>>15460
Great, we have two guys that are awesome at fight scenes, h-scenes, and general plotting. And they both say they can't do the everyday scenes.

On the other hand HASSAN KUZUKI TEAM HOLY SHIT. Sunset Heroes can be their theme music.

I'm fine with that, myself.

>>15460
I did have something set for Dark Sakura. No I didn't finish the bit with Ilya. The everyday crap is my problem too.

>>15478
What? I thought you said you HATED Heaven's Feel. Were you doing it for the sake of All the Evils in this World and All That is Good in This Life?

>>15478
It's really your thing, so I won't interfere with Sakura then.

>>15480
I did hate Heaven's Feel. I hated the execution and plot, not the characterization.

>>15488
At least it had the best final boss rush. Other than that and a few bad ends, HF really was the worst route.

>>15490
That's the only true great thing about HF. It's the revealing of Angra Mainyu and you get the epic final battle with Kotomine.
Apart from that, Zouken is a good mastermind villain, True Assassin is awesome, Nine Lives Blade Works is insane, and even greater than that is Dark Saber fight. Overall HF has the best action.

My favorite is still "Well, how about it, King of Heroes? Do you have enough swords to beat me?"

>>15545
Every once in a while, I'll load up my save file just to read that fight. It's good stuff.

I'm posting a genderbent story where you play a transfer student. I posted a link in the Lancelot thread, but I guess it wouldn't hurt to pull in more potential voters, right?
https://plus4chan.org/boards/coc/res/15510.html

And so it dies. Yet another casualty in the never ending /coc/ cycle

>>15641
Actually, the writer is still here. He's stated that he's having trouble with an Ilya scene. For weeks. And now we've got two of them that can't do it.

Dunno what writer has planned.
In my opinion, Illya would be pissed you didn't trust her, resulting in minus Illya points. I'd write something of her just leaving. May result in her attacking that night or something.

But it's not my call. I'm continuing my thread, doing a Caren route now. So I no longer have time to take this up. If he wants I can't help out now and then though.

>>15650
Lily Star writefag here. I'd also be willing to help out, should the request be made.

YES PLEASE! If you, Lesboss, can do the everyday happy interaction scenes, maybe WriteBoss will actually get back to work again!

'Lesboss'? I guess I'd get branded with a name sooner or later, heh...

>>15803>>15825

Lesboss? If you know FSN and feel like doing an Ilya scene, go for it.

>>15872
I'll give it a shot, since I need to wait for more votes in my last story post. (I think I drove some people away by changing Berserker and Lancer, eheh....) I'll tabulate votes and get started on it once I get some sleep.

Amusingly, Lily Star has a Caster Route, too. Of course, that'll be a long time in coming.

Okay, looks like we're taking Caster and Saber with us to see Ilya in the playground. I'll try my best not to mess anything up, continuity-wise.

I don't know how much Ilya would open up with Caster and Saber around (especially with the Kiritsugu/Saber/Ilya/Shirou connections). If I messed anything up, Writeboss can retcon whatever he feels like. And, re-reading this Route makes me realize how horribly formatted Lily Star is. Oh well....
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Caster and Saber were both pretty mad at you yesterday when you went off by yourself, they probably wouldn't go for the idea of shopping by themselves. There's no other choice, then....

"Let's stop here for a bit, there's someone I need to talk with." You walk into the playground and greet Ilya with a smile. "Good morning, Ilya!"

Ilya's expression brightens when you approach her, but when she sees the two Servants with you, her expression saddens and she looks at the ground. "I guess you had to bring Caster with you today, didn't you, Onii-chan? After what I told you yesterday..."

"It's not what you think! We were just here shopping, right, Caster? Saber?"

You turn to the pair to back up your reasoning, but are instead greeted with stares.

Caster berates you, "You were out by yourself yesterday meeting with another Master?! You lied to us!"

"Shirou... You don't trust us at all?" Saber says, holding her stuffed lion tightly and looking at you angrily.

You panic, not wanting another argument like last night. "It's not like that! We ran into each other and I spent some time with her. I mean, if she wanted to kill me, she would've done it already, right?" You don't dare tell them about her plan to get revenge on you for Kiritsugu's betrayal, at least not right now.

Saber and Caster both grudgingly agree with your excuse. You turn back to Ilya, who's moving dirt around with her foot. She looks pretty hurt that you didn't come alone.

"I'm sorry about that, Ilya. Do you want to play for a bit?"

Ilya looks up at you and happily nods. She runs over to a swingset and sits down, and you walk behind her and push her. Caster and Saber watch the two of you having fun, seemingly not caring at all that you're both enemies in a Grail War. You glance at Caster and see that she's smiling warmly at you. Saber doesn't seem to want to trust Ilya at all.

Once Ilya's finished with the swing, the two of you walk back to the bench. You sit down next to Caster, and Caster picks Ilya up and sets her on her lap.

"I cannot say that I approve of interacting this much with another Master," Saber warns. "At least, one we know so little about..."

"Your name's Ilya?" asks Caster, as she wraps her arms around the young girl and pointedly ignores Saber.

"My full name is Ilyasviel von Einzbern, but 'Ilya''s fine." At this, Saber turns and looks at Ilya in surprise.

Caster looks to you. "And Ilya's your little sister?"

It's a little complicated to explain, but you feel that you should at least tell them. You owe them that much. "We're brother and sister, but not blood-related," you tell Caster.

Ilya nods in agreement. Saber stays oddly silent, you wonder why she's acting so strangely.

"So... why is such a cute little girl like you a Master?"

"It's because I'm from the Einzbern family. We have someone fight in every Holy Grail War," Ilya replies matter-of-factly. "We didn't get the Grail last time, but there won't be any mistakes this time. Berserker and I will make sure of that."

You're not sure exactly what you should say. If you bring up the wrong thing, you'd either hurt Ilya or anger Caster and Saber. You're sure you'll find the opportunity to tell them soon.

You and Caster steer the conversation away from the Grail War and have a pleasant casual chat with Ilya. Caster seems to adore the little girl.

The conversation is interrupted when Leysritt and Sella show up. "Wow, time went by a lot faster this time!" Ilya exclaims. She hops off of Caster's lap and motions for you to lean over so she can whisper in your ear. "It doesn't matter what you tell them, you're all going to die anyway." Again, you feel a little dizzy hearing such a cold statement from her.

Ilya runs over to her maids, but she turns and waves. "I'll see you all again soon!"

>>15893
Wow, that was pretty close to what I was thinking, except I would've added Ilya teasing the servants a bit.

and it continues...YAY!

Yay more!

>>15916
Thanks =) I tried to emulate your writing style as best I could, at the very least for the sake of appearances.

>>15893
Holy pants, an update! And a good one!

But, um... what're our choices now? D:

>>16186
I left that to Writeboss to decide. Hopefully, my post will help jumpstart this route.

Needed more little touches like Caster fixing up Ilya's hair, but otherwise awesome.

Also: God damn it WriteBoss your everyday cute scene has been written for you so GET BACK ON THAT HORSE!

>>16403
I was more concerned with keeping up continuity and not botching the characters, but.... yeah, it could've used some extra detail here and there.

Caster does not approve of the next part of her route taking so long!

I'm just going to go ahead and say RAGE THREAD.

>taking so long because you couldn't write a scene
>the scene is written for you and you still do nothing

>>16831
Now, now... Maybe Writeboss got sick or something. Maybe he got a really bad case of writer's block. I mean, I'm as guilty as the next person about wanting another part written, but posting ragefaces won't make him write any faster.

>>16835
Hes a fucking faggot, thats what. He can go back to browsing /jp/ and posting his sugoku kawaii idols with the rest of the scum, that fuck.

>>16932
NOT HELPING. Guys, we need to remain calm. He was providing this for us out of the goodness of his heart. We don't know his circumstances, so let's not get angry. Besides, we've still got Yuri Routes, Lancelot Routes, and if he ever delivers his promises of Killer7 homages, Lancer Route while we wait for Writebro's hopefull return.

I saw this at the top of /coc/ and got excited for NOTHING.
Sigh. Still >>16933 and >>16835 are right. I'm sure he'll come back...One day...Right after the full version Katawa Shoujo comes out.

>>16935
>Right after the full version Katawa Shoujo comes out.
But not before DNF release.

You know, maybe we should send an expedition back to /jp/, see if he's even still alive.

>>17403
It'll just get reported immediately.

>>17406
We could disguise it as an image dump.

I think that was tried once... I can't remember if the janitor deleted the thread or not, though.

WriteBoss was pretty much only doing this out of boredom, and has most likely moved on. Perhaps advertise on /jp/, and maybe even /a/, for a potential new writer?

Well...

It could be possible that, if !!EwMTD0AmVj-boss and I get done with our own routes Hahahahahah...., we could collaborate on this one. But, well, yeah. I have a bare minimum of three routes to finish writing, and he keeps coming up with new ones to do. =d

Well, it was fun while it lasted. I'm out.

Long-Term Projects Official Stamp of Denial. Its done.

>>17951

We've still got another Writbro working away. THIS IS NOT OVER!

>That was my story. After it left 4chan I started losing motivation and the plot got kind of fucked.
From the man himself in a /jp/ thread.

We need to haul him and Lesboss back to finish their stories, goddamnit!

>>13431
I take it there's no reup of what was here?