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31679 No.31679
My current WIP.

I'm stuck... Something wrong here...

Critique needed.

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No.31687
The neck is bending awkwardly and unnaturally, and I don't think I should be able to see the neck at all at that angle. Are you using reference by any chance?

No.31690
>>31687

Holy shit, you are right... Maybe I should shorten it?

No, I didn't used exact reference.

No.31691
I'm not exactly an anatomy god, but the hip/pelvis/butt look wrong. The thigh looks too 'stiff' and the curve/position seem unnatural.
This is all flawed observation on my part.

No.31692
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31692
>>31691

Well, I shortened the neck, and outlined some possible alternations (the red ones).

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31702
>>31692

OK, now it looks better?

No.31714
>>31702
You're not really accounting for the way the shoulder and neck muscles work, so it looks like her head has just been pasted on top.

Um. I'll be back a little later with a redline of what I mean. You could probably improve it a lot just by pulling the visible shoulder out more.



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