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No. 48307
>>48303
So if there were more, it would result in one wonky thing making sense? That doesn't excuse the rest of it, and there is no doubt in my mind that if there were indeed more to read, it would only result in an even greater amount of stuff to point out. Unless, of course, the other stuff is done better.
>>48302
Well, I appreciate that someone tried to make the comic, but the effort you made seems to have fallen short of passability. Keep trying to improve your art, and storyboard everything so that it creates a naturalistic vibe. Not to be mean, but what you've got now is only describable as amateur. When you put something on the internet, you have to say to yourself "Is this really the best I can do?" or in the case of a draft, "How can I improve this?"
And if that's really the best you can do, if you don't think you can improve it any more, then I suggest staying away from comics. On the other hand, if you are capable of saying to yourself "This needs polish, I can make this way better than it is.", then go ahead and give yourself some vitriol, keep away from the hugbox, and get to it. Restart from scratch if you feel that you need to, this kind of thing takes saintly patience to make good.
That's all the advice I can give.
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