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No. 158170
>>158145 I agree with this... some unfinished stuff and typos, but really, it compares to full commercial games content and length wise.
Iris becoming a whore probably ended up rushed because one she is there, you just see the same thing over and over and there is no more development, other than one or two in the bar.
The sex scenes were overall pretty tame, for Akabur anyway (like the scene where the genie wants to piss on her).
The only scene where Jasmine truly ends up broken is the ending. There could've been some more in-game hints to her being totally broken - and maybe make the tutelage prices higher, forcing you to actually do the quests to reach better jobs and more money, and ultimately making the submission classes have more impact.
Considering that he wanted all sex scenes to have chibis, what is in the game is pretty cool already, considering that he almost single handedly did everything, except for the music and the extra art by Dahr.
I'd give the game a 7 out of 10, +1 bonus for effort.
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