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39619 No. 39619
Because the last one is auto-saging, I had no idea there were that many trolls. So uh... Posting the coolest trolls I think.
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>> No. 39622
>Fantrolls
>Cool

HA
>> No. 39627
I never had any fantroll ideas, but a trip to the zoo today made me realize that I had been approaching it from the wrong direction: you have to make a fan lusus, then make a troll kid to be its ward.

So now I have a giant crocodile/axolotl with a fussy seatroll living in its accommodating guts. He acts like a little cleaner shrimp for his voracious swamp-dwelling parent/home.

I also like the idea of a troll whose hive is built around his hermit crab lusus, and he's become even better at architecture than other trolls because he has to make a new one every time the crab gets bigger.
>> No. 39628
>>39627

see now that's clever!
>> No. 39629
>>39627
I never thought that the lusus was all that important to be honest. I mean so long as it fit's your troll's theme than that is all that matters.
>> No. 39630
>>39629
That's because you're not a biology nerd.

I forgot to mention the kismeses whose lusii are in a symbiotic relationship (like http://www.wetwebmedia.com/shrimpgobies.htm but maybe on land). It's a harrowing experience for everyone involved.
>> No. 39650
I find the hardest part of making a fan troll is making a name that has meaning and sounds good, instead of being six letters strewn together. I've currently been working on an idea and found some things that might make a good name, with tweaking.
>> No. 39660
>>39627
>axolotl
That wouldn't be that one fish that raises his young in his mouth would it?
>> No. 39662
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>>39660
They're a kind of salamander that don't lose their gills when they age.

The fingery sort of face fins people draw the seadwellers with were inspired by the axolotl's, incidentally.
>> No. 39671
>>39660
No, but mother gators (and maybe crocs, my memory's a little fuzzy on the subject) carry their babies in their mouths after they've hatched.

I'm toying with the idea of allocating the cleaning duties to an avian lusus and its lowblood kid, thus facilitating some class-conflict-based drama and/or humor. The problem is that the seadweller's so finicky in my mind that I can't imagine him leaving filth around to be cleaned by anyone else. But I do like the image of a man-sized bird carrying its grumpy adopted son to work in the mouth of a giant monster every day.
>> No. 39684
>>39671
Well if you have someone you rp with alot or trust or something you could have someone play birdy-troll; just say that the troll's lusus should be an egret. The sea troll manages the insides and the birdtroll manages the insides, and his hive is something like a castle with a bubble, so that way he doesn't drown when crocmom dives?

I dunno where I'm going with this. Sorry. Still new to this troll making thing.
>> No. 39694
This might be pretty stupid to ask, but are there any artists out there looking for a fan Sgrub story to draw for?
>> No. 39700
>>39694
>Wah! Wah! Please draw my mary sue, because I can't draw at all.
>> No. 39706
>>39700
Don't be a dick.
>> No. 39733
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39733
why can't I hold all these fantrolls

why you do me like this homestuck

I used to be ~*respectable*~
>> No. 39776
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>>39660
That would be something called an Arowana (pronounced like pot).
They do not only keep their young in their mouths (a behavour not unknown in fish) but jump straight up into the air to grab bugs and birds. You find the creatures in both South America and Australia.

Also, you can keep them as pets.

Pic related.
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>> No. 39779
>>39733
Are those freckles? 'Cause they look pretty cool. I like your troll.
>> No. 39781
I suspect that the problem with most fantrolls is that they aren't based around annoying "Internet Person" archetypes like the original trolls were. I'd love to see a paranoid conspiracy theorist, or a self-absorbed webcomic artist who refuses to acknowledge criticism, or someone who creates multiple accounts to back up their arguments. Knowing trolls, that last one would probably have actual split personalities.
>> No. 39813
>>39781
>paranoid conspiracy theorist
>self-absorbed webcomic artist who refuses to acknowledge criticism
>someone who creates multiple accounts to back up their arguments

I smell a sitcom...
>> No. 39815
>>39781
>self-absorbed webcomic artist who refuses to acknowledge criticism
"Mookie Deegan" would be a valid Troll name...
>> No. 39816
>>39815
So is "Andrew Hussie."
>> No. 39817
>>39781
Well I was thinking of making a fan-troll who was for the most part an unrepentant jackass to everyone. Obsessed with video games and winning, roleplays/FLARPS and is a That Guy, skilled hacker and generally narcissistic.

But then my friend said I was making Vriska, so I kinda stopped making him.
>> No. 39934
http://lychii.deviantart.com/art/homestruck-ocs-209930110?q=sort%3Atime%20homestuck&qo=174
I can't tell precisely how much of this is sarcasm. It's like blatant sarcasm but with some sincerity peeking through.
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>> No. 40746
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One of the artists I watch on DA draws these two a bit.
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>> No. 40748
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>> No. 40770
>>40746
Wait what artist

THIS STYLE SEEMS FAMILIAR
>> No. 40771
>>40770
thats because it is
Scott Pilgrim if you didn't already guess.
>> No. 40779
>>39781
I tried to do this once, I have a guy who speaks like a 12 year old using chatspeak for the first time and a deviantart-esque drama llama. it's fun.

it's also kinda hard though since the original trolls already have claims to camel caps, leetspeak, etc. a bit harder to find believable alternatives.
>> No. 40794
>>40771
Are you saying these are SCOTT PILGRIM'S FAN TROLLS?!?!?!
>> No. 40833
>>40794
no
the artists style is permanently in that style, forever
see for your self
http://haikuninja.deviantart.com/

>> No. 41229
>>40746
I remember the pink blooded troll. I dislike her.
>> No. 42019
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42019
Hey Homo$uck$,

My name is Auram, and I hate every $ingle one of you. All of you are fat, $tupid, no-life$ who $pend every $econd of their day looking at $tupid a$$ picture$. You are everything bad in the world. Hone$tly, have any of you ever gotten any pail? I mean, I gue$$ it’s fun making fun of people because of your own in$ecuritie$, but you all take to a whole new level. Thi$ is even wor$e than jerking off to picture$ on facebook.

Don’t be a $tranger. Ju$t hit me with your best $hot. I’m pretty much perfect. I was captain of the football team, and $tarter on my ba$ketball team. What $port$ do you play, other than “jack off to $hitty drawn human$ and pail$”? I also get $traight A’$, and have a banging hot girlfriend ($he ju$t blew me; $hit was $O ca$h). You are all homo$ who $hould just die. Thank$ for li$tening.

Pic Related: It’$ me and my bitch

(hey diqwad get your hands off me)
>> No. 42020
i was told u quit internet junk

was i lied to
>> No. 42021
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>>42019

:3c Thanks Junk.

Also I did this a few days ago.
>> No. 42023
>>42020

I didn't quit the internet. I'm just limiting how much time I spend on it. Sorry to disappoint.
>> No. 42025
>>42023
its not a disappoint :[ im glad :]
>> No. 42041
>>42021

Dem's some big titties.
>> No. 42693
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42693
Does this guy look too animu?
>> No. 42757
>>42693

People with scarfs always look animu. Or like a wwizard.
>> No. 42794
>>42019
Like him (finally a troll who's actually a troll!), hate her (pink=seatroll!)
>> No. 42799
>>42794
You're not from around here, aren't you?
>> No. 42800
>>42799
He does have a point. Pink blood would have to be either really high or really low on the hemospectrum.
>> No. 42801
>>42794

uh sorry to bust some bubbles but junk's troll is the canon high empress
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42802
what kinda NERD has a fantroll anyway HEH
>> No. 42808
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42808
Enough complaining about other people's trolls, here's one of my own!
Siebe from my fanfic My Motherfucking Best Friend (http://archiveofourown.org/works/209607/chapters/313481)

I don't like the pierced fins. I wrote her as wearing earrings but that doesn't quite work on a seatroll.
>> No. 42810
>>42808
That fanfic was horrible. You should be ashamed.
>> No. 42817
Huh. I've gotten a lot of compliments for it. i never expected anyone would hate it. What didn't you like about it? (don't say everything)
>> No. 42822
Wow that was awful, I can't take 8 chapters of this bullshit.
>> No. 42823
> homesmut kink meme:

Stopped reading there.
>> No. 42825
>>42817
I'm not that person, but it could be the hamfisted, flimsy setup for a masturbation fantasy, the awkward stilted prose, the forced pathos or the total lack of any recognizable characterization for the canon characters.
>> No. 42826
>>42808

People on the kink meme are ridiculously polite enablers. No one ever comments negatively there, so if that's where you got your praise, it's no wonder. Archiveofourown isn't much better in that regard.
>> No. 42827
>>42826
The kink meme people are just happy to see their prompts filled.

I put an idea on there once and the fill totally sucked but I liked it anyway because someone took the time to write it for me. Even though I could have done way, way better.
>> No. 42831
>>42826

that's because ~kink is sacred~, dontchanno
>> No. 42838
>>42808

how old are you
how much research did you do about drugs
do you understand how needy relationships work
why

these are all important questions
>> No. 42876
>>42838
I am 25.
I did some research on Erowid.
I've never been in a needy relationship, but I've see people who have, like my sister and her former friend.
How can it be a dumb setup for sex when there's barely any sex (on-screen)?
Who is acting out of character?
I think unregistered people can post comments on AO3, so please do that, especially if you think people are too nice there.
>> No. 42877
oh, and why? because I thought it kind of worked that Gamzee would become incredibly needy. He's a big people pleaser (possibly even his sober self is that way, just in an incredible twisted way), but he's lives alone without a lusus' affection.

I assume some people here have problems with the way I depict drugs. When I tried to come up with possible criticisms, I thought of that. Sopor slime has been shown to be not a marijuana-like drug but something dangerous. Since the approved use of sopor slime is as a topical sedative, it makes sense for it to act like an opioid. Plus, it's fictional, people, I can make up what I want!
>> No. 42879
>>42808
oh lord i read the whole thing

at the very least, get a beta reader
>> No. 42886
>>42879
Yes, I grant that's right. My prose is a bit silted, and I really need to read it over at least one before posting. I don't see the writing as hamfisted or bathos-filled but rather understated. Maybe I could tune it down a little, but I don't see how. If you hate the premise itself, there's not much I can do about that.
But I just can't get the OOC complaint. Is it Gamzee? It's Gamzee, isn't it? I already explained why he became that way.
>> No. 42898
>>42876
>>42877
>>42886
:V
>> No. 42905
Okay, read the whole thing out loud and made some little grammatical changes. Let's stop this derail. If you have any more complaints, go to AO3.
>> No. 42906
>>42876

i am doubting every answer you gave me

that said that's not gamzee. you managed to make gamzee even more one dimensional and as some sort of cardboard cutout that is stoned and says motherfucker and that's the extent of his personality except when he needs to suddenly be unrealistically needy.
>> No. 42908
>>42906
Look, I'm not ever going to get your criticism because I'm stupid or something. I'm not going to argue about the age thing, cause there's no way to prove that. This is a derail. My fanfic isn't even about OCs.
>> No. 42909
http://meathand.4rumer.net/t23-my-motherfucking-best-oh-wait-no-one-goes-here#168
>> No. 42910
>>42908
It might as well be! Change the names and NO ONE COULD TELL
>> No. 42911
>>42908

You are the reason this fandom is terrible, do you know that?

You're acting like you're 13, which is a billion times worse than actually being one if you really are as old as you say you are.

Stop with the passive-aggressive bullshit and grow up.
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>>42908

then why did you post it in the oc thread

whats going on
>> No. 42915
Okay, if the mod says it's okay, we can continue talking about my fanfic in this thread. I'm sorry I got a little angry. I actually do want to talk about my fanfic and I'm glad to hear criticism. I would love it if someone went over the story line by line, though I don't think anyone here is offering to do that.
So, how would you say Karkat and Gamzee are suppose to act? (or Aradia or Sollux? Are they OOC too?)
>> No. 42924
... oh my god you don't even get it

YOU ARE THE ONLY PERSON WHO WANTS TO TALK ABOUT YOUR TERRIBLE FANFICTION, OKAY

STOP BRINGING IT UP FUCKING EVERYWHERE, ALL THE TIME
>> No. 42925
>>42915
Umm how about let's not and we can continue talking about OCs??

I DON'T REALLY HAVE ANY OF MY OWN AND GENERALLY I STAY OUT OF THIS ARENA BUT I SEE THESE TWO CHARACTERS ON MY TUMBLR DASH SOMETIMES AND THEY'RE FUCKING ADORABLE SO I'M GOING TO POST A PICTURE OF THEM TO GET BACK ON TRACK OK.

They are Qeti and Magellan's by the way.
>> No. 42926
>>42915
what the fuck is wroooong with youuuuuu
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>>42925
WHOOPS I FORGOT TO POST THE PICTURE
>> No. 42929
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Crazy-c-crazy's troll

http://crazy-c-crazy.tumblr.com/post/6510861547/this-is-stupid-junt-fan-troll-jizzing-over

Does anyone have a picture of that former child actress fantroll?
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>>42927
I also had this picture saved. I'm not gonna imagedump, I just have two of them. This little group of artists (is this an roleplay group?? I don't know if it's a roleplay) has cute trolls and I like them even though I don't really understand what is going on at all.

But the point is please go away no one wants to hear about your bad fanfiction.
>> No. 42935
Dammit, I didn't get to read the bad fanfiction. I hate when this happens. How bad are we talking here?
>> No. 42937
>>42935
It was basically every heroin addict cliche you can come up with. Gamzee was like a prostitute or something. It also had lines like:

> He held Gamzee’s shaking hands. “Gamzee Makara,” he said, “Will you be my moirail?”
> Karkat shot off, “Did you have sex? Who did you have sex with? How many trolls? Why did you fuck so many trolls?”
> “I wish it wasn’t a dream,” Gamzee growled, “cause then when I decided to wake up, you’d be dead.”
> “I was in hell getting raped by a demon so you wouldn’t get culled.”

I'm not even making this up.
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>> No. 42944
>>42937

>I was in hell getting raped by a demon so you wouldn’t get culled.

Okay, out of context this line is gold.
>> No. 42945
>>42940
>>42941
>>42942
>>42943

This is the only good fantroll.

All the others suck major ass.
>> No. 42969
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The Chinese Horoscope trolls
>> No. 43000
>>42969

have you got a version of this that isn't resized to hell?
(I don't even like fantrolls normally, but those are some very, very well-designed sprites)
>> No. 43059
>>42935
Here, I saved the 9th chapter

http://tidypub.org/hbVXu

The rest of it was just as golden.
>Karkat shot off, “Did you have sex? Who did you have sex with? How many trolls? Why did you fuck so many trolls?”
>> No. 43138
>>43059
Failure Artist sock puppet discovered
>> No. 43772
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found this fantroll on lexxy's twitter

#stalkingandrewontwitter

http://twitpic.com/28r1iq
>> No. 43773
>>43138
nope actually we were busy laughing at how bad it was in a skype chat when one of us informed the rest that she's taken it down.

we salvaged what we could, because it is so terrible that it is also funny.
>> No. 43778
>>43773
Seems really boring to me.
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help, my hair is eating me alive
>> No. 43780
Oh, and for a cheap laugh, here's http://www.radiofreeinternet.com/slumtroller/ an archive of a currently-suspended tumblr dedicated to picking out the worst fantrolls.
>> No. 43787
>>43772
I think that's Lexxy's trollsona, not her fantroll.
>> No. 45059
Fantrolls are never a good idea.
>> No. 45078
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>>43780
There's this non-defunct tumblr: http://fuckyeahawfulfantrolls.tumblr.com/

Recently, this jem was posted.
>> No. 45082
>>45078
And this is a good example of why fantrools are a terrible, terrible idea. I have yet to see a fantroll that didn't suck or was interesting.
>> No. 45083
>>45078
We have met her before on the WTF thread. ):

>>45082
I don't know, I like the http://trolltopia.tumblr.com/ trolls a lot.
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oh are we posting these again
>> No. 45189
So are people okay with trolls having more than a black shirt with their symbol on it? Because all of these trolls have fashionable outfits, which they shouldn't. Seeing as how all trolls think fashion is stupid aside from Kanaya.
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