>>65393
forgot to say, the "upgrade folder" is just a test code area for the site. so for Superego with left/right arrow key navigation, you'd go to http://mspfanventures.com/Upgrade/?adv=275

to make this thread more relevant, I just updated. fun times ahead.

Aww, poor Juliet.

Where did you get the idea for all these radically different personalities?

>>65412
They're already well-defined elsewhere, if you know where to look . . .

>>65412
>>65413
hint: the numbers are the key to everything

>>65419
てめえ言うの半分が分かれても、でたらめだった。

So, are the numbers like
how many friends they had/have or something?

>>65439
but then all their numbers would be zero!

Grey - 0
Sam - 0
Percy - 4
Helen - 6
Louis - 7
Juliet - 22
Ava - 50
RICK L. WORTH - 81
Cherry - 82
Quin - 83


I would think that the digits might correspond to their personalities or problems that got them locked in here in the first place. Cherry, Quin and Rick are all 8s because all of them feel powerless and show signs of depression, while the second digit is a modifier. Like an enneagram type thing. If this was on the mark though I'd have expected Quin and Sam to share a 3, ava sharing a 0 with Grey and Sam is weird, and Juliet having two 2s doesn't make a lot of sense. So I dunno. I can't figure out the pattern. :(

In any case, though, I'm fairly certain the numbers are linked to personality/issues/personality issues and that you're not supposed to read the multiple digit ones as full numbers but as two separate numbers.

Considering how each character has some obvious foibles, I'm wondering what it says about me that I find Ava the least unusual of the bunch.

Oh man. I love Superego!

how is Cherry so adorable? I just want to wrap her in my arms and tell her everything's going to be alright.

>>65746
so you dig vulnerable and insecure women, eh?

>>65747
yes, they brighten up so much when I show them how good life can be. But also I can be kind of a compulsive caregiver. So they set that off too.
More cherry! anyone got fanart of her?

>>65944
I save all of my fanart! most of these guys have tumblrs so I'll link you back to them too. here are my favorites.

http://diddgery.tumblr.com/

>>65945

http://docilepoltergeist.tumblr.com/

>>65946

another one by her.

>>65947

http://princeofgeese.tumblr.com/

>>65948

http://therobins.tumblr.com/

>>65949

http://ribsgrowback.tumblr.com/

>>65950

another one by him.

>>65951

aaand last but certainly not least.

http://yessu.tumblr.com/

>>65952
Now I have to know. Which is least? Are you going by filesize or pixels or what?

>>65953

I was just poking around my fanart folder. don't have to overthink it.

>>65945
>>65946
>>65947
>>65948
>>65949
>>65951
>>65952
Nice. Thank you, that was coo-
>>65950
HNNNNNNNNNG

Ava was my favorite long before this page.
But this one certainly reinforced that.

>>66075
I'm still laughing over this.

what have I done.

>>66092
Something wonderful, that's what.

I don't know, guys. The setup is good and the hospital is properly creepy, but the characters feel so wooden.
Sage for hate

>>66218
well, got some tips?

>>66219
I have no idea how to give you advice to make the characters sound more lifelike, but it seems like there's a disconnect between the things they do and the things that happen.
Louis (Red Dude) is the first thing coming to mind; he knocked over Juliet's paint cans, because he thought she was crazy. Or maybe he thought she was immature? Or willfully naive? I have no idea why he did it. I understand that he's supposed to be a petty, arrogant prick, but it makes no sense in a consistent personality. Did he think to himself 'Hmm, this paint seems to be important to her. You know what the worst thing I could do would be?' (twirls mustache)
Or Rick.
I don't understand Rick
I know he's supposed to be so desperate for attention that he'll do everything to get it, but he doesn't sound like a full-grown man who's had to deal with the consequences of his personality.

>>66218
>>66227
See now, I have a hard time wrapping my head around your viewpoint, because to me, these are some incredibly lifelike characters. We know very little about the cast of Superego, yet to me they're superbly dynamic and fleshed-out. I'm not trying to knock-down any suggestions for improvement or what have you, my mind is simply struggling to comprehend why you think as you do.

>>66227
Louis likes dicking around with other people for fun, yes. He gets bored easily and thus likes getting a rise out of people to waste some time. I will admit he seems pretty cliche right now, but we'll go more into him later. I promise! I'm really excited, actually.

You could compare Rick to a scared teenager in an adult's body, but if you don't like that, then that's okay.

I'll do my best for the future.

So is there actually a forum adventure general thread

If not, would someone care to start one

>>66817
there was one a while back, but it's probably buried or deleted now. wouldn't mind a new one being made!

Are there any more fan adventures that are going on?

>>69894
Well, there's Prequel. It's pretty fantastic, especially if you're an Elder Scrolls fan.
http://www.prequeladventure.com/

What was the name of the SBurb game played by these cute little bug guys who always took notes?

>>69914
Nestbound, I believe.

I once read this cute little story with these cute little aliens long ago.
I forget the name but yeah, it was totally adorable.

>>70425
>your
saged reported hidden called the cops

>>70439
I get that you are trying to joke or something but jesus man, that isn't even funny. Not even in the ballpark of pitty laughter.

Hey Jovian, are you stiil there? I really enjoy your comic, I think it's great, man.

Please don't give up on it. I love this comic, and I love the interactions that all the characters have with each other! I would gladly donate to this to support.

Please continue, I love this thing.

>>72027
I am not Jovian, but it's totally alive and ongoing! Just updated the other day, I think. The link is in the first post of this thread if you're not sure where to check.

>>72030
I found out about Supergo from this very thread!

Also Waterworks too

Is this where the fan adventures go or just for Superego?

>>72190
Sure, I don't think it matters.

>>72027
aaahh...I just checked up on this thread in a long while. I thought it died. thank you, anon! life's been busy for me and it's been hard for me to update due to various stress factors, but thank you very much. I really appreciate it. I want to get to the end of chapter 3, then I'll take an extended hiatus to gather my bearings and have a break.

>>72296
Hey Jovian, keep up the good work, man. Don't stress to much and burn out. Burning out is the number 1 leading cause of a web comic's death. Take it slow and easy. I've enjoyed it so far and I don't mind waiting.

Hope everything in your life turns well.

Are there any other good stories like this going on?