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131036 No. 131036
Now... Here is a dilemma I face...

FAPFICTION IS HARD TO SORT THROUGH! There's tons of it, and in the shit crag that is the majority of it lie tiny nuggets of gold just waiting to be uncovered.

Sadly, I've had considerable difficulty finding anything decent.

So! Leave us assemble here the rare gems in the hopes of enjoying, if not inspiring new experiences.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2379730/1/My-Life-as-a-Teenaged-Von-Neumann-Device
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>> No. 156572
Latest chapter of my Ben 10 fiction is out.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Jashinslayer/12793/Ben-10---Gwendom/32233/Chapter-3/Chapter-3

Sadly, no illustration in this chapter.
>> No. 157362
Bump
>> No. 157754
Sorry for the bump, but I have a question

Is drama/conflict really necessary in erotic fiction? (because I fear the thing I'm working on is too "happy")
>> No. 157755
>>157754
Depends on the story and where you want to go with it.
>> No. 157756
>>157754
In my opinion, not exactly.

I try to ask myself: "Is the situation interesting? Is there excitement?"

A story first and foremost should be interesting and captivating. This can be as simple as someone getting caught doing something, a secret being found out, difficult emotions arising between characters, an undesired situation trying to be avoided, etc.

There are many kinds of conflicts and events that can lead to a rising action.

Having said that, there are people who enjoy stories that are peaceful... but what's there to hook someone in?
>> No. 157758
>>157756

>but what's there to hook someone in?

The sex?

By the way, here is my idea

A boy living in an orphanage named Robbie gets adopted by eccentric millionaire Madame Gymos. As her name suggests, she (along with her servants) spend all of their time (when on her property) naked. The boy tries to adapt to his new naked lifestyle. Sex and possibly some hilarity and heartwarming scenes ensue.
>> No. 157759
Protip: People aren't really going to read your fic. They'll see the tags or what have you for what the content is; then they'll scroll until the fucking starts and keep reading until they get off.
Then they close the story.
>> No. 157762
>>157754

Drama/conflict makes for better stories, but not necessarily for better erotica/fapfics/smut. Most erotica tends to fall into melodrama rather than actual drama, since erotica exists chiefly to help you indulge one of your basest urges (masturbation/sexual release). As >>157759 said, most people tend to skip right to the sex and ignore the buildup because they want to read about people fucking — but that removes even the slightest bit of context from the sex. (For fanfic smut [lemons/limes for the purposes of this post], that doesn't matter all that much because fans typically want to read about their favorite characters fucking.)

One of my favorite lemons, "Aikan Muyo" (a multi-part Tenchi Muyo lemon), builds up to and contextualizes most of the sex scenes via internal and external conflicts between Tenchi, Ryoko, and Aeka. That context makes the sex scenes better in its own way, but the sex scenes themselves reveal something about all three characters (not all at once, natch); erotica that aims to tell a story must use sex scenes to both arouse the audience and reveal character.

Good erotica doesn't abandon traditional storytelling methodology — it merely alters that methodology to fit within (and ultimately enhance) the purpose of erotica.

Let's take the idea of >>157758 as an example. What does Robbie ultimately want? (Think about giving him both a concrete motivation [e.g. "having sex"] and an unfulfillable motivation [e.g. "more happiness"] to help build the story around him.) What stops Robbie from getting what he wants, and why? (Whether this "opponent" takes the form of a person or something non-corporeal [e.g. an internal struggle], it will become the major "foe" that Robbie must overcome by the story's end.) How does Robbie change from the beginning of the story, and how does that help him achieve his goals — and if Robbie doesn't change, how does he change the world around him through his actions?

A good writer can tell a good story that happens to center around or feature sex; they need only to take a similar approach to telling a story that a non-erotica writer would take.
>> No. 157767
I can't write erotica to save my life "Madame Gymos" is a comic idea (all I need is an artist who'll work for free)
>> No. 157781
>>157758
Of course the sex is part of it... but that alone doesn't make a good story.

Ask yourself: Do you just want to write about sex? Or do you want to write a good story where sex is the centerpiece?

The first, anyone can do. The second will get people to actually like your work and style.
>> No. 158016
Keep it up!
>> No. 159515
>>157762
Well damn, round of applause for this guy here.
>> No. 159528
>>157762
http://www.tmffa.com/old/l-aikan.html
>> No. 159561
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159561
4 works by E_Wills, from the How To Train Your Dragon fandom, all of them containing Hiccup/Astrid:

http://archiveofourown.org/users/E_Wills/pseuds/E_Wills

"A Year And A Dozen Words" four T-rated shorts, whit just a hint of something naughty,

"Affairs Of the Heart, And Other Things Vikings Don't Talk About ", T-rated long story and
"Awkward In The Best Possible Way", satisfying M-rated ending,

and "Vetrnaetr", M-rated, though again with just hints of naught here and there.
>> No. 159562
>>157762
I agree wholeheartedly. Smut for the sake of smut is rather pointless, btw. Plot is, at least to me, incredibly important when it comes to erotic fanfiction. It is not difficult to put two characters in a room and say "Now go and fuck". This is what happen in cheap porno movies.

As you have mentioned, the build up is the crucial part. It tells the reader WHY these people want to fuck, since, let's not hide it, this is the point of writing a smut fic. If I can't understand the emotions of characters, or they seem off, the smut part will not be that entertaining, if at all. This is especially important when it comes to crack verse fics, non-canonical pairings, etc, when the author has to explain what happened that lead these characters to share a bed.

It doesn't mean however that fics without that much characterization are doomed. After all, sometimes two people do meet in one room, and, well, they fall for each other. An example that comes to my mind is Flannery/Flint Pokemon fic in >>137585 This is a classic "let's put two people in a room" kinda fic. Do we learn a lot about characters? No. Most of the narration is mixed with the intercourse. Is the sex enjoyable? Hell yeah.

I'd rather read longer fic with proper characterization that ends with fluff or just a hint of sex, rather than a shorter smut fic without any backstory.One of the examples I gave in >>159561
>> No. 159563
>>157759
Oh, you poor, poor person.
>> No. 159614
>>151790
if youre talking about the same one i just read, holy shit! i stumbled on the artwork on paheal and thought id check it out. honestly i was sure i was in for a retarded trainwreck, but dammit if the guy didnt make it work! the longer it went on the clearer it was the writer knew who he/she(i think its a girl) was writing. this is possible the best ww chracterizarion and what shes about ive ever read!the fetish bit isnt my deal, but i have to admit it was actually pretty hot and i was curious to see the whole thing resolve completely in spite of the sex content. too bad its not finished. like or hate the theme, its very well written and i wish the person who did this wrote regular stuff.
>> No. 159648
What's your opinion on word count? I always see people have thousands words, but I write around 900 and already done for. Is it bad?
>> No. 159654
>>159648
Well, it depends on what is the type of fic you want to write. Talented write can sometimes say more with less words, and sometimes a scene begs for details.
>> No. 160245
Here's a fic I wrote in a little over half an hour for the toonami general on /co/ after the Rukia disappears scene in Bleach. Not too satisfied with it and neither was /co/, but whatever:

http://pastebin.com/JT8eyJKu
>> No. 160307
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160307
>>160245
And here's the Maid Marian fic I wrote for /co/ a while back in image form, including (half) the inspiration pic.
>> No. 160310
Fapfiction. The complicated way to say "I can't draw... maybe I´ll send it to Palcomix one day".
>> No. 160314
>>160310
Internet comments; the complicated way to say "I'll never actually do anything at all, but boy howdy do I like to let people know my opinions."
>> No. 160335
>>160314
ha
>> No. 160337
>>160307

>says nervously
>whispers shyly

*whap* No. Bad writer. Bad.

With the first sentence, you can drop the adverb from the dialogue tag, put a period after ‘said’, and rewrite the resulting ‘remainder’ sentence in a way that better shows the reader her nervousness. With the second sentence, you can just drop the adverb from the dialogue tag. The description of her blushing in the follow-up sentence works wonders for implying her shyness.
>> No. 160561
http://pastebin.com/JbeDnCAP
http://1d4chan.org/wiki//tg/%27s_Smut_Index
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/molassesmassacre/10373/Whorus-Heresy.pdf


And a critique guide:
http://pastebin.com/1s1fLktL
>> No. 160574
Requesting some erotic fiction were all (or most) of the characters spend most of the time (at least 70%) naked (even during non-sex scenes)
>> No. 160586
>>160574
Do you want someone to make someone or to find some?
>> No. 160593
Find some, but if one of you wants to make erotic fiction where the characters (even during the non-sex scenes) are always naked, I can't stop you

Also, I'd like the fiction to be based on an original idea (not fanfiction based on existing media)
>> No. 160601
How about we do a role-playing story which involves being nude?
>> No. 160613
Would've preferred original concepts over fanfiction based on existing media, but when you have an obscure fetish, you can't be choosy
>> No. 160625
Here is a Swat Kats fic I wrote a while back. Be warned this is my first story like this.

In the streets of Megakat city we see night has fallen over the city as the streetlights turned on we see a motorcyclist coming down the streets of the city. Wearing enforcers clothing while riding the motorcycle she rides into a building after noticing the security guard of her arrival; she parks the motorcycle and departs it while grabbing a bag is had. The driver takes off her helmet revealing herself to be Felina Fearl.

As she takes the key out of the ignition she sighs, the crime rate has risen due to the Omegas wanted and the citizens are getting tired of way things are running with the mayor. Felina been working all day and have just gotten off work. Luckily for her, she off tomorrow and been looking forward to getting to her apartment heads to the elevator as he goes into her bag.

“Finally” Felina said “I get to use you… heard a lot about you.” inside the bag reveal to be a 9 inch dildo inside a case. Felina couldn’t help but smirked yet be amazed as she stared at it. This dildo is very special, like other dildos it has a ball sac but unlike the others didlo this one material’s are of a hybrid of cyber-skin, Pyrex type-glass. The dildo can retain body heat from the user or in case Felina’s.

The didlo is shaped like a kat’s cock being very detailed like Felina was still amazed of how materials are able to combine without any problem and couldn’t believe she got her hands on it seeing as how something like this could be very costly to a person wallet.

Fortunately, she had gotten this from a friend who worked at the Megakat city chemical building.

The friend had given this to her as a gift for her hard work, seeing as how Felina been looking to expand her sex life seeing how her friend is going thought the same thing. As much as she wants to date and start a relationship with another person, so much crime has made her work hard.

Felina sighed, as much as she would love to be a date with someone all this work is making it near impossible

“I hope this thing doesn’t have any bad side effects.” Felina said as he went into her apartment and she closed and locked her door. She went into her room. And took her enforcer clothing off revealing her bra and panties. She mentality prepares herself as he moves her right hand into her panties and starts fingering her pussy. Pleasure starts to flow though her body as she starts to heat up causing Felina to speed up Fingering in her pussy causing her to moan.

Now closing her eyes forgetting all the scenes she has; only focusing on touch. While she fingers her pussy, she starts to grope her beast and twisting her nipples with her left hand increasing her pleasure.

“Ahh…so far so good.” Felina thought “Now to take this up a notch.”
>> No. 160636
>>160613
I don't think public nudity is an obscure fetish.
>> No. 160640
>>160636

I actually find public nudity boring (unless everybody is naked)

My fetish is people being naked in the comfort of their own home/property or in the wilderness
>> No. 160956
http://pastebin.com/Hmj8gfWU

Oh /tg/...
>> No. 160973
One of the blokes from the Legion of Doom threads wrote a femdom thing
http://pastebin.com/baTixX6x
>> No. 160976
“Felina soon put an extra finger into her pussy. The moaning starts to get a lot louder as she start feeling her climax. She stops, not wanting to climax pulling out her hand. Juices can be seen on her hand dripping on her while she sees the didlo and sighs.

“Might as well try this didlo out, I mean what the worse that can happen?”

She got up off her bed and took off her bra and panties leaving her complete naked. She goes into the bag and pulls out the case containing the didlo. She opened up the case and looked at the didlo before grabbing it. She noticed how the didlo felt just like a kat’s cock. She had felt like she was holding a kat’s cock as she went back to her bed and started to put the didlo into her pussy.

At first it started to feel hard putting it in there making Felina feel like she was a virgin.
Ether the dildlo is getting larger than she thought or her pussy getting tighter after not having sex for a while. Either way she forgot about it as the didlo starts to go inside her pussy. As it goes deep inside her she couldn’t help but gasped; Her face show it all and the pleasure is too great to keep face, Not that is wanted to at the moment.

“Yesss….” Felina said as he restarts messaging her beast and starts pushing the didlo in and out. As she continues to masturbate, she starts to feel the detail of the didlo inside of her.

She notices it feels rough but soft, hard but not too hard. Felina is beginning to like the didlo as he nears her climax which surprises Felina. All her years training with the enforcers made able to withstand climaxing a few minutes into sex but the didlo is speeding up the process.

She assumes she has at least three more minutes before she reached her climax. Though to be honest, she didn’t mind the fact that she was climaxing earlier as long as she would get more pleasure and from the look of it, she was

“Oh great Kats!! I’m Cumming.” Felina thought as her juices start to come out of her pussy. Some of the juices start to hit her hand and her legs as the juices begin to stop. She takes the didlo out of her pussy and notices the juices dripping from it. She was impressed by the didlo, she didn’t really used didlos but she made an exception with this one. Since this was made my her friend who understand what she is going thought She looks over at the clock and notices the time. “8:00 PM huh?” She asked herself “Better go ahead and eat dinner and see what on.”
>> No. 161226
Man how I hate it when nobody comments on my works. I'm an attention whore, I need constant stimulation and encouragement.

Why can't people who fave me write "Hey, your writing isn't complete shit, write some more"
>> No. 161232
A few hours later after having a cat burger with homemade fries she starts to look at the clock. Noticing it now 9:30 pm, she got up and headed back into her room prepared to get some sleep. Even though she was off patrol tomorrow, she wanted to get up early to take the motorcycle to a shop. She was told by the Deputy Mayor of two mechanics who work on her car and recommend them. She even told them that they would let them know she would be coming once she decided to go and the fact that her uncle would get on her back about sleeping late even if she was off work.

As she went inside her room she went grabs her sleepwear, getting pants and a t-shirt. She heads into the bathroom and turns the shower water on as she begins to get undress for the second time she notice the didlo though her mirror.

She looks at the water coming down and gets an idea. While she got her didlo, she remembered something her friend told her:

“Try the didlo when you’re taking a bath or shower.” She recommends “You will go crazy with that thing in you.”

“Really huh?” Felina was a curious what else does that didlo can do; She head over to it and examine it a bit more to see if there was anything she was missing.

“Hmm…what the heck?” She notices a bit of a gap on the didlo behind the ball sac. There was a bit more length behind the sac making Felina guessed her friend wanted the didlo to be exactly like a cock. She twisted the part behind the ball sac and notices that the back didlo behind the sac fells off.

She looks inside the didlo and notices something inside it. She flips it upside down and waited for gravity to take place as the note lands on her hand. She uncovers the note and notices the steps by step on how to make the didlo add on for the shower.
>> No. 161233
“Seems interesting….” Felina admitted she reads the paper and drops it on the bed. She brings the didlo into the bathroom. She closes the door locking it, putting the didlo down and undress once again and making her naked. She took a look at herself on the mirror and notices her full body, barley seen six packs with nice looking curves and long black hair and well-rounded beast and tits and wondered how this body looked more better with the scars hearing from the job. She reaches her arm out into the water and notices that it is warm, the way she wanted. She stepped inside as the water started to make her fur wet.

She closed her eyes as she starting thinking about her dating life. She likes every other person—or kat/she-kat in her world wanted at least to date with people and maybe be into a relationship. But begin an enforcer has there drawback, she enjoyed begin in the air that why she even became one. But it takes a lot of work in order to keep the city safe along with the enforcers and the swat ka—

“Him…” Felina said as she thought about one of them. The big guy name T-Bone, she wonder who he really was. He seems like a headstrong guy, like her someone she would like…a lot. But the odds of her and him dating…..

She went down with her hand and start to finger herself when is realize she was already wet. He notices that she started to feel horny as well causing herself continue fingering her pussy more. Soon she does same thing she did on the bed but as she does she stops and remember the didlo she had placed. She grabs it and grabs the shower nozzle.

She remembers the steps as she puts the didlo on the nozzle. Water can still be seen coming out but now though the didlo. Felina was grateful that the Nozzle is detachable otherwise this will never work. She gets herself ready as he lies down on the tub. She pushes the dildlo inside of her as she feels the water coming inside her. Soon the whole didlo get inside her as she begins to moan.
>> No. 161235
The moaning get louder to the point to where had it not been for the wall being thick in layers people would have heard. She thought that she was getting so much pleasure while using this in the bed. She was getting ten times pleasure than last time, she couldn’t believe the pleasure she was getting from this thing. She was getting so loud moaning that she had to bite down on her finger to silent the noise. If take only a few minutes before she felt herself cumming.
“I’m cumming…so hard.”

Soon the juice comes out spurting all over the tub making Felina surprise at this. The juice goes down the tub into the drain causing her to be grateful that she did all this in the shower. She got up and began to clean herself with the soap. She realized that she was getting tried from all masturbation.

She glanced at the dildlo as he went out of the out of the shower and put on some night clothes. She grabbed the dildo heading out into her room and put it in one of the chest of drawers. She reminded herself to give her friend a call and thank her while telling her how it did with her.

She went into her back and looks at the clock noticing it was about 10:30 at the moment and went in behind the covers. Started to went to sleep, keeping in mind the stuff she had to do.


The End
>> No. 161417
Here's an idea for a story/comic (I tried to spoiler it because it is /d/)

>Our protagonist (a twenty something woman in college) finds out that one of her classmates is a dickgirl
>The protag is a fan of dickgirls
>One sex scene later, she tells her new friend that she wishes she was a dickgirl, this gives her friend an idea
>The dickgirl comes over to the protag's apartment (along with 2 to 4 of her dickgirl friends) and tells that she might have a way to make her a dickgirl
>One ritualistic orgy later, it doesn't work (but the protag doesn't mind because she still had fun) then one of the dickgirls notices three small bumps above her Vagina
>Another ritualistic orgy later, the three small bumps turn into a penis and testicles
>Several stories happen about the protag getting into the dickgirl lifestyle (and meeting new dickgirl friends)
>The final story would be the protag along with her dickgirl friends (around 10 or more) going to a small Mediterranean island that is said to be the home of Hermaphrodite (the goddess of dickgirls)
>While exploring the temple, they see a lifesized statue of Hermaphrodite
>One orgy later, the statue (who is actually Hermaphrodite) comes back to life
>> No. 161691
>>161417
You should probably take it to /cod/ next time.

IS there a erotic fan fiction thread on /cod/??
>> No. 161713
I think I want to write some romantic loli-shota story, but I can't start. Who's your favorite underage couple?
>> No. 161716
>>160310
Admittedly, I would be very flattered if someone would draw images based on my stories. Particularly that one where Velma Dinkley is masturbating to fantasy about being faceraped and then fucks Scooby.
>> No. 161718
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161718
>>161713
Wilykit and Wilykat
>> No. 161721
>>161718
Seconded
>> No. 162155
>>160337
Eh it was written all in one go without much editing on /co/ a while back. Thanks for the critique though!

Also an old unfinished Mirage x Eris fic from early 2010 or so I never had the inspiration to complete:
http://pastebin.com/UXMhs6A0
>> No. 163521
Some FoP Vicky

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4521527/7/Missing
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5020408/1/Honestly-Why-Haven-t-We
>> No. 163741
http://geistygeist.tumblr.com/

This guy needs some love. That Sequential Art fic was hot as fuck and only got 4 notes.
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