http://wasserbienchen.deviantart.com/art/IBAW-1-New-Beginnings-242570288

WARNING: Contains WE3 level feels.
You will feel depressed and disgusted at times.

>>25455
>8 pages in
ALL MY NOPE. I can't handle this shit.
I'll never look at Pokemon training or Nuzlocke the same way ever again.

>>25455
Not bad.
But a lot of it just seems to be drama for drama's sake.

>>25461
"Bianca! I'm censored!"

>>25462
Well I don't want to spoil it after all.

>>25461
"gay"?

>>25466
How ever did you guess?

Eh, I always liked the derpy ones like Oshawott and Bidoof myself.

But then again I generally also hate the rivals, I must be weird.

>>25461
My god, that face.

"Bianca, I'm cliched!"
"DUUUUUUUUH"

>>25455
Wow thats horrible and not in a it sucks way.

>>25461
>>25455
Jesuuuus its even on the official site what the fuuuuck.

>>25455
>Number 1
>All official [Pokemon] battles are to the death.
So it's grimdark for the sake of being grimdark. But they have lesbians! Counts for something, right! Right? ...right? nothx.

Skimming through really quick it seems that the art improves slightly, at least.

>>25596
It's a comic of someone's Nuzlocke run. They've got to explain the deaths somehow.
The art does get significantly better though, from what I've seen.

>>25597
>Nuzlocke run
Eh?
http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Nuzlocke_Challenge
Well shit, now I understand the comic premise a lot better.

>>25598
Don't forget to check out www.nuzlocke.com, either!
(Seriously, don't. I'm making a comic there.)
(...please, don't forget.)

(...)
(...please.)

>>25599
Got a link?

>>25599
I would rather someone TRY and make a comic than attempt to write poor fan fiction, or even worse, a screen cap journal.

If I can give you any advice though, it would be to at the least give your comic an interesting hook that none of the other comics/ runs have done or have done in a while, especially if it's one of the more well traveled games like Red and Blue.

>>25602
In my opinion, there's no difference between trying to make a crappy fanfiction and trying to make a crappy fan-comic. Literally nothing separates them. One or the other does not make you more or less worthy of praise.

Oh shit! I forgot I had these.

>>25600
>>25602
>>25603
Actually, its not a Nuzlocke run comic.
Its a comic Nuzlocke himself is writing and we're hosting it on the main site.
http://www.nuzlocke.com/speedrun.php

>>25597
Yeah, but it feels a bit off, like she fails on purpose for the sake of drama.
Have she ever done a gym fight with out loss?
Or is it just me that feels that way?

>>25638
Have you ever done a Nuzlocke playthrough?
You lose a lot of Pokemon over really stupid things.

>>25639
unless your garbage-tier boring and just super grind before any and everything.

>>25641
Grinding is the way I normally play because I'm too brick stupid to learn how stuff works.

>>25455
This comic, man.
Pokemon suicide, N wanting to be captured in a Pokeball, "I'M GAY!" out of nowhere

It's a fun read and the art does get better as it goes (the page with the training in the desert is pretty nice) but it's just so silly to me.

http://www.paragonsigma.com/images/nuzlocke/

How's this for a unique take on pokemon?

>>26306
Well that was dark and fucked up.
I like it.
Better then >>25455 do to less "bullshit drama" and shitty government do to armagedon.
And da battle scars and tatts! Mmmm! Thats my type of woman!

>>26307
Funny. "Dark and fucked up" were the exact terms I used to describe Apocalypse Johto as well.

and I wholeheartedly agree with you on the scars and tatts thing.

I kind of want to do a Pokemon comic, but I'm worried that people would be disinterested because I absolutely have no intention of doing a Nuzlocke.

>>26309
Oh it will be fine as long it does not suck.
>>26308
And I wholeheartedly highfive yah for that.

>>26310
I hope it won't. I haven't done a comic before, so I was just thinking of serializing funny things that happen in video games that I've played (not just Pokemon).

I get too attached to Pokemon to breed for the perfect stats, or to Nuzlocke them.

>>26306
That's pretty fucked up, batshit insane and quite gruesome.
Grimdark done right? Sure, why not?
I liked it.

>>26309
You should give it a try.
If you check the thread, there are only two Nuzlocke comics.

>>26253
Beautiful.

One day, stuff like this will stop being funny.

...Nah.

Well if I am going to tell everyone that wants a darker Pokémon to check out the "I am gay" nuzlock comic I might as well check the latest updates.
http://wasserbienchen.deviantart.com/art/IBAW-100-Destruction-400509675
White is now a scarfaced terrorist.
And suddenly fucks was given!

>>26898
If I wanted to read something dark and edgy about Pokemon, I have over 90% of Pokemon fiction in existance to pick from.

So adorable, Kinda wish I'd played all the way from the start.