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>>96155 You raise some good points, but I did not mean any disrespect to Zuko's rather excellent character arc in Book Two. Rather Aang's journey, while adhering to certain beats, is bound to turn out differently at points.
Here's a rundown of the events you mentioned and how they'll play out: Stealing Appa-Encountering that fateful flyer causes a rather turbulent reaction in the 'dead' prince as he enters into a panic, urging his uncle to abandon the tea shop and escape Ba Sing Se, convinced that his old enemies are harbingers of trouble and will bring ruin to the both of them if they remain in the city. His uncle refuses, reasoning that the Avatar is 'just looking for his friend' and will leave once he has found him. Unwilling to take that chance, Aang makes a desperate search for Appa on his own, with the intention of holding it hostage until the Avatar agrees to leave Ba Sing Se (and him and his uncle) and never return. Iroh's admonishment of him in this case, will take the form of an attack on his hypocritical behavior, that despite his love for 'neutral jing' he does in fact take action, but all his actions are made to prevent him from having to take responsibility and make tough decisions. He goes so far as to take a stab at Aang's selfish intentions, saying that
"If you had come down here to merely free this poor creature, return it to his beloved companion as a sign of penance or even goodwill to that child, then I would have helped you, I would have praised you, I would have been so proud. But to hold it hostage, just because you fear being ousted and punished by those we have hurt? Maybe you are more like your father than you think."
The Fever Dream-The dream is largely unchanged, however Aang is horrified at finding himself as the Fire Lord. The Blue Dragon also urges him to 'forget' instead of 'rest' while the Red One begs him to 'remember'. The image he sees as this part ends isn't of his mother, but of his father's right arm completely concealed by a robe sleeve.
The Perfect Day-Aang is back to his chipper self, but there's a greater sense of sincerity in his mirth, as if it isn't merely acting as a way to cope with his issues. He's also more open to things he doesn't like, giving certain foods, colors, and ideas he was initially not to keen on, a second chance. His reluctance at having to be the only other employee in his uncle's shop has vanished, and when he makes a mistake, he doesn't mope about it or bitterly dismiss it (sour grapes and all that). His uncle is overjoyed at seeing the sincerity and content in his nephew's demeanor and then they receive that fateful invitation.
The Cave-Katara's beef with Aang in the cave (asides from all his shoddy come-ons) is less about him being a ruthless villain, and more about him being a selfish, mercenary cretin who is incapable of caring about anyone but himself, viewing other people as servants and amusements and that he can't hope to understand the pain of others, including what she's gone through including losing her mother. Aang's reaction differs somewhat as he replies with this.
"I used to think I did, I actually believed that I knew all there was to know about...everyone and who they were. You, Zuko, my family, my mom. But I didn't, not really. But...I'd like to."
The scene plays out about the same as it did in the original episode again with a rather sizeable exception (forgive me, it's a bit of a rough draft so Katara's dialogue isn't as unique to her interaction with Prince Aang as I and I'm sure, you'd like).
Katara: I'm sorry I yelled at you before. Aang: It's allright, we all need a good shout every now and again. You know, if we shout at just the right pitch I think we can make it echo in here. Do you mind if I give it a try. Katara (chuckles): It's just that for so long now, whenever I would think of the enemy, I'd see you and those stupid 'imported faux silk' headbands you keep on wearing. Aang: (smiles ruefully) You know, I am hiding something under this thing, though I just realized that my reasons for doing it were pretty dumb. You, uh, want to see? Katara: Um, if you want me to. Aang: If you feel forced into it, you don't have to. I've never shown it to a girl, but I'm kinda sure they'd be grossed out by it. I don't want you thinking I'm vain or anything. Katara: You shouldn't have to worry about me thinking you're vain. Aang: Ah, right...So, are you sure. (Katara reluctantly nods) Okay (reveals his bindi-like scar) Katara: It's so small (sees the regretful expression on Aang's face) I'm sorry-. Aang: Don't be. It's not one of those scars you should feel sorry for. I thought it was though, I thought it stood for failure, I thought it was a sign that I'd be punished for trying to do things, for having ideals and ambitions. But that's because I thought it meant that, it doesn't have to, and it doesn't have to be all about me. It also says something about...my dad. Katara: The Fire Lord? What about him? Aang: That's kind of private. I mean, like, more private than what I've been telling you. It's something I have to say to him myself, if I ever get a chance that is. I had a lot of those when I was a kid, but I never took them, I wanted to be as far away from him as possible. Now, I'd give just about anything to sit down and talk with him. (Katara looks at him sympathetically, perhaps thinking about her own father being far away, but upon realizing the possible implications of his desire, clams up and looks away, leaving the two in awkward silence before Zuko and Iroh burst in)
The Choice: Aang doesn't make a choice. Because the one presented him is incredibly difficult. Azula pressures him into joining her side, unintentionally playing upon his Season 1 desires by telling him that they can 'end the war now!' and that he'll be able to come home. This would serve a greater global agenda, and satisfy his personal desires to see his father and talk. On the other hand, helping Azula defeat the Earth Kingdom and the Avatar in her campaign would be to doom an entire nation and perhaps the world's only chance for true redemption. He frets, he hesitates and now confronted not just with a choice but THE choice, his reluctant nature has come back to haunt him full force. His agony is only halted when Katara, who came back because she was worried that he and his uncle were taking too long, chances upon the debate and remembering Aang's desire to possibly reconcile with his father, cannot find it in herself to trust him to aid in the protection of the Earth Kingdom and tries to freeze them all, removing them as factors in the coup. Azula nimble dodges the attack, but the trapped Iroh, and bewildered Aang are frozen solid.
And so, because he could not choose a path to take on The Crossroads of Destiny, Aang lost his right to do so. At least, until Season 3 where this hard lesson, his encounters with people as a fugitive, his uncle's criticisms, and his recent epiphany will help make him come to a fateful decision that will change things between him and his family forever.
Not quite what you had in mind, I know, but this is just the concept, the foundation, and we can still work on it. Your comments had me think long and hard about this, encouraging me to refine the story, flesh it out as it were.
That said, everybody reading this, share your thoughts, critiques, suggestions, the thread is (relatively) young after all!
And now, because I enjoy thinking them up, some (mostly) fun scenes Aang and Azula being jerks to each other from "Aang Alone":
Scene #1 Azula: Mom, can you make Aang play with us? We need equal teams to play a game. Aang: I'm not doing any pop quizzes or trivia contests. Azula: (snorts) No not those. Though we'd both know who'd win if it came to that. Aang: Yeah, whatever. Shouldn't you be reading something right now? Azula: We are brother and sister. (her voice becoming sickly sweet) It's important for us to spend time together. Don't you think so, mom? Ursa: Yes darling, (to Aang) I think it's a good idea to play with your sister. Go on now, (she fluffs Aang's head a few times) just for a little while. Zuko: But mom, I don't wanna. Azula: (deadpan) Mai'll be there. Aang: Oh, why didn't you say so. See ya mom!
Scene #2 (After Azula has set the apple stalk on top of Ty Lee's head ablaze) Aang: Wow, you actually failed. I thought you were allergic to that. Azula: (miffed at his response) I'd like to see you try. Aang: And risk hurting such a pretty face? (Ty Lee's expression brightens at the compliment) I wouldn't even think of doing that to Ji. Ty Lee: (crestfallen) It's Ty. Aang: What? Ty Lee: My name is Ty Lee. Aang: Oh, sorry, it's just that you look a lot like-. Ty Lee: It's fine, it happens all the time. I'll-I'll see you later Azula, Mai, I had fun. (runs off, crying a little) (Cut to Ursa coming out of one of the buildings. Aang enters the screen, looking befuddled, as she begins to speak.) Ursa: I was just coming to get you. Uncle Iroh sent us a letter from the war front. You look confused. Aang: (shrugs) Girls are weird.
Scene #3 Ursa: (reading the letter) Until then, enjoy these gifts. For Aang, (cut to Aang running over and picking up a dagger offered by a servant on some sort of tray) a pearl dagger from the general who surrendered when we broke through the outer wall. Note the inscription (Zuko unsheathes the dagger) and the superior craftsmanship. Aang: (reading the inscription) Never give up without a fight...Wow this is sharp. It's nice, but I could really hurt myself with this. (The shot pans right to show Azula standing in front of another servant. He offers her something on a tray.) Ursa: And for Azula, a new friend. Aang: Good for you sis, that makes it what, four? Ursa: Aang! (Aang shrinks back, Azula sticks her tongue out at him, Ursa clears her throat to continue) She wears the latest fashion for Earth Kingdom girls. (As Ursa speaks, Azula picks up a doll wearing Earth Kingdom green. The Princess makes a face of disgust.) Aang: (sickeningly sweet, offering the sheathed dagger to Azula) I'll trade ya. Azula: (perks up) Really? That'd be so...oh, (expression sours) I know where this is going. Aang: What? I'm just trying to be nice. Azula: (in a mocking imitation of Aang) 'Oh hey there Ty Lee, look at what my uncle the famous general just sent me. It's a rare ancestral doll from the Earth Kingdom that he trusted me to give to the prettiest girl in the entire world!' (end imitation) Am I right? Aang: Who's Ty Lee? Azula: My friend, you know, the one who isn't Mai? Aang: You named the doll Ty Lee? Azula: (groans)
Scene #4 Azula: If Uncle doesn't make it back from war, then dad would be next in line to be Fire Lord, wouldn't he? Aang: Yeah, you younger siblings have it easy. You just have to wait for your older brothers to let stuff fall on your laps while you sit around and frown all day. Ursa: (disappointed) Aang, don't talk about your father like that! And Azula, we don't speak that way. It would be awful if Uncle Iroh didn't return. And besides, Fire Lord Azulon is a picture of health. Azula: I still think our dad would make a much better Fire Lord than (looking at the doll with disdain) his royal tea loving kookiness. Aang: (clearly offended) Well, um, well unlike YOU or DAD, people actually like having Uncle Iroh around! Azula: (Azula looks at him with shock, then hatred) You can have the stupid doll! (tries to throw it at Zuko but misses, and it clatters to the floor instead) (she runs away) Aang: Jeez, what's her problem? (bends down to get the doll, only to be harshly tugged back up by the ear, courtesy of Ursa) Ow! Mom, what gives?! Ursa: I told you what moms are like when ANYONE messes with their babies. (picks doll up and dusts it off) We'll talk about this later. (walks after Azula)
Hey, I said 'Mostly' didn't I?
Like I said, bolstered by his building popularity in school, young Aang has the confidence to manifest his resentment towards his father and sister, and doesn't need much prodding to voice it, though said confidence comes off as arrogance at times. Whereas Zuko was gentle and meek, Aang is bombastic and mischievous (often to the inconveniance of others). It also builds on why Azula has a special outright dislike for Aang and why she's cold and calculating half of the time and very emotional (ie angry) during the other half. This isn't the only time Aang's been particularly mean to his 'nerdy' kid sister, I haven't even delved into the wedgies and wet willies.
Ah, youth.
You know what, I feel bad ending on such a heavy note, so have another scene:
(After Azula finishes her display in front of Azulon, ending in a crouched position) Aang: (with his hand over his mouth) Pffft! Azula: (Azula blushes, and returns to her family's side, glaring daggers at Aang) You'll never catch up. Aang: (waves hand in front of him and makes a sound of mock disgust) I better get used to being downwind of you then. Azula: That was you and you know it!
(Ozai glares, Azulon looks down at the two siblings, oddly intrigued)
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