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>>83484 I don't think YOU understand what I'm saying, lol. I didn't say anything about narration, I said the plot. Which is different. His purpose in the story beyond being The Main Character is minimal. He doesn't do anything that no one else should be able to do, and he doesn't set many things in motion except for when Rukia have him her powers at the very, very beginning.
The story could be told from, say, Renji's perspective, and begin the day he is ordered to arrest his old friend Rukia, while the human she gave her powers to goes unnamed. Whether or not the Ichigo from this version lives/continues to be a minor character or if he is successfully executed by Byakuya, all the major events past this point would happen in roughly the same way and time regardless. I think this is pretty much why Bleach sucks: he's the designated main character so he needs the most screentime and he needs to do awesome things, but nothing happens because of his actions, hey happen because of the actions of other characters and then he killsteals out of obligation, which is more annoying than anything else. I don't think Kubo planned Bleach's storyline beyond the first arc and it really shows. And I do think that it could have been a better comic if he had multiple characters' perspective instead of holding fast to Ichigo the entire time. I feel like he probably wanted to, but didn't think he should/could.
When planning out/writing a story I think it is a good idea to test multiple perspectives before you go ahead and write your final draft. The best evidence I've seen for this is The Great Gatsby--if you manage to find early iterations of the book, they are absolute shit. Like, they are really, sincerely, completely atrocious. Then he shifted the viewpoint from Gatsby to a minor character who only appeared in two scenes originally, and then suddenly it was good. Sometimes all it takes is a little change in narrative. Too many people believe the only answer to "who should the camera follow?" is "the Hero, obviously, who else?" and that's crippling. It totally crippled Bleach. I haven't followed this comic for about a year, but I'm still sad that with more planning and a few simple tweaks to how it's narrated, it could have been a really cool story.
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