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>>219658 The problem is that your comparison is horribly flawed.
Antione's easily startled nature is basically one of the essential building blocks in defining who he is on such a fundamental level that suddenly cutting it out of him is irresponsible. It's like ripping Sonic's sarcasm out of him in one fell swoop. There's nothing inherently wrong with that development, but just suddenly discarding a major element of who he is out of him for no logical reason isn't good writing. Even as recently as when we last saw him he had these traits, he was just also brave and able to prioritize his job.
Sally, on the other hand...well, the stuff with her dad hadn't really been apparent in her character for a good few years. Yeah, her dad was still a jerk, but it wasn't part of what defined her for some time now. When you have the kind of organic growth Sally's had and a status quo shakeup like King Acorn NOT being a huge jerk, then yeah, it makes sense to phase stuff like that out.
>Why should he keep that? Because, as you said, a character is more than just one trait. Just because that trait is born out of a time when the character was portrayed as a huge jerk doesn't mean it should just be whisked away. It either needs to wither away due to organic growth or persist as a part of who the character is, evolving over time.
There's no sense in stripping character traits out because "I don't like that part". Characters have good and bad qualities when it comes to their personality. When you have a character as popular and well defined as Antione, selectively chucking old traits because "it's played out" is amateurish. The way to reshape characters with care and skill is to simply focus on the aspects you feel are important and develop them.
TL;DR - Antione isn't any worse of a character just because he's the most likely to squeal when a giant robot is chasing him. If anything it rounds out his character and gives more context. It shows you that he's more openly emotional (at least in some respects) than other people, and it even underlines the internal strength he possesses to remain courageous despite his fear. It also facilitates greater emotional response from the audience. Some people find it endearing, some people find it annoying, but regardless it summons a stronger response than if he was just the arrogant vain guy who loves his wife.
Super TL;DR - There's a difference between the visual (he's fat), personal (he's fearful), and mental (she's caught up on her dad's opinions) aspects of a character, and there's different contexts to consider for changing different aspects.
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