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No. 39547
This will be split into 2 or three parts.
Part 1: Grammar and Punctuation Suggestions.
I do proofreading for the Wakfu Comics and Card Game so maybe this is just me being critical, but here's what I saw:
>Dialogue: 0,0:01:22.36,0:01:24.05,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Already told you what I think about it: I already told you what I think about it:
>Dialogue: 0,0:01:29.21,0:01:31.29,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Yeah, on top of that, life there is very expensive. Yeah, and on top of that, life there is very expensive.
>Dialogue: 0,0:02:43.00,0:02:46.00,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Resemblance sometimes skip generations you know. Resemblance sometimes skips generations you know.
>Dialogue: 0,0:04:54.17,0:04:57.19,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Ruel, do you have any idea on how we could pick up on Kriss' track? Ruel, do you have any idea on how we could pick up on Kriss' tracks?
>Dialogue: 0,0:05:31.06,0:05:34.22,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Hey! But I already paid to enter that city earlier. Hey! I already paid to enter the city earlier.
>Dialogue: 0,0:06:15.27,0:06:17.50,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I like that city, they don't waste time there! I like this city, they don't waste time here!
>Dialogue: 0,0:06:59.83,0:07:02.82,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,2000 Kamas, that's an expensive information. 2000 Kamas, that's some expensive information.
>Dialogue: 0,0:07:39.19,0:07:40.66,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Do you have any proofs? Do you have any proof? (or evidence)
>Dialogue: 0,0:07:58.95,0:07:59.85,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Can't wait for what's next! I can't wait for what's next!
>Dialogue: 0,0:08:01.13,0:08:03.79,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,don't you miss the next trial: don't miss the next trial:
>Dialogue: 0,0:08:23.18,0:08:25.77,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Kriss was already done for, the affair is too political. (Kriss was already done for, this affair is too political.) or (Kriss was already done for, this whole affair is too political.)
>Dialogue: 0,0:08:41.02,0:08:44.61,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,No, Yugo. That doesn't necessarily mean that Kriss became a criminal. No, Yugo. This doesn't necessarily mean that Kriss became a criminal.
>Dialogue: 0,0:08:45.08,0:08:48.45,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,In that degenerates' city, you can end up in penal colony for a late payment. In this degenerates' city, you can end up in a penal colony for a late payment. (or "city of degenerates")
>Dialogue: 0,0:08:48.45,0:08:51.49,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,We'll now proceed to the main event of this day: We'll now proceed to the main event of the day:
>Dialogue: 0,0:08:51.49,0:08:54.96,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,the trial of an ex-boufbowl child prodigy. the trial of the ex-boufbowl child prodigy. [This change is debatable.]
>Dialogue: 0,0:08:54.96,0:08:58.81,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The whole city's top brass is there, it just goes to show the importance of the affair. The whole city's top brass is here, it just goes to show the importance of this affair.
>Dialogue: 0,0:08:58.81,0:09:01.61,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,We're gonna witness a great moment of justice. We're gonna witness a great moment in justice.
>Dialogue: 0,0:09:42.78,0:09:46.03,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He's escorted by his lawyer, Mr Kervassin. He's escorted by his lawyer, Mr. Kervassin.
>Dialogue: 0,0:09:47.86,0:09:52.32,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The trial can now begin, honorable Judge Muttonchops has the floor. The trial can now begin, The Honorable Judge Muttonchops has the floor.
>Dialogue: 0,0:09:56.88,0:10:01.52,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,you are accused of crime against boufbowl, the true one, Brakmar's! you are accused of crimes against boufbowl, the true one, Brakmar's!
>Dialogue: 0,0:10:02.95,0:10:06.39,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,We're going to demonstrate that the defendant is guilty ever since his early childhood. We're going to demonstrate that the defendant has been guilty ever since his early childhood. [Again, debatable]
>Dialogue: 0,0:11:28.89,0:11:30.62,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And that was a damn good team. And it was a damn good team. [Debatable]
>Dialogue: 0,0:12:14.04,0:12:18.42,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Therefore, we request that he's shortened by a head at neck level. Therefore, we request that he be shortened by a head at neck level. [Debatable]
>Dialogue: 0,0:13:32.82,0:13:35.01,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Who's that runt? Where does he come from? Who's that runt? Where did he come from?
>Dialogue: 0,0:14:48.27,0:14:49.86,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,At least a bit of emotion. At last a bit of emotion.
>Dialogue: 0,0:15:19.01,0:15:23.21,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,It's not Kriss la Krass who's in trial here, it's Brakmar and its boufbowl. It's not Kriss la Krass who's on trial here, it's Brakmar and its boufbowl.
>Dialogue: 0,0:15:30.73,0:15:32.86,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And may the bouf-ball judge. And may the boufball judge.
>Dialogue: 0,0:15:33.08,0:15:35.60,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And how could the defendant play? And how can the defendant play?
>Dialogue: 0,0:16:18.25,0:16:20.71,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,That's a phenomenal reversal! This is a phenomenal reversal!
>Dialogue: 0,0:16:20.71,0:16:22.63,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,The situation is unheard of! This situation is unheard of!
>Dialogue: 0,0:16:22.63,0:16:27.42,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Who will dare taking up the challenge, and how could you not to take up that challenge? Who will dare take up the challenge, and how could you not take up that challenge?
>Dialogue: 0,0:18:18.05,0:18:19.57,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,He's our captain, do you feel like coming? He's our captain, do you feel like joining? [Debatable]
>Dialogue: 0,0:18:45.00,0:18:46.81,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Ta-daa! Look what I'm bringing: Ta-daa! Look what I brought:
>Dialogue: 0,0:18:55.45,0:18:58.10,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Really you can't trust anyone in that city. Really you can't trust anyone in this city.
>Dialogue: 0,0:19:05.00,0:19:07.65,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,Without the little Bontarian, Kriss la Krass was done for. Without the little Bontarian, Kriss la Krass would have been done for.
>Dialogue: 0,0:19:42.00,0:19:44.52,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,I wouldn't want to urge you, but right now it's the world that awaits you. I wouldn't want to rush you, but right now it's the world that awaits you. [Debatable]
>Dialogue: 0,0:20:27.71,0:20:30.21,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,My team is there, all present. My team is here, all present.
>Dialogue: 0,0:22:15.38,0:22:18.14,Default,,0000,0000,0000,,And to take back your appearance, you only have one word to say. And to take back your appearance, you only have to say one word. [Debateable]
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