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Third Side
The History of Atmos (as far as anyone knows):
Thousands of years ago, a terrible cataclysm struck the peaceful planet of Atmos. Exactly what happened remains unknown, but the result is the same: The destruction of an entire planet, or depending upon who you’re talking to, the creation of a new one. What’s left on Atmos floats around the exposed core of the planet; the chunks that got blasted highest remain habitable bastions of life, veritable heavens on which the richest of citizens could live and coexist in peace. The slums beneath have been ravaged, both by heat of the exposed core, and by bandits and pirates that roam freely in the slums, preying on the poorest and weak and raiding ruins of the civilization that got destroyed hundreds of years before. These floating islands are traversed by any means available.

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A great man stepped up to fill the void of power that had been created, establishing a monarchal rule over the Higher Land, uniting the people under him and creating the heavenly world above that the people would soon begin to cherish. Unfortunately, as powerful men often do, he became drunk on power, beginning late in his rule to withhold resources and enslaving and putting to death those who violated even the smallest of his established laws. Generations later, the original spirit of the monarchy established in a time of crisis has become even further diluted, and the people have become fed up. The citizens have taken up arms and fought back, and the Monarchy has responded ferociously, for hundreds of years neither side has managed to gain the upper hand. Children are being born everyday who will know nothing but planet-wide war until the day they die.

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And then there’s the Third Side.
Fletcher (22): A talented but brash mechanic and pilot, Fletcher’s primary concern during the war is to make as much money as possible. To this end, he has established the Third Side soldier for hire business (much to Max’s chagrin) and is more than willing to accept work from either side of the war. Despite his own wanton destruction of several Resistance bases and the fact that he’s handed over valuable information about the Monarchy to the Resistance, his actions remain invaluable to either side, thus sparing him their wrath when not on a direct mission. In response Chloe’s frequent assertions that he is, “one of the bad guys,” he will not deny that there are times where he is, but instead refer to the numerous times he has helped the “good guys.” Does not feel guilty about his actions during the war.
Fletcher’s Mechanical skill is derived from the many books Max had around the lighthouse on various subjects. Reading being one of his favorite pastimes as a child, Fletcher has a number of bizarre pools of knowledge from which he can draw, including near fluency in German and (Max’s favorite) his considerable cooking ability. His skills as a pilot, however, are self taught, and he is Third Side’s primary pilot, and maintains their only means of transportation around Atmos, the Himmel-Geist, a modified biplane.

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Through his work with Third Side Fletcher has developed considerable hand to hand combat skills, though not as practiced and physically intimidating as his partner Max, Fletcher is a scrapper, relying mostly on his agility, quick wits, and the helping hand of a very large wrench. When forced to use them, Fletcher’s skills with firearms are negligible, though it’s something he’s working on.
His relationship with Chloe is love-hate. Being that she a high-ranking officer in the revolutionary forces, he works against her as often as he does with her. Despite this, there is a clear physical attraction, and no matter who he’s working for, Fletcher always finds time to flirt during their encounters.
Constantly wears aviator goggles, over his eyes when he’s flying or fighting and on his forehead otherwise. Dresses casually in worn ancient clothes stolen from ruins in the slums (so basically, t-shirts, jeans, and maybe a zip-up hoodie or something).

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Maximillian Varmuth V (53): Gentleman, Scholar, skilled practitioner of the Hung Gar style of Kung Fu…
…Walrus in a three piece suit.
Max inherited the picturesque little floating island (including lighthouse) from his father (who in turn, inherited it from his own and so on) and lived there peacefully and intentionally separate from the violent events in the world and larger society until the fateful day Fletcher’s plane came screaming out of the sky. Max, initially irritated by the damage done to the Lighthouse (a giant crater in the side that remains to this day) would find a baby boy crying within the wreckage. With little else to do, Max resigned to raising the boy as his own.
With his own serviceable skills as a mechanic, Max made the initial repairs to the Himmel-Geist and began making trips to the ruins in the Slums and raiding abandoned buildings and houses, stocking the lighthouse with books and other priceless heirlooms to keep himself busy until the day Fletcher would accept his first mission from the Monarchy. Though quite insistent that it was the wrong thing to do, Max accompanied Fletcher on this first mission out of a sense of obligation. He tends to be much harder on himself than Fletcher is, feeling guilty about fighting against the Revolutionary forces at all, he is always advising Fletcher to accept jobs from them rather than the Monarchy, though he rarely listens when money comes into play.

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Max is an intimidating figure, his natural blubber prevents most physical attacks from being very effective against him, and his manner of speech is eloquent and verbose. Competent with a gun and improving. His age is starting to get to him though, in his day he was a spirited adventurer and treasure hunter, these days it seems his main goal is simply to keep Fletcher alive.

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REPOSTAN

Been writing a thing set during a comics/anime/what have you convention.

Basically, take every individual nerds inner fears - what does the opposite sex think of me, will I ever make anything out of myself, what if they find out I'm gay, I'm so alone, I think everything is falling apart, etc, etc - and then give it a Silent Hill sort of personification. The people who become aware of the 'nightmare' side of the con have to band together to keep everyone in the convention consumed by it before the third day - the end of the whole thing, and of everyone there if they don't pull it off - while also battling their own fears and self-destruction, as brought to life by monstrous, surreal versions of the things they love so much.

Think a hulking mass of Liefeld muscle, covered in sweat, lumbering through the flickering halls of an overshadowed convention, having no thoughts beyond ripping your head off and eating your heart.

Or, on the /a/ - or /y/ side of things, really - naked, faceless, beautiful men with feminine frames, similarly desiring your death, and possibly use of your body afterwards.

Currently imagining the main character as a shy, plump black girl, into Pokemon, Spider-Man, and a couple of the more mainstream manga titles, whose own fears are a mess of self-confidence and body image issues, who either essentially has to get confident and self-assured or be devoured by her own terrors.

It's probably a really stupid idea.

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I'm slowly developing a concept for a reverse Kappa Mikey type comic for superheroes.

Heal Rainbow and her team has defeated the Big Bad. The team breaks up, and she becomes the sidekick of Pink Diamond(A Sailor Moon expy but with a Batwoman-like outfit. Because it's fucking classy.), a more-experienced Superhero who also was part of a magical girl team.

They are invited to join the JOI (Justice Organization International. Yes, that's a homage to the JLI and it pronounced "Joy"). JOI has six superheroes so far.

Ka-Boom: Intended to be a Captain Marvel expy but changed from a boy that turns into a man into a man that explodes when he shouts "KA-BOOM!". He can expel ice, lighting, fire, and any liquid from his body as well(Even that, you sickos.).

Ultiman II: The son of Ultiman I, Superman but from a long-dead alien civilization(That he was the prince of) that was put in magical sleep until he woke up in 1917 as a child. Ultiman II and I age slowly. Is actually 56 in human years but appears 28. The leader of JOI.

Hottie Caramel: Cutie Honey. Half-English and Japanese. She wields a sword.

Ravenmaster: Batman WITH RAVENS INSTEAD OF BATS. A wildly successful poet and writer, he bought a company with his money.

Badger: Wolverine but as a badger. Takes Heal Rainbow under his wing.

The Valkyrie: Wonder Woman, with viking women ladies. Picture female Thor and you have her. Has a magic spear and invisible ship that allows her travel anywhere.

The Golden Guardian: Booster Gold. Derp.

And there's a plot about aliens wanting to take over by posing as mob bosses and pissing off the superheroes by making them want to take power.

I forgot to add a few more heroes

Jewelie: A former latino jewel thief from Mexico, she was tracked down by Ravenmaster. When she tripped and fell on an ancient magical bracelet, which bonded to her and gave her a vision of the future if she kept being a jewel thief. It was a terrible future for her ending in her being shot in an alleyway. Jewlie gave up her thieving ways and joined the JOI.

Prismatic Butterfly: A young man who can transform his atoms into photons, in the forms of butterflies. This is because he had a pact with nature spirit, to do good. He can fly in butterfly form, and his weakness is mirrors.

Flash Fire: Flash with fire powers.

As you can see, I haven't developed it much yet.

Please tell me what you guys think! Don't hold back.



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