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>>157576 Are her knees somewhere near bottom border of the image? In that case her torso is probably too long. Her arms are a little too short for the rest of the body. Her eyes are way too close together, and the tiny pupils make her look like a total psycho. Also, her nose bridge is pretty damn long. (But then again, these things are kind of a matter of taste... I guess.) You might want to be more careful with your line art when it comes to drawing technical objects like her belt. It looks like it's made out of Play-Doh. She has weird hybrid breasts. I can't tell whether you were trying to give her real boobs or not. They look like an adult's breasts, only they've been flattened down. They're very far apart and the fat is spreading too far. Most teenagers' (let alone childrens') breasts don't look like that.
You should acquire some good reference photos of children, so you have something to measure the limbs against, and so you can see what developing breasts actually look like. Just google "children bikini". And maybe set image size to large. Create an anatomy reference folder on your hard drive. Also, there are some nice drawing tutorials in the old Simon thread on page 3.
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