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hi folks need suggestions for page 2
a couple of things though 1 don't want to go to deep
into Padre Christo's back story but basically God told him to get to die when your work is finished
so we've been around a while think the new Batman and the brave and the bold sort of thing
2Jeanette will definitely have smaller versions of herself for boobs
3I'm trying to do this in a standard comic format
4 would like to mention the sort of world it's in
butt leave things vague for future stories
any constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated
especially with yes yourdialogue