19595
>>19587
How about the Star Sapphires have a Hawaiian Tropic Zone-type restaurant?

No.19596
>>19595
more like a titty bar

No.19597
I think the Indigo Tribe is more suited for a soup kitchen, or at least the main force behind it as they work in association with the Blue Lanterns and their farmer's market.

No.19598
>>19595
How about a sex line?

"Oh baby, baby."

No.19602
From /co/:

Murder Burger the musical.

Wherein whenever Atrocitus bursts into song the ground splits open and spits out lava-rage to go with his melodic raging, the Star Sapphires do a Moulin Rouge when they croon about love as the scenery turns pink and rose petals fall from the sky, and the Sinestro Corps do Springtime for Sinestro.
Among other things.
All this to promote their eating establishments to an unsuspecting public.


So what is Green Lantern, Blue Lantern, Indigo Tribe and Agent Orange? Green Lanterns doing rock n' roll, Blue Lanterns doing psychedelic rock, Indigo Tribe doing rap, and Agent Orange does rap too but sells his CDs?

No.19609
>>19602
>Blue Lanterns doing psychedelic rock, Indigo Tribe doing rap, and Agent Orange does rap too but sells his CDs

Gawd no.

Blue Lanterns should do reggae, Indigo tribal chanting, and Larlfreeze...uh...I dunno, something smarmy and dirty like Tom Waits or Nick Cave.

Since the GLs have a bar, they should do some rockin drinking songs a la Dropkick Murphys (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=agro9miL3bA) lol "The Warrior's Code"

No.19611
>>19609
>>19602
All I have to say is: Why?
This seems highly unecessesary and would only exceed in pushing the concept even further away from the original idea, something that has been done waaay too much already.

On the topic of the violets working at a strip club, I think I support the idea.

No.19615
>>19609
Great, now I'm imagining Larfleeze singing Chocolate Jesus.

No.19622
Two Moping Crew: "Grab a Lantern and mop..."
Two Rag Guys Crew: "Scrub the blood from the counter top."

Burger Machine Guy: "There is nothing so mean as my rage machine!"

Two Broom guys Crew: "With a slash and a gush"
Two Brush Guys Crew: "We'll puke more up for the rush"

Fine Tenor Atrocitus: "Before you open the door..."

Larfleeze pops up from a wastecan: "Give me MINE I want MORE!!"

Group, dancing - one crew looking at Lar: "When we've vivisected with that..."

Burger Machine Guy: "Start it over again!"
Fine Tenor Atrocitus: "Tell me are we mean?"
Crew: "At Murder Burger's we Scream!"

[ Fine Tenor Atrocitus nods, satisfied]

[Crew goes out to the parking lot to kick up their heels and dance, with various small murders and rioting]

All: "You deserve some HATE today! So get out and get the FUCK away! From MURDER BURGERS! MURDER BURGERS! MURDER BURGERS!"


Guy: Fuck this, I'm goin' to Arby's

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XKR1ScQUpcA

No.19624
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moar stuff from /co/

No.19625
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No.19626
And now a sorta unrelated Larfleeze musical moment...


Sometimes when your needs have all been amplified
And there's something to grab
You wonder how you keep getting
Think of all the things that's really yours
And the lanterns you've earned
The greed in your heart is growing
You can fly, if you try leaving nothing behind
OA only knows what you might find

MINE - Everything you have it all is mine
You hold my ring on your hand
MINE - I keep it all because it is mine
It's mine, and it's so grand
And you can't win, BECAUSE IT'S MINE

I'm always trying to take your spirit
Making you my agent
You'll be mine forever
But there's another recruit right this moment
Claiming what I found
Looks like it's now or never
Out of the darkness you stumble into my light
Fighting orange things is your invite

MINE - Everything you have it all is mine
You hold my ring on your hand
MINE - I keep it all because it is mine
It's mine, and it's so grand
And you can't win, BECAUSE IT'S MINE

MINE - Everything you have it all is mine
You are my future and all I planned
MINE - I keep it all because it is mine
You hold my ring on your hand

MINE - Mine to keep all your stuff with me
Mine and everything I can see
Mine - 'cause there is a place in my Battery
And it's calling you to join with Larfleeze


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLhp0US_Hj0

No.19627
File: 125847896834.png-(77.81KB, 1918x494, afsd.png)
19627

No.19628
>>19627
you got a giggle out of me.

No.19629
And now a sorta unrelated Atrocitus musical moment...

Take a little warp to the edge of sector 666
And he attacks
Where the Ysmault looms,
like a scabby bloom
As it shifts and cracks
Where secrets lie Abin Sur did find,
in the Inversion's cries
Hey GL, you know
you're never coming back
Past the magma, past the hate,
past the rage, past his corps
On a gathering storm comes
a tall demonic man
His rusty crimson face
With a red right hand


He'll crush you in his arms,
tell you your death is what he'll enjoy
He'll kill you with his blood
it melted through your field and face it did destroy
He'll reach inside your chest and make a hole,
Crush your heart like coal
Hey Jordan, you know you're
never ever coming back
He's a god, he's a madman,
he's a lantern, he's a grue dude
They're screaming his name
through this disappearing land
But he's ripping out your throat
With a red right hand


You ain't got no Rage?
He'll get you some
You ain't got no Ring? He'll get you one
You ain't got blood to project,
you feel like some respect
Well don't you worry Lantern,
cause here he comes
Through the sectors and the OA
and the borders and Korugar
A stain is cast wherever he stands
Spines of Green Lanterns in his
red right hand

(Organ solo)

You'll see that he's your nightmare,
you'll see him bleed when he screams
He'll appear out of nowhere but
he ain't shooting beams
You'll see him remove your head,
on a good day he's mean
And hey Gardner, I'm warning
you to take that ring off
He's a god, he's a madman,
he's a lantern, he's a grue dude
You're one disembowel dog
in his gastronomic plan
Designed and dissected by
his red right hand

(Organ solo)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUlgN__Jrxk

No.19630
File: 125848814138.png-(40.29KB, 766x393, LarfleeSaintson.png)
19630

No.19632
File: 125849434857.png-(16.01KB, 294x267, LARFLEEEEZEISBLUEBEETLE_bluering.png)
19632
Yay this is still going!

No.19653
no musical numbers god dommit

No.19654
>>19653
>no fun, dammit

There's no harm in expressing a few ideas that won't go anywhere. Chill.

No.19659
File: 125859481232.jpg-(157.77KB, 792x1224, 1258594204835.jpg)
19659
No one on /co/ seems to be into Murder Burger at the moment

No.19662
File: 125859769527.gif-(133.98KB, 396x481, mr-freeze.gif)
19662
>>19654
>chill.
I just don't like hearing dumb ideas that won't go anywhere, posted beside good ideas that could potentially wishful thinking go somewhere.

No.19668
>>18070 This one MUST be made. Drawfags, get to it!

No.19694
File: 125869522046.jpg-(88.47KB, 635x700, tislatefermahstuff.jpg)
19694
This cannot be this low on the page. That is an outrage.

No.19699
>>19694
wat

No.19706
>>19694
what is this supposed to be the time traveling love child of Atrocitus and Larfleeze. does he appear in an episode?

my god, the reactions will be incredible.

No.19711
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19711
>>19706

No.19713
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19713
>>19706

No.19747
File: 125886508150.jpg-(545.43KB, 1073x751, murderburgerepisode2.jpg)
19747

No.19758
File: 125891751331.jpg-(112.42KB, 1073x751, 0.jpg)
19758
I AM TRULY A COMEDIAN

>>19713
>>19711
wat?

No.19759
>>19758

I'll admit, I got a good chuckle out of that.

No.19784
>>19747
One thing.
I like that you incorporated the tie into Atrocitus' look, but as for giving Fleeze short sleeves, I think it works better with the idea someone had to have him wearing a hawaiian shirt over his regular suit.

No.19786
File: 125898297747.jpg-(7.68KB, 310x187, Murder Burger logo.jpg)
19786
I know in one of the threads for Murder Burger someone was asking about a logo for the restaurant and after 9000hrs in paint, I made this up. Of course it can be redone to look better. As I said it's just done in paint and I haven't slept in day.

No.19793
>>19758
>>19747
Both are great. Love the style. NEED MORE.

No.19812
Library Lass had an awesome script for a comic:
---------------------
Hal Jordan walks into Murder Burger

Atrocitus: Welcome to Murder Burger, Home of the Murder Burger, WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU WANT!
Hal: I'd like a hamboigah. ...Two! Two hamburgers!
Atrocitus looks suspicious.
Hal: No wai-
Atrocitus grabs Hal by the hair, it was actually Larfleeze in a mask.
Atrocitus: FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF LARFLEEEEEEEZE!
---------------------

>>19694
Wait, who's this classy-ass dude?

No.19815
>>19812
Atrocitus: Welcome to Murder Burger, Home of the Murder Burger, WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU WANT!
Hal: I'd like a hamboigah. ...Two! Two hamburgers!
Atrocitus looks suspicious.
Hal: No wai-
Atrocitus grabs Hal by the hair, it was actually Larfleeze in a mask.
Larfleeze Grabs Atrocitus's head, it is also actually Larfleeze. second Larfleeze pulls first Larfleeze's mask off. it is infect Atrocitus.

Chase ensues.

No.19817
File: 125909657778.jpg-(931.63KB, 800x2000, muderburgeriswinandawesome.jpg)
19817
>>16594

CONTEEEEEEEEEENT!

No.19818
>>19817

I laughed a brick.

No.19822
>>19817
We need MOOOOORRREEE

No.19827
File: 125914538224.jpg-(166.43KB, 502x494, Greedy-Larfleeze-Order-an-expensive-meal-Dont-tip.jpg)
19827

No.19828
File: 125914540537.jpg-(134.25KB, 502x494, Raging-Atrocitus-Larfleeze--Didnt-fucking-tip.jpg)
19828
>>19827

No.19833
>>19827
>>19828
These just aren't funny anymore.

No.19837
http://www.sendspace.com/file/xj10ms

Here, have some new source material. Plenty of Atrocitus and Larfleeze moments.

No.19845
File: 125921375692.jpg-(60.16KB, 594x479, gbf3.jpg)
19845
>>19837
Oh christ, this new artist should be slapped.

No.19846
>>19833
I don't see you coming up with anything.

No.19847
File: 125922331679.jpg-(141.27KB, 1175x500, feast.jpg)
19847
>>19837
Blackest Night #5 has much better material.

No.19849
File: 125923020787.png-(60.08KB, 602x1414, 1259229250533.png)
19849
>>18070
Well, a kindly Drawfag made us this.

No.19850
File: 125923105061.jpg-(1.39MB, 1280x1952, murderburgershop.jpg)
19850
>>19847

just shooped this, was received well on a Murder Burger /co/ thread so posting

No.19852
File: 125923218038.jpg-(87.35KB, 204x200, larfleeze senior.jpg)
19852
Larfleeze's father?

No.19853
>>19852
Welcome to three months ago.

No.19854
>>19853

Still, it would be cool to have Ganon show up and be all like "son I am dissapoint" at Fleeze's antics.

No.19857
File: 125925108875.jpg-(503.54KB, 1280x1977, Green Lantern #48 002.jpg)
19857
posting entire awesome Larfleeze and Atrocitus heavy green lantern 48.

No.19858
File: 125925115121.jpg-(593.39KB, 1280x1987, Green Lantern #48 003.jpg)
19858
>>19857

No.19859
File: 125925119521.jpg-(575.61KB, 1280x1990, Green Lantern #48 004.jpg)
19859
>>19858

No.19860
File: 125925130248.jpg-(547.99KB, 1280x1983, Green Lantern #48 005.jpg)
19860
>>19859
note that this artists has absolutely no Idea on how to draw larfleeze's head

No.19861
File: 125925135823.jpg-(618.67KB, 1280x1972, Green Lantern #48 006.jpg)
19861
>>19860

No.19862
File: 125925147858.jpg-(1.04MB, 2560x1966, Green Lantern #48 007-08.jpg)
19862
>>19861

No.19863
File: 125925157688.jpg-(579.88KB, 1280x1990, Green Lantern #48 009.jpg)
19863
>>19862
we need this entire Issue in burgerverse

No.19864
File: 125925173090.jpg-(577.74KB, 1280x1981, Green Lantern #48 010.jpg)
19864
>>19863

No.19865
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19865
>>19864
Sinestro is almost kissing Hal in page 10.

No.19866
File: 12592520272.jpg-(528.25KB, 1280x1985, Green Lantern #48 013.jpg)
19866
>>19865

No.19867
File: 125925218170.jpg-(555.74KB, 1280x1988, Green Lantern #48 014.jpg)
19867
>>19866
Walker and Atrocitus: best buds

No.19868
File: 125925224124.jpg-(496.58KB, 1280x1973, Green Lantern #48 015.jpg)
19868
>>19867

No.19869
File: 125925229882.jpg-(515.03KB, 1280x1982, Green Lantern #48 016.jpg)
19869
>>19868

No.19870
File: 125925237294.jpg-(495.57KB, 1280x1977, Green Lantern #48 017.jpg)
19870
>>19869

No.19871
The link to the issue was already posted - you really didn't need to do this.

>>19850
Everything was great up until 9,000%

No.19872
File: 125925265371.jpg-(493.53KB, 1280x1978, Green Lantern #48 018.jpg)
19872
>>19870

No.19873
File: 125925279572.jpg-(465.63KB, 1280x1981, Green Lantern #48 019.jpg)
19873
>>19871
too late. I'm too far in to stop now
>9000%
I don't remember this

No.19874
File: 125925289765.jpg-(616.53KB, 1280x1989, Green Lantern #48 020.jpg)
19874
>>19873

No.19877
File: 125927501166.jpg-(53.98KB, 468x497, eh.jpg)
19877
>>19859
Oh god. what is that thing and why is it trying to look like Larfleeze?

No.19879
File: 12592871296.jpg-(35.15KB, 411x419, xmastree.jpg)
19879
>>19864
The fact that Larfleeze can't read makes me feel sad.
I don't quite know why.
Also, this.

No.19881
>>19879
Geoff said that after Blackest night Larfleeze will stay on earth. he also said that he "mentions something in the next issue he is going to be getting obsessed with"

No.19884
>>19881
Oh god.
I don't know whether a Grinchmas special starring Larfleeze would be an awesome thing or a bad thing....

No.19885
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19885

No.19886
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19886

No.19894
Also, someone made a joke the other day about the Red Lanterns playing a game called Angry Angry Hippos.
I lol'd.

No.19942
File: 125948796295.png-(59.11KB, 566x641, fearfries.png)
19942
posted this on /co/...i hope you guys like it

No.19944
>>19942
Oh god is that a spider under there?
I like it.

No.19945
File: 125949562767.jpg-(46.88KB, 600x585, clockspider.jpg)
19945
>>19944

it's baby clockspider!

No.19948
File: 125950303637.jpg-(131.17KB, 500x500, 1250139009761.jpg)
19948
>>19945
Oh god
Fuck you Sinestro.

No.19953
Keep it comin' guys!

No.19955
>>19894

So they spit out marbles? Made of blood and rage?

No.19956
File: 125953773141.jpg-(9.14KB, 203x152, _40740233_burgers203.jpg)
19956
I think a good stand alone or recurring joke could be the "Two Hamburger Special" On now at Participating Murder Burger retailers.

No.19959
>>19956
That joke is spent, so I'd say lets not.

No.19961
>>19959
WELL THERES JUST NO FUCKING PLEASING YOU THEN IS THERE?
T_T

No.19962
File: 125956415395.png-(57.33KB, 480x640, Atrocitus.png)
19962

No.19963
There's plenty of Fear Fries related Sinestro , but how bout some material for him when he's got his fancy retsaraunt.

Perhaps him in a nice suit in a lobby exchanging some banter with a customer:
C: Yes, I'd like a reservation for next Friday
S: I'm sorry, but we're full
C: Kay, how about Saturday or Sunday
S: Nope, we're booked those days too
C: Fin, when's your earliest available reservation?
*close up of sinestro's face*
S: NEVER

Something along those lines

No.19997
>>19845

I feel like you are trolling me.

I could get if you prefer Ivan Reis's version, even if I don't personally like it, but you even called Doug Mankhe's version "bad art".

You even used comic sans.

Stop trolling me.

No.20000
>>19997
New artist does suck. He tried to make Larfleeze have a more human-shaped head. And it sucks.

No.20001
>>19997
Okay is there something about Comic Sans that is supposed to be bad?
If there is I'm not aware of it.

No.20003
>>20001
Comic Sans sees a lot of use in inappropriate situations. It's a very casual font, but people use it in serious contexts. It's like wearing ripped shorts and a tank top to a job interview.

This has been going on for more than a decade, and by now there's a lot of people who stay away from Comic Sans on principle, even in situations where it would be appropriate.

No.20004
File: 125972863611.jpg-(28.21KB, 600x450, 1235455086385.jpg)
20004
>>20001

>is there something about Comic Sans that is supposed to be bad

No.20005
>>20000
>New artist does suck.

You are dead to me.

No.20007
>>20000
Oh look I got a get.
>>20001
It is just a font...
>>20005
We are married.

No.20008
>>20001

Comic Sans walks into a bar.
The bartenders says "We don't serve your type here".

No.20009
Well, I'd sayh it's about time to get this thread back on track.

Larfleeze uses Atrocitus' toothbrush and deoderant.

No.20013
>>20008

I love you. In a platonic.

No.20014
>>20013

Way.

No.20035
>>20008
why did i lol

No.20036
>>20009
Only, he uses his deoderant on his ass.
Badum tsh

No.20038
File: 125992806525.png-(97.32KB, 1929x498, sdl.png)
20038
>>16589

No.20110
Is anyone here good with flash?

No.20121
>>19874 THAT CANNOT BE IT!

No.20133
Hey guys, I made a script based off a Murder Burger comic. If it sucks, help me make it not suck. If it doesn't suck, could someone possibly do voice recordings?

Enter LARFLEEZE (walking by, whistling to himself)
(passes by MURDER BURGER and sees HAL JORDAN)
L:Hey Earth-scum, watcha dooooin?

HJ: M-MURDER BURGER! IT'S...CLOSED!

L:*surprised gasp*

HJ: I need my burger fix man! I need it! (goes off on a tangent)

L: (thinks to himself) Man this guy's greedy!

HJ tries to pull door open and generally causes a lot of noise.

Front door opens slightly. Enter DEX-STARR

DS: *purr*

HJ: Hey kitty kitty, could we ple-OH GOD

HJ gets mauled by DS

L gets an idea! When DS is done attacking HJ, he walks up very slowly

-scene change-

L: Hey Atty, I'll take 300 orders of-

ATROCITUS: WHAT THE HELL HOW DID YOU GET PAST SECURITY

-quick cut to DS playing with yarn ball construct-

A: FFFFFUUUUU-

End.

No.20158
We could have an entire BN parody arc where Nekron makes a horde of zombies, but instead of brains, they want Burgers, and at first Atrocitus loves the business but eventually circumstances require Him, Larfleeze, And probably Hal to go on a Zombie killing spree.
Something like that.

No.20167
>>20158
Something like Shaun of the Dead?

No.20171
>>20167
Yeah, kind of.
I was thinking more like Left 4 Dead, but really any Zombedy type deal.

Just think, Atrocitus would have a construct chainsaw, Hal a construct shotgun, and Larfleeze using his battery as a flamethrower.

No.20173
>>19956
you are now imagining Larfleeze in a dress with cleavage that reveals two big juicy burgers

No.20182
>>20171
Well, Shaun of the dead is really funny, so it was the first Zombedy movie that came to mind.
>>20173
And that's how he sneaks a couple out. Until he does something stupid like sticking four burgers down his dress, or something.

No.20183
File: 126021603543.gif-(5.21KB, 107x73, _anchovies.gif)
20183
>>20173

Like the Spongebob episode with the anchovies except with a more violent ending?

No.20194
File: 126022361776.png-(134.90KB, 730x1114, smallchild.png)
20194

No.20195
>>20194

Yeah I just wanted an excuse to put a beanie on Larfleeze

No.20197
>>20183
Precisely.
It would be glorious.
Of course the plot would have to be fleshed out a bit more.
It couldn't just be "There are too many Zombies in my store so I'm going to start killing them."
Maybe they start off devouring burgers, but then start eating the other customers and employees or something?

No.20198
>>20194
That Larfleeze is annoying to look at.
Use less fur next time.

No.20199
>>20198

I was trying to make him look like those annoying kids from television sitcoms but I can see what you mean with the fur.

No.20211
>>20199
Atrocitus has too many lines as well. use less lines.

No.20213
File: 126029374485.png-(69.79KB, 566x404, alanmoorelooksatthisworld.png)
20213
>>20211

clearly you don't realize when I do things in paint it's usually a joke that I take to far...

No.20216
>>20197
I'm thinking Atrocitus, being the most ragey man in the universe, would at first welcome the new business but the realizing the only thing more frustrating then having five or six customers is actually having to do a lot of work.

No.20241
I'm thinking that we should make this thread serve as a Murderburger drawthread as well as an ideas thread, seeing as actual Drawthreads on /co/ are a thing of the past.

No.20256
File: 126048551621.jpg-(50.64KB, 604x453, puppet 1.jpg)
20256
I'm going to post this because my friend made it for me for my birthday

No.20257
File: 126048557598.jpg-(43.04KB, 604x453, 11169_198515138987_839473987_2921542_4313_n.jpg)
20257
>>20256
Larfleeze sock puppet

No.20264
>>20256
>>20257
Oh Jesus, it's too happy.
What is this, I don't even.

No.20305
File: 126067888347.png-(500.75KB, 700x833, Lolwut.png)
20305
bump?

No.20306
>>20305
Oh god what the fuck?
What the fucking fuck?
What the fuck in the fucking fuck?

No.20307
>>20305
hawt

No.20312
>>20305
Are those hamburgers? Two Hamburger tits?!

No.20313
>>20305
needs more yaranaika.

No.20336
>>20313
What the hell does that mean?

No.20348
File: 126080547226.jpg-(20.30KB, 280x400, yaranaika.jpg)
20348
>>20336
google it

No.20349
File: 126080552181.jpg-(27.86KB, 542x409, Yaranaika-tan_07.png.jpg)
20349
>>20348

No.20350
File: 126080557892.png-(9.29KB, 634x594, yaranaika-cutout.png)
20350
>>20349
these faces in general.

No.20366
Well, this thread sure has gone downhill.

No.20369
File: 126089815365.png-(70.82KB, 1920x498, afc.png)
20369

No.20376
File: 126092507448.jpg-(56.95KB, 390x600, 390px-Agent_Orange_and_Jordan.jpg)
20376
>>20369
Oh god damnit, not you too.
>>20374
Nice, just a couple things though
A) Needs a better pic of Larfleeze
B) Heads should be swapped so Fleeze is in the orange shirt and Atrocitus is in red.

No.20389
>>20376

Did you not even notice the OP pic? Stop being a tightwad.

No.20420
>>20389
Yeah, but the OP pic doesn't have Larfleeze attempting to be sexy at all, just him in a bad costume.
And no fake tits.

No.20452
Lightning, you DO realize you aren't in charge of this, right?

No.20458
>>20452
I know that, but I'm trying to keep some order at the very least.

No.20460
I have some questions: would Atrocitus really be the only manning the counter?

What would the other Red Lanterns be doing as jobs?

Dex-Starr could be Security, but what about the likes of Vice, Bleeze, and the rest?

No.20466
>but what about the likes of Vice, Bleeze, and the rest?

busboys, frycooks, cleaning crew

No.20542
>>20466
Oh yeah, there would be no shortage of rage material for them. I worked at a McDonalds once, working in the kitchen is the most enraging thing ever.

No.20560
Had an idea...don't know if it's be good or not:

Health Inspector is coming for surprise visit, much to Atrocitus' dismay. After failing inspection, the HI offers an ultimatum: Clean up the restaurant, or toss out all the food, due to it being unfit to serve to living creatures. Larfleeze finds out about this, and attempts to sabotage the restaurants cleanliness, in order to get all the free, discarded food.

Hilarity Ensues.

No.20592
>>20542
Give some examples.
They might get turned into comics.

No.20603
>>20592
Being the only one in the kitchen when there's a rush, running out of x type of meat or buns during an order, just small aggravating things like that.

But those pale in comparisson to the beeping.
The godless, inhumane beeping.
When you put a basket of fries in the deep fryer, you hit a button for the timer. After a minute and a half it starts beeping to signal it's half done. You have to hit the button again to get it to stop beeping.
But there's never anyone to hit the button.
It just beeps and beeps and beeps.
And when the grill is done cooking the meat, it fucking beeps.
Everything fucking beeps.
If I could, with a thought, eliminate the sound of a beep from human recognition, I would.

No.20616
>>16626
>>16630
I say these need some drawfaggotry.

No.20623
Idea for a pilot.
Opening sequence, big lights that say THE LARFLEEZE SHOW, cue Fleeze comes in starts dancing or some shit, or just running in front of the camera as it pans, trying to hog the screen, big opening themesong number, then halfway through, Atrocitus busts in and starts raging everywhere.
"FUCK SAKES LARFLEEZE, THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE OUR SHOW, NOT JUST YOURS YOU FUCK!"
"NO, IT'S MINE!"
Then they start fighting, shit gets wrecked, and while they're shooting lasers at eachother, they end up writing their names out or some shit which the camera would focus n as the title card.
Y/N?

No.20703
>>20618
I dont like those threads. All advice lanterns.

No.20742
>>20623

Better idea. Do it like the Cow and Chicken intro, with Cow (Saint Walker), Chicken (Atrocitus) and The Red Guy (Larfleeze).

No.20748
File: 126154102658.jpg-(145.82KB, 399x400, 1261338818473.jpg)
20748
Look what I found guys!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P9x6cXNndbY

No.20749
>>20748
Not sure if want...

No.20798
File: 126163169379.png-(1.27MB, 1200x1200, 1261566297180.png)
20798
>>20795
Okay, not bad.
Also, I finally got this request worked on by a Drawfag, and I expect the full colored one sometime soon.

No.20805
File: 126164687411.png-(1.50MB, 1200x1200, 1261646711733.png)
20805
>>20798
HA HA!
IT IS COMPLETE!

No.20890
File: 126202830230.jpg-(201.85KB, 975x1609, murderburger_dream.jpg)
20890
Just something I doodled this afternoon. I thought Larfleeze turned out to be pretty cute. Atrocitus was a last-minute addition.

No.20895
>>20890

/r/ fusions of Plankton & Larfleeze and Atrocitus & Mr. Krabs

No.20910
>>20890
>>20895
This kinda reminds me of that idea to have Sinestro hire Larfleeze to steal the Murderburger recipe but then he keeps it for himself.

No.20919
>>20890
I finished inking it...shall scan the inked version soonish.

No.20966
I think that at some point we need to take Fleeze back to his roots, back to the bad as mother fucker he was back in Agent Orange.

I mean, comic relief greedy dick Larfleeze is still good, but seeing as they've started making him the part retard comic relief in the comics now, I feel myself longing for some more bad ass Larfleeze.

Like, I know there was an idea way back about Ganthet or the Guardians being Ats. and Fleezes landlord(s).
There could be one where they come to evict Larfleeze because he hadn't payed his rent in over a year, but when they try to muscle him out, he fucking tears them an new asshole and is all:
"YOU CAN'T KICK ME OUT, THIS ROOM IS MINE! MIIIINE!"
At which point they retreat and then he goes and takes Atrocitus' cake out of the fridge, and Atrocitus, who was watching the whole time sits there with an amazed and slightly scared look on his face and does nothing to stop him.

No.20967
>>20966
only difference in agent orange is that his head was on fire back then. he was always the comedic relief of the corps.

No.20968
>>20967
That is bull shit and you know it.

No.21110
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21110
Nagging old Jewish couple always complaining about the food at Atrocitus' restaurant.

No.21126
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>>20966
Yeah, okay, Lightning.

This "MUST KEEP HIM AWESOME AND BADASS" mentality is the same kind of compulsive behavior that ruined the White Lantern Corps gag.

>>21110
If I start reading Ganthet as this character I'll never forgive you. In a good way.

No.21165
>>21126
>ruined the White Lantern Corps gag.
What happened with that?

No.21166
>>21165
People stopped caring.

No.21167
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21167
>>21166

No.21168
>>21126
Ganthet will always remain having Nibbler's voice in my mind.

No.21173
>>21168

All of the Guardians excluding Sayd and Scar are variations of Nibbler's voice. It's a fact.

No.21222
>>20805
So, what started out as a shitty drawthread on /co/ evolved into a Shaun of the Dead Green Lantern crossover thread when someone requested a picture in that theme, and I figure that given that Murder Burger is the numver one stop for Green Lantern humor, we could tie in that idea to the one I had about the Black Lantern Zombie outbreak.

"We go to mums, kill Ganthet, get Carol, go to Murderburger, have a Rageshake and wait for all this to blow over."

There is currently a drawfag working on the anon's request and I'll post it whn it's done.
Also I think the casting was something along the lines of
Hal = Shaun
Larfleeze or Guy = Ed
Atrocitus = Pete
Carol Ferris = Shaun´s Girlfriend.
Indigo 1 = Dianne
Sinestro = David

This is of course subject to change.

No.21223
>>21222

Anon that suggested that image and made the cast here.


Cool.

No.21297
How about an episode where Larfleeze gets a doctors note saying that given his "Condition" of always being hungry, he is allowed to get free food.
However, later in the episode, he goes back to the doctor and they say they've found a cure, which sums up to them forcing Walker to hang out with Fleeze, and then he has to find a way to ditch the Blue lantern.
Hilarity ensues.

No.21414
>>21297
I think they should be tethered together at one point.

No.21494
>>21414
Like Bart and Homer in that one simpsons episode.
I like the idea.

No.21546
>>21494
Larfleeze shouldn't know it at first. He's just told that they're going to give him a bracelet that's a cure. Once attached, he notices that there's a rope on it, and pulls the bracelet. Camera pans back to reveal Walker's arm getting pulled up by the rope, then pans farther to reveal Walker.

No.21571
>>21546
Well, naturally. He wouldn't agree to it if he knew.
Come to think of it, he probably wouldn't agree to a cure in the first place, given it would mean he can't get free food.
Maybe they tell him that they're giving him a blue ring and he's like FUCK YES, FINALLY! but then it turns out to be the tether.

No.21656
>>21571
"WHERE'S THE CURE? I WANT IT, IT'S MINE!!!"

No.21657
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>>21656
Doctor: It's so simple, I don't know why I din't think of it before, all you need, my good ma- er...beast, is a Blue Ring to sedate your hunger.
*Larfleeze's (not paying attention) ears perk up, he turns around to face the doctor, his eyes ablaze with Greed, and a feral grin on his face*
Larfleeze: Did you say a BLUE RING? GIVE IT TO ME!
Doc: Well, he's right over there.
*Larfleeze goes from the previous position to a confused look*
Larfleeze: MIIII-wait, he?
*Turns to see Walker smiling and waving at him, as the doctor ties them together*
Larfleeze: >:(

No.21807
I was listening to Blind Guardian and chuckled while singing along to this because it reminded me of Larfleeze.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7s4GVNt-bgo
Give it to me
I must have it
Precious treasure
I deserve it

bridge:
Where can I run
How can I hide
The Silmarils
Gems of treelight
Their life belongs to me
Oh it's sweet how the
Darkness is floating around

chorus:
We are following
The will of the one
Through the dark age
And into the storm
And we are following
The will of the one
Through the dark age
And into the storm
Lord I'm mean

Blackheart show me
What you hold in your hand
I still hunger for more
Release me
From my pain
Give it to me
How I need it
How I need it
How I need it

Where can I run
How can I hide
The Silmarils
Gems of treelight
Their life belongs to me
Oh it's sweet how the
Darkness is floating around

We are following
The will of the one
Through the dark age
And into the storm
And we are following
The will of the one
Through the dark age
And into the storm
Lord I'm mean

I did my part
Now it's your turn
And remember
What you've promised

Where can I run
How can I hide
The Silmarils
Gems of treelight
Their life belongs to me
Oh it's sweet how the
Darkness is floating around

We are following
The will of the one
Through the dark age
And into the storm
And we are following
The will of the one
Through the dark age
And into the storm
Lord I'm mean

Normally, I wouldn't bother posting this here, but seeing as I can't post on /co/ anymore, I figure here is all I have.

No.21897
The go-to drink at Murder Burger should be Haterade.

No.21949
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21949
>>21897
YES. YES, MORE YES.
I don't know why I didn't think of that before.

No.22087
>>21897
I'm terrible at writefaggotry, but if you can come up with an idea involving Haterade I'd be happy to make it into (a poor excuse of) a comic

No.22128
>>22087
Just do it in the style of an advertisement.
"Come on down to murder burger for our all new beverage: HATERADE"
Then go on in a couple panels showing angry people drinking it or some shit.
Parody a Gatorade commercial where they're sweat6ing juice and doing sports and have them sweating rage blood or something beating the shit out of people.
Then end it with "HATERADE only available at participating Murder Burger restaurants" with a pic of Atrocitus satanding outside of the store beating some guy to death.
Something like that perhaps.

No.22139
>>22128
>Atrocitus voice over image of a bottle of Haterade.

"Get the fuck over to Murder Burger to try our newest beverage, Haterade!"

>now three bottles, all exactly the same

"Now available in Rage Red, Rage Red, and Rage Red!"

>Atrocitus in panel, addressing viewer

"And if you don't like Rage Red, I'll beat you to death with your own face!"

>people beating each other, red sweat

"Let the rage fuel you! Get one right this fucking second!"

No.22140
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22140
>>22128

No.22142
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>>22139

Oh yeah forgot my trip
>>22140

No.22147
>>22142
>>22140
>>22139
Bravo! You are credit to team.

No.22247
>>22142
Writefag here.

You're awesome.

No.22268
>>22142
>Larfleeze watching TV

>close up on Larfleeze's Face

lantern speech bubble: "you can have it all"

No.22512
>>16579
How about......
uh..
................
Bump.....

No.22561
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22561
bump

No.22562
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22562
>>22561

No.22563
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22563
>>22562

No.22564
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22564

No.22565
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22565
>>22564

No.22566
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22566
>>22565

No.22617
Oh god.
I'm amazed at how well that works out.

No.22674
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22674
>>22617
if only I had the will power to finish it.

No.22706
>>22674
Not to be a grammar nazi, but you put Life instead of Live.

No.22875
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22875
Drew this in class today. Will redraw it if people like it.

No.22885
>>22875

I laughed. Good job.
If you redo it, I'd switch the first two panels.

No.22893
>>22875
It's definitely not bad, but I feel as though it's lacking something. Like it needs to be built up a bit before the punchline or something.

No.22894
I was thinking of showing the actual items on the menu and some more members of the JSA, maybe adding another panel of her looking at the menu and Atrocitus getting pissed.

No.22925
>>22894
Sounds good.
Then maybe one of them all flying off looking happy or something.

No.23082
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23082
Sat down to redraw it, made something completely different instead.

No.23085
>>23082
>Those fries would go straight to my breasts
I lol'd

No.23086
>>23082
lol

No.23386
WHY IS THIS THREAD OFF THE FRONT PAGE?

No.23387
>>23386
because Lex Luthor became an orange lantern and took Larfleeze out of the goddamn fight. Larfleeze. the guy with the Parallax power levels just sat there beating on Lex while SINESTRO BECAME A FUCKING WHITE LANTERN.

not only that but Lex is a shitty orange lantern. he stole scarecrow's ring and he put it on. a real Orange Lantern would eat it.

No.23403
>>23387
Yeah, it's like Johns just decided to take one of the potentially best characters ever and turn him into a moron.

Fuck you Geoff Johns. Fuck you.

No.23440
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23440
>>23403
>it's like Johns just decided to take one of his own creations and do with it as he pleases

No.23444
>>23082

HOLY SHIT I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING

No.23447
>>23440
Yeah, well obviously what he pleases is terrible.

No.23464
>>23447
second. it's been so fucking awesome and then he pulls a "all life actually began on earth" and some religious Mambo-Jambo. BN 7 hurt like a hammer to the face.

No.23567
I think I figured it out.
How Larfleeze went to shit.
Didio- Wow Geoff, those last four issues were really great, people love your new character, he's getting even more positive fan reaction than Hal.

Johns- WHAT?!!! PEOPLE LIKE LARFLEEZE MORE THAN HAL JORDAN?
Fuck, I have to ruin this character as much as possible.

No.23590
>>23567
seems about right

No.23594
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23594
bump

No.23606
>>23594
Oh sweet jesus, when it turned out to be her hand I lol'd so hard

No.23839
bump

No.23877
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23877
more shitty mspaints from shittymspaintanon.

No.23996
>>23877
I likes it.

No.24408
Fuuuuuck.
This cannot die!
COME MY /CO/MRADES
WE MUST ENSUE THE SURVIVAL OF OUR GREATEST TREASURE!

No.24697
Bamping wif ideaz

You should totally do the holiday specials, all the Lanterns are somewhat related to each other in a sitcom "family".

Atrocitus-naturally the suffering main character
Larfleeze-Grinch-like guy in the background, always moving in on other stuff or setting up Atrocitus for a fall. Hates it when Hal steals his HAMBOIGAHS
Guy Gardner-exactly what it sounds like
Kyle-HAPLESS VICTIM
Hal-"I do all my Christmas shopping on Dec 24th" Jordan
Sinestro-Sarcastic, sinister relative. Always on good behavior in front of the Guardians but drops his FEAR lines when they're not looking and terrifies others.
Carol-"Aunt Carol"
Saint Walker-Pretty much what OP said.
Black Hand-"William", the troubled child. Usually the only words we hear are "RISE".
Kilowog-UNCLE KILOWAG WANTS TO WATCH THE GAME YA POOZERS!
Alan "I Punched Hitler, What Have You Done Lately" Scott-Disappointed in some of the younger generations.
Soranik-wants to go out with Kyle, VICTIM of Guy.
yes/no?

I think it would work marvelously for holiday specials, but only if we make it exceedingly obvious that it's a parody type deal and all the characters are playing parts. Like a thing during the opening credits where it freeze frames on each character and goes
"Starring: Carol Ferris as "Auntie Carol.""
But them all being related would not work at all for the rest of the show.

What about John? Is he not present in all of this?
I don't know, any good ideas?
PTSD/Destroyed Planet Survivor Syndrome Marine?
Alan Scott and him always end up talking about "THE WHAR" and how horrible/glorious it is?
Or he could keep on getting shit from Guy about how he "went into cartoons" after Xanshi?

No.24716
>>24697

>Dad
>yes, sweety.
>why don't we ever have a white christmas?
>because your mom keeps inviting uncle John over.

No.24750
>>24716
>Dad
>yes, sweety.
>why don't we ever have a white christmas?
>because your-*Sinestro bursts into the room as White Lantern*
>HEY GUISE, SUP? JUST HANGING OUT. BEIN WHITE. CHECK ME OUT BITCHES

No.24759
>>24697
For John, either the Marine or the archtitect/ Mr. fix it
"If I can help rebuild a city, I can fix this television." or "I was a guardian. What the fuck have you done?" or something like that.

No.24814
>>24759
I could see that.
He could be the guy who's constantly surveying shit and going on about how it could be improved.
"Huh, this table's a little wobbly, bet I could fix that right up*cuts away and you can here sawing/welding/building noises**cuts back and the table is completely different and upgraded with like cup holders and fancy shit* yup, that should just about do it."
"Hrm...now the chairs seem out of place...just a sec."
"Oh for fuck sakes John, stop remodelling my damn house."

No.24891
>hey daddy, why don't we ever put up Christmas lights.
>...

{FLASHBACK}
not too long ago, sector 1972, the green lantern corp is taking on the RED and YELLOW lantern corps

>It's a MOTHERFUCKING AMBUSH.

>MIKE'S GOT SHOT, WHERE'S THE FUCKING BLUE LANTERN

>WE'RE OUT OF CHARGE SARGE, WE WON'T MAKE IT

the sky burns all the colors of the rainbow

{/FLASHBACK}

>I'm conserving energy

get it? the enemy was both red and yellow in Vietnam there was a-lot of Agent orange and people spoke weird "nik nok suk kok" languages

No.24902
>>24891
"We were in this bar in Sector 6125 and this kid comes up, this kid carrying a ring-shine box. And he says "Shine, please, shine!" I said no. He kept askin', yeah, and Hal said "Yeah." And I went to get a couple of beers, and the box was wired, and he opened up the box, fucking blew his body all over the place. And he's laying there, he's fucking screaming. There's pieces of him all over me, just...like this, and I'm tryin' to pull him off, you know, my friend that's all over me! I've got blood and everything and I'm tryin' to hold him together! I'm puttin'... the guy's fuckin' insides keep coming out! And nobody would help! Nobody would help! He's saying, sayin' "I wanna go home! I wanna go home!" He keeps calling my name! "I wanna go home, Johnny! I wanna pilot my F-15!" I said "With what? I can't find your fuckin' legs! I can't find your legs!"

No.24940
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24940
>>24902
>Sector 6125

No.25016
>>24940
What?
Is that an actual place? I just kinda pulled that number out of nowhere.

No.25049
>>25016
there are 360o space sectors. get your data straight.

No.25194
>>25049
D:
Our bad.

No.25227
I has an idea! Could be a one time event or recurring.
Some television network approaches the GLC to do a reality show called CORPS(an obvious parody of COPS) and while John and Hal are hesitant, Guy signs them up. Then they basically realize that they don't really do any work, so they go to MurderBurger, claiming their doing a bust, and hilarity ensues.

No.25257
Also, instead of Happy meals, MurderBurger can have Angry Meals.

No.25270
>>25257
fuck you. no. that's a horrid idea. your angry meals can eat a dick. fucko.

No.25323
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25323
>>25270
Looks like someone already ate their Angry Meal today

No.25325
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25325
and it sucked, so it only made me angrier.

came with this nifty red ring, though. pic related

No.25351
>>25325
Ha ha, fag, that's one of the girl toys.
Enjoy you're girly plastic jewelry

No.25355
>>25351
why don't you go eat a dick, you fuckin mother fucker? fuck you in the face with a fuckin sledgehammer! BLAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGHHHHHHH!!

oh shit, wtf? why am i puking up blood? wtf did that angry meal do to me?

No.25388
>>25355
HAHA!
Murderburger strikes again!

No.29509
Atrocitus has a date coming over, so he needs to clean up the apartment, and find a way to keep Larfleeze out of the place and preoccupied for a few hours.

No.29516
>>29509
Would Atty's date be Mera?

And prolly the only way to keep Larfleeze off Atrocitus' back would be to send him over to Walker's.

Or it could just turn into Larfleeze draggin either Walker or Indigo-1 along for the worst double date ever.

No.29526
>>29516
There was some talk a while back about a Star Sapphire having a glaringly obvious crush on Atrocitus(he is of course, oblivious), but any time she'd muster up the courage to tell him how she felt, some shenanigans happen and he goes into a rage frenzy.

No.29544
>>29526
Did you guys settle on which one would pursue Atrocitus?

No.29547
>>29544
I think we wanted her to be some general SS.
how many SS members do we even know?

No.29549
>>29547
There's Carol, Fatality, Miri Riam, and uh...uh...uh...

...so would it be a Zamaron?

No.29552
>>29549
seems plausible.

No.29561
>>29516
>And prolly the only way to keep Larfleeze off Atrocitus' back would be to send him over to Walker's.
>Or it could just turn into Larfleeze draggin either Walker or Indigo-1 along for the worst double date ever.
Why not do both?
Atrocitus tells Walker to distract Larfleeze (blue rings are a sure way to do so) and at some point Walker actually mentions this, because of course he'd never tell a lie, even to cover Atty's ass.
And thus, Larfleeze barges in on the date with Walker AND Indigo in tow.
Hi jinks ensue.

No.29562
>>29561
Awesome.

In a fancy-ass restaurant where: Larfleeze would be harassing other diners, gobbling the food, and stealing all the shiny silverware. Atrocitus would be raging so hard he accidentally kills the maitre d' and several bussers. Walker would be trying to calm Atrocitus and Larfleeze down while apologizing to everyone. Indigo would be helping Walker. And Atty's date (a Zamaron, I guess) would be sitting on her chair, mourning over the ruined date and largely ignored amidst the chaos.

No.29565
>>29562
>In a fancy-ass restaurant
And to top it all off...IT'S SINESTRO'S RESTARAUNT!
This will have to take place before said fancy restaraunt gets shut down.

No.29566
>>29565
Which would eventually lead to Sinestro founding Fear Fries in revenge.

:D

No.29568
>>29561
why would Larfleeze barge in on the Date?
isn't Atro supposed to be oblivious?

maybe if she tried asking him on a date only to have Larfleeze knock her over with a big fish in his hands while being chased by Dex-Starr who in turn is being chased by Hal as the City's animal control officer Atrocious rages himself into a big puddle of acid blood and she walks away crying.

No.29571
>>29568
It could be a formal dinner, for business. The girl could be willing to help Atty on Murder Burger, expansion or something,and he thinks it's just that. Girl, however, is hoping that the dinner will turn more intimate.

Maybe Larfleeze could just accidentally crash the dinner. At first, he's there to steal the food from the kitchen and is discovered by the staff who promptly chase him out. Larfleeze bumps into Atty, Atty rages, girl weeps.

No.29574
>>29566
Naw, he starts Fear Fries because he fails the health inspection and his fancy place gets shut down.
>>29568
I just kinda figured he'd crash it in order to be a dick.
I dunno, maybe he shows up in hopes of getting a free meal out of it.

No.29577
>>29574
I don't that it fit's Larfleeze's character to be a dick for the sake of being a Dick.

No.30214
>>29577
Maybe in the course of distracting him, Walker offers to buy Fleeze lunch, and Fleeze, being the greedy bastard he is, decides to make Walker treat him to the most expensive restaraunt in town.
Wherein he runs into Atrocitus.

No.30217
>>30214
walker takes Larfleeze out for dinner? oh my.

No.30366
>>30217
Lunch.

No.31869
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31869
So, I figure we're going to have to work "A very Larfleezey Christmas" into this as well.

No.31883
>>31869
For a moment there, I thought Glomulus was rockin' in a dress.



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