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No. 73517
The biggest issues of the comic is the bloated-ness and the pacing. You have a bloated cast, a bloated plot amount threads that doesn't feel complete as some else also mentioned and a strange schizo pacing which could either be too slow for the story to get to the point or too fast where it feel rushed at times.
It seems like this comic could have just benefited more with just sticking to a much smaller cast(beta kids, the exiles, jack&co. and the 4 main trolls who were mostly introduced in Act 4 through their dialogue) and just developing them there with smaller scale and yet, more tightly written story.
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