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36448 No. 36448
So, I'm starting my search for co-op placement and one of the places I'm applying to wants work samples. So, among the usual magazine layouts and whatnot I've also decided to include a collage of some of my sketches (Illustration and sketching ability were among the skills listed in the job description) so that means I've scanned a bunch of stuff...
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Pose shamelessly stolen from Prof Rattigan.
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This is the space boat Felix and Lucy lives on; El Diablo Rojo. I'm worried the design is too similar to the Thousand Sunny...
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Wooo! Just finished my first batch of co-op applications. I managed to apply to three places so far and there'll be more coming in the next few weeks.

Have some more sketches to celebrate!
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>> No. 36482
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This one is an old character I used to draw called Nng-Nng (Pronounced not unlike a gnawing sound) or Nin for short.

I hadn't drawn her for over a year and was just sort of inclined to redesign her.
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And finally: My half of an art trade for a friend.
>> No. 36484
This shit is fucking adorable.
>> No. 36503
>>36484
The best part is how quickly he's been improving. His older stuff was stylish but kinda cringeworthy, so I just kinda gave him an A for effort. Now? His stuff is fucking adorable.
>> No. 36541
You're getting better, good to see!
>> No. 36579
>>36483
...wait you draw this or the other guy?
>> No. 36580
>>36484
>>36503
>>36541

Thanks everyone, I've been working real hard to improve! Glad to hear I'm getting somewhere

>>36579

That one I drew. The other fellow's half of the trade can be found here: http://somesortofrobot.deviantart.com/art/No-not-THAT-Lucy-179980996
>> No. 36581
Hey, you're back! Can't wait to see more!
>> No. 36654
Kim Possible in Lara Croft's outfit?
>> No. 36660
>>36654
With Lara croft in bed behind her, hair and sheets rumpled. Maybe with Shego trailing a finger seductively down Lara's tummy.
>> No. 37174
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Woo! Just got me two job interviews in the next week! My first one's on thursday so everyone wish me luck

Here is a piece I submitted as an art sample to one of the companies.
>> No. 37179
>>37174
Good luck, dude!
What sorta place is it you're looking at?
>> No. 37213
Hey, EP, could you make a gif of Lucy? I want to see her animated, even if it's just a simple walking loop or something. Your style begs for it.
>> No. 37239
>>37179

Thanks, most of the positions are in design firms or printing agencies. I actually just had an interview on Thursday (Had to miss classes for the day to get out to The City) but I don't think it went very well; I wasn't very prepared and they weren't thrilled by my design work (Though they did think my illustration was excellent, too bad they weren't looking for an illustrator) but I did get some good advice from the men who interviewed me and I'm using what they said to fix my portfolio for my next interview.

Next interview's on Tuesday and I'm a little nervous after futzing my first one. Thankfully this place seems to be looking for someone a bit more illustration oriented so it seems a little more geared towards my skillset

>>37213

That's an awesome idea! I'm not sure when I'll get a chance but as soon as my scheduale frees up a bit I'm definitely gonna try that,
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So my second interview went a little better than my first. I'm not sure if I got the job or not, but they wanted to see more examples of my work so I'm going to have to do a lot of sketches of cars and products and stuff over the next few days to send off to them. Here's hoping

Have a picture I made a month ago and forgot about
>> No. 37296
>>37285
Looks kinda like a combination of The Little Prince and Neverhood.
>> No. 37313
>>37296
Remember that scene in the Neverending story where he's in the desert? There you go.
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DURP DURP DURP
>> No. 37328
>>37318
Oh look, it's the black girl from Atlantis.
>> No. 37330
I like the new coloring style. Can't wait to see more!
>> No. 37644
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Not dead yet. I'm back and I have some new sketches.

I've been copying poses and expressions from other drawings a lot lately as exercises, but I forgot to label which ones were which, so if you're a person who draws things and you see something of mine that looks like something of yours I am not trying to steal from you, I just have a horrible memory...
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>> No. 37646
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And I think I've finally come up with a design I like for Mo. I saw some pictures of Nox in the last Wakfu thread on /co/ and the way his head was designed inspired me to do something similar with Mo.
>> No. 37649
>>37645
'Ello gov'nor!
>> No. 37876
Got some more sketches I'm gonna try to scan and upload later today.

Sexy pictures coming soon
>> No. 37877
>>37646
I forget, what role is this guy gonna play in your story?
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And here is sexy sketches part 1
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And part 2 (For the ladies)
>> No. 37880
>>37877

Alternates between an antagonist and an ally. Sort of a general rival figure.
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>>37878

Decided to colourize one of these instead of doing real work...
>> No. 37890
>>37885
Nice. I know it's obvious, but I like how you do smut.
You got a look that's not like anyone else.
Kinda like noodley 30's cartoon characters combined with 90's animation aesthetic.
>> No. 37960
>>37890

Hey thanks. I try to do what I can

I figure the whole style thing I have going now is mostly a result of my own backlash against that weird noodley phase I went through...
>> No. 37962
>>37960

Sorry, that was me, I forgot to turn my name back on on this comp...
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Working on turn-arounds for a set of character sheets

Felix is next
>> No. 38232
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Guess who's got smut

Me, I do
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I would like to deidcate these two fat chicks to TommyB
>> No. 38238
>>38233
;A;

No one's ever dediated anything to me before.

I AM HAPPY DUDE.
>> No. 38239
>>38232
Nice. Wouldn't mind seeing more of the girl with glasses.
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VILLAINS!

I present to you a group that seeks to antagonize our friends Felix and Lucy: The crew of the sinister Captain Claw...Well, they're less sinister and more jsut kind of jerks. Going counterclockwise starting with the big bearded fucker:

Grgd (Pronounced not unlike a gutteral growl): The chief engineer on Claw's flagship. He's a grouchy and gruff old codger with a hidden soft side. Being of the alien species known as Mamazons he has fantastic strength and size far surpassing that of a human

Tortuga: Claw's most trusted warrior. He joined the crew after being freed from the spice mines of planet Argot (And when I say spice mines I'm talking about things like Paprika and Cumine because the universe these bozos live in is retarded) when Claw's crew raided his mining camp. He decided he had one of them life debts to repay to Claw and has loyally served him ever since. Despite the life debt he's not above taking digs at his captain and always has a sarcastic quip ready when Claw fucks up. He's super badass and fights with a knife made from the tooth of a space shark. His hobby is sewing doll's clothing

Shmoadly: Claw's accountant and general sycophant. He comes from a species of frog like humanoids. He's in charge of managing the finances of Claw's armada and is always concerned with profits and figures. However he knows who's in charge and will always comply with Claw's wishes no matter how ridiulous. Despite his small stature he's an excellent fighter thanks to the inherent abilities of his froggy species: He can jump many times his own height and move at crazy fast speeds.

Nng Nng (Pronounced not unlike the sound one makes when gnawing on a bone) aka "Nin": Grgd's peppy and silly teenage daughter. She might be a little ditzy but she's always in the best of spirits. Due to her mother dying when she was just young Nin has accompanied her father on Claw's crew since she was little. She helps him out in the engine room and does odd jobs around the ship. She's sort of a general morality pet for Claw and his crew as they're all very protective of her. However it's not like Nin needs much protecting: Despite her petite frame she's even stronger than her father and can rip apart a bulldozer with her bare hands. She loves fashion, dancing meat.

Captain Claw: The leader of this group; one of the most feared space pirates in the galaxy he commands an armada of space ships and has almost a thousand men under his command. Despite this he considers himself a man of intelligence and class and loves classical literature (particularly from his homeworld of Earth), fine dining and music (He is quite skilled at the piano...Though only at pieces that don't require him to use his right hand very much). Unfortunately Claw thinks a bit too highly of himself as he's quite vain and pompous and tends to belittle those around him for what he considers their inferior intelligence. He's also a bit of a germaphobe and hates to be touched. Despite his neurosis' he's a powerful combatant thanks to his already prodidgious strength and the various mechanical pieces integrated into his captain's outfit. For some strange reason he's taken quite an interest in Felix and Lucy and will stop at nothing to fulfill his nefarious plans involving them.
>> No. 38276
>>38275
Neat lookin' bunch. I like 'em.
Just two kinda trivial things that stick out to me.
Grgd looks tough, but I don't get a villainous feel from him.
Shmoadly looks like the first evil ex from Scott Pilgrim as a midget.
>> No. 38277
>>Grgd looks tough, but I don't get a villainous feel from him.

Hmm, you've got a point. He's mostly only villainous because of who he works for, to be honest. I'll have to work on this...

>>Shmoadly looks like the first evil ex from Scott Pilgrim as a midget.

I noticed that too, which is really weird because I came up with him years before I read Scott Pilgrim and his design has remained pretty much the exact same since them.
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Comic
>> No. 38920
Lucy Mk.III?
>> No. 38968
>>38920


Closer to Mk XII at this point I think...
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Lucy goes coconuts remix
>> No. 38984
>>38983
Bwa-hahaha!
Also, I like this look for Lucy and Felix.
>> No. 38994
>>38983
Bit of advice, and this might just be personal preference, but I'd make Lucy's freckles either smaller, or hollow. They're just to large and/or dark too look natural right now.
>> No. 39001
>>38994
Naw, make them grayer. They're too large, but hollow might be weird?.. Experiment!
>> No. 39250
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Okay peeps, I'm working on a comic and I need your expert advice:

Which of these two layouts looks better?
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Or this one?
>> No. 39252
Truth be told, either one is kinda hard to read, I kept going from the small panel to the larger panel on the right before I ever went to the one in the lower corner, making me read the whole bit wrong.
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>>39251
Something closer to this. Remember, words go into the least busiest space you can manage, while still keeping it readable, and keeping the flow of the eye. The eye needs to follow what is going on and the word bubbles.
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A finished page
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>>39258

And another
>> No. 39311
>>39258
>>39294
These are pretty good, but I think the four panel template you're using is too constricting. Lucy especially feels kinda smooshed in those tiny panels.
Maybe try a page in a different format/style?
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>>39294

And another! I'm on a roll!
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And now a plus4chan exclusive sneak peak at page 5 (I skipped four)

I have also printed up about a hundred copies of these and will be passing them out at TCAF. So if any of you knuckleheads are gonna be there this saturday and want a silly mini comic try to find me
>> No. 39354
>Toronto

;______;
>> No. 39358
>>39352
The expressions here are marvelous.
>> No. 39369
>>39352
I get a very 90's cartoon feel from this. Which I would like to stress is not a bad thing.
>> No. 39579
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So because that age reference I did for Lucy like, a year ago, is my single most popular piece (Goddamn age progression fetishists...) I've decided to redo it so it doesn't suck balls like whoah

Here's the rough sketches. Looks like I'll have to do the inking in Illustrator with the pen tool because my tablet is being an asshole
>> No. 39588
>>39579
Read this. Maybe it'll help.
>>38138
>> No. 39704
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Tablet's finally fixed and I have a new thing to show
>> No. 39708
>>39704
Did Lucy start playing rugby when she turned 16 or something?
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>>39708

Nah, she was more into track. The rugby sweater was actually based on one of the options my old high school used to have for uniforms.

Also: Pokemon getting high
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Boop, it's a thing
>> No. 39855
>>39704
>>39704
Hair doesn't grow that fast. No basics, loomis, etc.
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Comic
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>>39903

Have a better version
>> No. 40048
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thing I'm working on
>> No. 40050
>>40048
This one I like.
You got a good buildup with more claustrophobic panels, then a good pay-off hinting at a larger world.
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>>40050

Hey, thanks man. This is the first comic I've worked on where I really feel I've been using the panels to my advantage

Also I finished it.
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Work in progress
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Cover of a mini comic I'm doing for Fan Expo
>> No. 40152
So why do you change the female character so much? I actually liked her a bit less chunky.
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>>40152

You know, I don't really have an answer to that. I guess I just had a lot of trouble finding a design for her I really liked. She looks a little pudgier in that picture than she actually is

Also comic
>> No. 40500
>>40489
Shmodely's a woman now?
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>>40500

Nah, Izzy is independent of Shmoadly. I've actually been playing with the idea of making Shmoadly a bird

Also digital painting
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>>40489

Ha, page two. And it only took me 3 weeks...:|
>> No. 40705
>>40704
Your backgrounds have gotten so much better; they really mesh well with your figures now.
So do you ink digitally or traditionally?
Also, if you don't mind me asking, why did this take three weeks?
>> No. 40732
>>40705

Hey thanks, I've been working on trying to integrate the two. Right now I'm doing everything digitally, I just find it's a much more streamlined process that way

As for why this took me so long...Well...I really wish I had an answer for you. I think I might be having motivation issues. The good news is page three took me considerably less time (Should be finished tomorrow night)
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Boom! Part 3!
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This took me way too long to make. I'm taking a quick break from this comic to make something else
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Workin' on character lineup
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Stage one of lineup completed

Next stage: Shading
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Hey look, shading

How's it looking folks?
>> No. 40977
>>40976
Colors and shading look fine.
But I feel that this incarnation of Lucy is a little too similar in body-type to Felix.
Not saying you should go back to a more "feminine" body type, but maybe try messing around with the shape of her head, height, and have her slouch less.
>> No. 40996
>>40977
I kind of agree, but I think that the problem might be that Lucy's design overpowers Felix's. She is larger, more brightly colored, and has more design elements, so Felix kind of doesn't register. I know part of their dynamic is that Lucy is the brash and outgoing one, while Felix is kind of hapless and sensitive, but he probably shouldn't be overshadowed visually.
To start with, you might want to dress him in something other than jeans and a t-shirt (I do like how you draw the jeans, but you could spice them up a little.) Give us some indication that he's an adventurer, not just some regular kid.
Should look at some shonen anime protagonists, (even if you don't happen to be a fan of the genre) since recognizable designs are essential for their success. Obviously, don't steal anything, but looking at what makes characters like Luffy or Naruto so successful should be a lot of help. (Akira Toriyama is also very good, especially his video game character designs.)
>> No. 41452
Oh holy crap I forgot to respond to these. Now I look like a giant tool!

>>40977

Well noted. I've been trying to give her a more curved, rounded outline as of late which I hope will help differentiate her. Generally I've just been trying to make Lucy have a wider body style than Felix does to differentiate the two

>>40996

This I've definitely been trying to work on since you suggested it (Three months ago, jesus christ I am so sorry). My general idea thus far has been to make his T-shirt a little mroe visually interesting and change that single glove he wears into a sort of futurey armour gauntlety thing with a computer in it (Stylish AND practical!)
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So, I have been posting for a while.

Well in me news I've repurposed that comic I've been working on into a final assignment for my last semester: It's going to be a full colour, 24 page printed issue I'm going to be handing out at TCAF in May.

I figured I'd share some of my progress with you nice folks here for feedback since I want this to be the best thing possible
>> No. 41463
>>41453
Was the coloring intentionally done to make these guys look more menacing and creepy?
Beause it works for them in this context, but I overall like the look of >>40976 better.
>> No. 41464
>>41463

Yep that's a deliberate decision. The first three or so pages are going to be done like that to sort of hype them up as beign a menacing threat before pages 4 and 5 where we cut back to the old thick line style when we reveal how unthreatening their opponents are. It'll stay with the thick line style for the rest of comic except for a few moments where Klef goes into monologue mode and the lighting gets all dramatic

My only concern is that the contrast of the two styles might be a bit too jarring
>> No. 41472
>>41453
I don't know about the teeth in the last image, they look like they're unnaturally out of focus or blurry.
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Forgot to post this one
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Working on a cover for the comic
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And I finished another double page spread, this one comes right after >>41453
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Quit bein' a dick, Myp
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Finished the cover
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Hey look: It's Callie-Marie, the cutest octopus girl in the world
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Finished the first half of my comic. Will share
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Need to fix last panel. Klef's head is off model like whoah
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Peeps are to be added to these panels. All crowd shots with Klef and Izzy looking around. Izzy looks more bored as the page wears on
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This page needs a fair bit of touchup. Have to add Backgrounds to the second and third panels.

Also: Lucy is a jerk
>> No. 41735
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Man, the thumbnails for these look all weird for some reason
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And that's all for now. I have 22 more days to make the remaining ten pages. Wish me luck!

Also critique is always appreciated
>> No. 41918
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more comics
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>> No. 42047
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Redesigning Klef's arm. That crazy pauldron he has made it too tough to pose
>> No. 42048
>>42047
It would be cool if you make some R2D2 joke about his arm. lol
>> No. 42072
>>42048

I like the way you think...
>> No. 42286
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Hey peeps, I've got a comic in the next issue of Pulp, you should check it out:

http://premierpulp.wordpress.com/
>> No. 42309
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I've got some downtime right now and am taking the time to tweak some characters designs. Here's the basics of what I've done with Lucy. Does her new haircut look better or worse than before?

Also a reminder that Premier Pulp is available starting Aug 11th. You should totally check it out
>> No. 42317
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Hey, I've redesigned the whole main cast. Here's the black and whites. I am currently working on shading the colour compositions but that's going to take another day or so.

What's the opinion on the newish designs?
>> No. 42323
>>42317
So much not in love with them that it hurts. Sorry EP.
>> No. 42324
>>42323

Oh no! How...How can I fix it?
>> No. 42326
>>42324
Lucy looks a little too stocky.
I liked her earlier look like >>38916
There she looked like she could jump and run, and adventure, but this current incarnation doesn't look too athletic for an adventurer.
>> No. 42327
>>42324
Klef and Izzy seem to dangerous now. They were kind of cute before, which I liked, but now Klef is buffer and more imposing, while Izzy is sharper and more alien in appearance, that is to say, here features are less appealing and relatable, as opposed to just more outre.
As for Lucy, I agree that she's looking a bit too stocky. More than that though, her design is leaning more into the "bratty kid" kind of area, which is a fine personality trait in moderation, but isn't really appealing in bulk. Personally, I'd try to keep her at least a little more refined and mature, which means ditching the new hairdo, and rethinking those eyes.
Felix looks fine though. Definitely a step in the right direction.
>> No. 42330
>>42327

Okay, I see where you're coming from. I definitely agree on Izzy and Lucy (I was wary of that haircut I gave her from the moment I did), so it sounds mostly like a few of the experimental tweaks I did didn't work out so well.

I will however argue that a more imposing Klef is not necessarily a bad thing as it makes it all the more hilarious when he does non-imposing, normal things. Imagine Klef in his new design out clothes shopping with Izzy, carrying all of her bags as she tries on sweaters before they both go to the food court to get some funnel cake. That angry grimace on his face the entire time. I would argue that scene is at least 1.5 times funnier than it would be with Klef's old design.

Thanks a ton for the feedback by the way (That goes to Jinman too), I'm gonna nail these designs down one of these days!
>> No. 42333
>>42330
Okay, I see where you're coming from with Klef. Carry on.
>> No. 42356
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I've put a few of the suggested changes into practice, though altering everything requires redrawing and I wanted to do something with the lineart I had before doing that.

Changed the colour scheme up a lot and altered Felix and Lucy's footwear. Also tried to slim Lucy down a little bit (Thank you transform tool) so she was less bulky.

Will work on making Izzy a bit less menacing.
>> No. 42358
I really can't stand Lucy's face. I didn't like the Garfield-type eyes from >>41918 & the other comics either but the new hairstyle really pushed it over the edge. She just looks super obnoxious in a really unappealing way, and I think the sports shoes and bike shorts might make it even worse.

Her eyes looked a lot better when you were drawing her like in
>>39352. She honestly looks a million times better if all you do is cut the lines from the bottom of her eyes and make her pupils a bit bigger. The visible irises in >>41735 were also okay. As far as her head/face goes I think >>38201 was the best one, but I actually do like that you've made her less... I don't know, sexy over time? And a curvy body type contrasts well with Felix's thin lanky frame and Izzy's top-heaviness. People have complained about it before and you haven't changed her back to the way she was in the OP, so I'm assuming you're going to stand your ground about it no matter what because you like her better this way and I think that's fair. Power to you.

I like Izzy and Klef's new designs better than their old ones too.
>> No. 42367
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>>42358

Nice, thanks for the feedback. Looking back I have to agree with you on Lucy's face. The main problem I find is that the Half-circle eyes work very well in black and white but are a bit harder to pull off in full colour. I'll have to figure out a way to make them work in colour...

Also, I don't think I ever posted the thing I did for Pulp...
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>> No. 42482
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I made a painting
>> No. 42536
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I've got a comic in the next issue of [url=http://premierpulp.wordpress.com/]Pulp![/url] Get hyped!
>> No. 42537
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It's gonna be fucking sweet and I am going to post the first few pages here
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>> No. 42572
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Brilliant planning in action...
>> No. 42577
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"QUIT BREAKING EVERYTHING!"
"We don't know how!"
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>> No. 42584
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MILLIONS DEAD! NONE INJURED!

The End...
>> No. 42652
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I need to clear my head and drawing is the only thing that helps.
>> No. 42653
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>> No. 42691
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Damn. Why has the server been such boners the past week?

Anyway, I made some smut
>> No. 42696
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And it looks like we're (Finally) fixed. More smut to celebrate!
>> No. 42697
>>42696
>>42691
Yay!
>> No. 42763
>>42696
Oh my♥
>> No. 42833
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I got commissioned to draw nakeds
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I'm just doing this one for fu (Only half finished)
>> No. 42853
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Oh hey, the site's back! Celebratory fan art!
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Oh, I also finished this one

(Until the rest of you chuckleheads come back it looks like I have this board all to myself!)
>> No. 43051
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Working on my next Pulp submission. Gonna use it as a learning experience in spotting blacks...
>> No. 43130
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Hey look, it's the comic I did for Premier Pulp...
>> No. 43131
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>> No. 43132
>>43131
That's actually really clever.
>> No. 43180
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If any of you mofos are gonna be at TCAF tomorrow keep an eye out. I'm gonna be handing out mini-comics.

Also space art is surprisingly easy to make...
>> No. 43181
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>>43132

Thanks! I've sort of playing with the idea of giving Felix a certain degree of medium awareness...Not enough to actually accomplish anything mind you
>> No. 43194
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spacin' and artin'
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>> No. 43270
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"Awful chilly out here, isn't it?"
"This looks like a job for...JACKETS!!!"
>> No. 43281
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>>43270

Now with 100% more colour!
>> No. 43295
>>43281
Hey, you know percentages don't work like that, yeah?
Saying that there's 100% more of something actually just means there's twice as much, and twice nothing is still nothing.
Also, what the Sam Hill is "colour" suppoused tou mean?
>> No. 43296
>>43281
Yo Poet, what's your technique for shading? It looks a bit streaky/murky. Something that's easily fixed but it depends on what's causing that appearance to start with.

>>43295
Don't write posts just to correct someone's grammar because you always look like a tit and you're inevitably wrong anyway.

Colour is the way everyone but the Americans spell color, you dumbass.
>> No. 43297
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>>43296

I believe the streakiness was probably the result of a foolhardy attempt to add texture to the drawing. Here's a rough outline of the process I followed to colour that drawing. You can see things start to fall apart around step 6 or 7...
>> No. 43307
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>>43297
Ok
General things:
- You're using too small of a brush to shade. It's a million times easier to blend colours with a large brush. This will eliminate most of the streaky stuff on its own. Use big confident brushstrokes!! Not tiny fussing ones!!
- Don't manually turn down opacity unless you're mixing colours in a palette. Keep that at 100% and leave it to pressure sensitivity. Fixing opacity at a lower level tends to make the colours fade out and look like rubbish, too. You'll have greater control over the colours you put down if you leave it alone.
- You have a really cartoony, blocky style. Keep in mind that more detail is not always better; colouring should fit with the style of the linework. Keep it simple!

Colours:
- Your shadows aren't very dark, and the value differences between light and dark vary a lot depending on the section. For example, her pants have a fairly obvious value change, but her skin hardly has any. You can see this easier if you temporarily merge the layers and desaturate the image.
- I made some palettes from >>43281, and I found that the most saturated colours are the midtones. When the midtones are the brightest, it makes your image look really washed out. Generally, you want the highlights to be the brightest, and shadows to be darker and less saturated than the midtone.
- You don't need a lot of highlights. It's ok to hardly have them at all.
- One of the simplest things you can do to make simple shadows look interesting is reflected light. Shadows are always darkest at their perimeter and gradually fade (unless it is a harsh cast shadow or something of that nature). Objects take on the colours of their environment too. So you can take the base colour, or a mix of the base colour and background, and apply it on a layer over the shadows to create a nice soft effect. Try doing a dark multiply layer for shadows and then lightening them this way.
- Maybe try experimenting with other types of layers. Multiply is kind of the go-to guy but you can get nice effects with others too if you know how to use them. For instance Multiply tends to make the colours beneath it less vibrant, but Colour Burn keeps them nice and bright; if it looks shitty to start change how it filters things with the Fill% in the layer window and it responds differently than when you simply lower the Opacity% (there are a few layer types that do this). I think the result of Colour Burn, after the right Fill% adjustments, looks a little like marker.
>> No. 43309
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>>43307

This is amazingly good advice. I gave the original drawing a quick once over using some of the techniques you outlined and I think there's a huge increase in quality.
>> No. 43658
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And I'm back, I have been working on a secret project that will hopefully be seeing the light of day sometime nest year!

In the meantime have arts!
>> No. 43659
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This here is Mimi Sparks: An adversary of Felix and Lucy's who has cool electric abilities and too high an opinion of herself!
>> No. 43660
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And this is Tilda. She's a friend of Felix and Lucy's who also works as a treasure hunter for the same company. While she seems really eloquent and composed upon first meeting she's actually highly neurotic and prone to paranoia about her job. She also turns into a stammering wreck whenever things start going wrong.
>> No. 43677
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Lucy and Felix's unnerving nemesis: Marlboro Slim
>> No. 43693
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Klef and Izzy, showing off their winter digs.
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