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No. 89782
>>89781 So that was it, that’s why they were getting off so lightly, this little group somehow against all odds managed to capture all four of the Vault Hunters, Axton still didn’t know how, and they didn’t want to share the spoils. It was a quick get their stuff and let them go kind of thing, a back table deal. Well he wasn’t going to bite, for all what everyone called showboating and Axton called showing everyone just how awesome he was, he had been raised in a pretty strict house hold. One minded their manors said their pleases and thank yous and did not bite while you had someone else’s dick in your mouth. Rolling his eyes at the Nomad Axton just shifted his legs a bit, his legs weren’t exactly happy in the kneeling position. “Yeah, yeah no biting and no telling anyone about the best blowjob you are ever going to get in your sad, sad lifetime. “
At his statement the attitude in the room seemed to sort of change. The tension that was there before had shifted into a sort of eager buzz. Axton watched with mild interest as the other four Bandits crowded around as the Nomad started to reach into his big coat undoing buttons and after a moment pulling out a decent sized half hard cock. “Time to put that big mouth to work Vault Hunter.” Putting a hand on the back of Axton’s head he pushed him forward so that the quickly stiffing cock was pressing at Axton’s wind chapped lips.
“Yeah, yeah.” Axton muttered before opening his mouth a bit enough to let the tip in and to let the head pop into his mouth. Flicking his tongue a bit he got his first taste of what was probably going to be many cocks for the day. Above him the Nomad groaned and pushed a bit more insistently on the back of Axton’s head trying to shove more into the wet and somewhat willing mouth. Relaxing his jaw a bit he let the cock slide further back into his mouth hollowing his cheeks a bit as he started to suck the man off. It had been a little while since he had last had a cock in his mouth, well a real one anyone, his wife had really loved that strap-on of hers. Still it was a bit like riding a bicycle, only that bicycle was a cock that was being shoved down his throat at a little faster pace than his throat could adjust.
Still Axton had promised the best blowjob in their miserable life and he took that as a bit of a personal challenge. So telling his throat to shut up, he would just deal with a sore throat the next day Axton pulled off a move you would often find in porn. He took the rest of the Nomads cock down his throat and did his best to ignore the itch and smell of the man’s pubic hair against his nose. It had taken him almost all of his free time (Which was supposed to be spent sleeping but after a long day of training a blowjob from your fellow cadets was a huge stress relief.) in Basic training to learn how to breath with a dick shoved down your throat. Ignoring the burn in the back of his throat, and the other Bandits around him who were jacking off to the sight of him tied up on his knees with a large Nomad cock shoved halfway down his throat, he was sure he made a lovely sight.
Above him the Nomad’s firm grip on the back of his head held him there tightly for a moment longer before pulling out of his throat and letting the commando get his breath back for just a moment. He seemed to drink in the sight of him panting for breath a thin train of saliva still connecting his mouth to the other’s dick. It wasn’t much of a reprieve as Axton was once again forced to swallow the man’s dick. This time though he had a bit more control as the Nomad seemed to finally notice his audience of fellow Bandits crowded around them their cocks out and eager. It seemed like Axton wasn’t the only showboater here as the thrusts started to slow down a bit allowing him to give the organ some broad sweeps with his tongue with every thrust. Above him the Nomad grunted as his dick seemed to twitch in Axton’s mouth. Feeling that the Nomad was getting pretty close Axton took charge once again and resisting the next push on the back of his head instead sucked hard on the head practically wrapping it in a vacuum. His suspicions were correct when he felt the man’s come flood his mouth. Avoiding making a face at the taste, Axton did what most boyfriends beg their girlfriend to do, he swallowed and promised himself he would swig Moxie’s strongest drink when he got out of her to clean his mouth out.
So that's all I have so far. Any good? Should I give up my career in writing porn fanfiction why I am ahead? Also what mistakes did I make, sure I made a few and how can I correct them?
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