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No. 40687
Dear Potted Fritos,
It is always nice to see a new comic, but you need to work on this one more. They veer too steeply into the "LOLRANDOM" side of the humor spectrum, and you don't seem to care much about aesthetics.
Perhaps the long, non sequitur laden rant in your first image offers some perspective into your problem, and more importantly offers a solution. The very nature of the text has led me to believe that you know that your comics aren't very good, and so you try to make up for your short-comings with an increase in the quantity of nonsense you put out. In other words, your message is an excuse. You are saying, "hey guys, I can write a lot of stuff, so the short comic I have included (or something I guess, lol!) is obviously so poorly thought out and executed because of some conscious decision on my part, not because I can't ramble on about pizza for a few paragraphs.
The solution to this lack of quality is to put the energy spent writing silly excuses towards more admirable goals, like improving the jokes in your comics, improving the art in your comics (after all, this is the Drawfaggotry board, where, contrary to one of your statements, most things actually aren't "COMPLETE SHIT.") Do at least one of these things.
A few more words of advice.
1. Don't fall prey to the temptations of hyperbole; your comics are far from the best.
2. Don't insult your audience, even if you are joking; you don't know us that well, try to make a good first impression.
3. Don't mention that you're in high school. It's irrelevant, and everybody has probably figured it out already.
4. Dixie's Dairies is small time. I live within driving distance of a Cream King.
5. Don't steal Trogdor. That's just tacky.
Thank you.
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