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154475 No. 154475
The story so far

Issue 1
http://tinyurl.com/lewdwhatif

Issue 2
http://tinyurl.com/lewdwhatif2

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>>152984
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>> No. 154477
How MILFy is Sue in this universe?
>> No. 154478
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Hello new thread! I'm glad to know that my little Lewd Universe smut has some devoted fans.
>> No. 154479
>>154478
Quality writing deserves devoted fans
>> No. 154480
Mmm, reading issue 2...

Does that mean that one of the reasons he won't cum inside Sue is because he will get her pregnant for sure?

I guess that explains why he starting doing her ass, so he could cum inside her in some way.

She does eventually lets him finish inside her in the "wedding dress" sex, right?
Does that means what I think it means?

There is always contraceptives I suppose, but I'm guessing it wouldn't be as sexy for her, the thrill might be gone.
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>>154477
>How MILFy is Sue in this universe?

Depends on the issue. She gets more curvaceous as time passes. She won't be a proper MILF until issue 3... I think. Unless I do a betweener issue and bump up post-Franklin stuff to issue 4.

>>154479

You'll make me blush! I'm just doing the best I can to fulfil a request.
>> No. 154484
>>154481
Oh, we definitely need MILF Sue as soon as possible.
>> No. 154486
>>154480
>Does that mean that one of the reasons he won't cum inside Sue is because he will get her pregnant for sure?

More or less, sorta. Mostly it's because T'Challa is a gentleman and won't cum inside her unless he has her express permission.

>>154484

We'll see. She's already got a rockin' booty and big tits, though, because I don't want her any other way.
>> No. 154487
>>154481
>>154484
I think issue 3 was supposed to take place several years later, once she had Franklin for some time.

Sue has been having her secret affair with T'Challa for some years now, and is willing to try something new(anal).

Issue 3 is the anal cherry one, right?

Or maybe you could just decide to do something else, its your call afterall.
>> No. 154488
Man, that "Panther has his prey" scene was damn hot, I seriously hope it gets some art too.
>> No. 154489
>>154487

Anal cherry is the next big step, and I think that's probably going to be the main focus of issue 3, yes.

Issues 4 and 5 are going to be the wild sex in the wedding dress, and the threesome with Emma Frost, I think. I'm just not sure which order to do them in. I'm leaning towards wedding dress followed by threesome, which makes more sense from a narrative viewpoint. But in terms of content, that could make issue 5 something of a step down from issue 4.

Issue 6 is the Wakandan ceremony and the end of the story arc, where we find out what's going to happen to Sue, T'Challa, and Reed. I have already sketched out the ending, so I know where I'm aiming with that one (and the whole story).

Then there's some possibilities for extra issues outside the main story arc, including the "Secret Whores" crossover event where the lovely ladies of Marvel take a trip to Susan's embassy and find out just how advanced a society Wakanda is. (Hint: at least 8 inches ahead.)
>> No. 154490
>>154486
>Mostly it's because T'Challa is a gentleman and won't cum inside her unless he has her express permission.
I really like this, makes the moment when she finally tells him to cum inside her all the more meaningful, really sexy and even romantic.

Plus it really serves as the final milestone for when she has truly given herself to him, the fact the she is willing to accept his potent seed inside her most intimate and precious place, regardless of the consequences.
>> No. 154491
>>154489
Really looking forward to reading more of you writing, it's just top quality all around.

I must say, I'm actually quite excited about how you are going to end the story with the Wakanda ceremony, to the point of worrying about spoilers. Silly, I know.

As for the Emma story, its a tricky one, but I think it should take place after the "wedding dress" issue. Not only because that's the event where their sex started to get far more kinky and why a threesome is fits better, but also because the event with Emma is supposed to be what finally make them realize that their affair is most than just lust.
>> No. 154492
>>154491
>Really looking forward to reading more of you writing, it's just top quality all around.

I do my best! Especially since good feedback makes me all the more determined to do better.

>I must say, I'm actually quite excited about how you are going to end the story with the Wakanda ceremony, to the point of worrying about spoilers. Silly, I know.

Hardly silly, this is a story with a plot. If I gave away the ending it'd make the story less enjoyable. I will say, however, it's an interesting twist that will probably leave some people laughing. I'm a firm believer of mixing sex and comedy.

>As for the Emma story, its a tricky one, but I think it should take place after the "wedding dress" issue. Not only because that's the event where their sex started to get far more kinky and why a threesome is fits better, but also because the event with Emma is supposed to be what finally make them realize that their affair is most than just lust.

Yeah, that was my thought too. I suppose if I need to make sure issue 5 won't be overshadowed by the content of issue 4, then issue 5 is going to have to have a lot of lewd behaviour in it. I'm talking sloppy blowjobs, messy facials, indecent acts of questionable orientation, the works.
>> No. 154493
>>154491
Then again, it also works the other way around...

The threesome with Emma makes Sue realize that she really cares for T'Challa and thus why she asks him to do her in her old wedding dress, to completely destroy her old marriage at least in a symbolic sense.

It also works because the threesome could make Sue start to have more and more lewd thoughts, completely lowering her inhibitions to the point that she would be willing to want to get so roughly fucked in her own wedding dress on her own marital bed.

Its a tricky one.

Anyway, don't forget to add the dildo scene in the hero meeting.
>> No. 154494
I'd also like to talk some about other possible Lewd Universe/Earth-152984 pairings in this thread, if that's ok. I know I'm not even done with issue 2 yet, with another four to go after that, but I intend to finish this project no matter what.

Plus I think talking about other Marvel ladies getting pounded hard by huge cocks will cheer me up no end and inspire me to keep going. I'm shameless that way.
>> No. 154495
>>154492
>I'm a firm believer of mixing sex and comedy
I have noticed, loved the little moment in the most recent issue where Sue is trying to be all symbolic and sincere about T'Challa coming on her face, but then just loses patience.

Another reason why I think the silly "anal cherry" costume could work well, it's just Sue trying to make a rather important thing for her a bit more lighthearted, less stressful and more fun.

I hope you add some of this humor in regards to the big choker, show the importance and super sexy nature of it for sure, but also a comment about the fact that she has been collared in such a blatant way, would make the situation more relaxed and fun.
>> No. 154496
>>154494
I would like to see Jean Grey as The Black Queen in sexy and kinky situations, I mean, it is basically designed that way.
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>>154495

Thanks, and don't worry, I'm going to do my best to make the collaring seem both sexy and fun. Although I'm starting to think that the BIG collar shouldn't turn up until post-anal... it seems like it's a big deal. But Sue should still get a new collar this issue, because it's thematically relevant. Maybe not the BIG one, just a bigger one instead. Build up to the complete collaring.

Either that or my brain's failing on me because my cold meds are wearing off. Think I might have to go lie down for a bit and chow down on some more. Maybe even in that order.
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>>154497
Maybe the choker/collar is formed from several pieces, similar to the crown in Hellboy, only here they can all act as individual chokers?
Kind of like this ones.
>>154147
Wakanda tech(Vibranium) keeps them together but also flexible, like with a magnet or something similar.

T'Challa adds a new piece as their affair continues, after issue two the one she already has(the one given to her in Wakanda) gets a bit bigger as a result, by the time she finally loses her anal cherry the final piece is added and the choker finally completed. It could be ritualistic in nature.
Three piece in total?

Than again, that sounds a bit too weird, so maybe she could just get the choker after they first consummate their lust, and use the costumes as symbols of escalation in their affair instead?

I trust your judgement on this.
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>>154498
I think it can work, something like this perhaps but in the form of a choker like the one on the far lower right.
Each section representing something of a particular importance, the choker growing along with their relationship.
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My take on Sue's final costume, once she has fully devoted herself to Black Panther.

As suggested I included fishnet stockings, it puts great emphasis on her legs and ass.

I tried to keep the panther head design on her costume as abstract as possible, just so that is not as blatant to everyone else.
Its definitely recognizable, but a bit more subtle.

I'm not so sure about her shoes though...
>> No. 154571
>>154564

I would have gone with high boots, personally. Because I love high boots on ladies.
>> No. 154572
>>154571
How high are we talking here?
I mean, I didn't want to cover up those legs too much, but I also feel as though the design as it is right now feels incomplete.
>> No. 154577
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>>154571
>>154572
Yeah, it does look a lot better
>> No. 154578
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154578
Just got time to read new additions to part 2, I love how it's shaping up! A great read, A Certain Liar! The "Panther has his prey" sex is hot. What I especially liked is how they both start to acknowledge that she's starting to belong to him, that's just so hot. And i like that you described her orgasm as something actually believable, not how it's often shown or described in porn. Keep it up!

Hope you're getting over your illness, I wish you to get well!

>>154480
>She does eventually lets him finish inside her in the "wedding dress" sex, right?
>Does that means what I think it means?
A tricky question. If I understand right, we don't want Sue to get pregnant from T'Challa until (possibly) part 6 ("Wakandan wedding"). But we have established that T'Challa was endowed with the powers of the Panther God that help him produce a heir. Why doesn't he impregnate Sue after the "wedding dress sex" (as it would feature multiple vaginal creampies)?
I have a suggestion. How about this: Yes, T'Challa's cum is magically potent because it's endowed with the power of the Panther God. But! This magic only works if the woman has gone through a specific ritual that marks her as the Black Panther's mate. This ritual makes the chances of impregnation 100%. What is this ritual, you ask? Why, none other than the one we describe as "Wakandan wedding"! Thus, it's even more dangerous and daring for Sue, as she invites her husband to attend not just a symbolic ritual, but an actual magical rite that, if finished, would her help break the last barrier – get pregnant with T'Challa's child right then and there!
What do you think? I think it all fits nicely!

>>154489
>>154491
>>154492
>>154493
Here's my 2 cents on the "What goes first: Wedding Dress Sex or Emma Threesome?" dilemma.
I support the plan where the WDS goes first (part 4), then goes the Emma Threesome. And I don't think there needs to be a linear progression of lewdness! Why do we need such a linear progress? How about just making them a bit different in focus: p.4 could be focused on lewdness, depravity and kinkiness of sex acts, it's mostly all about sex, sex, sex; while p.5 could be more about psychology (comparison of Sue's and Emma's motives), character interaction, character evolution (the experience with Emma making both Sue and T'Challa realize their affair is something more serious), and some bisexual sex acts. I think it would work wonderfully that way!
But of course, as I always say, the final word belongs to A Certain Liar!

>>154492
>I will say, however, it's an interesting twist that will probably leave some people laughing. I'm a firm believer of mixing sex and comedy.
I already like this!
I must say, this is actually one of the reasons I like your writings so much. Making it lighthearted, and sometimes funny, sets a great mood to enjoy all these sex escapades. And you know how to set the proportion between "sexy" and "funny" just right, too

(cont.)
>> No. 154580
>>154578
I sort of like the magic aspect regarding T'Challa cumming inside Sue, but it could also get pretty silly.
Tricky, but I think it could work.
>> No. 154583
>>154578
I agree with the Emma story, I don't see why it has to somehow be more depraved than the previous chapter, it could just focus on the realization that their relationship is becoming something more.

The one with the wedding dress is all about lust and revenge, much more primal and physical, while the other while actually involving someone else can have a much different tone.

I know it's going to sound weird and cheesy, but the threesome can actually be the most romantic chapter, despite the fact that Emma is involved. It can also act as a contrast of the previous one, which was just filthy rough sex.

Sure both will have plenty of kinky sex, but I think context is what's important. Despite the fact that Sue and T'Challa are basically being blackmailed into a threesome, the whole thing can be unexpected in the way it handles its subject matter.

This of course means that the wedding dress sex had to be even more hardcore, just so the next one feels all the more distinctive and relaxed.
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>>154494
>I'd also like to talk some about other possible Lewd Universe/Earth-152984 pairings in this thread, if that's ok.
Let's see what we have at the moment!

>Sue x T'Challa
Of course.
>Thor x Storm
As you were the first to suggest it, I'd like to hear how you imagine this pairing, before barging in with my ideas
>Prowler x MJ (and possibly Gwen)
Set during the university days, before the Death of Gwen. During that time, Peter sometimes chose between them, in a somewhat Archie-like manner. And sometimes girls were disappointed in him, and dated other guys (e.g., Gwen once dated Peter's bully Flash when she was disappointed in his lack of attention to her). So, this sets a lot of Archie-like college shenanigans, only with more rough interracial sex. Hobie, and his problems with not being able to say a word without being interrupted, and with girls not believing he has a big cock, we already discussed earlier. MJ would probably be the main catalyst behind the whole thing, as she's the most easy-going and experiment-loving of the three.
>Wasp x (Black) Goliath
Needs an angle to differentiate the story from Sue's, because it also features an inattentive jerkass scientist husband, a flirty neglected wife with a hobby in costume design, and a more attentive and down-to-earth black scientist hero – only without the Wakandan exotics.
>Emma
Should she have a story to herself, or would she just be a secondary character in other stories like Sue's?
>Shuri
How about T'Challa's haughty sister develops a taste for white cock? As in our universe T'Challa is still King, Shuri isn't Black Panther, just the King's sister who received training needed to become BP one day. Who would be the lucky guy, and how will it happen? I don't know haha

DC:
>Mera x Black Manta
An Elseworlds where Mera arrived back in time and defeated BM before he could kill Aquababy. So, she's still resentful of Aquaman, but doesn't hate BM that much (especially since he was able to defeat both Aquaman and Aqualad, she respects a winner). She breaks up with Aquaman – and to her own surprise, gets together with BM. Could contain some human moments for BM, who thinks about how lucky he was that Mera foiled his plan and he didn't become a murderer
>Power Girl x Mr. Terrific
Again, awaiting your ideas and suggestions

>Secret Whores
(cont.)
>> No. 154585
>>154584
No Wondy?

Disappointed :(
>> No. 154586
>>154584
Miles X Jessica Drew.
>> No. 154588
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>>154585
Mmm, because of the character's real world history and fictional background, I believe Wonder Woman would have to involve some really hardcore S&M themes, I'm talking lots of bondage, dominatrix, chains, sadomasochism elements. Possibly magic too because of regular whips and pain would not do much for a demigod, need to find a way to make her more vulnerable.

She is a superhero that can go toe to toe with the likes of Superman, so the idea of and undisputed icon like her loving to get dominated on her free time would be a sexy juxtaposition.

It would not only be physical, something which had been part of her background since the beginning, I mean, her bracelets themselves are a symbol of bondage, but also psychological. Wonder Woman after all is the quintessential female hero of the DC universe with many people idolizing her and all other heroes respecting her, making the subservient element all the more poignant.

Also, because of the character's background and origin, I think her Dom would need to be another female, possibly a villain, but a hero would work just fine as well.
If we are still going with the interracial element, I think someone like Rene Montoya would be a great choice. The fact that she is a regular human and yet can bring the acting God of War to her knees and she loving it, somehow makes it far more sexy.

So yeah, it would be somewhat similar to the Sue story, in which an apparently wholesome and respectable superhero develops another side of her in secret, an "inner slut" if you will.

This story would have to involve far more deviant sexual themes, so I don't know if our writer friend would be up to it, its a more niche thing perhaps.
>Fifty Shades of Wonder

At any case, I think we should at least think about finish this one before moving to something new. And hell, Morrison is already exploring the more sexual and bondage side of Wonder Woman in the Earth One graphic novel.
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>>154580
>but it could also get pretty silly.
I don't think it's sillier than what we already have. I mean, we already have the Panther God: grant T'Challa a bigger cock, make him last longer, make him cum more sperm, and make him able to do sex a lot of times in one night. I think, in the hands of a talented writer like ACL, the Panther God granting the One Marked As Black Panther's Mate increased fertility after a specific ritual of The Marking, would not appear too silly.
>>154585
Oops, just forgot about her!
>Wonder Woman x ???
Suggestions needed about the man. Someone suggested Jaime Reyes, another suggestion was a black man who was her canon lover. I don't really know if canon relationships fit the concept of this project – but it's definitely A Certain Liar's call.

So,
>Secret Whores
Who can participate in this? Let's see:
>Sue Storm
Of course.
>Emma Frost, Janet van Dyne
These two very flirty ladies were the first to jump at the idea of a girls-only Wakandan vacation
>Mary Jane
A younger girl compared to the three MILFs mentioned before, MJ is a carefree girl who loves to party. Once she knew about this plan (don't know how, though). Maybe she also persuaded her less party-like friend Gwen to keep her company.
>She-Hulk
Would be strange to organize a no-holes-barred sex romp, and leave out Shulkie. I guess, there should be some extra strong Wakandan warriors for her to meet
>Mockingbird, Dazzler
I'm afraid I know too little about these characters, so it's your call, ACL.
>Carol Danvers
I'm not sure if she fits here; I don't know much about her, but I always thought she's too straight-laced for such depraved fun. But maybe I just don't know her well
And btw, I don't think she should be Captain Marvel in this, as it's a recent development, and our stories are set in some unspecified time in the past (e.g., Gwen is alive, etc).
>Crystal and Medusa
These two Inhuman ladies have always been connected to the FF, makes sense Sue could tell them about this expedition. Crystal is known to look outside her marriage, so she especially fits here.
>Some X-Men maybe?
Rogue comes to mind (some Wakandan tech to negate her powers?), some others maybe?
>Maybe some Asgardians, e.g., Valkyrie?
>> No. 154591
>>154588
How deep will her domination be?

It would be sort of amusing and ironic, if by the end Montoya has Diana worshiping like her goddess, actually making her believe that her sole existence is servicing her.

I got say, enslaving a beautiful goddess sound pretty hot.

And I'm just going to assume that big strapon dildos will be involved somehow.
>> No. 154593
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Btw, some suggestions about Secret Whores:
>the place
I'd suggest it take place in Wakanda, not the embassy.
First reason: It's an all-girl vacation, away from their country, away from their duties and jobs, their families, husbands and boyfriends. There's a sense of freedom in this. It could take, e.g., a month – not just a night or a weekend, but a whole month of freedom and new sexual experiences.
Second reason: A vacation is a good excuse they could give their families, husbands/boyfriends, teammates, etc.
Third reason: Setting it in Wakanda offers an opportunity to split all the women into several groups of 1-2, each with a distinct interesting or picturesque location (various rooms in T'Challa's palace, various sights and locales). And of course, there are much more young virile warriors to choose from.
>plot ideas
Maybe the women first split into groups of 1-2, each group/individual finds their own adventures. Sue is with T'Challa, of course. At the end, they all gather together for a grand banquet, which slowly evolves into an orgy.
Btw, how about inserting some CFNM into the banquet? I don't know ACL's or everyone's stance on CFNM, though. Basically, it's like a high class banquet (in an exotic Wakandan style). There's music, delicious meals, traditional dancing, etc. Maybe the women are wearing sexy evening dresses – or just their costumes. But the kicker is – there are only our women, T'Challa and a lot of Wakandan men in the banquet hall... and the men are all naked (including T'Challa)! So, the women have to "endure" a classy banquet while surrounded with lots of naked hunky black men.
>some other girls I forgot
Shanna the She-Devil, Enchantress (Amora), Hellcat, Black Cat, also Namora and Namorita to play on T'Challa and Namor's perpetual rivalry

>>154586
I don't know, isn't he underage?
>>154588
That's an interesting idea, and one that fits WW's origins. However, I thought her weakness was being dominated by a man?
>>154591
>I got say, enslaving a beautiful goddess sound pretty hot.
Now that you've worded it like this, it does sound hot
>> No. 154605
>>154593
>However, I thought her weakness was being dominated by a man?
No, I believe it might have been a thing in the Golden Or Silver Age though.

Anyway, I like the orgy idea.
>> No. 154619
There definitely needs to be more little moments where Sue remembers that she is a wife and moment, especially if she happens to be getting her ass pounded at the time.

Acting as even more if a turn on, although perhaps the first time of one of those relizations she actually has second thought about her affair, but quickly gets over it because of how good being lewd it makes her feel.
>> No. 154640
>>154584
>As you were the first to suggest it, I'd like to hear how you imagine this pairing, before barging in with my ideas

I was thinking of looking up the first time the Avengers and the new X-Men (Storm and the others) interacted, and then take things from there. I'm not as familiar with a lot of the early Marvel stuff, or really anything much beyond the general basics, so I tend to fake it when I'm not rewriting the continuity.

Honestly I just think they look really cute together.

>Prowler x MJ (and possibly Gwen)

I'd really like to do this as a sort of reverse Spider-Man, where Hobie has the same deal - unassuming guy is secretly a masked hero - but the complete opposite in luck. So while Peter keeps fucking up, Hobie keeps getting lucky.

Since this is my own private continuity (ha ha, eat it Bendis) I get to change how things go, which means I might keep Gwen around instead of killing her off.

>Needs an angle to differentiate the story from Sue's, because it also features an inattentive jerkass scientist husband, a flirty neglected wife with a hobby in costume design, and a more attentive and down-to-earth black scientist hero – only without the Wakandan exotics.

Yeah, I'm not sure right now how I'd differentiate it. There's probably some sort of way... although it might require a change of character.

>>154593
>I'd suggest it take place in Wakanda, not the embassy.

I meant the American embassy in Wakanda when I said "Susan's embassy". Don't worry, I agree with you there.

>Btw, how about inserting some CFNM into the banquet?

Dirty ideas... rising...
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>>154593
Meanwhile, Shuri and the Dora Milaje have their own party...
>> No. 154698
Doing my best to try and finish issue two today, but tonight IS movie night, so in a little while I'm going to have to abandon smut to go watch Godzilla movies instead.

But it's not like I've never written to a deadline before.
>> No. 154699
>>154698
Pressure sometimes brings out the best work
>> No. 154702
>>154699

Depends how much pressure, in my experience.
>> No. 154706
Well well, movie night has not yet begun but I've already reached the end of http://tinyurl.com/lewdwhatif2

Probably got some errors to correct later, but it's reasonably complete, including a teaser setup for the eventual Secret Whores crossover.

Also been giving more thought to our friend Hobie Brown and how to do his story, I think I'm definitely liking the angle of "like Spider-Man, but with reverse Parker Luck". A hero who has everything go right for him, which should be much more conducive to a lighthearted lewd romp.
>> No. 154710
>>154706
Loved that ending, good amount of humor mixed with eroticism.

I assume that she doesn't get the choker until the next issue then?
>> No. 154713
>>154710
>I assume that she doesn't get the choker until the next issue then?

Oh fuck I thought I forgot something

Goddamnit
>> No. 154715
All right, tell you guys what - I'll edit in the collaring scene later, and as an apology for fucking up and forgetting, I'll get started on issue 3 as soon as I can.
>> No. 154716
>>154713
>>154714
I wasn't sure if you were doing it or not in this issue, thats all

>>154715
Awesome, love all the effort you are putting into this.

Keep up the amazing work.

Anyway, I want to tell you that I really liked that little moment of self reflection Sue had toward the end, really gives all the depravity some context, makes it even kinkier and sexier somehow.
>> No. 154719
>>154716
>I wasn't sure if you were doing it or not in this issue, thats all

I meant to, but, well... these things make fools of us all. I was so busy trying to adapt Doodlebug's great sketches into the story that I completely forgot.

I could always do it at the start of the next issue, as she's being "officially" made ambassador-slash-consort. Sometimes it's hard to make things flow in the narrative, but I'm pretty sure I could manage a collaring scene in either issue two.

The problem is crowding the storyline, really. Issue 2 is over 8000 words long as it is, but trying to put the scene into issue 3 might just make that issue more crowded.

>Awesome, love all the effort you are putting into this.

I got tempted to do something for that Supermoms concept, but I've had second thoughts about that. Might as well keep going at what I know I'm good at: stories about sexy Marvel ladies getting pounded by huge cocks.

>Keep up the amazing work.

Thanks! I dunno if it's amazing, exactly, but it's definitely fun to write.

>Anyway, I want to tell you that I really liked that little moment of self reflection Sue had toward the end, really gives all the depravity some context, makes it even kinkier and sexier somehow.

I give the people what they want! Well, try to, at least. Still super pissed off at myself for forgetting the collaring scene.
>> No. 154726
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154726
>The problem is crowding the storyline, really. Issue 2 is over 8000 words long as it is, but trying to put the scene into issue 3 might just make that issue more crowded.
Well, there really isn't a lot going on in the third issue, other than the fact that she loses her anal cherry, right?

I mean, all we know is that it is set several years later, she had Franklin for some time now, and has modified her costume as a result of her secret affair and supposed duty to T'Challa.
Good set up, but not a lot going on in terms of narrative, unless you already have an outline in mind.

Than again, I also don't see how the ceremony of when she becomes an official ambassador/consort would fit in issue 3, if she has already been one for years at that point.

Unless you do a flashback of sorts at the beginning of the third issue, in which she is reminiscing fondly of that particular moment as she sensually caresses her choker.
Skipping back and forth in the timeline has already been suggested after all, the other idea being that Sue would come from a meeting with T'Challa, acting as the loving wife and mother, we later finding out in a rather dramatic and sexy reveal that she had been covered in cum, sweat, spanking marks, and hickies under her suit all this time, we then jump back to the how that happened with the rest of the story.
Maybe do something like that here?

Anyway, I really want to see what you can do with the ceremony of when is collared.
For some reason I keep thinking of that famous scene in FC3...
>> No. 154731
>>154726

I do have something of a narrative in mind, but those are some pretty stellar ideas! I might have to incorporate them, it seems like a good way to go about it.
>> No. 154735
>>154731
Yeah, I think we can play around some more not just with the order of the narrative but also the more psychological aspects of the story.
No, I don't mean that it should take itself more seriously or anything like that, but those particular instance in which Sue has a moment clarity about all the really lewd things she has been doing and how far she submitted to this man, really makes the story all the more sexy.

Like in that other suggested scene in which Sue is getting plowed super hard in the ass, as she catches a glimpse of herself in the mirror, tons of images of her married life, being a mother and a respected superhero flooding her mind. Her first reaction is shame, however, the satisfaction and pure bliss she quickly feels of thinking about her other life while getting anal penetrated actually turns into a new source of arousal.
>> No. 154746
So, Susan already told T'Challa to fuck her like as if he wanted to brake her, what sort of sexy phrase will he tell him right before the "wedding dress sex"?

I wouldn't want you to spoil it, but considering how messy, rough, and taboo that particular fuck session is supposed to get, I'm hoping is something special.

Maybe something more symbolic like instructing him to once and for all claiming "this" bride/wife for himself?
I definitely think it should be a comment to do with her marital attire and the physical nature of that occasion, but I guess something filthy is fine too.

But I think I'm getting ahead of myself here.
>> No. 154752
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154752
What can I say that I haven't said before... that was very hot. Loved how you incorporated my drawing into the story (as you did several times before), and love the new sex scenes. I like how the sex is sometimes just wild and almost animalistic, and sometimes slow and tender. Also, didn't expect the Spider-Man joke to make it into the story haha

I think the collaring may take place some other time. I mean, it makes sense: remember, they thought up the "ambassador" idea right on the spot. T'Challa needs some time to create the collar for Sue. And even if T'Challa was already thinking about appointing an ambassador, I don't think he wanted to place a sexy collar on some boring old white guy haha

By the way, how about when Sue looks out the window, she sees the Baxter Building? It could serve as the catalyst for her thoughts about family, Reed etc.

I'm going to draw something new soon, honest
>> No. 154769
>>154746

The trick for that is going to be who's in charge. For both of these issues we've had Sue telling T'Challa what she wants and what he should do. The next few issues are going to be about her finding and indulging her submissive side and learning to love being told what to do.

So the wedding dress sex won't have her telling T'Challa how to fuck her, it's going to have T'Challa telling her just how he's going to fuck her. Probably in great detail, so she's completely soaked her panties by the time he gets to work.
>> No. 154770
>>154752

Don't worry about drawing new stuff, you don't have to try supporting this thread single-handedly. Admittedly the stuff you do is hot as hell...

Seriously don't sweat it. I think I'm still behind my intended catch-up goal anyway.
>> No. 154786
>>154769
Great idea there, considering how Sue is supposed to "devote" herself to T'Challa to the point of calling/seeing him as her king, a change in dynamics would be necessary at some point, plus Sue being incredibly submissive while getting roughly fucked in her wedding dress just makes the whole thing all the more sexy.

Now I'm looking forward to what T'Challa tells Sue as he is ripping her wedding dress during the fuck of her lifetime, and she knowing that every single second of that monumental event is being captured on video and photographs.

Maybe the idea of keeping the ruined dress as a memento and symbol of the nature of their relationship can be his, similarly to why she always wears the choker.
A change in dynamics in that particular instance, a change that she enjoys even more than when in charge.
>> No. 154795
I liked the previous idea of Susan liking Black Panther playing with her feet, hell, wasn't she supposed to be barefoot when at the embassy?

I don't believe foot play should be the focus, but it would make the sex a bit more interesting perhaps.
>> No. 154796
>>154795
>I don't believe foot play should be the focus, but it would make the sex a bit more interesting perhaps.

I will level with you: I have no experience with foot play or foot fetish in general. It's not something which does anything for me, personally. So I'm not entirely sure how best to incorporate it into the storyline in an organic way.
>> No. 154797
>>154796
Its not really my thing either, I just though it would make their sex more interesting without needing to go into more rough stuff, foreplay or sorts.

Take it or leave it
>> No. 154922
I hope she doesn't just do anal once, would be nice if she starts to really like it and making it a part of their ritual.

I can even see her becoming an avid practitioner, so much so in fact that it is almost an addiction to her, a whole new type of sex for Sue to fully explore.
>> No. 154987
>>154922

Oh, she's gonna like it all right. Don't you worry about that.

I've been working on issue 3 off and on the last few days, but as I am still catching up with my real work it's not been as frequently as before. Sufficed to say the lewd material has not yet been reached, so rather than essentially cocktease the lot of you, I'll just link it here when there's some actual humpin' going on.
>> No. 154988
>>154987
Sounds good, would hate for you to stop writing once it finally starts to get good.

Anyway, you haven't forgotten about "the collaring" this time around, right? :)
>> No. 154990
>>154988

It's in, and it's an extensive scene to make up for the fact I screwed up last issue.
>> No. 155017
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A compilation of Susan's superhero costumes, since these are just the ones that she would fight crime with, it does not include the "first anal" and "Wakanda wedding" outfits.

Costumes one and two are both canon.

Third costume is the first one that is completely from our universe, however, it still takes a lot of cues from the previous two.
It shows skin, but has a very classical design.
>> No. 155018
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155018
The fourth costume is where Susan would just start to get daring, including some Wakanda iconography but nothing that would directly show Black Panther's influence.
The FF symbol is still very much predominant on the front.
The costume is also pretty presentable with not a lot of skin showing, she has however been collared at this point.

The fifth costume has Sue finally willing to base her costume on Black Panther, for the first time containing more black than blue.
The FF symbol now relegated to the back.
It shows quite a bit of skin, displaying Susan's new found boldness and sexuality.
The costume also has a panther head design, exhibiting quite clearly that is devouring Sue.

The final costume has Susan remonstrating her complete devotion to Black Panther, by not only wearing his colors but also getting rid of the blue as a whole.
The FF symbol is now fully gone.
It is very skimpy and sexy, with the use of fishnet stockings and putting great emphasis on Susan's ass and legs which T'Challa just loves.
The costume is still has a panther head design, but now showing that it has fully devoured Sue.
>> No. 155063
Is the wedding sex thing something which Sue would be planning for a while, or something that she would do in the heat of the moment because once again Reed has neglected her.

I think it is very important to make this distinction.
>> No. 155066
>>155063
I'd personally vote for the second option. It makes all the depravity much hotter
>> No. 155068
>>155063
>>155066
What if it is an idea that has been consistently creeping into her mind for a while now, maybe even Sue experiencing glimpses of it during her dreams.
It could all start when she is trying dresses with Janet at the Baxter Building, they come across it, and while Sue is trying it on again after all those years, Janet makes a jokingly but suggestive comment about it that stays with Sue now matter how hard she tries to dismiss it.

>Wow, Sue, I'm really surprised that you can still fit into if after two kids, and still looks so fashionable too. In fact I think you could probably wear it for other fancy events like your embassy dinners. Do you think T'Challa would like it, Sue? I bet he would like you to see you wearing it for him...
(I'm sure someone can do a better job with this dialogue and idea, but you know what I'm getting at)

She knows it would be something too taboo and depraved, something that would break all her morals, something that would forever change her and the relationship that she has bee having with T'Challa, not to mention her marriage and devotion to Reed.

As a result she has for the most part buried it deep in her subconscious, that is is until Reed does something that cause her to act in a drastic manner.
>> No. 155075
>>155068
Hm, I agree, I think that it could be just a sexual fantasy that Sue enjoys schlicking to (those lonely nights when T'Challa is away in Wakanda, and Reed is being Reed as usual), but never thinks of actually doing in real life. She could get the idea during a visit from Jan, which should happen after Jan learns of Sue and T'Challa's affair (maybe after Secret Whores). They try on different dresses, and of course comment on which ones Sue should wear for T'Challa etc. Then Jan discovers the wedding dress and makes a joke like "Hey Sue, why don't you go to a date with T'Challa in *this* dress" making Sue blush, but at the same time she can't help but start fantasizing about it.
When Reed forgets about their anniversary, Sue starts thinking about their wedding which makes her thought turn to this fantasy. So she just thinks "Fuck it, if he doesn't respect our marriage, so won't I" and decides to enact her fantasy
>> No. 155112
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155112
Check this disguise Sue's wearing, guys. Maybe it'll inspire you
>> No. 155113
>>155112
Man, and here I though my take on her costume was too skimpy or slutty.
>> No. 155150
>>155112

Hah, Tintin.

So I've been doing some more work on issue 3 (in between trying to catch up with the stuff I'm getting paid to do) and it's... going in a bit of a different direction, sort of.

Narratives are organic, and evolve beyond what you plan for, so I might be veering off the path that I established all those weeks ago. However I feel the story's more interesting this way, personally.

Still going to try to stick to the basic outline of what happens, but no promises on the specifics.

Besides, this way you guys are going to get pleasantly surprised!
>> No. 155162
>>155150
Looking forward to it

But yeah, other than the fact that Sue does her first anal, I'm not sure how much of the story was really set up.

Plenty of flexibility.
>> No. 155166
>>155162

Hope you're a big fan of Janet van Dyne, because she's in this issue a lot and may possibly be a sad commentary on how easily I am swayed by short hair on ladies.
>> No. 155246
>>155166
Are they going to have like a threesome of something?
I though that was Emma

I guess Sue telling someone before that happens makes sense, maybe Janet even watches Sue getting her anal cherry popped
>> No. 155254
>>155246

Well, I suppose I'd better link you guys rather than be cryptic. Almost 2000 words in and no sex yet... I think I'm forgetting I'm supposed to be writing lewd smut.

http://tinyurl.com/lewdwhatif3

Sorry it's incomplete, but I have been busy elsewhere.
>> No. 155255
>>155254
Loving what you written so far, very sexy despite being just a casual conversation, not to mention a perfect way to introduce/foreshadow the various sexual milestones in future issues and address the change in her form of dress.

I also really liked the collar scene at the beginning too, really kinky despite being so short, I'm hoping that I'm right in that you revisit that scene towards the end of the issue, you know right when she finally gives herself to him.

But seriously though, Sue kneeling down and drinking cum out of a bowl while being completely naked except for the collar...damn sexy
I can't wait for the scene of when she agrees to that, the exact moment when she rationalizes it to herself should be super hot in and of itself
>> No. 155256
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155256
Mmm, I don't know if it makes much sense timeline wise, but I'm hoping Janet is wearing her sexy black costume
>> No. 155257
>>155255

The collar scene is what we in the biz call a "flash foward" - meaning yes, it will be revisited. In detail. The lead-up, the follow through, everything. I just put the teaser there at the start to a) let you guys know I'd be doing it, and b) flash forwards are totally cool.

This issue is the beginning of Sue realizing that being a submissive is amazing and also really hot, leading to her being up for more than just messy facials in future.
>> No. 155259
>>155257
>flash forwards are totally cool.
I see, super happy to see the suggested idea is being used so well, it sure worked as a perfect tease, making the wait for it really rewarding.

I also really like the idea of Sue exploring her submissive side, and that Janet has a hand in bringing that out, looking forward to find out just how much hands on is she going to be in that process.
>> No. 155265
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>>155254
I dig your description of the collar, particularly the panther head section on the front, am I right to assume that the ring is only brought out and attached when they have their little bondage like sex sessions?

Makes sense, that way is not as blatant when she is just wearing most of the time, or when she is not with T'Challa

Is she going to stop making it invincible in this issue, so that everyone can see her wearing it proudly? It could be like a reaffirmation of her submission and increase in the boldness of almost wanting to get caught.
>> No. 155273
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>>155254
I was inspired and revamped the design to be more in line with your story, got rid of the other one.

I think it looks better, the long boots and gloves look both classy and kinky somehow, the collar also looks better as mostly black with gold trimmings.

It doesn't exactly match, nor should it I think, but I rather it stays a bit more consistent.
>> No. 155282
>>155259

Jan being a complete slut (with a husband who sometimes likes to watch, no less) was sort of a complete accident that happened while I was writing. But I thought it fit nicely, so I kept it in.

>>155265

Your attached picture is more or less how I see the ring-connection working, haha.

Her initial "slender collar" (which is about as slim as, say, a cat's collar) is going to get replaced with the bigger full-neck choker in this story, and she's not going to make that one invisible.

I liked the idea of a small necklace-like collar initially, one that could be mistaken for simple jewelry, and as she submits she "trades up" for something more obvious.

>>155273

Actually I was mostly inspired by >>153107 as the "initial costume" idea, because while panther-themed it's also not too lewd, so I thought it'd be a good starting place for Sue with regards to her costume.

But now she's intent on exploring her submissive side, the subsequent revisions may get a lot more similar to the designs you've been doing.
>> No. 155327
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Are the photos and video that Sue records during the "wedding dress sex" for Janet's viewing pleasure?
Maybe she is the one who comes out with the idea at least.

I think that would be a good reason for which Sue decides to document the event, Janet egging her on to be more perverted.

>>155282
>Actually I was mostly inspired by >>153107 as the "initial costume" idea, because while panther-themed it's also not too lewd
Good point, that costume is for when she has completely embraced her sexuality and her devotion for T'Challa.

I guess this one is for when she is just starting to get conformable with the idea
>> No. 155328
I sure hope I didn't somehow transmit my flu to Doodlebug through the internet. Maybe I should have made sure I didn't sneeze on my lewd writings or something.
>> No. 155330
>>155328
Yeah, I wonder what happened to our artist friend
>> No. 155431
>>155330

Posting here on plus4chan has been pretty screwy for me the last week-or-so, including blanking out the name field once or twice. Maybe something similar is affecting our pal Doodlebug.
>> No. 155434
>>154588
I would go with Vixen, she was super hot in the JLU cartoon, not to mention she has the whole animal prowess going for her, meaning she could literally fuck her like an animal
>> No. 155506
>>155434

My love of short hair approves.

I've got a bit more free time coming up this week, so I hope I'm going to get to finish issue three before the weekend. Just need to collect enough... "inspirational material".
>> No. 155530
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>>155506
Wonder Woman and short hair, uh? Why not combine them?

Maybe it can be part of her look in this universe? I'm not sure about the tattoos, but then again, maybe the hair, tats, and all that are part of her "corruption"? All part of the gradual process?

Anyway, it seem that the guy in charge of the "inspirational material" is gone, too bad, I really liked his sketches.

And maybe as a result the whole thing has slowed down to a crawl, but I hope you at least get the finish that one chapter though, just so that this whole thing is not a total loss.
>> No. 155542
>>155530

While it was nice getting sketches from Doodlebug, it's not strictly necessary for me to finish. The slowing-to-a-crawl thing is because I got hit by illness, which not only meant I couldn't work so much on this, but also on my actual work.

Paying the bills takes a slight precedence to writing smut for free, sadly. But since I enjoy writing about Sue so much, don't you worry. I'll finish it.
>> No. 155553
>>155542
No pressure at all, man.
I was just commenting that it seems like this thing might be dying out, I could be totally wrong of course.
At any case, completely understandable that work would be more important.
But all things considered, I would still like to see the current issue finished, if you have the time and inspiration mind you.
>> No. 155647
It would be a nice touch if someone commented on the fact that this Sue will get a curvier appearance after becoming a MILF.

It would be funny it was Reed offhanded saying something about her retaining the baby weight or something like that, and as contrast T'Challa complementing Sue on her new curves.
>> No. 155801
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155801
>>155647
She should definitely have the classic milfy body, stereotypical motherly but at the same time incredibly sexy.

I keep wondering just how much we could possibly push her nudity however.
Its just that mentioned way back near the beginning of the first thread that it would be super erotic to have Sue wear nothing more than a fancy coat when Reed comes to visit her at the embassy on Wakanda.

I still want to see it happen, but I don't know if it would be just too unbelievable for the logic of the story. I mean, I know that Reed can be a bit slow when it comes to this type of things, especially in this story, but I think perhaps even him would catch on.
That is unless Sue is able to convince him that it is some sacred native custom or something equally important, she would need to be really convincing though, maybe even have to convince him in advance to not make a scene.

>Reed I need you to promise me that you are not going to overreact when you see my official dress at the dinner this evening, it is very important to me and our governments that everything goes without a hitch. Swear to science that you will understand and respect this official tradition, do it for me, Reed.

Or maybe is just too much, but if anyone can make it work and convincing is A Certain Liar for sure.

Anyway, I not only found the type of coat I was talking about, but also the body type for Sue that kept envisioning wearing it. A perfect fit for her at this point, being that during this part in the story she would be a mother of two and has actually fully embraced her curves, another testament to her love and devotion for T'Challa.

I really hope we get to this...
>> No. 155806
>>155801
Ohgod that's a great bunch of drawings.
Who's the artist?
>> No. 155816
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>>155806
It says right there in the pic, dude, Chem No. 9

Anyway, here some more, love those curves

I guess this one could be during that issue where she goes alone with T'Challa to some tropical island for some official "business", and doesn't comeback to NY for several weeks.

She goes a bit more primal, maybe here is where she starts to really form a habit of being nude when in the company of T'Challa, it just feels more natural for some reason.
>> No. 155883
Would Sue still fit in her old wedding dress after getting that MILF body?

That could be a hot little moment in the scene where she and Janet are trying dresses, Janet convincing Susan to put on her white dress and finding out that now it is super snug.

Sue nearly bursting at the seams with the fabric almost unable to contain her goods, her body being held so tightly that every curve was actually emphasized, and yet finding herself aroused at the sight, there was just something kinky about her new lewd body restrained in such a way by a piece of clothing that's associated with purity.
>> No. 155885
>>155883
hence why it would be a shredded mess later? Part T'challa and part just Sue busting out of it all over.
>> No. 155891
>>155801
I find it rather surprising that she looks so elegant, even though for all intent and purposes she is naked.
>> No. 155904
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155904
>>155816
>>155801
Ah yes, Chem no.9. I also love his style. And I think some of his drawings could represent our Lewd Universe Sue
As for the scene you described, I thought it would be the "wakandan wedding", where she would wear >>153196 ?
>> No. 155908
>>155885
That makes sense, the ripping of the dress could actually be pretty symbolic too.
I mean, sure, on it's surface it is just the result of some really wild and rough sex and Sue's more voluptuous body, but also be sort of liberating for her, almost like shedding her old self.

>>155904
Probably, I believe it was one of the last if not the last chapter in the story, with Sue by then dressing very revealing and being incredibly bold in her actions.
>> No. 155910
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155910
So, since Susan is the curvaceous milfy type, is Janet the more petite slender type?

I know you guys like to play around with the whole idea of "contrast" when it comes to characters, so I think it would be quite appropriate and sexy if their body types were pretty different. Hell, it would be a nice plot point if they used to be rather similar in the past, but then Susan found her curves after she became a mother and started her affair with another man, acting as yet another tell tale sign of her "transformation".
>> No. 155936
>>155904
>Chem No 9
That is -not- a google friendly name.
>> No. 155937
>>155936
http://chemno9.tumblr.com/

http://chemno9.deviantart.com/
>> No. 155939
>>155937
merci.
Mon nouvelle artiste preferrité~
>> No. 156094
Are we just following cartoon logic here, in that moms are inherently super curvy?
I'm fine with that.

>>155910
If we are just talking body types, I'm thinking Gianna Michaels as Sue Storm and Tori Black as the Wasp.
>> No. 156398
>>155801
Use bodypaint, she can cover up her nips and vag with handprints, make it his prints and it is even better
>> No. 156654
Heh this later designs are very Kill La Kill with the whole mouth motif
>> No. 156660
>>156654
I can see that, although even the most revealing ones are nowhere near as slutty as the ones in that show.

Anyway, is it just me or this whole thing died pretty suddenly.
>> No. 156681
>>156660

I maaaaay have possibly passed on my shitty cold to my SO, who ended up suffering much more than I did. So I've been having to play nurse for the past week or two, coupled with trying to get my regular work done, which leaves very little time for the lewd activities.

However, SO has told me that I need to finish my porn, so as soon as I have some free time, I will try to get stuck back in.
>> No. 156721
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156721
>>155910
>>156094
Something as drastic as this would be the most effective.

Thank Xenu for more Chem art.

>>156681
Man, glad to see you are still around, perhaps this project might not be dead after all.
>> No. 156749
>>156721

We have some antibiotics for SO now, turns out it was a pretty serious deal.
>> No. 157243
How has She-Hulk not been mentioned yet?
>> No. 158673
So...I'm guessing this thing is dead, uh?

Too bad it was just getting good.
>> No. 158865
>>158673

I've been lacking the time and the inspiration to finish it.
>> No. 160121
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>>158865
Such a pity, I was seriously looking forward to Susan finally get really dirty with T'Challa, and I'm also wondering what happened to Doodlebug.

At least you are still around, so not all hope is lost, even if the chances are super slim.

Anyway, I would have loved to see Sue wearing something like this, how she would explain or justify it to Reed? I couldn't begin to tell you.
>> No. 160173
>>160121

April's been a busy month. I don't like backing out on promises, though, so I'll do my best to return and finish what I started. And yeah, I wish I knew where Doodlebug had gone to as well. I guess that's life online for you - we'll never know what happened.
>> No. 161415
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>>160173
No pressure, dude.
I do hope to see more of this sexy tale in the future though, in one way or another, maybe when and if our artist friend ever comes back there will be some renewed interest.

Anyway, I leave you with more templates, maybe it can be a "before and after"type of thing, once Sue embraces her curves.
>> No. 161869
So Fox movie now has Sue being adopted? Maybe some daddy issues being part of her character arc?
>> No. 162123
>>161415
Would she like getting spanked?
>> No. 162213
>>161869

That's a different continuity!
>> No. 163133
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from one of the co drawthreads
thought it would be relevant there
>> No. 163134
>>163133
Damn hot, love the jewelry.

Whatever happen to this thread anyway? One moment there was all this cool art and stories, and then suddenly nothing. I'm not even that into NTR all that much, and yet this was working for me for some reason,
>> No. 163179
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Comic series I found about the Invisible Woman. As its site doesn't seem to be on the banned list and this website seems to have been dead for 2 years I'll post all that was made (it's incomplete).
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I feel that due to the art style the comic goes downhill at this point.
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As far as I'm aware this is the entire comic.
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>>163183
>>163182
I'm going to throw up
>> No. 163222
Some more images that don't seem to be on the don't post list
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>>163134

Doodlebug disappeared and I had a whole bunch of real-life work to take care of that meant the porn had to take a back seat. Since we were the primary producers of thread content, I think that stalled things. My apologies about that, I know I promised to finish things - and I still will, when I can.
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Susan's formal dress?
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Oh yeah, also this
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