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No. 40813
IANADF, but to my untrained eye...
It doesn't look like you constructed the room. A lot of the problems (Moran, LeStrade & the unnamed detective's relative sizes; LeStrade's feet not being attached to the floor; Crown Prince Franz Drago's body not seeming to lie at the correct angle; the corner of the room plainly not being a right angle; the mantle being far too small to fit the description of the story) stem from this.
Look at some references of men in suits to get an idea of what a suit actually looks like on a man.
Work on your anatomy. Learn to draw nekkid men before you try to draw them with clothes on. You don't have to spend a lo of time on the junk if you don't want to.
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