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14593 No.14593
Since /jp/ has become communist, moving the thread here. Though never really meant to be a "long-term project" I suppose we can continue doing different playthroughs and routes. So then, let's begin...

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No.18620
>>18619
Yeah, I'm keeping it vague so he fits whatever it is to your imagination.
And yes, it isn't very Japanese, which is what bothered me about it with Rin.
Well, I'll just leave it and continue.

No.18735
Rin and Luvia sit opposing each other in the living room. It’s dead silent besides the few sounds made as I quickly make tea.
I set the tea in front of them, and feel myself entering the zone of death flowing between the glares they’re giving each other. This aura can’t go on, or else they’ll end up in another fight.
“Er, Luvia, sorry to be blunt, but why are you here?”
Luvia gives me a light smile before she turns her eyes away to glance at empty space. She looks deep in a worried thought.
“Well…I wanted to talk.”
“Talk?” Rin sounds quite angry. “You’re our opponent now, especially after attacking us on the bridge!” Rin sits back in her chair like a queen. “Hmph. Well, if you want to talk, then you’ll first have to start. Just how did you get that Servant?”
Luvia exhales and rubs her forehead.
“Well, it is about my Servant that I wanted to talk about. I got him from Ketomene.”
“Ketomene?”
“Yes, the priest.”
You mean Kotomine. I turn to Rin with a questioning look, but she’s focused on Luvia.
“He’s a Servant from the previous war, and-.”
“Yeah, we know about that, as well as his identity.” Rin stops Luvia from saying what we already know.
“Then you save me the trouble. Well, I’ll just come out and be honest with you Rin. I can’t control him. He does whatever he likes. He’s the one who made the attack on the bridge, not me. He doesn’t treat me as his Master. It feels more like he believes I’m his servant. Not just me, but every single person. I just so happen to be a ‘special’ servant.”
“Then just use a Command Spell on him.” Rin tells her the obvious solution.
“No Rin, you don’t understand...If I try to use that on him he’ll kill me before I even get the chance. And if not that, he’ll just break our contract.”
Rin was about to take a sip of tea, but quickly puts back down the cup.
“Break the contract?” I ask the question for both of us.
“Yes. He has a Noble Phantasm that can do that.”
Luvia opens her mouth to say something else, but instead we just get a quiet exhale and she rests her chin on her hand.
“So exactly what’s the point of you telling us this, Luvia?”
Rin entreats the real main question as she folds her arms and cross her legs.
“Yes…Before he truly gets out of hand, I want a final duel. The only Servant left is your Berserker.” Luvia turns to me with a malicious, yet beautiful smile. “Midnight. At the Ryuudou Temple.”
Keeping my position facing Luvia, I turn my eyes to Rin. Her expression tells me “it’s your choice.”

Accept the duel
Decline
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Sorry for this short post after so long, but I wanted to put in a choice and this is just how it turned out.

No.18739
>>18735
Decline

No way in hell she's still reasonably sane after spending all that time with Gil.

No.18763
Decline.
She's probably dead inside and crazy like Rin was after having undoubtedly received the Star That Split Heaven And Earth, if you catch my drift.

No.18767
Decline?

Gilgamesh, Saber, and Berserker in one place never ends well.

....I can't help but to think declining will cause us to miss a chance to save Saber while she can still resist though.

No.18786
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18786
>>18767
>save Saber while she can still resist though.
What am I saying.. we are not Shirou, we can't project Rule Breaker. We have no other way of saving Saber besides killing Gilgamesh, we can't trust Archer to project a Rule Breaker and we can't have Shirou, our enemy, happen to appear to try to save Saber while we are there and try to steal OUR Saber.

Yes, our Saber.

I'll stop before I get too into it. I've already gotten too dangerously close to a mindset of a certain someone.

No.18789
Well, I say Accept the Duel.

Primarily because
>the final battle for Rin's route is more epic in my opinion
was stated in the past.

No.18793
>>18789
...
That actually makes sense now that I think of it, we mana transferred with Rin to get a powerup, Gilgamesh is the only "known" enemy left, Archer has gone missing, and Kotomine is dead. We have nothing else to do aside from fighting Gilgamesh at this point.

>>18767
Changing vote from decline to [X]Accept the duel.

No.18795
>>18789
Someone actually pays attention to what I say?! MURI DA!
_____________________________________________________________________
[X]Decline

“Sorry Luvia, but I’m going to have to decline.”
With her chin still resting on her hand, Luvia does a frown of disappointment.
“It would benefit you to, you know? I know what happened to you with Emeya.”
Her accent really screws up names. I do a smile, half from hearing ‘Emeya’ and half to not look rude.
“Don’t worry about me, Luvia.”
Luvia does a curt exhale through her nose and gets up.
“So be it. I’ll see you again on the battlefield then. Whenever that may be. Thanks for the tea.”
I nod.
Luvia gives me a court wave and leaves, totally ignoring Rin. Once she leaves, Rin clicks her tongue and re-crosses her legs.
“It might’ve been better to have accepted the scheduled fight. She’s the only opponent left.”
“True. But…” I shrug my shoulders. “I have a hunch she’s lying about her Servant being ‘out of control.’ And I can’t recall any Noble Phatasm that breaks contracts. She was setting up a trap.”
Rin also shrugs her shoulders to somewhat acknowledge my assumption.
“Well, let’s prepare to eventually take her on. I could use some more mana, Rin~.”
Rin instantly goes bright red. She quietly gets up and walks to her room and I follow behind.


I’m parched. Slowly I move Rin off me, careful not to wake her. I sneak out of the bedroom and head to the kitchen for a drink.
As I stretch my arm out to grab the handle to the fridge door, I find myself suddenly staring at the ceiling and landing on my back with a thud.
“Wha-?!”
Before I can even question why I’m on the ground, a wave of black light engulfs the fridge I was just standing in front of. No, not just the fridge, but the entire kitchen and that corner of the mansion.
I look above me to see my saver, Berserker. With a low groan, he picks me back up and sets me on my feet. The red glow from under his helmet gazes into the dust cloud and into the streets outside.
I can partially make out a figure walking towards us due to the street lamps from outside.
“…What is this?”
The figure walks into the mansion just as the dust settles.
“Another Black Knight?!”
It’s obviously a Saber class, wielding two swords as black as his armour. This Saber wears a helmet that covers half his face, so I can’t try to identify who it is. And the two swords don’t ring any bells. An existing Master must’ve summoned him.
“Was this your trap, Luvia?”
Berserker’s body shakes with the madness of battle.
“Gah!”
I feel a sharp twitch through my body. Berserker...He’s sapping my prana like he was whenever he saw the previous Saber.
“Arrr! ArrrRRRR!!”
With a roar, Arondight, his true Noble Phantasm, appears.
Berserker was only like this with the previous Saber due to her actually being King Arthur. Does he just get like this whenever he sees a worthy opponent? No…Perhaps this Saber is another Knight of the Round Table. The familiarity triggers his emotions into rage. But who is it?

With a roar he charges forth.
Berserker slashes down with amazing force that blows away all the scattered debris and anything else even intact. Saber attempts to block it. But he can’t compare to Berserker’s strength. Furthermore, he’s up against Arondight, the sword given to the most powerful knight. The only sword that could compete with it is-
*TING*
The loud sound of metal smashing against metal.
“What?...”
Saber blocked Arondight.
“ARRRRR!!!”
Berserker roars and pushes down Saber’s sword with brute force.
But this leaves him open. And Saber has a second blade.
With a swift and vicious swing, he slashes at Berserker. Berserker manages to pull back in time, but not without escaping the tip of the blade, cutting through his armour. Berserker leaps backward in front of me.
This Saber is extremely strong. He’s double wielding swords that are meant to be two-handed. And whatever these blades are, they’re strong enough to withstand Arondight. Just who is he?

“What the hell happened to my house?!”
Rin screams in my ear.
“Finally awake, huh? You sleep like a rock.”
Berserker charges to Saber again, and they engage in a flurry of slashes. Berserker’s speed and strength is insane. They were high enough to begin with, and have now increased with Arondight.
But, the true surprise is to see Saber still managing to hold his own against Berserker’s attacks. With Arondight, the match should’ve been decided with the first blow. Just who is this?!
A surge of black prana engulfs Saber. He moves from defense to offense in the blink of an eye, and drives back Berserker.
“RAAAAH!”
With a desperate charge, Berserker moves in and slashes upward. Another force on Berserker’s side – luck. It penetrates through Saber’s armour, spilling his blood onto the floor, and slicing his helmet in two.
Saber falls to the ground with a thud, but braces the impact with his arm.
“Haa…Ah…”
Saber breathes heavily from the deep wound, as he gets on his knees. His face is still looking down, so I can’t try to identify who it is.
Out of nowhere something appears in front of him. A sheath, matching his black and purple swords. Rays of purple surround Saber. And as quickly as it appeared, it vanishes.
“What was that?”
Saber stands. His armour and wounds are completely healed.
“That’s cheating!!”
“Was that…No way.” Rin whispers.
“Hahaha, that sheath thing sure is useful, isn’t it?”
Walking into the massive hole where the kitchen used to be is that Servant.
“It’s worthy enough to be in my treasury. But I will never have the need for it, so it’s fine for Saber to keep it.”
“Gilgamesh…”
My attention immediately shifts to what he’s holding in his hand. It’s an arm. Blood slowly drips onto the ground from where it should be connected to the human body.
Rin gasps. I look at her to see her eyes opened wide in shock. Her lips slowly move
“Lu...Via?...” Rin barely whispers.
I look at the arm again. Now, I must have the same face as Rin does. On that arm. No one else had such a fancy glove. It’s hers.
“I don’t suppose either of you know that surgery magic like Kirei did? I don’t want to be carrying this disgusting thing any longer.”
Rin and I are speechless. Not even the sounds and impacts of the fight between Saber and Berserker are reaching our senses.
“No answer? I’ll take that as a no. I’ve reclaimed my Grail and Saber…There isn’t much left to do. Hmph. I’m bored now. Saber, just get rid of them.”
“Understood.”
Another Prana Burst, pushing back Berserker. Saber stabs one sword into the ground and clenches the other tightly with both hands. It begins to glow.
“ARTHURRRRR!!!”
As Saber brings down the sword, Berserker roars. Last I see is his large back engulfed by the black light that soon takes me and Rin.

DEAD END



Round Table
Gawain: “It was wise to be suspicious of a trap. This can be seen as one of those choices that unexpectedly have a Dead End. But, Luvia can be trusted. Gilgamesh cannot. Just look at what he’s done to the King!”
Morded: “It’s an improvement in my opinion.”
WHACK
Mordred: “OW!”
Gawain: “Your opinion doesn’t matter!”

No.18803
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18803
Lancelot's rather astute for an insane guy, recognizing Black Saber with her faceguard on.

But then, we're also unastute, not recognizing her hairdo.

Also, what's her second sword? There's no Dark Caliburn (Dark Excalibur exists because Morgana is also considered a Lady of the Lake), to note, but if you made one up then I don't really care.

Or maybe Gil tossed her a new sword from his GEITO.

No.18806
>>18803
Gil doesn't have Excalibur nor Caliburn. Just Gram and that demonic sword beginning with an M. You'll see where she got it from.

And yeah, I think Lancelot would recognize her. I know in AM route with Lily I wrote we were able to trick him into thinking it isn't Saber by telling it's a woman. Yeah, that's bs. Lancelot knew Arthur was actually a she, and they were actually BFF! Just taking this opportunity to apologize for that.

As for our usually intelligent MC not recognizing her, I did that just to make it seem less obvious who it is.

No.18807
>>18806
Not to mention he may have had some slightly more pressing matters on his mind above who the person trying to kill him actually is.

No.19086
Even Rapeboss? Truly the golden age has ended.

No.19097
>>19086
Rapeboss would never abandon us.

I'll bet he is writing right now.

Writing a good awesome last battle for the Rin route!

Surely, he is.

No.19120
>>19097
Sure he is, Mr Anonymous :(
Sure he is ;_;

No.19166
>>19086
Ye is of little faith

No.19180
[X] Accept the duel

“Alright, Luvia. Tonight at midnight it is.”
With her chin still resting on her hand, Luvia smiles brightly with a hint of mischievousness. She moves from that position to clap her hands.
“Great!”
Luvia giggles childishly. She’s quite happy and excited about this.
With an exhale of relief, Luvia falls back in her chair with a smile and takes a sip of tea. Her eyes move to Rin.
“Do you want to know what I think, Luvia?” Rin takes a sip of her tea as well.
Luvia replies with a quiet chuckle.
“You could be lying about your Servant and setting up a trap. But it matters not. This will be convenient.” Rin smiles with pride. “Regardless of what you have planned, we’ll defeat you.”
“Fufu, I look forward to it Rin.”
Luvia drinks her tea again, and looks at Rin with some curiosity. Rin avoids her glance a bit, but then turns back to Luvia with a ‘what?’ look.
“You have something on your mind, don’t you?”
Rin looks a bit surprised.
“I know you well Rin. ‘Keep your friends close and keep your enemies closer’, as they say.”
“Hmph.”
“I don’t mind lending an ear at the least.”
Rin repositions herself in the chair and glares at Luvia.
“Tch! Like I’d talk to you, Luvia!”
“Fufu, so be it. I don’t really care anyway.”
Luvia sets down the tea cup, and stands.
“Thanks for the tea.” She turns to me with a wink. “I’ll see you tonight then.”
I slightly blush at the way she phrases it. Luvia giggles and gives me a court wave. I wave goodbye to her as well, and she exits herself after giving Rin a little smirk.
Once she leaves, Rin clicks her tongue and re-crosses her legs. I look to see her giving me a glare that could kill.
“W-What?”
“Why were you looking at Luvia like that?!”
“H-Huh?!”
“If you have ANY thoughts of THAT girl in your head, I will cut your skull open and remove them for you! GOT IT?!”
“Y-Yes Rin!”
“Tch! I should punish you right now.”
“Ahh…Ha…”
Rin continues looking at me with her glare. I nervously await the final judgment of my fate.
Her angry glare then turns…sad.
“Eh? Rin?”
“Hmph! Whatever!”
The sadness I saw for a second disappears, and Rin is now her usual bossy self.

“Right now we need to prepare for the final fight.”
“Ah, alright.”
I want to ask Rin if she’s fine, but that might ruin her mood again.
“Berserker can use any Noble Phantasm, right? Then in theory he should be able to use those that Gilgamesh fires.”
“Ah, that’s right.”
“The only problem might be getting in close and delivering the finishing blow.”
“Well, I can back up Berserker too.”
“Are you mad? There’s no way you can fight Gilgamesh.”
“Oh, I haven’t shown you yet, have I?”
“Hm?”
“Come with me.”
Rin follows me to my room. She sits on the bed and looks at me curiously as I reach under the bed for it.
“My secret weapon!”
I sit beside her on the bed and show it to her.
“…A gun? You do know those have next to zero effect on Servants, right? Are you planning on making Gilgamesh die with laughter?”
“It’s obviously not a regular gun! It’s my Mystic Code. First of all, it’s a Desert Eagle Ma-”
“I don’t know anything about guns, and I don’t care. What’s the point of this thing?”
“Tch. Yeesh. Fine. I suppose it’s not the gun, but these bullets.”
I open the cartridge to show her the eight bullets.
“They can destroy mana.”
“…No way.”
“Hehe, yep! And well, Servants are made entirely of mana. I can pretty much kill any Servant.”
“...”
Rin is speechless. I continue talking to prevent any silence.
“Only problem would be the amount of mana they’re made of. Gilgamesh has a lot, so I can only shoot him a few times before he tries to kill me. At that point Berserker can rush in with Arondight and deliver the finishing blow.”
“I suppose that works…I can’t believe you had such a thing. Near complete control over Berserker plus this thing - You won this War before it even started. Hmph!”
Rin looks away with a grouchy pout.
“Hehehe!”
“Also you should get in close to Gilgamesh and use your time magic.”
“Hm? All I can do is Accel. That won’t-“
Rin shakes her head to stop me. She looks at me with her intelligent proud smirk.
“I was watching when you fought Bazett. You didn’t use Accel.”
“Huh?”
“You didn’t speed up. You slowed her down.”
“…What?”
“Yep. I don’t know much about time magecraft, except that it involves using semi-Reality Marbles. The magus would cast it on their body and thus alter their time, which is much easier than altering the world itself. This obviously means your time magecraft is a very high level.”
Rin smiles as if to say ‘congratulations.’
“...So this whole time I’ve been slowing things down, not speeding myself up?”
“I guess so. Who taught you magecraft?”
“My grandfather. He didn’t complete my training though. I…messed up on an assignment. He was strict, so he didn’t allow me to become a Freelancer like the rest of the family and discontinued my training. I’d just practice myself when no one was there.”
“Is that so?...I suppose the best person to consult then would be Kiritsugu…”
“Haha, that’s not happening.”
I wave the air to brush away that idea.
“Mm.” Rin nods. She shrugs, “Well, with the War over he might.”
“…Maybe.”
I can’t quite imagine talking freely with Kiritsugu, the man who nearly killed me.

“Well, we got the plan. If she fights, I’ll handle Luvia. I’m pretty confident we’ll win.”
“Mm.”
“…Something wrong?”
“No. Just we have quite a while till midnight…”
“Ah, yeah…”
“…I should make sure I have plenty of mana for the fight…”
I smirk at Rin.
“Ah!”
Her face turns red.
“N-No!”
“Huh? Why not?”
“B-because…”
I move close to Rin, wrap my arms around her, and with a gentle lift I place her in my lap. She doesn’t fight back, but does a cute moan like a kitten.
“Didn’t you like it?”
“Ah, I…Y-Yes, but…it hurt…”
“Don’t worry; the more we do it, the more the pain will go away.”
Rin nods and looks away embarrassingly. I tighten my hug around her.
“Soon there’ll only be pleasure.”
“Ah!”
Rin looks at me in embarrassment and I take her by surprise with a kiss.
“Mmm-mmmm!”
As I release her lips, Rin melts in my arms with a heavy exhale, and her head falls on my chest. I lift her by the chin to give her another kiss.
“W-Wait...”
“What is it?”
“Ah…” She blushes and her eyes get teary.
Rin looks away in every direction trying to find words to say. I wipe the small tears from the corner of her eyes and brush her hair.
Rin shakes her head and looks at me with a smile.
“It's nothing.”
Rin shifts her hips closer into mine, moving in. Our lips connect...

No.19181
-----Interlude-----
“Gilgamesh knows that Illya is the vessel. He’ll come for her.”
“So, should we fight him here?”
“…”
Kiritsugu silently brushes his daughter’s hair. He’s considered leaving her in the care of Fujimura, but regardless of where they hide Gilgamesh will find her. The safest place she can be is with him.
“We’ll go to the temple and fight him there.”
“And take Illya too? But…won’t she…”
Shirou looks at his sister worryingly. She sleeps peacefully with her head on Kiritsugu’s lap.
“She won’t die. She’ll be fine.”
Kiritsugu pats her head softly.
“I was hoping for Kayneth to dismantle the Grail, but Gilgamesh got to him. I don’t know yet how we’re going to dismantle it…For now just worry about defeating Gilgamesh.”
“What about Berserker and his master? I think Rin is with him too...”
“If they scout the town tonight, they’d no doubt see what’s happening at the temple. Try to defeat Gilgamesh before they arrive, alright? They’d just bring more confusion and chaos.”
“Okay. What about Gilgamesh’s new Master?”
“Killing her isn’t necessary considering Gilgamesh would still have Independent Action. But-“
“Don’t do it.”
Shirou looks at Kiritsugu with a serious expression.
“Haha, yes of course.”
Shirou smiles with relief.
“Let’s go, Shirou.”
Shirou nods. Kiritsugu lifts up the sleeping Illya, and they depart…


“Bear with it, Illya.”
Illya is within Kiritsugu’s arms. She looks like she’s still asleep, but is squirming and moaning as if she’s having a nightmare
He doesn’t want to see his daughter in this state, but it’s a necessity for her to be used as bait to draw out Gilgamesh.
Shirou has to defeat him. With the threat removed, Kiritsugu can then think on how they’ll save Illya. Somehow they’ll find a way…

Shirou stands beyond the steps clad in silver armour, awaiting his opponent.
The sound of steps echo in the night.
“Gilgamesh!”
Shirou shouts, calling out his opponent. He immediately gets ready to fight. The invisible Excalibur appears in his hand, and Shirou takes his stance.
Gilgamesh’s blonde hair slowly comes into Shirou’s view.
“Don’t say my name so casually, mongrel.”
As all of Gilgamesh comes into sight, Shirou involuntarily let’s out a curious ‘eh?”
Wrapping around Gilgamesh’s hand is a chain. As he walks up, something is dragged along, bumping into each step.
“N-No…”
Beaten and bruised, covered with cuts and scars of blood. Wrapped in Gilgamesh’s chain, a naked Saber is dragged along like a dying dog by a leesh.
“Saber! What have you don’t to her?!”
“I put her in her place.”
“Saber! Saber!”
“She can’t hear you, she’s unconscious. She blanked out on the way here. I won’t blame her though.”
Gilgamesh chuckles.
“You brought the vessel right here for me?” Gilgamesh says as he steps forward.
Luvia silently walks up the stairs as well, behind Gilgamesh.
“How nice. But I don’t see her…What kind of offering is this?”
Shirou bites down on his teeth.
“You….YOU! What have you done to SABER?!”
Wind and prana surround Shirou.
With a scream he erupts forth at an amazing speed.
But even faster, Gilgamesh shoots forth a Noble Phantasm.
“Raaaah!!!”
Shirou does an overhead slash, releasing the wind surrounding Excalibur. The force of the magnificent torrent rips apart the Noble Phantasm.
Luvia lays flat on the ground to brace herself. Gilgamesh simply stands with a smirk, as the vicious wind blows onto him like it’s just a breeze.
“A mongrel wielding a King’s sword is still a mongrel.”
He snaps his fingers. And with that, a hail of Noble Phantasms is summoned.
“Trace, on!”
The hail is matched with a rain of swords. The metals clash and rip apart each other in a storm. Shards are sent flying, stabbing into the temple ground.
“Hmph.”
STAB.
“Gu-AH!
Protruding from Shirou’s chest is a spear. Gilgamesh can fire his weapons from all directions. And Shirou is inexperienced. Defeating him is too easy. Gilgamesh’s only slight regret is wasting his Noble Phantasms on this fool.
“N-Not yet!” Shirou’s grabs onto the spear as blood drips from his mouth, and pours from his chest. “I-It isn’t over! Haaaa!!”
He yanks it out. Blood sprays all over the temple ground.
“You idiot.”
Gilgamesh scoffs at him.
But that arrogant smirk vanishes. A golden light envelops Shirou. When Gilgamesh looks again, Shirou is fully healed.
“What is this?”
“You can’t kill me, Gilgamesh. I have Avalon!”
“Avalon?...Oh, that thing.”
“Heh! How does it feel to get defeated by a mongrel?”
“You talk too soon, boy.”
Gilgamesh snaps his fingers again.
Shirou strafes to the side, dodging a Noble Phantasm that buries into the ground, and begins dashing towardsGilgamesh.
The King of Heroes fires another from behind Shirou. But Shirou won’t fall to a previous attack. He strafes again, and continues his sprint.
“Hmph.”
Gilgamesh told himself that he would only use a certain number of Noble Phantasms against Shirou. But, for fun, he’ll use that one.
From a ripple next to him, Gilgamesh draws his favourite treasure.
“Enuma Elish!”
A wave of energy blows into Shirou, sending him flying like a ragdoll, and he skids across the temple ground.
“Pft! That was the lowest setting, boy.”
Gilgamesh puts Ea back into the ripple with a disappointed sigh.
Shirou staggers back to his feet. His armour was enough to protect his life, but that amazing force shocked throughout his entire body, damaging his muscles. Avalon appears and heals him.
“That thing makes you more of a cockroach than you were before.”
Shirou chuckles.
“Alright, enough of this. I want to get my Grail.”
Gilgamesh’s chain zooms out of a ripple next to Shirou. He jumps to the side and slashes at it. But just as he makes the slash, a spear is fired at his head. Shirou quickly projects a sword, and slashes down at the spear.
But now, Shirou is open. A scythe spins out of the ripple, and buries its crescent blade into his shoulder. A sword into his stomach. A spear in his back.
Shirou moves to slash at the next sword coming at his front. But two axes come from behind. They slash off his arms.
“Ahhhhh!!!”
Shirou screams in pain. He tries to slash at the sword coming at him, but he can’t. He has no arms. The sword plunges into his stomach.
Another scythe comes in front of him. With a swoop his legs are now gone.
Shirou, now only a torso, begins to fall. Before he hits the ground, chains wrap around him like a cocoon and hold him up.
More chains appear to suspend his four limbs.
Gilgamesh slowly walks towards him.
“See, this is one bad thing about immortality. You’ll feel pain for eternity. I can’t kill you – yet - but stay right here while I go fix Saber.”

Gilgamesh walks off, dragging the lifeless Saber behind him. Luvia looks at the disfigured Shirou, suspended in the air. The golden light of Avalon wants to put him back together, but the chains keep his limbs separated from his body. The light now only prevents him from dying.
Luvia doesn’t know what to say. She follows her Servant as he walks to the back.

“Ugh, another one?”
Kiritsugu stands before Illya.
“Hm, I think I know you. You Japanese mongrels all look the same anyway.”
“Shirou failed?”
“Obviously.”
“…”
Kiritsugu looks at Gilgamesh, who continues walking to him.
He raises his gun.
“Let’s go.”
Gilgamesh laughs.

No.19183
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19183
“Here you go Saber, drink up.”
Gilgamesh places the unconscious Saber under the waterfall of black ooze. He opens her mouth. Saber wakes up, choking.
“Drink up Saber. It’ll make you all better.”
Saber struggles, but Gilgamesh holds her head firmly.
Unable to stomach this scene, Luvia looks behind her to the man crawling on the ground, breathing heavily. Gilgamesh only fired a sword into his stomach, and ended the fight there. He’s still alive, but barely. Where he’s trying to go, Luvia would never know. She can only guess it’s his desperation at life telling him to run away.
“Gah! Gu-Ahhhh!!”
Saber drops to the ground. Her body spasms. Red marks appear on her face and slowly spread across her body and her armour like serpents.
“I knew you wouldn’t be able to handle the curse like me. But, this will be an improvement. We’ll have lots of fun together this way, Saber.”
“N-No!”
Saber rolls onto her back. She bits down on her teeth, trying to fight it.
“Ahhhhhh!!!”
Saber screams and grabs her body.
“S-Shirou! Shirou!”
Darkness wraps around her, and her silver armour turns black.
“Shirou…”
Tears drip from her eyes as they turn yellow.
“SABEEEER!!!”
Luvia turns around in shock.
Shirou is running as fast as the wind towards them.
“How did he escape?”
Luvia mutters under her breath. She looks into the distance to see Kiritsugu leaning against the temple wall. He sits there motionless with the chains in his hands.
With what he had left, he set Shirou free.
“GILGAMESH!”
Shirou blazes forth. He raises the sword over his head to slash down Gilgamesh. He doesn’t care how many Noble Phnatasms are fired at him. He’ll run right through them all. He won’t stop. Not until his sword cuts down Gilgamesh.
“Haaaaaaa!!!”
With everything he has, Shirou comes down with the sword.
TING.
It’s blocked.
But not by Gilgamesh.
“S-Saber?...”
Standing before Gilgamesh is Saber. Her once brilliant silver armour is now black as coal. The strong green eyes Shirou used to look into are now cold and yellow.
She pushes back Shirou.
“S-Saber! What happened?!”
“You risk damaging the Holy Grail. Furthermore, Emiya Shirou, you are no longer my Master. You need not be concerned for me.”
“S-Saber…No, can’t you see?! The Grail is cursed just like my father said! You can’t use it!”
“My goals do not concern you. You have my Noble Phantasm, Avalon. Return it.”
“S-Saber…”
“Hahahaha!” Gilgamesh laughs. He puts his hands into his white fur coat and looks on the entertainment with glee.
Shirou doesn’t know what to do. He’s lost Saber. He’s lost his father. He’s lost his sister. What is there for him to do?
That Hell flashes in his mind.
“No!”
His grip tightens around his sword.
“I won’t let that happen again! I’ll stop Gilgamesh and that Hell from happening again!”
Shirou stands onto his feet.
“I’ll save Illya! I’ll stop her from dying!”
Wind erupts and surrounds him as an aura.
“Father isn’t dead yet, I’ll save him too!”
Shirou takes a step forward, and braces his sword in a stance.
“And Saber!” He looks right into her eyes, which only blankly stare back at him. “I’ll save you, SABER!”
-----Interlude End-----

No.19184
A few minutes before midnight. Rin and I stand before the steps of the Ryuudou Temple, looking at the lurid sky. The air is drenched with this strange aura. No, I can definitely tell what it is. It’s evil.
Rin sprints up the stairs without waiting for me, and I follow.
Once we reach the top, we see the floor is scattered with pieces of weaponry. There was definitely a fight here before we arrived.
Without waiting for me again, Rin dashes around to the back. As I follow her, I notice a section of the temple wall has fresh blood on it.
Around the corner, I almost bump into Rin as she comes to a complete stop.
And she had good reason to.
In front of us is something that only a very small number of magi have seen.
“The Holy Grail?…”
Rin whispers. But she said it as a question. She’s right. There’s nothing ‘holy’ about it. The dark ominous sphere floats like it’s the sign of the apocalypse. And from it flows some kind of black ooze. It spreads into the lake, making that too become corrupted like it is.
“Is that Illya?”
Rin points out to me that Illya is floating within the sphere. But I’m focused on what is right before us on ground level.
Gilgamesh stands smiling with his twisted smirk. Close to him is Luvia, who looks uncomfortable in this situation. Like a kid who’s in a group of bullies, but knows what they’re doing is wrong. That’s how Luvia is right now.
On the ground before them is Shirou, beaten and covered in blood. He’s not in his armour, but casual clothes.
And above him stands a Black Knight with two swords.
“A new Servant?” I ask.
“No…That’s Saber.”
I look closer. The hair and figure is the same. And the swords - though the colour is different - they strongly resemble Excalibur.
“It is her…”
As if on cue, Berserker materializes with a low moan.
“Ar…Thur…”
Gilgamesh glances at us.
“Your guests have arrived, Master.” Gilgamesh sarcastically says to Luvia.
“N-Nice of you to show up!”
Luvia is trying to sound proud like usual, but I can detect the discomfort in her voice.
“So, here’s my surprise! Two Servants!”
“Heh, nice surprise Luvia!” Rin scoffs.
“Well, which one would you like to take on first, eh? It may be easier to just give up right now!”
“Rin, this obviously makes things harder.”
“No kidding.”

Fight Gilgamesh
Fight Saber
Fight them both
Save Shirou
Give up

No.19202
>>19184
You give us a hard choice here.

Ah..eh...fight...no..

S..save Shirou?

No.19226
>>19202
Where'd everyone go?

...And then finally realize how less people are actually still on /coc/ from that time.

No.19227
>>19226
And how awesome Rapeboss is for doing this for us few people.

I almost forgot to say that.

No.19231
No gunuflect.
Save Shirou.

No.19250
I'm going to add to this Rapeboss-appreciation moment. He is awesome, his writing is awesome.
A BIG HAND FOR RAPEBOSS, EVERYBODY - HE'S ALRIGHT!!!

Save Shirou

No.19251
I like bad ends.

Give up.

No.19696
It's been a while huh?

It's fine, rapeboss has done so much for us already so he deserves a break...but you kinda left us on the last part of the route, don't you want to have this route finished before you take a break?

No.19703
>>19696
Of course, I've just been busy.
Sorry for taking so long, but I'll try to get around to it this weekend or so.
"Save Shirou" was meant to be a Dead End, but I'm just going to work with that.
I'll most likely finish it off, or maybe add one more choice if I don't got the time.

No.20293
I miss you Rapeboss ;_;
sabishii desu~

No.20918
Well, here's hoping against hope that you at least return to finish Rin's route, Rapeboss.

I really want to see it end.

No.24363
hey guys hows is the progrees of the rin's route

No.24364
hey rape boss i hope you can finish the rin's route because im quit excited about it's ending and i also wish that you can make other route so that it will be more exciting no

No.27945
How long has it been? Almost a year?
Sorry guys, but I lost interest at a point, and that combined with me being busy I just completely forgot, and left you.
Only by a spur of the moment did I come back to find this thread, and I felt bad for leaving the few of you who followed me with no ending.
Even though I took a year, here it is guys...

No.27946
Okay, my tripfag name is changed cause I honestly can't remember what it was. But it's me, I promise.

No.27947
[X] Save Shirou

“Rin, you go grab Shirou. I’ll cover you.”
Rin looks at me initially to object. Saving Shirou isn’t a priority, but focusing purely on the battle is. But he is a friend, and if we can recover him, he’ll be a great help in the fight.
Rin nods.

“ARRRRRTHUUUUURRRRRR!!!”
I can’t control Lancelot now. His body quivers with power and rage. I let the beast go.
I don’t even get the chance to see him run up to Saber. The only senses picked up is the powerful wind that almost blows me off my feet and the sonic boom of Berserker exploding from the ground.
I look up to see within his hand his true Noble Phantasm, Arondight. It comes down onto Saber with such amazing force. If his launch towards Saber was a gust of wind, then his slash is a typhoon.
TING
Saber raises both her swords to X-block Aronidght.

Rin immediately sprints off to Shirou. I aim right at Gilgamesh to ensure he does not attack. But the golden Servant doesn’t care what we’re doing. All he does is look on at Saber with an insane twisted smile on his face.
Rin drags Shirou by his shirt and scuffles backwards towards me. She flops Shirou down and does an exhaustive exhale.
“Geez, Shirou you’re heavy!”
Shirou doesn’t respond. I can see he’s still breathing, but he’s totally knocked out.
“You’re telling me I rescued him for no reason?!”
Rin shouts at me before I even get a chance to say anything.
“Well…You did get him out of the way.”
Rin grumbles and stands back up.

The two of us witness the glorious fight between two black knights.
TING
Lancelot slashes to her right side, and she blocks it.
CLANG
She comes down with her left sword, but Lancelot moves even faster with his, blocking that.
TANG
She stabs with the right, but Lancelot guards against it with his gauntlet.
“ARTHUR! ARTHUR! ARRRTHUUURRR!!!”
With pure brute force Lancelot steps in and head-butts Saber. Saber goes skidding across the ground as her helmet cracks and falls apart.
Lancelot does not rest. He runs and leaps into the air.
“RRRRRAAAAAAHHHH!!!”
He comes down with his sword.
SPLATTER
Blood. Blood everywhere. Lancelot’s Arondight pierced into her stomach.
He stands up and spreads his arms out with a roar. The animal has killed its prey.

STAB
“Berserker!”
Saber is supporting herself on one arm, and piercing Lancelot in the same place he did with the other arm.
She pulls out his Arondight and stabs him again in the abdomen.
She quickly gets up, draws her second Excalibur and slashes upwards.
Blood pours out of the red vertical line formed on his body. Saber grabs her Excalibur lodged within him, and pulls it out while kicking him backwards.
Lancelot staggers back before dropping to his knee. His helmet splits and falls to the ground. Long purple hair flows out.
Lancelot gets back on his feet and grabs hold of his Arondight. He tries to pull it out, but it’s lodged in too deep.
“Berserker! Put away Aronidght!”
He does as I say, and the sword fades away. As it does so, he drops back down to his knees.

“This is bad.” Rin states the obvious.
Lancelot is already on the edge of dying, and Saber was barely injured. Just as I think that, a sheath appears in front of Saber, wraps her in purple rays of light, and disappears as quickly as it came. When the light dies, Saber stands with absolutely no injury.
“This is very bad.” Rin states the obvious again.
We not only have to deal with Saber double-wielding Excalibur, but she has her sheath back as well, making her practically immortal. And even after we deal with her, there’s still Gilgamesh.
Shit.
“Change of plans, Rin. Forget Saber and sparkles, we have a new target.”
“H-Huh?”
“Support me.”
I dash forward. Saber takes a stance to slash right at me, the incoming fool.
“Quintuple Accel!”
Everything slows down for me. The movements of a Servant like Saber now appear “normal”. I strafe to the side to dodge her slash, and sprint forward to Gilgamesh. He stands with his obnoxious arrogant smirk on his face. I raise and aim my gun.
BANG. BANG. BANG.
My Accel cuts off.
Three shots. All right into their target.
Gilgamesh now looks completely surprised. Heh, yeah, you didn’t expect that from me, did you, King of Heroes? His face contorts to anger. He can feel the mana draining, knowing that those weren’t ordinary bullets.
I look as she begins to fall to the ground. She looks back at me with a smile on her face that I can only read as “Thank you.”
Luvia drops to the ground.
“Mooooongreeeel! What have you done?!”
“Cut off your source of mana. And hers.”
Luvia was completely drained of mana with those three shots. Saber’s life support to this world is gone. She begins to sparkle, and fade away.
“No! Saber!” Gilgamesh shouts at her. She looks at him with her cold blank stare and fades away.
“What’s the matter, King of Heroes? You almost look sad.”
Pure hatred is in his glare.
“Sorry. Try again next time, okay?”
I laugh at him. Nothing to worry about now, since he’ll fade away too in a few seconds.
“IDIOT!” Rin shouts at me. “He’s an Archer! He has Independent Action! Rank A!”
....
Oh shit.
“You’ve crossed the line, mongrel. You, your mad dog, faker, and your bitch in heat over there…You are no longer allowed to even exist within this dimension. Ea…It’s your turn.”
A ripple forms next to Gilgamesh. He places his hand within it, and form it draws what I can only describe as drill-sword.
“Ea! Roar!”
At his command, the drill begins to spin. Wind and mana gets sucked in, and it glows with a ferocious red light. This is it. We’re done for.
“RAAAAAH!!!”
From behind me, I hear Berserker roar. Before I can turn to look, Arondight zooms pass me towards Gilgamesh.
“Tch! Enuma Elish!”
A wave of red comes flowing at me. Suddenly, I’m lifted up off the ground and I’m flying in the air. As I crash into the ground, I see Lancelot is the one who flung me out of the way. Arondight explodes as a Broken Phantasm into the red wave.
I’m flung back further from the blast.
I quickly get up to see what’s going on. Lancelot shoulder charges into Gilgamesh, and takes from his hand the drill-sword, Ea.
“No! How dare you dirty Ea!!!”
Blackness slowly crawls around the sword, turning it from gold and red, to black and red.
Lancelot lets out a low groan, and Ea spins at the command of its new master.
Black and red energy swirls around the sword. Lancelot thrusts it forward, and with that, it erupts.
“FILTHY MONGREEEEEEEEEELS!!!”
The massive wave engulfs Gilgamesh and the Grail. For a wave of darkness, it’s so bright I have to close my eyes…

No.27948
Well this is unexpected.

No.27949
-----Epilogue-----

“Luvia, pass me the soy sauce please.”
“Sure~”
Luvia and I are sitting and eating dinner at home. She decided to visit, calling it an anniversary for the Grail War, but it’s really so she can help out Rin. As for Rin, she’s probably passed out right now. Can’t blame her. Even with Luvia’s help it’s tough. I knew it was going to be hard, but geez.

Why is Luvia alive, you ask?
Who said she was dead? I shot her and made sure to miss all her vitals, and the bullets went right through. Drains less mana that way, but that’s why I ended up having to use three, versus just one.
Right after destroying the Grail, Zouken showed up. He took care of everything then, including Illya. I never saw or spoke to Illya, but I assume she’s gone back to her homeland since I don’t see her around the Emiya household.
Shirou lived, and so did his father. They’re both kidn enough to invite us for dinner now and then. I’d do the same, but then that friend of theirs Taiga would come to. And wherever Shirou goes, Sakura follows. And Shinji will come too. And hell, even Zouken, and I don’t want my house stinking of worms.
Most importantly, I got paid. And in full, even though Zouken didn’t even make his wish. Though that money is going to run out eventually. Every day, I swear that thing costs an arm and a leg.

And at that moment, as if it could read my mind, the high pitch wail comes from the room. The door opens, and out comes Rin with the source of noise.
“You two started to eat lunch without me?!”
“Dinner.” Luvia states to her. “You and the baby have been sleeping a really long while.”
“Have I been asleep that long? Ugh…”
Luvia takes a drink, and gets up.
“Come to aunty Luvia~.”
She takes the baby and immediately it stops crying.
“Fufu, even your child knows I’m better than you, Rin!”
“Shut up. If it loves you that much, you can keep it.” Rin piles her plate like she’s never seen food before and sits at the table with a sigh. “I blame you for all this.”
“Do you have to remind me every day?”
Rin gives me a cold stare. Cause of me getting her pregnant, Rin couldn’t move on to the Clock Tower. But at the same time, cause of me they want her really bad. She’s married to the mage who won the Grail War, and has the approval of the Matou Zouekn and even Lord El-Melloi II. Whenever she’s ready, she’s a shoe in with their word. She herself is a Tohsaka to boot, so it’s not like she was in trouble to begin with.
But for now, we need to take care of our child. Yes, our bundle of joy that goes through my money without any care. Only thing good from this is that Rin’s boobs got bigger. Luvia no longer has that edge over her.

“Well, I won’t need to put up with the crying for long. I’m going to the Clock Tower this year.”
“That’s great, Rin! And I’ll be your sempai!”
“Yeah…”
“Ahem. Rin…You might have to stay with the child a little longer…”
Rin turns to me with a smile. But I know that smile…There’s pure evil behind it.
“Why’s that, love?”
“Well, I just got an order from the Mage Association. I’m assigned to help out with Blue.”
“Is that so?~”
“Haha, yeah…”
Rin smiles, and only for an instant, gives me that glare that tells me “No more sex for you. Enjoy sleeping on the couch.”
“Don’t worry!” Luvia sits right next to me. “You can come sleep with me!”
“GET AWAY FROM MY HUSBAND LUVIA!”
“Oh? By the looks of things, I think he’d rather have me!”
“NO HE WOULDN’T!”
Rin stands up with rage.
“YES HE WOULD!”
Luvia practically throws the baby into my arms and stands up as well.
“Rin! Luvia! Relax!”
Completely ignoring me as always, they launch at each other.
Sigh…I want to go now. Handling Blue can’t be as tough as this…


FIN

No.27950
And there you have it. Probably be a while before you guys come and check, probably on a spur of the moment like me, and see it's finished. But, I hope you enjoy it.

No.28320
>>27950

Thank the lord. I was giving up hope.

No.28507
yeah thank you for finishing this. by the way the ending is great thank you rape boss.hehehehe

No.28849
I found my writings for the other routes I would have done, so I'll soon post out the summary of them for you guys to read. After that will be farewell.

No.28894
heheh thank you for that rapeboss we will miss you rape boss.hehehe

No.28992
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28992
Here's what would've been my personal favourite, due to having what would be good fight scenes, especially final boss. The Illya Route.

Scout town in morning.
At the market, see the entire family – Illya, Shirou, Kiritsugu, Saber, and Caster. You feel slightly jealous seeing them like that.
Illya goes to the park on her own, while the others continue shopping. Follow her to rape. She notices you, and the two of you talk. You buy her lunch and play on the swings a bit. Caster appears. He’s actually been there the entire time watching. He proposes you join them. You accept.
Go to castle. Caster wants to “level up” Shirou (Get him Excalibur, etc), but Saber prevents Caster from even looking at Shirou funny. Kiritsugu also agrees not to, as he personally didn’t even want Shirou to enter the War. He meant to take the sheath from Shirou and summon Saber himself again, but Shirou ended up doing so before he got the chance. Caster concedes, setting his eyes on you as a new experiment/toy.
Kiritusgu has massive info on all Masters and shares with you. You have a lot of admiration for him, seeing him as a possible father-figure.
Berserker fights Saber, and the two resolve their problems, thus Berserker no longer goes out of control when he sees Saber. Caster tinkers with a ritual circle, making Berserker’s Mad Enhancement able to toggle on/off.
Decide to watch how things go tonight.

In morning, find out Lancer fought Archer - Ended in a draw. There are suddenly more Assassins.
Illya wants to go out, but Saber and Shirou are training. You go with her. Buy her a pocket watch that plays Lorelei.
Return to castle to find Rider attacked. Shirou gravely injured,(but heals next day due to Avalon). You go after Rider. Defeat him and El-Melloi.
On way back to castle, confronted by Lancer and Archer – they teamed up. Lancelot steals Archer’s projected weapons and uses them to kill Lancer. Archer and Rin escape. Bazett quits.
Have to head to Matou that night instead because can’t walk all the way to Einzbern castle and you are extremely exhausted of mana. Zouken complains about alliance with Saber and Caster, as they are strong opponents.

In morning, head back to Einzbern castle. Shirou has been killed by Archer. Archer deliberately wanted you out of the way that night. Kiritsugu is Saber’s new Master. Illya is extremely sad.
Immediately set Rin and Archer as next targets for Illya’s sake.
Find Kiritusgu and Saber have already left – don’t know where. Think it’s against Rin, so you head there.
That’s not the case. Lord El-Melloi has now summoned Lancer. He killed Kotomine and all Assassins. Caren is new mediator. El-Melloi also fought with Kiritusgu, who has crippled El-Melloi – Sola Lancer’s new master, and Saber has been injured by Lancer’s spear (just like in Fate/Zero).
More time with Illya that night – potential H scene.

Sola and Rin have joined forces against you. They attack the castle (barrier still weakened due to Rider’s previous attack). Injured Saber vs Lancer. Archer vs Caster and Kiritsugu.
As you are about to intervene, Gil arrives. He kills Archer, Caster, Kiritusgu, Lancer, and Sola. He attempts to kidnap Illya, but you prevent him for now with Lancelot.
Rin becomes Saber’s new Master. Two of you decide to stop Gil for now.
Free day. More time spent with Illya. Possibly another H scene.
At night, Gil defeats Berserker by actually using his Noble Phantasms rather than just firing them. “Though a mad dog is not worthy of such a thing, it is better than the filthy mongrel dirtying my treasures.” He successfully kidnaps Illya.
You quickly get Rin and Saber, and head to Ryuudou temple. Find Gil is now working with Zouken (this is why Gil did not protect Kotomine at all when he was attacked by El-Melloi). You all fight and defeat Gil, but in the meantime, in the cavern below Zouken kills Sakura by ripping out all the worms within her and fusing them into Illya. The lake crumbles due to the fight with Gil, and collapses into the cavern below (constant water flowing in).
Zouken places himself and worms into Angra Mainyu, and fuses with it. Angra Mainyu births itself, but Zouken is in control. Saber and Berserker struggle to defeat it, and nearly do. Gilgamesh appears, having not died. Disappointed with himself for his actions resulting in such a disgusting creature. The way he wants to kill humans is not this way. So, he feels somewhat responsible, and helps kills it. Enuma Elish + Excalibur + Alondight Broken Phantasm combo.

With Angra Mainyu removed, Grail has become purified. You wish for Illya to be human.
Good end with keeping Lancelot, Rin with Saber, and Gil stays with Caren.
FIN

No.29011
whooo nice one rape boss but i wish you could have prolong the story more like just the previous one.

No.29012
i also wish that you have make the sin of illya route more detailed rape boss that way many of ass would have enjoyed this route even better.

No.29020
>>29011
I'm not actually doing the routes, just posting the outlines of them. I don't have the time to actually do them, but I decided I'll at least just give you guys what I would've done.

No.29135
it's a shame rapeboss that you don't have the time to do this because i think this route would be really awsome indeed. well i can't blame you for that since all of us are very busy with our life but at list you have my gratitude for at list finishing rin's route, if only you have more time ,then maybe you have done illya's route and maybe many more route it's a shame rape boss since your story making skill's are quit good,but still i am very sad to here that this is farewell.T_T we will miss you rape boss.

No.29137
>>29135l
I still have the Sakura/Rider route to put up, which is the longest and will take some time to type up, even though it's just an outline.

There's also a Sola and Bazett route, but I dunno if I'll bother with them since they don't really have anything that special to them.

No.29602
hey rape boss please post all those route that you have mention i think those route will be also awsome and can you please make a saber route i really want to see saber and our character to fall for each other it will make an awsome tandem thank you for the favor rape boss.^_^

No.29741
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29741
Fate/Extra is out now, which has more Servants we could have used... Extra Caster is pretty cute!



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