Gonna post it
None of this stuff is actually finished or anything, they're just dumb sketches
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>>28977
And that's it. Thank you for putting up with my shenanigans.Criticism is welcomed with open arms
Neat style.
Torsos, humans should have them.Definitely seconding the nifty style, though.
>>28991Thank you
>>28994Yeah, I've uh...I've sorta noticed the whole "Waists are now as skinny as arms" thing. I'm working on that...I'm aiming to get the torsos back to about this thickness here
Noodle people, not pretty on the eyes. This is disturbingly too apparent on the female, who looks like I could bend her over my knee with no consequences. The huge legs and not-so-feminine face don't help either. Also, no torsos and no rigid structureI'm gonna have to ask you to post more of your real life studies so I can get a better grasp of what you're capable of .
>>28999Had to put the comic on hiatus while I went to school, I just couldn't maintain a consistent update schedule if I was going to school and working part-tim on top of that. Right now I'm revamping things and am planning to relaunch/reboot the comic once my first year of this course is over, hence the redesigns. I've been thinking I might see if some people I know might be willing to help me with things like coding and coloring but I am on a tangent.Anyway: I will definitely agree with you that there are some issues with the designs I am working with right now, torsos and the thickness thereof being the most glaring. The torsos are the single thing I'm trying hardest to work on. Like I said I'm trying to get the waists back up to about the thickness seen here:>>28996I think the whole "Noodle People" thing can work, I just need to improve the execution of it.Unfortunately I'm not able to get any life studies on my computer at the moment, But I will get back to you on that in a few days. I definitely think improving the old life drawing would help me hammer out the kinks in the cartoons (I haven't been able to do as much life drawing as I'd like to, what with no longer having access to nude models or actual life drawing classes, but excuses are for the weak!) But I will get some examples of life work to show you soon and hopefully from there we can see what needs improving.
None-feminine designs don't bother me, but I do think some of these are borderline Olive Oyl in appearance. Not bad, just a bit disturbing in certain places.
Work in progress. I still need to add highlights to about half the cast but I felt like sharing my progress.
Alright, my new goal is to colour three more pictures before I go back to school on Monday!
It is delicious cake... she must eat it!Other than that waist this is good stuff!
>>29174OM NOM NOMThank you very much.
I only managed to get one more drawing done for today, but it's a doozy...
>>29316CAN'T UNSEE!
>>29303 Gonna need to see them do more things please. I uh... can't form an opinion yet with just this.
>>29436Sorry, just need a quick clarification, Was that a subtle hint for PROMOTIONS? Or a face value request for more varied content/poses?I can do either, but I'd hate to provide you with the wrong one...
>>29441BJ+Facial pic? I can handle that. Gimme a day or two.
>>29449It's your lucky day: This took me much less time than I thought!Sorry if this isn't the best picture ever, I don't usually draw this sort of stuff and am thus a little unexperienced in the drawing of penises and cum
>>29469Thanks, I was originally going to have her saying something snarky, like "Way to aim, William Tell". But then I ran out of room.
>>29437 Well more is always fine but I didn't think I'd get this kind of response...
Another silly sketch
BWOOP BWOOP MORE SKETCHES!
Getting some facial expressions going on
And some doodles of some non-human characters. The slug is the guy from >>28981 without the powered armor.I'm going to try and get something inked and colored in the next week so we'll see how that goes.
Fucking around in illustrator for a class project.I'll probably go back later and add some shading, it's too flat right now...
>>30289Is that sum Nami expy on the left?
>>30309>>30310She is obviously Pepper and Nami's lesbian love child...Why Tony Stark built the technology for same-gender insemination is anyone's guess
>>29437Hey, guess who redid and cleaned up this sketch?Answer: Me, I did
>>30336I even did two different colour schemes for it: Which is better?
>>30337I like this one.
>>30336 >>30337 I can't pick between the two. WHY DO YOU GIVE ME THESE HARD CHOICES?!
>>30342Because life is filled with hard choices; we can't shelter ourselves from these things: We have to dive in and live for the moment!
Still figuring out this vector thing
>>30659>2550x3290y u do dis
>>30665Man, that seemed a lot less massive when I was working on it...Here's a less ridiculously hueg version...
Wait a second, Pepper? IS SHE PEPPER ANN
I know she's supposed to be a freckled as hell ginger, but the thigh dots look like stubble. Or chicken pox.
>>30716Not to me.
>>307160Not really.
Goddamn, I love how stylized your art is.
>>30716Yeah, a few people have said that. I still need to find a good way to properly render the. Maybe if I soften them up a bit...
>>30724Thanks man
>>30715That depends...Is she lame? Is she cool? Is she breaking another rule? Is she anybody's fool?
Bwoop. Work in progress!
Another work in progress I'm doing for my digital illustration class at school. I'm gonna vector this bad mamma jamma up in Coreldraw and colour that mother up.
>>32127 YAY, you're back!
Really like your style TEP, very fluid and dynamic.
>>32128That I am; I've been way too busy with school the past few weeks to actually upload anything; thankfully I've only got one more week left and I'm off for the summer.>>32170Thanks.
>>32127And here's the colourized version. I had to export this as an Illustrator file to get it on my mac, so unfortunately it's lost some of the line width variation I had going with the original
>>32319I just realized I made a horrible, embarrassing mistake on this. See if you can guess what...
>>32396Took me a bit, but the hand is a bit messed up.lol heelleololooert5y
I've gotten rusty, porn helps me rebuild my artistic abilities
And another...
so fucking happy you are drawing tits. those girls look great
Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you: The A-moe-zon.She's sort of part of a group of three, though I've yet to draw any postable images of the other two...
>>32963And here's the other two. Sarcastic Chubby Mage...
>>32970...And Overly-Energetic Skinny Warrior/Knight chick.I have no idea what the hell I'm doing with them. I had an idea for an Erotic/Humour/Fantasy thing, but I have no idea if I'm gonna go through with that. I guess it would be about them wandering around some fantasy setting and having various non-discriminate sex.
And quick size comp
>>32973I like the premise, and I think you made some good characters for it.Only thing that bugs me is the eyes on the muscular girl and that he waist is a tad skinny, but it's not really a make-or-break issue.Look forward to seeing how you develop this.
looking good! about how long do you spend on each of these sketches?
>>33012Probably not as long as I should. I'd say a quick sketch like this would take me about twenty minutes to do, then maybe another five to canonize the lines in pencil.If I were to actually finish those up and make them look presentable it'd be another fifteen to twenty minutes to ink them and probably thirty minutes to an hour to colour.
>>33016 I personally love the rough sketches, to hell with all that overworking!the tits are wonderfulhope to see more soon!
Lesbians...Drawin' me some lesbians...Pose came out kind of meh, but it was a good little exercise in posing two figures together....I need to do some more life drawing...I wish I still had regular life drawing classes as it's getting harder and harder to force myself to draw from life...
I'm trying to redesign ol' Lucy McFatbutt. I was worried the current design for her was a little too bland so I took a page from the Nomura school of character design and added BELTS AND ZIPPAHS!Still undecided on whether I like it or not...
>>33245And I'm vectorizing this thing because...eh, I feel like it, WIP.
>>33248>WIP...And that means...?
>>33269Work in Progress>>33248And here it is with just the flat colours...
>>33270Oh ho, Its looking good. :D
Now with some shading action...
And something resembling the finished product
Crappy porno sketch, I need to work on my penisesWow, never thought I'd be saying that phrase
Also: Slight redesign for Lucy's male counterpart
>>33381I've seen worse. The pic looks good. How about one with Lucy on top?
>>33382And the vectorized/shaded version, I don't like this one as much as Lucy's
>>33384I might be able to do something like that...
>>33387Thanks. If I had to pick something wrong with >>33381it would be Felix's hands, they feel stiff, lifeless. I would imagine they would be more in a caressing position or cupping a breast, something along those lines.
>>33384Got that picture of Lucy on top that you wanted(I can't believe how hard it is to find a reference picture of this position where the dude's face isn't hidden)
>>33426In fact, I did two.
>>33426>>33427Thanks, these look great! Ever considered doing a short comic of Felix and Lucy spending a night together?