Or better 2?

Also, this is just something I scribbled up (that wasn't MSPA fanart) while playing with photoshop in a effort to apparently use as many obnoxious filters as I can. I'm trying to see if I'm not totally art retarded so any redlines on the face or tips on how to not suck would be great!

I guess I'm trying to get into drawing again, but not doing very well, really.

I like 2.

Kudos for proper use of "an".

>>30868

I think I do to, now that I see them posted side by side.

I'm not sure I like the text at all, though. Might take that out and leave the swirly doo-dads in, though the text is pretty apt for describing the pic.

>>30869

GRAMMAR IS ART

Uh, uh, uh, let me see 1 again.

Oh boy.... They look the same to me...

Uh... 1! 1 is better!

2 is better in my opinion.

I like 2's bg and bubble better, but the girl is so dark she almost blends in, which doesn't balance well at all with such a high-contrast bubble. Unless you deliberately wanted the bubble to be the focus and the girl just part of the background, otherwise I'd take the girl from 1 and paste her into 2 and see how it looks.

>>30966
Haven't popped in here for a while, but I just wanted to say thank you for the advice! I will definitely give that a try!

>>31000