working yet?

finally

they see me rolling'

they be hatin'

censoring me yet /pco/?

I guess since the Simon's brown-noser won't share; I will!

I hope this is not DNP!
9_9

been trying to upload this for a while; I guess something was prevented me here.

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OMG I love you guys!

hotness

I can feel your juicy love!

This should end well.

There's nothing especially hot there. It's torture more than sex. lots and lots of words too.

>>146241
there's plenty of people who are into that, mate

>>146241
pfffft

>>146241
I posted them because the fag who did it first was being a whiny bitch about it and stopped.

Any comic by Simon brings me joy.
This one, not as much, I am sad to say.
I hope it will turn out better.

>>146245
By that logic You can just post anything you want. But there's barely anything sexual there, just someone unloading his anger on a fictional character.
Dunno. I like his pin ups, but it seems all his stories are just that, frustration and anger.

>>146276
I think your twisting it a bit to suit your argument.

images and text are different mediums that can still give you the desired effect, depending on who you are.

>>146276

>huge anal insertion
>barely anything sexual

>>146276

This is an extremely sexual story. Maybe it's not your bag, I get that, but I think it's pretty damn hot.

this guy is also one of those whiny fags >>146241, please proceed to please e.g. me and to piss them off. kthx.

>>146239

oh fuck it, now I can't read without this going off in my head

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>>146283
>>146284
As trollish as that anon sounds, he somewhat has a point. The pacing seems awfully slow. The average doujin chapter is only 20-30 pages. After 23 pages, this one isn't even past what most people would consider foreplay. It just feels like the first part dragged on a bit longer than it needed to.

It's not too bad, but doujin/comic pacing is just something I think Simon needs to work on if he intends to stick with it.

>>146294
He can say it's slow. He can say it's torture. He can say he doesn't like it.

But to say it's not sexual is fucking retarded.

>>146294
>complaining about the pacing in a medium where he can just flip the pages until the action starts

>>146302
Maybe complaining turns him on? I bet there are people with a fetish for that!

>>146283
It's just used to inflict pain, it's not really sexual. Torture of that level is more /d/ than /h/.

>>146305
oh please, that's a very weak point. whether or not something is sexual or not is subjective.

>>146294

I bet he's pacing this for 40~48.

Doujinshi are only the lengths they are because book pages need to divisible by 8, doujinshi artists are paying for the printing out of pocket, and because most of the time they don't have a real story to tell.

>>146305
Are you underage or are you really that naive?

Please of the love of god post more. Ignore these over analytical self privileged assholes. Some of us love Simon's work. Every time I see a new page it leaves just another tick of happiness in my day. Thank you Simon for all your effort if you're ever here to read this.

>>146306
What is /h/ or /d/ isn't, though.
Simon usual naked pin ups are ok there, but this stroy is turning into /d/ territory pretty fast. We alreadt got smegma shit. now painful insertion. Shit or blood is incoming next

>>146343
Painfull inserction is not /d/ material. /h/ doesn't means drawn porn for prudes.

>>146334
*cough* brown noser *cough* *cough*.

>>146343
English, please

>>146319
yeah, good points. Frankly, he can make it 800 pages as far as I'm concerned. I just think he needs to punctuate it better; break it into chapters or something to to make it more digestible.

When producing any kind of media, it's important to remember your target audience. And let's be honest, most of the people looking at this kinda stuff generally have a divided attention span. You can't really expect most people in that position to sit through 40+ pages in one stroke.

>>146379
On the other hand he is doing this for free so I think he can very well do whathever he wants since no one is paying or being forced to read his comics.

>>146379

I'm confused. Are you complaining that the comic isn't following generic pacing, isn't just pages of "Ahs" and "Oohs", that it doesn't fit the kind of material you're personally familiar with, or is it simply too wordy for you? (I hope it's not that last one, there are plenty of good fapfics out there to enjoy.)

I don't think it's too many pages or slow at all, because none of the dialogue felt extraneous. Do not confuse deliberate pacing with meandering or uneven pacing. There is clearly a slow but steady escalation of things. He's taking as many pages he needs to tell the story he wants to tell.

I've seen plenty of doujinshi that are 64 or 80 pages, and doujinshi that combine manga with dense text, like a mix between comics and fanfics. Assuming your taste is representative of a large and diverse audience, or that your knowledge of it is representative of the medium, is a bit presumptuous.

TLDR: I like that he gives a shit about dialogue and characterization.

>>146392
No, none of that. I just don't like ones that go on for 50+ pages with no breaks or pauses. It's like reading a giant run-on sentence. It's also harder to find that one panel that really does it for you (you know the one I'm talking about) when it's all one continuous doujin. The dialogue and action pacing isn't bad. I just feel like it's getting to that point where it's starting to need a break, and it doesn't really seem like a good stopping point at all. In all fairness, my perception of time might just be fucked since I've been following this for months.

>>146346
that's not true. piss goes to /d/ despite being way more socially acceptable than pedophile torture. Furries also go on /d/ even is they are just nude. You are just playing favorite there.

>>146402
Rough sex is not /d/

>>146402
piss isnt painful insertion, where did you get piss from?

/h is for social norms, /d deviates from the norm and both in their own right are sexual.

>>146402
Hey! You are the same faggot whining in the other threads! Go troll somewhere else!

>>146360 What toon is she from?

>>146454
What about Mimi.

>>146276
What kind of idiot do you have to be to take a comic and say to yourself "this doesn't arouse me", and then extrapolate from the fact that you're not into it that it must not be sexual? It's sexual, bro. Jesus fucking christ.

Looks like Simon has really dialed back the censorship. At this point it's very easy to ignore. Much appreciated!

Is it just me, or is Simon often so good he's bad?
Do you know what I mean?

>>146473
I tend to agree and I know exactly why I feel that way, but I won't go further than that because it'll upset his fans.

>>146473

I have noticed that his pics have the ability to turn everyone into art critics.

But seriously, I think I know what you mean. But I think it has more to do with having a very specific artistic taste than being "so good it's bad." A lot of rule34 are indistinguishable, or are just copies or traces. Simon's style is more personal, so it's going to be more polarizing. He reminds me a lot of Raita in that way. There's the lolicon thing, there's the skinniness thing, and there's the anatomy thing. Personally, I love it, I know some people hate it, but either way you can't say it's shallow. Just polarizing.

>>146476

Sensible opinion?
Here?
Get out of here! ;p

>>146473
No, I don't see it. He has a solid colouring and a limited set of body type but I don't see the good would make it bad.

>>146473

I find his work frequently has an uncanny element to it that makes it feel...disturbing, I guess? It's all very good art but something about the way he blends cartoon and realistic anatomy doesn't sit right with me.

>>146484

I have the opposite feeling. I look at the way he draws these cartoons (especially when he tackles something I never thought could be appealing like Rugrats), and I wonder why the originals weren't designed his way. He could unflatten cartoons and still make them look really identifiable, without going the complete anime/disney/tumblr fusion style that's so popular and somewhat pointless, imo. He could draw those styles and these characters completely on model, too, he just doesn't do that often. He goes his own way, which I think is drawing in an anime way, without drawing an anime design. Does that make sense?

Just look at Vicky. She'd not superflat but still more faithful to the original in a way that something like Camp Sherwood isn't.

>>146487

And come to think of it, he isn't drawing these characters too skinny. They actually are that skinny, but drawn without detail on the shows. Maybe that's what you find uncanny? He's drawing them with an amount of detail that is closer to manga, while still following the proportions of the cartoon. My porn of choice is hentai, so I guess I'm used to it.

>>146481
>limited set of body types
you people really should get out more often: >>146406 >>146407

>>146488
>an amount of detail that is closer to manga
Actually, not even manga/anime is this detailed. it's more of a classic pin-up illustration style. Most Manga/anime is just featureless moe blobs these days.

>>146490
yeah right, because the fact other people can't draw well is totally invalidating the comments about his own work, especially if you directly insult people who did it.

>>146497

I knew it.

Anyone else think his linework is better than his colors?

>>146515
I wouldn't say better, but it's certainly cleaner, which feels a bit closer to the source material in allot of cases.

>>146488
This is a really cool observation.

>>146488
no they aren't skinny in the show. Styilization are a view of things, but not a thing. stick figures aren't walking skeleton. The subject doesn't have physical issues just because their in world physic and anatomy is different from photorealism.

I agree about liking his line art better, but I remember when other artist used to color his line art and they did a fine job too.

>>146548
Candace is actually said to be unhealthy scrawny. Others have no excuse though.

Does Simon have an anorexia fetish?

Why are all his characters goddamn skeletons?

>>146561
2spooky4u?

>>146561
makes it unappealing to me, too. but artistically I´m still impressed and checking his art, in a non-porn sense.

except this friggin Vanellope comic. keep it coming. :P

>>146561
Some artists make all characters chubby, other with big tits and other make them with a big ass. Even with his own style you can recognize all the characters in his works unlike some artists that make generic characters with only the hair and accessories to differentiate one from the other.

Just accept that people might like stuff you don't like.

>>146597
at least Simon's art a step up from Zimmerman's.

>>146606
My son's crayon doodles are better than Zimmerman's shit.

>That Shining reference

>>146606
F- I hate Zimmerman, he downright RUINS characters. There is nothing appealing about his art. NOTHING. But it's all over Paheal, makes me throw up.

>>146561
>>146595
While it's true that it's normally pretty unappealing, the problem does not appear to be so much Simon having some sort of fetish for really scrawny girls as much as it is Simon actually keeping it accurate to the original material, as opposed to modifying the girls to be more appealing/healthy-looking physically.

I admit that it's kinda creepy and unappealing in an erotic sense to look at, but I think we can all agree that it's better than Zimmerman. Simon DOES have some talent at drawing... He just chooses to show it in a weird way.

>>146655
There's lots of quality in zimmerman's art it's just nor really fappable. He also suffer from a shitty hate maymay because of that. namedrop it and suddenly you gets 10 idots signing for his assassination asap.

I myself happen to really love the petite type myself. ^_^