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No. 43768
the anon here: I had a sincere will to help, but I felt jumped over, my bad I went harsh but I want to point out something just so there is no confusion. I cannot care less for sailor senshi soldiers, tifa, maishiranui, pokemon and so many others I commented, I strictly comented them for I know people dig em. I also backed up so many other characters I know people love (gwen tennison, ponies, avatar, teen titans, etc) because I had the sensation OP could have problems to use em as they are not "adult" characters (sigh...as if characters had any age, or that mattered) so, if my chice of characters felt starnge or not popular enough now you know the reason behind my list...besides I was simply not doing a whole research just to post... thise are just like some that came to my mind, but I WASN´T ASKING OP TO DRAW MY OWN PREFFERENCE I am not that moronic. if Op thought that, and started a whole line of thought based on that IT´S NOT MY FAULT he could not have a basic trust tendence in a stranger. I like cammy I admit, but then I inmediatly started to try to imagine about some other characters OP could use. as I felt he was trying to promote himslef into rule34 circles, I felt his potentilal creating comics on a fast and mildly efficient manner, could be put on drawing usual blockbuster series people love to see (by the way I´d add naruto, just slipped my mind because it is so common) so I apologice I somohow failed to make OP truelly feel I was not asking about my own whim, but I swear it´s the truth.
now, tracing issue appart if you want me to add something I´ll tell you the comic is hot, but I can add some imput apprt the character choice thing. first I wouldn´t go so far on breaking the girls, of course that is hot but you have to get it to a better balance, it is kind of a turn of if you go that far, and it´s not because of moral reason... it´s just feel there is nothing of the girl there to be felt anymore if you break her so much.. that way it feels she is left as an empty carcass of her latter self, what kills the appeal of have her submissive to you (just my HUMBLE OPPINION... please) beside the whole "giving in" phase is non-existent... you have her moaning and whinning about she doesn´t want toget raped and then BANG oh, she is a happy ultra slut. would be best if there is some transition, feels strange and even rushed, with no heart to it, like whoever wrote this is actually not into submission at all, that makes it feel like it´s a half assed thing created to fill pages on some porn wen the autor doesn´t actually likes... THAT is a mayor turn off. I dont even fucking care the tracing-referencing issue, after all your drawings are hot no one would say the opposite, but sinceresly I have problems believing this is something coming from your liking, it doesn´t feels like so.
and I hope you see I am not flaming now, but actually giving yu some straight, and constructive (that is my goal at least) critic. put one point on acount. when you ask people to let you know their thoughts, THAT IS SOMETHING YOU DONT CONTROL, that is the point of comunicating with others, you´ll have a source of imput beyond your own espectations. not listenning to that would be your own choice, but a waste of incredibly usueful ideas and tips.
I wish you my best OP, no bad feelings on my side, but please keep on cool when receiving critics. if you get to feel they are hatefull or of no use, just ignore them. if they trully hurt, meditate on the fact that that could be just because they hit the painful bullseye... and that could be a good thing if you have an open mind and the correct take on things
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