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81803 No.81803
Somebody needs to order this shit and scan it.

I'll do it if no one else wants to.

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No.82960
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82960
This feels like a joke that was made months ago...wait.

No.82961
>>82957
They could've made a totally in-character blind joke if they cut it off with the first bubble. But no, they had to ram it on home.

No.82962
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82962
I'm pretty sure non-Fantasy-Koreans were miffed about that one, too.

No.82963
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82963
A few more proportion things in this one, I wonder if they did these kinda quick to fill the book.

No.82965
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82965
Amusing, if a bit out of character for Zuko.

No.82967
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82967
I actually kinda liked the joke about the title.

No.82968
>>82961
That's a definite trend in this. The dialogue doesn't know the meaning of subtlety it seems.

No.82969
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82969
Ramming home the Twilight jokes.

No.82970
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82970
Okay, Suki is *not* Tsundere, and she didn't give a damn that Sokka was with Yue. She seemed to already know about it, and was only amused that he kissed her. She only got pissed when he started acting dumb.

Maybe it's because my comic stars her, and I'd thought about her character a bit, but I was a little miffed at this one.

No.82971
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82971
Thanks for uploading

No.82973
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82973
More Twilight jokes.

No.82974
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82974
Personally, I thought he looked like a wizard.

No.82977
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82977
Technically, it's an amusing coincidence, isn't it?

Irony is very specific. I'm not even sure it's ironic that most things people think is ironic isn't.

No.82978
This is terrible

No.82979
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82979
This is one of those times where it would have probably been better for them to actually watch the movie. They could have used specific examples.

Is the theater empty, or is nobody complaining about Toph laughing so loudly?

No.82980
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82980
It feels like this thing is gonna start preaching Zutara at any moment. That's how shitty it is.

No.82981
It's like, reading various comments from people raging about the movie on /co/
but now there is art around it

No.82982
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82982
Page 20 was just a blank, black page.

Again, amusing, but out of character for Zuko. Wouldn't this have been better served by Sokka saying this and Katara hitting him? It's treating Zuko like Sokka and Suki like Naru Narusegawa.

No.82983
>>82982
Wait a minute...
>>82965
THAT'S THE SAME GODDAMN PICTURE

No.82984
>>82982
>Wouldn't this have been better served by Sokka saying this and Katara hitting him?
Somebody start shoopin'.

No.82985
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82985
You guys are being too harsh I think it's a great book

No.82986
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82986
Nice rendition of the finale kiss, I suppose, but the height is off.

Also, that "the end" shit earlier? They weren't kidding that was the whole comic.

If they make a sequel/expansion comic where they react to specific shit that *happened* in the movie, that's the comic this one should have been.

No filler with complaints over the production, not until the end at least, no little edits of later panels to be used as omake/one-shot gags being the only thing on a whole page. I wanted a narrative, damn it!

No.82987
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82987
Oh goody, extras, with 7 pages left in the book.

No.82988
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82988
Isn't this joke kinda specific to those A:tLA Deleted Scene joke videos on YouTube, or GanXinba's Abridged Series? This doesn't really gel with people unfamiliar with either, and kinda goes against the five or so pages of them using the characters themselves as examples of Asian people.

No.82989
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82989
This was kinda cool...but it wasn't done by anybody on the comic's creative team, I don't think, so I'm not sure how to feel about that.

No.82990
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82990
This was kinda amusing, too, I suppose.

No.82992
>>82985
Eh, ok, not great. I think everyone was expecting a little too much.

I'm just glad I was lazy and didn't order it.

No.82993
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82993
Twilight joke, again.

Why does this one feel...Zutaran, somehow?

Also, Zuko seems to have stolen Dante Basco's nose.

No.82994
>>82993
>Zutarian
Just because they're close? Chillax.

No.82995
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82995
Ending words.

I feel kinda bad about the "Dante Basco's nose" joke, now. I like the guy more than that, and he was once told when he was young that he should get a nosejob to help get him roles.

No.82997
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82997
I actually like this sketch of Yue.

No.82998
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82998
It's over! </StrongBad>

No.82999
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82999
So yeah, ending thoughts?

Not really worth the money, not all of it, I don't think. And it's kinda skeevy that they sold a parody fancomic for roughly the same price as a retail one. I don't mind supporting these guys, they responded to my e-mails any time I had a question. I even still feel kinda bad uploading this before the con they're gonna sell this at, but I kinda wanted more out of this thing for the 14 bucks it took to get it to me.

No.83000
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83000
>>82992

I don't know about you but I thought it looked great!

No.83002
>>82994

I don't know, just the fact that it was Zuko and Katara, and she's in her Fire Nation outfit and stuff. I mean, why not Mai? But it's just a small feeling, I don't give it any serious thought.

No.83003
...That was pretty bad. I mean, I've seen some pretty shit doujinshis in my time, but this is pretty bad. Jokes and writing are trite, art is typical weeaboo shit that ranges from mediocre to okay, and it just feels dated because, well, like someone said before, people made all these jokes months ago.

Thanks for taking the time and money to upload this, though. I kinda wish I could donate some money to you to make up for the money you had to pay to buy this thing. Oi.

No.83042
Thanks for the upload, Shark. Now that I've read it, I'm glad I didn't buy this thing. It feels so bipolar too, ripping on the movie, yet still wanting to see it, and being annoyed at the casting decisions, yet still trying to distance themselves from the racebending protesters and acting like it's not that big a deal. Very mixed signals there. I think it would have helped if they actually waited to download watch the movie, or at least clips of it, before making this. And may I add that the OOC scene with Sokka and Suki was very unpleasant, and I caught kind of a Zutara vibe as well. Maybe it's because they have Katara acting the same way to Zuko as OOC!Suki did to Sokka.

Overall I'd give it 2/5 or something like that. You can tell they put some effort into it and it's kind of amusing, but other than that, not really worth it. Certainly not worth paying for, so thanks again for uploading.

No.83055
Damn, you guys are really tough customers. As someone who did a lot of doujin work before going full-time into my own comic projects, I think this took quite a significant effort to put together, and the art is definitely above-average for what you normally find in doujins.

I agree the jokes are a bit repetitive, and not that funny. I'm also a little disappointed by the lack of Mai (as someone previously pointed out), seeing as they DID include Suki. I'm not sure if this is related to a Zutarian affiliation or not, but... in Mai's words, "whatever. "

14 bucks *IS* really steep. That's twice as much as I would have charged. Very few people will buy a thin, black and white book for that price. Even in color, this shouldn't have been more than 10 dollars.

I'm not referring to the effort put into the artwork, but just realistically speaking, hardly anyone is going to buy it at that price if it's not an official product.

Overall, I think this was a decent doujin, if very overpriced. And for a first collaboration, it's well-organized. I'm looking forward to seeing improvements (and affordable prices) on their next works.

No.83092
>>83000
I don't know what you're--

OH FUCK I'M SO SLOW.

No.83095
That was pretty good, I really enjoyed it.

too short though.

No.83118
>>83055

To be fair, it was 10 bucks, plus 4 bucks shipping, but still.

The artwork *is* pretty nice, I'll say that, the issues with proportions that I complained about were more with just an occasional issue with the one-shots pages. But still, I take issue with the writing and the content, considering the price and the fact that it's in greyscale (though the artist does know their way around a 3 or 4 tone system, it's something I've tried to use on occasion, with little success.)

It's just very short. I think it could have been better served just uploading everything to a DeviantArt account and leaving it at that. So sue me, but I think a short little black and white comic like this one, no matter how well put together, just isn't worth ten whole bucks plus shipping. Maybe just ten bucks.

Another example, though, I was at an anime con just this past weekend, or rather the one before, and Antarctic Press was there, and they had some Gold Digger fan special full of fan-made comics, and I do gotta agree, the artwork and writing in this one was leagues better than anything in that piece of crap.

(Also, the Zutaran thing was just limited to that one guest pic, I didn't really feel like it spread to the rest of the book. Still, both that one little side joke of Zuko claiming he's badass and the last page just felt like Sokka, not Zuko.)

Eh, I'm a picky customer, what can I say?

No.83153
>>83118
It's the shipping that stopped me from getting it. I was thinking "this sounds cute, I can pop down 10 bu... damn, things cost money to ship" and that was the end of it. Since I'm working on 2 projects I'd love to get published, I respect them for getting something like this done, even if it is really short. If I saw it at a con (thus not needing to pay for shipping) I'd probably pick it up to support them (and that Yue sketch is pretty rockin'). Out of character crazy is par for course for this sorta thing (at least that's how I justify my Eva parodies...). Though, like many of the hilarious strips in the movie thread prove, they'll have A LOT more material to work with if they had seen the movie, but I can see needing to get this done on a deadline, and making that impossible.

A nice first effort, here's hoping they don't get too full of themselves or give up heart. There is potential here if they have the drive to keep at it.

No.83222
Welp, that was really disappointing and I'm glad I know not to spend 10 dollars on it now.

Also, wow, check out that wildly off-model Mai. How hard would it have been to do a quick Google image search to double check her outfit? Fuck.

No.83241
What's with the tsundere bullshit? It's like they thought it was great comedy or something.

No.83287
>>82988
Oh this beats it to me. They talk about the "irony" of culturally cuestionable decisions, then proceed to butcher a language spoken in about 30 countries.
Come on people, Spanish is not that hard.

No.83307
>>83287

To be fair to them, again, it's a running gag in certain parts of the Avatar fandom, and this one was done by a guest artist.

No.83310
>>83287

THANK YOU!

Or, in other words ¡Gracias!

No.83312
Thank you for posting this anon. I was curious about it, but reffused the idea of giving them my money (mainly because I don't believe in paying for fanart). Now I can see I made the right call in saving my money, which will be saved and then spent in original AVATAR merch.

No.83313
>>83312

Anon?

No.83316
>>83313

excuse me, I didn't read your name *used to everybody being anon*

/noob

accept my most sincere apologies ; ^;
*is extremly embarrassed*



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