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>>4311
Heeey, now there's something you don't see often. Nice sketch, are you planning on working it out further? You're a good artist with a good understanding of human anatomy (important if you're going to be drawing porn), but I hope you don't mind giving you some crits, just some constructive advice. You took a challenging pose (multiple characters interacting with each other is always a bitch to draw) and you executed it well, but there are some weird areas that I can't quite figure out. For example, her left arm, the one that she's holding the Skrull with, looks like it's "melding" with the Skrull's chest. That could be solved simply by raising it a little more so she puts it on his shoulder. Also, is that her finger on his head, indicating that she's holding it? It's a bit hard to tell. It also looks like there are these odd deep "grooves" under her breast and on her left inner thigh, near her groin area that could probably be solved by erasing some lines. As for aesthetics, she looks a bit masculine. Now the chin is obviously supposed to look that way based on the reference images, and she looks like a mature woman, but I think she would look more feminine with some small changes. A less defined brow area, a smaller, "perkier" nose, more feminine lips and especially more feminine eyes (eyelashes!) would do wonders. And on a merely personal level, I personally prefer it when a character is still recognizable by some distinguishing articles of clothing, which in her case would be the headdress, earrings and maybe the cloak. That's just a personal thing though, and obviously she's entirely naked on the third page. Just some pointers, hope you'll finish the picture and I'd like to see more work from you. :)
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