My current WIP.I'm stuck... Something wrong here...Critique needed.
The neck is bending awkwardly and unnaturally, and I don't think I should be able to see the neck at all at that angle. Are you using reference by any chance?
>>31687Holy shit, you are right... Maybe I should shorten it?No, I didn't used exact reference.
I'm not exactly an anatomy god, but the hip/pelvis/butt look wrong. The thigh looks too 'stiff' and the curve/position seem unnatural.This is all flawed observation on my part.
>>31691Well, I shortened the neck, and outlined some possible alternations (the red ones).
>>31692OK, now it looks better?
>>31702You're not really accounting for the way the shoulder and neck muscles work, so it looks like her head has just been pasted on top. Um. I'll be back a little later with a redline of what I mean. You could probably improve it a lot just by pulling the visible shoulder out more.