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15510 No.15510
I guess it's a lame title, but whatever. I'm forging ahead with one route from the proposed Transfer Student Genderbend story, and afterwards doing at least two Shirouko routes to make up for betraying the voters. Sorry!
As I said in the Lancelot thread, I'm changing the first names of the ♂→♀ characters. I'll introduce some of them after the prologue. 99% of everything that happened in Fate/Zero happened in this timeline.
This is written in first-person, so if it's too weird after reading the third-person Lancelot story, I apologize in advance. I think that's about all the notes (read: apologies) I need to throw out before I start, so... Here we go!

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No.17366
>>17365
Since Caster died, her seals she had for Lancer ave returned to the Grail.
Koyomi can get them that way, but she has to be chosen by the Grail. Getting the seals is a "miracle".

No.17367
[X] Share the burden.

No.17368
>>17366
Hmm. Yeah, I hadn't thought of that... If I remember correctly, in Fate/Zero, Risei gave out the Command Seals that Kirei had left over from Assassin's defeat.
Medea got her Command Seals through some miracle (figuratively or otherwise), though it'd probably require a trip to the Overseer to redistribute them.

That being said, I don't believe that two Masters can have Command Seals over one Servant (even if the sum-total of Seals is three). I came up with an alternate idea, though. Once I'm done with this next part, you can judge for yourself, I guess. ^^;

No.17369
>>17368
Risei had some from the 3rd War I suppose. Kirei kept his, which he renewed with Gilgamesh.

No.17392
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17392
"I'll go with the second choice," I tell Tohsaka. "I don't know if my magic will be useful enough to end this Grail War, and we need Saber to last as long as she can."
Tohsaka nods. "Alright, then. Saber, you can stay here. You won't have to do anything," she says to the Servant. Saber nods in response. "You two," she looks at us, "Come with me."

Tohsaka leads us to Nadeshiko's room. "Why do we need to be in here?"
"You'll see soon enough, Emiya," Tohsaka replies. The bedding is put away, so there's actually quite a bit of space in here. Pulling out a vial of blood, she dips a finger in it and begins drawing a magic circle on the floor. It's probably going to smell a little in here after this is over with, I imagine. Hopefully it won't be too hard to clean up... "Okay," she says, "there are two parts to this. The first part will be easy for you, but it may take some time. The second part is entirely up to both of you."
"We have to chant a spell simultaneously? Or perform a ritual of some kind?" I ask.
"Damn, stop asking so many questions! Just do what I tell you." With that, she motions for Nadeshiko to sit in the middle of the circle. "The Holy Grail provides you with your Command Seals, but the contract that binds a Servant to a Master imposes the need to use mana to sustain the Servant. The first thing I have to do is alter part of the contract. Saber's not getting any mana from you anyway, so she won't be affected in the slightest. All you have to do is sit there." Tohsaka stands outside of the magic circle and begins chanting a long spell. Altering a magical contract is not something to be done lightly: Not only is it an exceptionally difficult thing to do, but all parties involved in the summoning have to be in agreement about the contract alteration. The 'agreement' part isn't strictly necessary, but cooperation between everyone keeps things from getting violent. For example, a demon would not take kindly to someone changing the terms of his contract to compel him to do something that he or she wasn't summoned to do in the first place.

The chant takes nearly an hour to complete, and Tohsaka has to use up quite a few of her gems to power the spell she's using. Once she finishes the final line, the magic circle begins glowing bright white. In a flash it disappears, leaving no trace that it had ever been drawn. Nadeshiko's Command Seals are glowing, but she doesn't appear to be in pain. Breathing heavily and wiping some sweat from her forehead, Tohsaka tells us, "It looks like I was successful. Right now, your Contract is in a state of flux. When you perform the second half of this little operation with Tsukimiya, your Seals will stop glowing." She turns to me and pulls me aside.
"Is this part of the procedure the reason you were so hesitant to tell us about it?" I whisper.
Tohsaka slightly nods. "For you to provide mana to Saber, you'll have to make a magical connection with Emiya." She blushes a bit and averts her eyes from mine. "It's a Tantric ritual."
..... WHAT? A sexual ritual?! I look at Nadeshiko for a second, then back at Tohsaka. My face already feels like it's on fire. "B-but...!" I barely stutter an objection. I can't do that with her! I... I'm already with Fuji-nee! I don't want to cheat on her! What makes it even worse is that I can't tell Tohsaka that, and I already promised that I'd help... It almost makes me want to cry.
Tohsaka angrily pulls me in closer and grumbles at me, "Don't even try to deny that you have feelings for her. Just do it and get it over with!"
So... so this is what she meant by it being up to us. Dammit...! I swallow hard and glance back at Nadeshiko again. She gives us this adorable, curious look... As much as I don't want to admit it, I like... no... I really do love her. Not so much that I wanted to have an affair with her, but it's not like I have much of a choice now. I offer a sincere mental apology to Fuji-nee.
"... Fine. You don't have to be here for this to work, do you?"
She shakes her head. "Just remember, you have to hit your peaks simultaneously so the connection is formed." After that, she looks at Nadeshiko. "I've told Tsukimiya what to do. The rest is up to you." Tohsaka's fists are clenched and it looks like she's holding something back.
"Thank you, Tohsaka... for everything." Nadeshiko smiles at Tohsaka. The twin-tailed magus doesn't reply, but simply nods and leaves the room.

"So, what do we have to do, Kiyomi-chan?" Nadeshiko asks me.
I'm still blushing furiously, but I try to hide it by walking over to the closet where the bedding is kept. "This second half involves bridging my Magic Circuits to your Command Seal. When we finish, it'll be like Tohsaka said; I'll be giving Saber my mana." Opening the closet and pulling one futon out, I continue, trying to put it delicately... or, perhaps more accurately, trying to be as vague about it as I can. "It requires a very high degree of emotional connectiveness."
"It sounds kinda tough..."
"Once we get into it, hopefully that won't be a problem." I roll out the futon near Nadeshiko and sit down next to her. "Do you remember last week, when I asked for your help?"
She nods to me. "What about it?"
I stare into her eyes and gently hold the side of her face with my right hand. "When I did this... how did it make you feel?"
Nadeshiko's face reddens. She holds my hand with her own and rubs her cheek against them. "Ever since then... I wanted to stay with you. I didn't care how, but... I wanted you by my side, always." My face and my body begin heating up further at that answer.
I nod and place my free hand against her heart. "Do you love me?"
Through my hands, I can feel Nadeshiko's temperature rise. After a couple of seconds, she nods. "W-why are you asking me this now?"
I lean in close to her face. "To form our connection," I tell her softly, "we have to..." I take a breath and steel myself, "...make love and climax at the same time."
"Is that the only reason you asked me that?" Nadeshiko starts turning her head away. I move my left hand from her chest to her face and turn it back towards me. The distance between us is closed, and my lips are gently pressed against hers.
"No," I tell her, and rest my forehead against her's. "I would have preferred asking under better circumstances, though. I hope you can forgive me for that."
"It's okay," she tells me with a small smile. "I was hoping that you might've figured it out on your own." I think back to her invitation to stay here... and to her behavior when we were in the Council room to inspect Ryuudou. Hm...

I lean in again and give her another kiss. I only mean it to be soft, but Nadeshiko wraps her arms around my back and turns it into a passionate one. Not to be outdone, I match her fervor, and pull her body against mine with one arm. Somehow, with this kiss, the tension I was feeling before just vanishes. After we separate, I take the lead and playfully push Nadeshiko down onto the futon.
"You know, I've been wanting revenge for that incident in the Student Council room, now I'll finally get it!" I say teasingly, and begin groping Nadeshiko's breasts over her shirt. "You even called out my sizes!"
Nadeshiko just laughs and moans. "I couldn't help it, you've got a great figure!"
"I'll remember that excuse the next time we go shopping," I retort, and move in to start sucking on the side of her neck.
"A...Ahn~! Not so hard, you'll leave a mark...!"
"Watch me not care!" I mumble. Before long, that spot of her neck becomes discolored, leaving a telltale sign that I'd been there.
"There. I had to walk home in damp underwear that day because of you... now you can walk around with that for a few days...!"
"Wow, you're so vindictive~!" Nadeshiko says with a lilt. "Remind me to never get on your bad side!" She cups one of my tits in her hand. "It felt that good, huh?"
I nod and slide a hand into her pants. She's already sopping down there! "You must be feeling it yourself!" I withdraw my hand and show her the wetness that came from her. "See?"
"You don't have to show me that!" I lick one of my fingers... How interesting, she tastes different from Fuji-nee.
"Here, you taste pretty good!" I tell her and offer her my index finger. She hesitates for a moment, but then takes my finger into her mouth and lightly sucks on it. Just that simple act turns me on even more... I want her, NOW.
Once she's finished cleaning my finger, I strip out of all my clothes. Nadeshiko stares at my body while I'm doing this... it's slightly embarrassing, but it still feels good to be looked at that way. I kneel down next to her waist and, with her assistance, relieve her of her pants and underwear.
"You've got some nice legs... They're wasted on you, wearing nothing but pants and long uniform skirts!" I tell her.
She giggles. "I just never felt comfortable in short skirts."
"Let's see how flexible you are, then..." I lift one of her legs up, and straddle the other, pressing my lower lips against hers. I brace her lifted leg against my chest and start grinding myself against her. "H-how's this? It's like we're kissing down there!"
Nadeshiko replies in moans; apparently it feels as good for her as it does for me! "I.. ah... I've never felt this good... mmm... before...!" She turns sideways slightly to make it easier for me to rub against her and starts pinching her own erect nipples through her shirt. "I want... more...!"
"I'll make you feel... even better, then..." I reach down to her clit and tease it relentlessly. She starts lightly spasming. "A-are you already there...?!"
"K... Kiyomi-chan... It... it feels TOO good... Your body's too hot!"
I hold her leg tightly and continue mashing myself against her. The sensation is incredible... and so is the mess we're making, but I don't care about that right now!
"N-Nadeshiko.... I... I'm...!"
"Kiyomi-chan~~~!" We both arch our backs at the same time and press ourselves against each other so hard that our vulvas almost start to hurt... but in a good way~!
Almost immediately, I feel my mana being drained... and Nadeshiko's Command Seals have stopped glowing! I-I guess it worked... I start to separate myself from her, but...
"I... I'm not finished yet..~!" Wait, what...? She sits up, pushes me down, and starts grinding herself against me. "One more time!"
"W-w-wait a... Aaaah!" I try to protest, but my brain disconnects from the pleasure. She didn't give me any time to recover...!
"I love you, Kiyomi-chan~!" she cries, rubbing herself against me. "I-I can't stop myself!" I breathe heavily, unable to do anything that doesn't involve trying to physically fuse myself to her.
"N... Nadeshiko~! I love you too!" I cry out without thinking. I grit my teeth and grab the covers, I can't take any more! "I... I'm cumming...!"
"Ah-- AHHHH!" We both yell out at the same time and orgasm, causing even more of our love juices to pour out over our legs and flow down onto the futon. Exhausted, I collapse onto my back, struggling to catch my breath. Likewise, Nadeshiko rolls onto her side and tries to recover.

In the far corner of my mind, I think that something's not quite right. Is it just me? I can't tell because I'm so worn out, but I can feel my mana flowing away from me. I groggily pull myself next to Nadeshiko and hug her from behind as I start to lose consciousness. All I know is, it worked... and somewhere in the future, I have some explaining to do to both her and Fuji-nee....

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No.17393
As an afterword to this part: I figured, if Kayneth could mess around with the summoning ritual well enough to split the Mana + Command Seals, that the contract could probably be altered in a similar manner. Contracts are supposed to be inviolate, but, hey... magic isn't an exact science, right?

No.17395
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17395
>>17392

No.17396
>>17395
>reaction image
Is that... bad? >.>;

No.17397
SCISSOR ME TIMBERS!

No.17398
>>17397
Yeah, I figured, "Hey, I'm ripping off enough of the original material, let's have a contrived ero-scene to go along with it!"

No.17399
>>17396
Not in this context.

Seriously though, since it's Shirouko after this, could you just say who Berserker is? Even if just in spoilers?

No.17400
>>17393
I totally forgot about what Kayneth did. Though the ritual would have to be done on summoning the servant, still, this makes sense with what the two had to do. Nice job.

No.17401
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WrlAFmpKPy4&feature=related

The only background music acceptable for this scene.

No.17402
>>17401
Fuck. Yes.

No.17404
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17404
>>17401
Oh you.

No.17405
>>17401
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z86E0rxsONA&feature=related
I prefer this. Actually, this is pretty much the whole route. Except the action scenes. They get this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3w4uPhS_Fq0

No.17407
Another confession that will probably be as facepalm-worthy as my not having read Tsukihime: I also haven't read any parts of Umineko. (I just skip those threads in /jp/. All I know is something about denying witches' existences or something like that)

I'm happy that people come up with non-F/SN music to listen to while reading this, though; I limit myself to that music when writing (so, of course, ♪Pursuing Minds was playing the entire time I wrote that). =)

No.17408
>>17407
That's not nearly as bad as not having read Tsukihime. Personally I haven't read Umineko because I want to do Higurashi first. Thing about Higurashi is how many port and adaptation exclusive arcs there are, ALL OF THEM CANON. Even Daybreak is canon, god damn you Ryukishi.

No.17410
>>17408
It's been partly laziness and partly not liking to read a VN without voice.

No.17411
>>17410
Why would you want to read one WITH a voice? They're long enough as it is.

No.17413
>>17411
It's just what I'm used to. Also, it helps me associate more with the characters than by reading text alone. If they're decently-acted, it can be kinda fun to listen to.

I guess it's not unlike listening to the Fate/Zero Sound Dramas and reading along with parts of Baka-Tsuki's novel translations.

No.17417
>>17413
do the dramas correspond to sections of the novels? I might have to check those out then. anyway, the LAST thing I want to read about in this wonderful thread is seacats...oh god there's enough of that poison on /jp/

No.17419
>>17417
Yeah, they're basically voice-acted lines of dialogue from the novels, with some alterations and additions due to the narrative style of the novels. The characters that overlap with F/SN are voiced by the same VAs as in the anime/Realta Nua/Unlimited Codes.

No.17420
You don't need to read Higurashi for Umineko. They're entirely different. Only thing is that Higurashi is actually just a game between witches from Umineko - but that's not said in the Umineko VN, only hinted at in extra writings.

I gave in to Umineko after seeing it fuckin everywhere. At first, I was so disappointed to how shitty the art is. But I suppose that's why they call it a 'Sound Novel', as it's more for music. But if it's 'Sound' shouldn't they have voices too?!
Anyway, it takes awhile to get into. Bored my eyeballs out until the first murder happens. Then it gets boring again. Then the second murder happens. Then it gets boring again. But after that, it hooks you. At this point I also started believing witches. But you can't! Don't give in!


The music playing while I'm writing is totally random, since I shuffle my music. Funniest I can remember is doing a sex scene to Shining Finger from G Gundam.

No.17421
>>17419
Got a torrent/dl for it?

No.17422
>>17421
The third Sound Drama was released at Comiket 76, so the entire novel series hasn't been voiced yet.... but it's not like Baka-Tsuki's translated the whole thing yet, either. so....

Vol.1: http://isohunt.com/torrent_details/49202944/c74?tab=summary
Vol 2: http://www.hongfire.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107567 (Rapidshares, unfortunately)
Vol 3 can be found on /rs/ (Mediafire, at least, so no annoying waits inbetween parts)

No.17428
>>17420
>Sex scene to Flying the Sky
I'm sure there is a doujin of something like this out there.

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17494
"M..ter. Master...! You need to wake up!"
Still half-asleep, I could swear I hear Saber talking to her Master, but for some reason she's prodding me instead. There's a blanket covering us that wasn't there last night... it feels nice and warm, especially since I'm still holding Nadeshiko.
I vaguely hear a giggle. "I guess she doesn't want to let go."
"If she doesn't get up soon, Taiga and Sakura are going to wonder what's going on."
"Oh Saber, she's just worn out from... er, last night. She's also lost a lot of mana..."
"That may be true, but it would not do to have them see you two like this."
I feel Nadeshiko turn around in my arms. "Saber~, could you hold her nose shut?"
"... Might I ask why?"
"I'm going to wake her up."
I feel pressure on my nose... and seconds later, softer pressure on my lips. Not being able to breathe through my nose, I open my mouth, but I still can't seem to breathe!
"Gyaa-haaa!" My eyes snap open and I pull my head back, taking in huge gasps of air.
"Good morning, Kiyomi-chan!"
"Good morning, Master." Both Nadeshiko and Saber greet me as soon as I think I'll live after my brief bout with oxygen deprivation.
"G'mornin', Nadeshiko, Saber," I say with a terrible slur. I'm still pretty exhausted. I nuzzle Nadeshiko a bit, then look up to see Saber in a different set of casual clothes, and light pouring through the window. "What's today?"
"It's Tuesday, Master."
"I'm not your.... Oh. I guess I am, sorta. Don't call me that."
"I'm only following protocol, Kiyomi," she tells me with her usual slight smile.
What did she say before? It's Tuesday? OH CRAP, we have to get ready for class! "Are Fuji-nee and Matou-san here already?" I smell something cooking. I guess so...
"Sakura is cooking breakfast, and Taiga and Illyasviel are waiting on her to finish."
"I see... wait, Ilya's up too?!" Saber nods in response
Reluctantly, I release Nadeshiko and sit up... Oh. We're still naked... "U-um... Did you put that blanket over us?" Again, Saber nods.
Yawning and stretching, I get up and throw a long shirt on, then grab a uniform. It's bad form to do so in the morning, but I need to bathe quickly. "Tell them I'll be there in a few minutes," I say, and wander off to the bathroom.

"Why didn't you tell me you had such a cute sister, Saber-chan?" Fuji-nee asks her while holding Ilya in her lap. "'Illyasviel von Einsbern'... Are you two royalty or something?"
To help evade the question, I pipe up. "I hope you and Matou-san weren't too worried about us not being here after school yesterday."
"Oh, Saber-chan told us what happened. You were out with Tohsaka-san, right?"
Playing along, I say, "Y-yeah, we had a few things to do. I'm sorry we didn't leave a note."
Fuji-nee shakes her head. "It's okay, just make sure you're being careful out there."
Matou-san and Nadeshiko come out of the kitchen with breakfast. Even though I'm supplying her with mana... a ton of it, no less, Saber eats about as much as she usually does. Something's a bit odd about this mana drain, though. I think a tiny part of it is going someplace else, but with the relatively large amount being used by Saber, I can't tell if it's my imagination or not.
"Y'know," Fuji-nee says after swallowing a mouthful of food, "You've got a lot of girls living with you right now." She points her chopsticks at Nadeshiko. "Maybe Sakura-chan and I should move in too!"
"You practically live here already," Nadeshiko replies, sticking her tongue out. "If Sakura wanted to move in, though, I wouldn't mind it!" She's nice to a fault, no wonder I love her.
Matou-san blushes and looks away, "S-senpai, I couldn't...."

After we finish breakfast, Fuji-nee and Matou-san leave early for campus. Archery practice, I'd imagine. Nadeshiko's getting ready for class, so I chat with Ilya while I'm waiting.
"Whew, they're finally gone," Ilya says, "Now I don't have to act super-nice for a while."
"You did a good job. No one would've believed you were a homicidal Master at some point," I tease her.
"K-Kiyomi! That's kinda mean!"
"I'm just kidding... besides, you didn't actually go through with it."
"Hmph! Things would've been different if that Archer hadn't been summoned!"
Now that she brings it up... the way they talked before they died, it seemed as if Archer and Berserker knew each other at some point. And Archer brought up that "geis" thing. If I remember correctly, that was some kind of curse where a hero would lose their power, or even die, if they violated some oath. I guess it'd be like Saber breaking the laws of chivalry; it was said that Caliburn would be lost to her if she ever did that. There was something I read once, when my parents were still alive, about an Irish spearman who couldn't eat dog meat. He got forced to eat it somehow, and ended up dying not long afterwards. Berserker's geis... Did it have something to do with fighting Archer?

"You cheater," I whisper to Nadeshiko on the way to school. "Using makeup on your neck like that."
"You know Sakura, Hajime, and Fuji-nee would all ask where that mark came from~."
I don't reply to that, mostly because she brought up Fuji-nee. How am I going to explain this situation to her? I mean, it's not as if we have a lot of time to ourselves to begin with, and we have to keep everything about the Grail War secret from her, so I'm lying to her all the time as it is. But then, what would I say? The same goes with Nadeshiko. How would she take it if she knew that I had slept with someone she knew (and considered family, no less), and had done it with her first? If it comes down to it, will I have to pick one over the other? This got too complicated too quickly... Damn, I feel like such a harlot.
"What'cha thinking about?" Nadeshiko asks with a smile that derails my thoughts.
"Oh! Um, n-nothing much. Saber's taking quite a bit of my mana, it's something I'm not used to." Lying again, how pathetic. I can't let this go on, the guilt will eat me alive. "Er... are you doing anything during lunch?"
"Besides eating? No, but Tohsaka might want to talk with us on the roof again."
That's true. At the very least, we owe her our thanks for all the help she's given us. I guess, deep down, she really is nice... as long as you stay on her good side.

We set foot on the campus grounds, and, as usual, we pass into the Blood Fort. This time, though, it feels different. The field seems even stronger than before. Is Rider almost finished setting it up?! This is as good a topic for discussion with Tohsaka as anything.
Before we get to the main building, Fuji-nee walks up to us. "You two didn't happen to see Ayako on the way in, did you?" We both shake our heads. "She was supposed to be here early this morning for practice, but when she didn't show, I called her house. Her parents said that she never came home yesterday!"
"Was she kidnapped?!" Nadeshiko says, really worried.
"I don't know. They've reported it to the police, but..." Those 'gas leak incidents' have quieted down, so that must have been Caster's doing. But Caster never kidnapped people to take their mana (just people to make into her Servants... Damn her!), so could it have been Assassin or Rider? Assassin hasn't so much as shown her creepy skull-masked face since that first night. Rider, on the other hand, might actually need to attack someone to power this Blood Fort. But of all people, why Mitsuzuri-san?

Nadeshiko and I part ways and go to our own classrooms. I spend most of the class time spacing out and doodling nothing in particular. Luckily, I didn't get called upon to answer any questions. Rumors about Mitsuzuri-san spread pretty fast, though. I overhear someone say that the last person who saw her yesterday was Vice-Captain Matou.

Lunchtime arrives soon enough, and I wait outside of Nadeshiko's classroom for a chance to talk with her. I have to make up my mind, though... What should I do once I see her?

[] Discuss the Blood Fort with Tohsaka
[] Investigate Mitsuzuri-san's disappearance
[] Talk about personal matters

No.17499
well to be honest, after the game of love baby, all I want to do is be lazy
...but I guess I'll go ahead and opt for
[X]talk about bloodfort

No.17502
[] Discuss the Blood Fort with Tohsaka

Seems like it's about to go off. Low mana might mean we get taken out by it.

Though Super Saber should be more than good enough to deal with the whole situation on her own.

No.17504
Investigating Ayako will lead to Rider anyway. I don't remember if Ayako dies or not. But, Blood Fort is reaching a critical state. We need to take care of it.

[X] Talk about Blood Fort

No.17509
>>17499
Yeah, I figured that, as tough as it was to get Kiyomi up, that the lyrics sorta-kinda fit that scene well enough to give this part that title. =d

No.17767
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFf

No.17770
Yea, I'm a little disappointed too. Hope you come back lesboss. But thanks for giving us an entertaining run at least.

No.17780
Life's been really hectic this week... for good and for bad. This may be my story thread, but it's not my blog (not that I have one to begin with), so I won't bore people with details (unless they insist). Hopefully things will settle down in the next day or two so I can write the next part.

No.17911
You fell off the front page. That's a first.

No.17920
It's actually the second; the first was before >>17767 was posted.

I'm in the middle of writing the next part, though, so hopefully I'll get it done today and kick-start the story.

No.18066
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18066
>almost 4 weeks since an update

No.18098
YOU GET BACK HERE AND FINISH THIS ROUTE DAMN YOU!

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18108
Wow, it *has* been a while, hasn't it? I'm sorry for the people who had to wait so long for a new part. Between work, class, my car dying, my Airi Dollfie arriving, and other miscellaneous things... well, things have settled down now, somewhat.
________________________________________
Even if Rider was the one who attacked Mitsuzuri-san, asking Vice-Captain Matou
about it might not yield any clues. Besides which, she probably wouldn't give me the time of day anyway. We owe Tohsaka a lot, and she might know a way to hinder this Blood Fort.

"You ARE going to tell me what's bothering you, right?" Nadeshiko asks when we reach the top of the stairs. "I... I don't want you to keep things from me."
I look away from her, towards the door that leads out onto the roof. "I promise, I'll tell you later." I say, giving her a quick peck on the lips. "Now's just not the time for it. C'mon, Tohsaka's waiting for us."

"I'm glad it worked out," Tohsaka tells us, after Nadeshiko shows her the two remaining Command Seals on her hand with a smile. By today, Saber most likely would have disappeared, after all.
I bow my head slightly. She helped Nadeshiko when she first summoned her Servant, she showed us a way to save Saber, and she even sacrificed her Archer for us. No normal Magus would have done such things for potential enemies. "We really can't thank you enough, Tohsaka. We owe you so much, I don't think we could ever repay the debt."
"'No, you never could' is something I'd normally say at a time like this... But this Grail War isn't over yet, we can worry about that later."
"It feels really strange, having so much mana pulled from me. This is only temporary?"
"Yes, I told you, Saber can hold a lot of mana. She's not going to take more than she needs, though, once she's stored some in reserve, it'll revert to the normal amount that a Servant would require."
I nod. "Speaking of Servants, is there anything we can do about this Blood Fort?"
"I'm pretty sure Rider isn't here constantly, so she's probably using magic squares to help maintain it. If we could take those out, the Fort would weaken."
"You mean something like this?" Tohsaka and I walk over to Nadeshiko, who's at the far side of the roof, pointing at something.
"If it was that easy to find them...." Tohsaka stops her comment mid-sentence. It IS a magic square!
"The air feels different around that thing," Nadeshiko says. "We could just find these and destroy them, right?" We actually find a couple more on the roof. Tohsaka destroys them easily, but it only has a small effect on the Blood Fort.
"We'd better stay after class today and wipe out as many of these squares as we can." Nadeshiko says what's on both of our minds.

"I'm afraid I can't allow that," a sultry voice pipes up from the door. No, not from the door, above it. It's Servant Rider!
"W-what are you doing here?!" Nadeshiko yells. Rider doesn't reply at all. Suddenly, the sky turns a horrific shade of red. Dammit, she activated the Blood Fort!
"If you Magi wish to escape with your lives, now would be a good time to do so," she says calmly, then disappears into thin air.
In a panic, we run inside. What we find almost defies description. Students and teachers are on the ground, writhing in pain as they begin to melt. The three of us aren't immune to this magic field; if we don't find a way to shut it off, we'll be melted down with the rest of the student body.
From down the hall, I hear someone yell, "Get off of me, you stupid teacher!" I run in the direction of the voice and see Vice-Captain Matou knock down Fuji-nee... What the hell?! Enraged, I sprint in her direction and leap on top of her. I can hear Tohsaka and Nadeshiko say something, but I completely tune them out, focused solely on Matou.
"T-Tsukimiya, get the hell off of me!" she orders, as if I had no justification for wanting to end her life right now.
"How dare you hit Fujimura-sensei!" I slam her head into the floor, and yell, "Of all the people on campus right now, why aren't you melting? Are you Rider's Master?!"
"K-Kiyomi-chan, Yuriko's not a Magus, she couldn't possibly be...!"
"She's not a Magus, but like Tsukimiya says, she seems unaffected...."
Matou gives me a hauty smile. "So what if I am? You're all Magi, you know that you're supposed to do what it takes to win a Grail War!"
"I may be low on mana, but I have enough in me to fry your ass," I say, wrapping my hands around her throat. "Make Rider shut off the Blood Fort!" Suddenly, Rider materializes and flings a spiked nail at my head. Nadeshiko parries it with a sword, and runs towards the Servant. Tohsaka follows suit.
"Emiya and Tohsaka are no match for Rider. You'd better leave now while you can."
"Maybe they are and maybe they aren't. All that matters is that I can kill you now, and she'll no longer be a problem."
"W-wait..! You're not serious!" I start applying pressure to her throat, and she starts gasping for air.
"You said it yourself, didn't you? Magi are supposed to do what it takes. I made that mistake once already, and someone I loved died because of it. I won't let it happen again!" I put what mana I can into my family crest. Matou looks at my arm in horror, even as she struggles for breath. "Electrocution isn't a fun way to go, you know."
"R-RIDER! Turn it off! NOW! TURN OFF THE BLOOD FORT!" she screams. The air outside returns to normal, and all traces of the magic field have vanished.
"Wise decision. Now give up being Rider's Master!"
"N-No...! I can't do that!"
"Sure you can. Use up your Command Seals." I start choking her again.
"HELP ME! RIDER!!" I'm so focused on strangling Matou that I don't even see Rider leap over the other two Magi. She kicks me off of her Master, and I skid across the ground. Dammit! In a fit of coughing, Matou orders Rider, "Get us out of here, now!"
"Yes, Master," she replies. Rider stabs herself in the neck, and a fountain of blood erupts from the wound... which coalesces into a magic circle of some kind. She's either casting something, or she's got another Noble Phantasm?! If Saber were here, she might be able to stop this! Otherwise, we'll have to jump out of the window... but from the third floor of the building, landing would be a problem!

[] Make Nadeshiko use a Command Seal to summon Saber.
[] Signal Saber without using a Command Seal.
[] Jump out of the window.

No.18110
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>>18108

No.18112
Really glad to see you're still interested in pursuing this lesboss. Good luck with your IRL stuff.

No.18115
Like Kinzo Ushiromiya, WE JUMP OUT OF THE WINDOW!

No, IIRC that doesn't end well. I don't know how we're going to signal Saber, and in time no less. Sooo
[X]Make Shirou use his command seal

No.18116
[X] Make Nadeshiko use a Command Seal to summon Saber.

I don't know if that will even work. Maybe we'll all get Bellerofl'd and die. Dunno~

No.18146
>Jump out of the window.
Sounds action-packed but I don't think any of us know Feather or Float.
>Signal Saber without using a Command Seal.
Saber did say this was possible to do, but without sorcery it would take her a few minutes to get to us.
Which only leaves:
[X] Make Nadeshiko use a Command Seal to summon Saber.

No.18399
God damn it, YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO GO CASTERBOSS ON US!

No.18408
>>18399
Anonymous' way of expressing their love for Lesboss always makes me laugh.

No.18561
COME BACK!

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Your face when you realized this wasn't actually bumped by an update.



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