Kind of incredible actually. Not a huge fan of the way you draw faces, but the expressions are good, so no real problems there.
Do you have more pages planned? Will you be inking it?

>>43655
Thanks! Posting the rest of the pages of this chapter now. I do want to ink this, but I'll be moving on to new chapters first.

Looks professional, do more.

>>43667
Traced.

>>43676
OP here. Not a line of this comic is traced.

>>43678
https://plus4chan.org/b/pco/src/138554690168.jpg
I'm sure others would be more willing take the time to point out more on your pco thread.

>>43679
Yeah, and I'm sure I'd be glad to point out that referencing is not tracing, you daft cunt.

>>43679
Yeah, and I'm sure I'd be glad to point out that referencing is not tracing, you daft cunt.

>>43680
And I'm sure Greg Land would agree, you filthy hack.

fun fact: "referencing" and "eyeballing" aren't the same thing

I was going to post my stupid superheroine rape comic on /draw/, but you've set the bar to high!

It looks very technically nice but:

>wonder woman
>not even putting up a fight

that's kinda what i found so hot about it. she's this strong noble character and she just get's absolutely defeated and degraded. awesome.

>>43636
Very well done on the new52 version of this WW comic. Any more you plan on doing like this in the future by chance?

Continuing the story with this chapter starring Power Girl.

That's the end of that chapter. Please let me know what you think! Cheers.

puting in acount you like well endowed females, go for cammy, or tifa, or the sailors, or D.o.a. girls, or mai shiranui, or Samus Aran and people will THROW money at you.
it could be just me, but marvel hearoes and alike (DC comics etc) are too burnt out as fap material, but well, i t may be just my opinion... there you have my two cents
(lara croft is also a better choice than marvel superheroes, but it´s also a bit burn out already)

>>43746

But all of your examples are just as "burnt out" as fap material as the DC and Marvel characters, if not moreso. Just to give you an idea, the amount of pictures of some of those characters on Paheal:

Tifa Lockheart: 5525
Wonder Woman: 3542
Mai Shiranui: 3131
Cammy White: 2515
Power Girl: 2267
She-Hulk: 1118

>>43755
you are addressing me to web stats, I am addressing you to what I know for sure people like more.. I couldn´t give you objetive reasons to prove my choice of characters, I just know they are more desired by the common rule34 user, trust me. by your logis pokemon would be totally burn out, but people will dig misty over wonderwoman anyday, just make the test if you dont believe me.
of cours now you´ll say misty is a underage character and etc, but that is not the point. the point is PEOPLE WANT TO SEE MISTY DOING SEX more than wonderwoman, because of a greater sense of release seing her rule34ed than wonderwoman, and that is it. dont ask me why, I could not explain it, I am not GOD.
I just know I am right coming from observation of the forums and my own intuition. oh, and, it is the case you dont like people drooling more over misty than over wonderwoman, well, seek em and kill em all, you´ll have a long day....or decade, who knows, I swear I wish you luck on the task... in the other hand you could simply acept reality and draw a porn with misty... if it makes you feel better about it, just give her the same proportions you gave wonderwoman and it could be even interesting to see if you make it feel it´s not totally a cheap shot with no heart put on it.

OP here. I didn't post those last stats, so calm the fuck down. No need to start a fight over who wants to see what more. Two points: one, I'm going to draw porn of what I want, when I want because it's what I enjoy. I'm not going to suit the identity I my artistic endeavors to some ill formed and nebulous concept of "what the people want." If it's what you want, fine. If what you want isn't Wonder Woman, fine. But don't tell me how to do my job. Ever. Two: your own intuition is bullshit. When we are talking about porn and fetishes, be careful that your own "intuition" doesn't get mixed up in your desires. Also you aren't a kind reader and I could give two fucks about your forum responses. They don't mean shit. A vocal minority might sound like a majority. I don't care. And even I more people DO want to see characters I'm not familiar with and don't have any interest in, that doesn't mean there aren't people still out there that DO want to see my work and my characters. I'm drawing for me and I'm drawing for them. I'm no drawing to be told rudely that I'm doing it wrong because I don't appeal to your very specific interests. Kindly fuck the fuck off with your ranting and borderline incomprehensible comments.

>>43760
-op posts shamelessly traced over comic, with shamelessly traced over faces style (izayoi seishin)
-ask people to tell him what they think
-some poster is kind enough to stand the obviously totally unworthy and passion-empty random porn art created by op and even tries to give him some imput about how to make things better as OP REQUESTED
-op start moaning like a lil bitch when he is not being praised for traced crap
-again the kind anon tries to explain OP how terribly mistaken he is, BECAUSE IS OBVIOUS THAT HE IS SCRATCHING HIS SHIT JUST FOR MONEY, NOT FOR HIS OWN TASTES while no artits would create such an atrocity to please his own eye nor his friends. maybe anon goes about it in a bit harsh way, but still perfectly respectful, by internet standars
-OP goes full retarded and starts right away insulting the kind kind anon

if any mod is reading this, please, PLEASE let know me, or OP if my description isn´t right, and I´ll gladly stop posting

>>43761
OP here. You're wrong on two fundamental levels. I'll explain why in the most respectful way I can.

1) in asking for criticism, I wasn't looking for advice on what I SHOULD be drawing according to arbitrary and subjective tastes. I asked for comments on my drawings, not requests for hypothetical drawings and recrimination for not making them. If I wanted advice on WHAT to draw I would have come beforehand and asked what to draw. But since I came after the fact with multiple completed chapters of a story, I kinda wanted comments on those. Make sense?

2) I've never made a solitary cent off these drawings and never would. Considering the fact that they are heavily referenced (though NEVER traced, as you stated) from another artist, I would consider that wrong. So when I say I do this work because I enjoy it, I speak the truth.

Thanks for your comments, you flaming bag of dicks.

Let me just say, as an owner of boobs, I can tell you both do not have them or have ever seen them in motion. The page that gets me the most is the last one. The nipples are on top instead of on the front of the boobs, and really? An arm over the boob? I am sitting here trying to replicate this and, despite not being as endowed as the WW you draw, I can tell you without a doubt that the boob being pushed aside would not still be facing forward. Furthermore, the boobs keep changing size? And on page 18 they are just lopsided as heck, which, it's natural for chicks to have one that's a little bit bigger than the other, but you'd kept them so symmetrical up until that page, what happened?

Every time you draw WW getting pulled by the hair, it doesn't look like she's getting pulled by her hair. I'm not sure how to describe it, but when you pull something, there's going to be a straight line from what you're pulling to where you're pulling. I don't know how else to put it.

I don't have any crit for the PowerGirl comic as I did not read it.

The only other thing I can really think of is how you've reacted to people disliking your work. Not everyone is going to be a fan. It doesn't matter how nice your art is, you've got to at least be cordial as well, otherwise it affects how people perceive your works. We've all gotten rude dudes commenting on our art before. The best course of action would be to just ignore the rude replies.

Also, to the anon claiming stuff is traced, I love hunting down traces, but I have not been able to find any of the artist's you mentioned's work that fits the art here? If you have some proof, you will look less like someone who's just whining that an artist is drawing too much like their influences.

Lets keep it friendly, y'all.

OP here. Thank you for the feedback. You're right about a lot of your criticism. I noticed the weird boob issue on the final page right after I scanned it and haven't had a chance to fix. And yeah, I don't have any, ha.

Should not have been caught up in the argument. Mea culpa.

Dude, its traced but who gives a fuck? Its some pretty nice porn. Kinda sensin some issues, but I dig it, man.

the anon here:
I had a sincere will to help, but I felt jumped over, my bad I went harsh but I want to point out something just so there is no confusion.
I cannot care less for sailor senshi soldiers, tifa, maishiranui, pokemon and so many others I commented, I strictly comented them for I know people dig em. I also backed up so many other characters I know people love (gwen tennison, ponies, avatar, teen titans, etc) because I had the sensation OP could have problems to use em as they are not "adult" characters (sigh...as if characters had any age, or that mattered) so, if my chice of characters felt starnge or not popular enough now you know the reason behind my list...besides I was simply not doing a whole research just to post... thise are just like some that came to my mind, but I WASN´T ASKING OP TO DRAW MY OWN PREFFERENCE I am not that moronic.
if Op thought that, and started a whole line of thought based on that IT´S NOT MY FAULT he could not have a basic trust tendence in a stranger. I like cammy I admit, but then I inmediatly started to try to imagine about some other characters OP could use.
as I felt he was trying to promote himslef into rule34 circles, I felt his potentilal creating comics on a fast and mildly efficient manner, could be put on drawing usual blockbuster series people love to see (by the way I´d add naruto, just slipped my mind because it is so common) so I apologice I somohow failed to make OP truelly feel I was not asking about my own whim, but I swear it´s the truth.

now, tracing issue appart if you want me to add something I´ll tell you the comic is hot, but I can add some imput apprt the character choice thing.
first I wouldn´t go so far on breaking the girls, of course that is hot but you have to get it to a better balance, it is kind of a turn of if you go that far, and it´s not because of moral reason... it´s just feel there is nothing of the girl there to be felt anymore if you break her so much.. that way it feels she is left as an empty carcass of her latter self, what kills the appeal of have her submissive to you (just my HUMBLE OPPINION... please)
beside the whole "giving in" phase is non-existent... you have her moaning and whinning about she doesn´t want toget raped and then BANG oh, she is a happy ultra slut. would be best if there is some transition, feels strange and even rushed, with no heart to it, like whoever wrote this is actually not into submission at all, that makes it feel like it´s a half assed thing created to fill pages on some porn wen the autor doesn´t actually likes... THAT is a mayor turn off. I dont even fucking care the tracing-referencing issue, after all your drawings are hot no one would say the opposite, but sinceresly I have problems believing this is something coming from your liking, it doesn´t feels like so.

and I hope you see I am not flaming now, but actually giving yu some straight, and constructive (that is my goal at least) critic.
put one point on acount. when you ask people to let you know their thoughts, THAT IS SOMETHING YOU DONT CONTROL, that is the point of comunicating with others, you´ll have a source of imput beyond your own espectations. not listenning to that would be your own choice, but a waste of incredibly usueful ideas and tips.

I wish you my best OP, no bad feelings on my side, but please keep on cool when receiving critics. if you get to feel they are hatefull or of no use, just ignore them. if they trully hurt, meditate on the fact that that could be just because they hit the painful bullseye... and that could be a good thing if you have an open mind and the correct take on things

Someone linked this to me on tumblr.

It's obviously no trace, but you might wanna be more upfront w/ how heavily you're reffing some things?

>>43769
>anti-life is death

dude what's the point in writing about these characters if you don't know anything about them?

It's a fair criticism that the anti life explanation is bullshit -- the equation in te comics IS a form of mind control, however. To answer your question though, the point of writing a story with these characters is to create pornography with familiar faces.