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>>187183 Wait a second, if this is a remake anime, maybe they'll use Yumi and Daisuke's stories for the Sun and Strength Social links this time around.
REMIX!
They could make the Marie thing work though. The makings of a good story are there, the climax is well written (the part where the fog parts and Marie sees all of Inaba was quite sweet), as is the beginning, but the middle section with the awkwardly done interactions with the IT was where it suffered; this poor set-up harmed its conclusion as it's where the emotional payoff was supposed to happen. Again, I don't think the concept of the character is unsalvageable, it could very well benefit from the efforts of this slightly tweaked creative team.
But enough of that. Time for Dance!
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